Originally posted by: ammy-ridz
hi bheegi di.............
I want to talk about the part here..but first I want my curiousity to be satisfied. Plzzz tell me if you Plan all of this or it comes to u in a flow???
Hi Sai! Ur too sweet...I just plan out the main story....the details I fill as I go. This part was inspired by an article I read in a journal about the choking game and then winter olympics😆
I think I have always expressed how much I love your fics(each and every) But, It is always the most appealing thing to me that you by all means in any and every situation in your each fic take the efforts to bring the right values and righteousness to Light.
aww..thanks...hope my experience in life can help others
Simply LOVE U 4 this. It's almost makes me think of panchatantra and other tales where values are indirectly transferred to childrens at the pretext of reciting tales for fun. This is exactly what I think u do.
well...now u are embarrassing me....please I am no way close to those classic tales😆
Coming to the part'Do I have to spell it??? OK!...Brilliant!!...Loved it' The whole stress and addiction issue was dealt very nicely. The coming out of age 'the exact point where you might have a great chance of slip , if your gurdains are not cautious abut you. I think this is the stage where a child thinks he can handle everything on his own and ward off parents'. Which is exactly the antithesis of what he actually Needs''''. I may sound baised here but to be frank, it's always the guys who have more chances to slip than girls, and from what I have seen in life the simple reason is that not all but most parents/guardians always have the mentality to keep a tab on the girls or teaching them right morals and act ignorant when it comes to guys(for reasons I don't think I will need to spell out ) I loved the way you portrayed the whole act di. It is now I get what you had meant in one of your comment about Armaan being more vulnerable than Riddhima ''' and for once here, I m tempted to use the filmi line by Abhishek in Hum-Tum where he says Ladkiya humsey yaha kamzoor zaroor hoti hai(pointing shoulders) par yaha(Heart) par who humsey kai zyada takatwar hoti hai.(I think this completely fits the situation in this part)
I would like to think so too but even girls get carried away at times. I think Ridz's mom is a very stable character and I am sure Ridz gets her stability from her
Enjoyed AR's encounters and Riddhima's sassy remarks, Armaan's weird sense of humor during the ride, their young blossoming Romance skating round the tree with Armaan singing that Jay Sean no. Apt lyrics for the situation'. And finally, Glad to see realization dawn upon Armaan atlast.
You know I always drooled at Armaan in Dmg for his crazy whims and ideas. He makes me do the same here too.
yes, this ff is basically written with armaan/KSG in mind. KSG was the only reason i saw DMG...now I have stopped, just check the silly updates
My fav parts which I couldn't resist to point.
Have I told you, how much I love your mom? *Same pinch Armaan*
Muskaan was a chirpy seventh grader now, complete opposite of the shy and sensitive Rahul. I loved to see them together. I felt like a desi auntie when I thought of them as a couple in the making- match making runs in our desi blood I think. 😆😛
if ice creams were relationships, I am sure the guy who eventually gets you one day will be one heck of a lucky guy as you would be faithful to him all your life.(cho chweet and true! Amazing comparision)
I should have stopped lying long time ago and had I been truthful to you and myself, maybe life would have been very different today.
I had no idea that restless feeling, that rumbling in my chest was a sign that I needed you'.even today, that dull echoing, almost a choking sensation in my heart is a sign how much I have missed you these past few years.(You r scaring me here)
hmm...kuch tho hoga na warna kahani kaise banegi?😃
Sorry to make it too long but i just can't help it sometimes......Plz continue soon di. You are tempting us more and more with each part better than the former.
hey...i fee;l the pressure now😆
Thanx and Love thanks 4 ur wonderful comments...always😊
Sai.
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