Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)-update part 4 page 30 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
heyaa hi faria
first of al soo sorry for being late for my reply yaar, ust caught up with some work ,
well as per part 2 it was great
i loved it a lot , ohh noo armaan is leaving riddhima alone , that part mujhe thoda achaa nahi lagga , i mean he should have taken her together , bechaare , didn't even knew what was there cooking up in armaan's family , lets hope nothing wrong happens with ar and there love ,
as per nupur and gunjan part , that was nice , very sweet , loved there conversation ,
hmm now i m waiting for the next part , and too see what is there in the story ahead , just watinggggggg
please try and update with the next part soon , waiting ,
till then take care and thanks for the pm
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
wow!!...awesome update dear!!!.......continue soon...n thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: riddhzie

nice ff.
wud luv to read more.

luv
oochita


Thanx a lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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U r welcome.
Thanx a lot
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Jeni(jeniluvmayur) its 4 u.............................

Part 3

Sharma house:

Mr. Sharma: Mayank beta!!

Mayank: Ji papa.

Mr.Sharma: Beta ek kam karna Samrat ko lekar tu jara tera Bhushan uncle ke ghar ja k ye packet de ke ana.

Mayank: Lekin papa mein to kabhi waha gaya hi nehi. Ab achanak kaise jao.

Ap plz jara samrat ko bhej de jiye na.

Mr Sharma: Dekho Mayank mein tum dono ko hi jane ki liye kaha. Pehle nehi gaya to keya hua?ab Chale jao. Or ab to ana-jana chalta hi rehga, hain na??

Mayank: Lekin papa -----

Mr. Sharma: Bas Mayank- maine kaha na ab jaldi se jao. or ha iske sath Nupur ko bhi jara dekh lena?

Mayank : Mein dekh kar keya karu. Dekhna to Bhai dekhaga.

Mr. Sharma: Mayank tum itna argu kyun kar rahi ho?Mein isliye dekhne ko keh raha hoon taki tum uske bari main Arnman ko thik se bata sako.

Mayank: Ok papa, jaise aap kaho.

Mayank searching for Samrat and found him in the garden

Samrat: In Phone- hey babes kal date pey chale. I miss u babes. Ya love u too. Samrat turn around and found Mayank standing behind him. Ok babes I call u later. He cut the ph.

Mayank: Samrat ye sab keya hain tum firse flirt kar rahe ho? Dekho ye sab thik nahi hain.

Samrat: Chill Bhaia. Ye sab to hota hi rehta hain. Ye sab ladki hain hi aisa!! Lekin pata hain bhaia jab mujhe mera dream girl mil jayaenge --tab mein usse sach much payaar karunga. Uski sath koi flirt nahi karunga.

He just closes his eyes and try to imagine his dream girl.

Mayank clicked his fingers in front of him to bring back from the dreamland he was lost in.

Mayank: Ab ap jara apna dream land and dream girl se bahar ayenge to mein kuch bolu?

Samrat: ha bhaia batao kiya kehna hain.

Mayank: Ha oh papa hum dono ko bhushan uncle ka ghar ja kar ye packet dene ko liye kaha hain.Or ha unhone ye bhi kaha ki hum nupurji ko dekh kar ay. Taki uske bari main hum arman bhaia ko bata sake.

Samrat: Wow, Great. Ye bahut hi accha baat hain. Ab maja ayega.

Mayank: Dekho Samrat, tum waha aisa 'vaisa kuch bhi nahi karoge,nahi kisike sath flirt karneka koshish karoge-samjhe.

Samrat: ok baba ok,to ab chale.

Mayank: Ya. Lets go.

Bhushan House

Sotu: Nupur di tum balling karo, mein batting karta hu.

Nupur: kyo mein balling karu? Mein to batting hi karungi.

Sotu: Nehi Nupur di, batting mein karunga.

Nupur: Agar mujhe batting nehi karne diya to mein nehi khelungi, tum log khelo.

Mein ja rahi hoon.

Sotu: Nupur di, thik hain tum hi batting karo. Mein balling kar leta hoon.

Nupur: ye huye na baat acche baccho ki tara. Chal lab jaldi se balling kar.

