Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)-update part 4 page 30

Hello guys this my 2^nd try.

A mini FF on AR,Mayur and Sajan. So firstly I want to apologize for any of my mistake.

I don't know how is it? But I tried at my best. I want to dedicate this FF to all of my forum friends. Guys all of u r the inspiration of my writing ,believe me main is ki pehale story to keya 1 poem tak bhi nehi lika.

But now I m encouraged by all of u.

Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)

Mayank Sharma: A handsome ,good-looking, very attractive boy of 24 years old. He is now doing his MBA course in Excel College .He resided in a big palace with his father and his younger brother Samrat. He has another brother Arman who is an London for the purpose of doing MBBS course. Mayank is a very studios guy. He likes to play Guitar.

Nupur Bhushan:

Nupur is a 23 years old of sweet pretty girl. She is very chirpy, helpful and always has a smile on her face. She like to watch movie. She also like to play with kids. She like to act and dance. She has a younger sister named Gunjan. She love her sister very much.

Gunjan Bhushan

Samrat Sharma

Arman Sharma

Ridhima Sharma

All of this 4 character r as same as serial

Part 1

LONDON:

Arman: ridhima, ridhima kaha ho tum ??

Ridhima: 1 min arman. Main a rahi hu. Keya hua.Why r u shouting too much

Arman: Darling mujhe apna towel chaiye.

Ridhima: Tum bhi na-hamesha bina towel lekar hi nahne chali jati ho.

Arman: keya karu- agar main towel lekar ati,to main tumhe kaise bulati.

After said that he pulls Ridhima inside.

Ridhima: Arman tum ye keya karrahi ho, choro mujhe.

Arman: keu keya kar rahi ho. Apni sweet si wife se payaar kar rahi hoon.

Ridhima: Arman baby dekhengi to keya sochegi. Plz leave me.

Arman: R a keya sochegi? Unko accha hi lagegi humara payaar dekh kar.

Ridhima: Arman tum bhi na (Blushing'..)!!!!!!!!!Baby aap????

Arman left Ridhimas hand'and looking 4 baby

Arman: Embarrass'''.. oh baby oh main...

(but he doesn't found baby any where)

Ridhima: Giggling-Hmmmm kaisa buddhu banayaha main tumko.

Arman-Main to tumko nehi sorungi.

By this time Baby come- riddhi keya hua?????

Ridhima-kuch nahi baby. Chaliya main apko dawai deti hoon.

Bye Arman. Tum jaldi se nah kar awo.

INDIA:

Mr. Sharma: Mayank kaha hain tu? Mayank??/

Mayank: Ji papa?????

Mr. Sharma: Did u call Arman.

Mayank: No papa . ok main abhi call karta hoon.

Mr. Sharma: Wait. Hum 1 kam karte hain usko surprise deti hain.

Mayank: Surprise?????? But kaisa surprise.

Mr. Sharma: Main uska shaadi tayar kiya.

Mayank: What?????? Par kab? Kiske saath?

Mr. Sharma: Chill chill. Main sab batati hoon. Oh meri dost hain na Mr. Bhusan-

Uska beti Nupur saath.

She is a lovely, fun-loving, jovial girl. Usko shaadi karega to Arman bahut khush rehaga. Nupur mere ghar ka ya sunnata dur kar degi.

Mayank: Par, papa app bhaia se is bari main koi baat ki?

Mr. Sharma: Nehi main use surprise dena chati hoo. Or I m sure he will agree with me.

Mujhe uspar pura biswas hain.

Mayank: phir bhi papa apko unke saath bat kar lena chaiye.

Mr. Sharma: Mayank beta don't worry. Main kaha na arman mera baat nehi talega.

Ab tu ja or usko ph kar or bapwas India bula. Lekin han usko shaadi ki bari main kuch mat batana. Okk.

Mayank: Ok papa.

London

Ridhima: Arman breakfast ready. Jaldi aaw.

Arman: ok, I'm coming.

Hmmmmmmmmm bahut accha smell a rahi hain.

Ridhima: Ab tariff karma choro jaldi se breakfast karlo, otherwise u will b late for hpspital.

Arman: ok ok baba. Main kha rahi hoon.

Ridhima: Arman tum papa or sabko humare bari main kab bataoge.

Humari shaadi ko 6 month hogaya lekin abhi tak kisiko kuuch nehi pata

Arman: Ha riddhi, bataunga. Lekin tum papa ko nehi janti. Oh bahut gussewale hain. Uporse unka tabiyat bhi thik nahi hain.

Mujhe dar lagta hain agar main humari shaadi ki bari main bata do or usko kuch ho jata to main apko kabhi bhi maaf nehi kar paonga.

Rhidhima: To ab keya kare. Bata na to pargai na. isse baro ko ashirbaad ke bina hum kaise ji sakte.

Arman. Hmm let me think.

Idea- 1 kam karti hoon. Main Mayank ko sab kuch clear kar deta hoon. Oh samajhdar hain. Ohi papa ko mana legi.

By this time the ph is ringing:

Arman: hello.

Mayank: Hello Bhaia ??

Arman: Mayank?? Kaisa hain tu?Itna subha subha? Sab kuch thik hain na?

Mayank: Kuch bhi thik nehi-bahaia. Papa ki tabiyat achanak kharap hogaya.

O ICU main hain.

Arman: keya???????????????

Ok guys. That all 4 today.

Now plz tell me should I continue or not.

Plz comment, criticize, suggest so that I can improve my writing

With lots of Love ----------

Faria------------

Index

Part 1--------------------------------------page 1
Part 2--------------------------------------Page 11
Part 3--------------------------------------Page 17
Part 4................................................Page 30

Hiiiiiii
Really nice starting
But it was quite difficult to read
There were many errors
But a really nice concept
Plzzzzz continue
N plzzzz add me to ur pm list

Fariaa..a very good beginning!! 😃

Seems very interesting, so looking fwd to it :)

hey nice start
plz continue soon and add me to your pm list

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Hiiiiiii
Really nice starting
But it was quite difficult to read
There were many errors
But a really concept
Plzzzzz continue
N plzzzz add me to ur pm list

Ok. i can understand.
I try to write it in Hindi.
But dear i m from Bangladesh.
And i m not so much good in Hindi.
but i promise i try to improve my writing.
thanx 4 ur nice comment.it helps me a lot
Keep reading and commenting.
Faria-------------

Originally posted by: myownarea

Fariaa..a very good beginning!! 😃

Seems very interesting, so looking fwd to it :)

Thank u dear.
thanx a lot.
Faria-----------------

Faria!
wonderful start.
Plz continue and pm me also

hey dear!!!
xelent intro nd part 1!!
i really luvd it...
yea...der wer too many mistakes...hehe!!
well...so sweet part of armaan-ridzi!!!
nd hu's dis baby???
wot??? his dad arranged his marriage wid nups??? y nd how???
nd AR havent told der parents abt der marriage????
hmm...mayu lied...for A to return bak immediately to india!!!
but 'baby' cudnt b a baby of AR bcos only 6 yrs hav passed since der marriage...hhmmmm....
huh!!! itne saare questions!! uff!!
well...pls do cont soon...
gr8 concept!!
thanx 4 d pm... =)

hey dear,

hey nice concept
plz pm me wen u cont
cont soon!!!!!!!!!!