Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)-update part 4 page 30 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
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Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

At first I would like to thanx to all of u who encourage me and support me a lot.Thank u vary much guys

Then i want to thanks my friend Aditi(adi_gupta) who help me a lot by correcting this part.(u know na im not good in hindi)

So I want to dedicate it for my januable fr aditi.

Adi its 4 u.

Part 2

Arman: hello.

Mayank: Hello Bhaia ??

Arman: Mayank?? Kaisa hain tu. Itna subha subha. Sab kuch thik hain na.

Mayank: Kuch bhi thik naehi-bahaia. Papa ki tasbiyat achanak kharap hogaya.

O ICU main hain.

Arman: keya???????????????

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Arman: Mayank What r u saying? Keya hua papa ko?

Mayank: o papa ko. Papa ko-------Main bhaia se or kitna jhoot bolu.

Samrat: Mar gaya. Ye Mayank bahaia bhi na. Ek chota sa jhut ,o bhi nehi bol sakta.

Abhi sab kuch garbar kar dega. Bhaia tum mujhe ph do.

He snatch the ph frm Mayank. Hello Bhaia…..

Arman: Kaun Samrat? Samrat bata mujhe keya hua papa ko??????

Samrat: Bhaia papa ko achanak se heart attack agayaa.

Arman: Keya??????? Par kaise, keu?????

Samrat: Relax Bhai, ab o thoda sa stable hain lekin tumhe dekhna chahta hain. Plz bhaia tum jaldi se a jao. Hum logo ko tumhara bahut jarurat hain.Plz tum a jao.

Arman: ok I m just coming by next flight.

Samrat hung up the ph and winked at Mayank.

Mayank: Sam tu itna sara jhut kaise bol leta hain.

Samrat: Ye bhi ek talent hai bro. Agar tum chaho to main tumhe bhi sikha sakta hu.

Mayank: Making his face-thanx but no thanx. Koi jaraurat nahi mujhe aisa faltu talent ki.

Tera talent tera pass hi rakhna.

Bhushan House:

Gunjan: Di,di meri payari di, I m very happy 4 u.

Nupur: Accha!!!! Lekin tu itna kush kyun ho rahi hain????

Gunjan: Kyun ki meri payari di ko ek bohut e handsome, acchaa, payara sa ladke k sath shaadi jo tayar hogayi hai.

Nupur: ha ha tujhe kaise pata ki o bahut achha or handsome hain-tu nahi kabhi usse dekha hain nahi kabhi baat ki.

Gunjan: R a uncle k sath to bat ki hi na. uncle itna achha hain to unka beta to achha hi hoga na? Or jaha tak dekhne ka sawal to aaj jab papa unko photo layaga tab dekhungi. Or jab jiju ajayega London se tab tum usse samne se dekh lena.

Nupur: jiju meri pao ki jooti. Tujhe dekhna hain to dekh le. Mujhe koi shaunk nehi unko dekhne ka. Mujhe to abhi se hi dar lag rahi hai. Pata nehi o kaisa hoga. Mujhe cricket khelne or Sharukh ki movie dekhne denge ki ya nehi. Pata nehi kitna boring hoga. Ye papa bhi na itna jaldi keya hain meri shaadi karneka? R o mera sapno ka rajkumar jaisa nehi hua to tab main to usse ……………

She looks so sad and angry.

Gunjan: Di ap itna tension kyo le rahi ho. Sab kuch thik ho jayaga. Merei di ki akhon main itna gussa or sadwali expression acchi nehi lagti.

Now smile plzzzzzz.

Nupur gives a big smile to her sister and then they hug each other.

Nupur: Gunjan mujhe teri bahut yaad ayegi.

Gunjan: Mujhe bhi di.

Both have tears in their eyes.

In this time sotu shouting from outside-

Nupur di bahar aajao, cricket match abhi start hojayega. Hum sab log tumhara intejar kar rahi hain. Pls jaldi se a jao.

Gunjan: Lo tumhara cricket gang bhi agaya. Ab jao-nehi to whole gang ghar main ghus jayaga.

Nupur: (wiping her tears)ha ha jati hoon. Agar papa agaya to mujhe bata dena.

Gunjan: ok Di. Jaldi ana.

Nupur: ok.Bye.

London:

(Arman-Ridhima)

Ridhima: Arman Kya hua????

Arman: Wo papa ko achanak heart-attack agaya.

Ridhima: What! Ab tum keya karoge??