(In the mean time Mayank and Samrat enter Bhushan house)

Sotu balled and Nupur hit it but unfortunately it hits Mayanks head. And its started bleeding.

Mayank: ouch.

Nupur and other kids rush to the spot and found mayanks head as bleeding.

Nupur and the kids are very scared after seeing this.

Nupur: Suniye ap meri saath aa jaiye. Mein apko dawai laga deti hoon.

Mayank: Its ok. chota sa chot hain.

Nupur: Ha ha mujhe pata hain ki chota sa chot hain.Maine itne jorse nehi mara ki apko jaida chot lag sakti hain.

Mayank: Keya , to ap in baccho ko sath khel rahe thi.
Nupur: Ha to keya hua? Koi gunah kar di kiya?

Mayank: Nehi,meine to aisa kuch nahi kaha.

Nupur: Ha ha apne aisa kuch nehi kaha. Par apka kehne ka matlab yehi tha na ki mein in logo ki sath kyo khel rahi hoon? Kyo mein dekh kar batting nehi ki? Hain na. Ab ap papa ki pas jayage or mere bari main usko complain karenge. Main sab kuch samajhti hoon.

Mayank: Dekhiye ap thoda jaida hi samjhti hain. Or yahi apki problem hain. Mein koi complain nahi karne wala hoon. Or main itna choti se bat leakr aap ki tara itna bara issu bhi khara nehi karta hoon.

Nupur: Kya? Kya bola apne? Jara ferse boliye? Mein mein issu bana rahi hoon!!!!!! Mein mein... apko nahi chorungi.

Mayank: My God ye kaisa ladki hain.

By this time Samrat and Gunjan come here.

London

(A-R)

Arman: Ridhima mein jara hospital ja ka rata hoon.

Ridhima: Thik hain arman jaldi ana.

Arman: Thik hain. Tum apna khayal rakhna. O ha tumhara duty kab hain?

Ridhima: aj meri koi duty nahi hain. Kal se night duty hain.

Arman: Ok jaan to ab mein chalta hoon. Mujhe jara der ho jayaga. Hospital mein bahot kam hain or mujhe ticket bhi booking karna hain.

Ridhima: Thik hain Arman. Bye. Take Care.

Bhushan House

Gunjan: Kya hua di,kiski sath bat kar rahi ho.

Nupur: Pata nahi ye log kaun hain. Ate hi mera sath jhagra suru kar diya.

Mayank: Hello, excuse me. Jhagra maine nehi apne start kiya.

Samrat: R a bhaia apko ye chot kaise laga?

Mayank: Ow ball laga tha . its nothing serious Sam, mein thik hoon.

Nupur: By God, mein to isko dawa denai bhool gayi.

Suniye ap meri sath aiye main apko dawai laga ke deti hoon. Aap itna jaida bolti hain ki mein to dawai dene ki baat hi bhul gayi. Ab jara kripa karke andar chaliye.

Mayank: Koi jarurat nehi. Mein yaha thik hoon.

(Mayank muttered to himself)

Pata nehi pher se konsa musibat or hungma khara kar degi.

Nupur: dekhiye mein kuch sunna nahi chahti hoon. Ap abhi meri sath chaliye.

She pulls mayank with his hand.

(Sorry for smaller part of A-R and no Sajan. but in my next part I will try to add more A-R ,sajan, and obviously my cutest more).

Plz comment, criticize, suggest so that I can improve my writing, and about my hindi writng.-guys i really tired at my best at this time.

With lots of Love ----------

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Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hey very nice part..........i m dying to read more abt Mayur..........continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
khub shundor fariaa. khubi shundor. awsome. amazing. nice. great. wonderful r ki bolbo. i m spechless. pls update soon. and pls updte more mayur scene.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
hey
very nice update.
Enjoyed how mayank n nupur meet.
Wondering what's going to happen next.
U'r writing is ofcourse-hindi bahut shud tha. I don't think i would have been able to write that good hindi.-Great!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
heyyy fariaa
That was an amazing update
Loved mayur first meeting
Just waiting for more mayur scenes
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sweet part..
plzz more of AR...
update soon..........

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