Arman: I have to go to India by the next flight, ridz. Lekin main tumhe akela chodkar kaise jaoo. Is situation pe tumhe sath main le bhi nehi ja sakta. Main kya karu- mujhe kuch bhi samajh main nehi a raha hain.

Ridhima: Arman, arman plz tum shant ho jao. Tum meri chinta chodo,papa ki pas jao. Unhe tumhara bahut jarorat hain.

Arman: lekin tumko bhi to meri jarorat hain na. tum yaha akeli kaise rahogi.

Ridhima: main akeli ka ha hoon! Baby(here baby ridz ki Nani) hain na meri sath. Tum chinta mat karo.

Ridhima hugs Arman tight and he responds back, after a while they pull back.

Arman: Ridhima papa ko thik hone ki baad main humare shaadi ke bare usse sab kuch bata dunga. Pher usko mana bhi lunga. Tab tumhe koi pereshani nehi hogi. Sab kuch thik ho jayga.

Ridhima: Main janti hoon Arman-sab kuch thik ho jayega. Tumpar mujhe pura viswas hain.

Arman: Thanx Ridhima mujhpar bharosa karne ke liye.

Ridhima: Tum ye keya keh rahi ho, main tumper nehi to kispar bharosa karungi.

Arman smiled.

Ridhima: Arman. Plz jaldi ana. Main tumhe bahut miss karungi.

Arman: Main bhi tumhe bahut miss karunga.

They had tears in their eyes. Ridhima kept her head on Arman chest-

Ridhima: i love u Arman.

Arman: I love u too.

He kissed her on her forehead and she smiled.

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To b continued……………………………………..

Ok guys. That all 4 today.

I know this part is quite boring.

Now tell me did u find any progress in my hindi writing?

This time I tried to improve it. But don't know -I m improving or not.

Now just waitng 4 ur comments.

Plz comment. Criticize so that I can progress my writing.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
hiiiiiii faria
im glad that im first to comment

i read it .......yahoo
i just love the part
mera vo baby vala doubt clear ho gaya ,
or yaar mayu kitna sweet hai ek jhoot bhi nahi bol sakta
and next the part where she fight with mayu
awesome and her and gunjan 's dialoge
or when maynk said nupur ji it was awesome

faria awesome update
waiting for the part when armaan return ,

and what happen next

soon update ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
wow! nice update! 😃

n ur hindi is a lot better than before...! so congrats! 👏
feel free to ask for help if u need....
tc...n keep writing!
love this ff! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
wow dear!!
d part was awesum...
twas really xelent!!
really...!!!!
well...achchha shall i tell u 1 thing??...uncle itna achha hain to unka beta to achha hi hoga na? Or jaha tak dekhne ka sawal to aaj jab papa unko photo layaga tab dekhungi....yaha par bold mein jo words hain...wo thode se galat hai...actually, sry, but des made me lauf!!...yaha par aayega.. itna- itne, achha- achhe, unko- unki, layaga- layange....no offense...really!!
waise to d post was vry gud!!
really...twas awesum!!
do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hey nice part...
plzz cont soon ..
i'm eagerly waiting for the next part..
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
heyyyy
really nice part
now waiting for armaan to come
and u have definately improved
plzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
hey nice one!
liked the arsayank convo pretty much!!!
u are improving in hindi dear! like i said...practice...
muah!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: cutegurl224

wow! nice update! 😃thank u so much

n ur hindi is a lot better than before...! so congrats! 👏oh ho thanx a lott
feel free to ask for help if u need....ya sure.
tc...n keep writing! U also take care urself
love this ff! 😃 😃 😃 thanx again
Keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

wow dear!!
d part was awesum... thank u
twas really xelent!! Thank u so much
really...!!!! hmm really???????😕
well...achchha shall i tell u 1 thing??...uncle itna achha hain to unka beta to achha hi hoga na? Or jaha tak dekhne ka sawal to aaj jab papa unko photo layaga tab dekhungi....yaha par bold mein jo words hain...wo thode se galat hai...actually, sry, but des made me lauf!!...yaha par aayega.. itna- itne, achha- achhe, unko- unki, layaga- layange....no offense...really!!
Hmm i m also laughing while reading it.
But anyway thanx 4 ur correction.
Par jaida haso mat, dekhna next update main- main aisa hindi likhungi ki u will b surpise.😉😉


waise to d post was vry gud!! thanx a lot
really...twas awesum!! thanx again
do cont soon... ya i will try
thanx 4 d pm.. =) u r welcome
Thanx 4 ur lovely comment
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