It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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flowers.forever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!! wot an awesome ff! i read it all in one go! plzz plzzz plzzz pm me whenever u update next!!!

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

Di,
Are you annoyed at me?? :(:( You didn't reply to my previous comment.. ? :S (Page 38)
Anyyway, this part was superb ! :) Loved how Armaan and Riddhima are getting closer, but just like always, the "image" gets in the way.. I love the way you showed Riddhima gradually changing her birthday party from princess theme to an outing to a Knicks game.. :P Shanky is so mean..He even refused Padma to talk to Shivani.. :( And I hope Riddhima told Padma about Armaan lying to save in the Princi's office.. :P Other than that, the invitation was just as cute as the game invite.. Aww, that "Never leave me Armaan" just melted my emotions.. :) That was just so adorable.. :) You have a thing for giving premonitions di.. :) :) Riddhima rebelling..WOW.. :) That is something we will see in the latter part of the FF di, (I HOPE !! ) :D Ahahahahahah, Riddhima hates the Math teacher too huh..?? :D Awesome.. :)
Awww, the chess games were so cute. I think I have figured out Armaan's character here.. :) Thanks to your amazing penning down of emotions.. :) Riddhima gifting Armaan the camera was just too sweet.. :) And the way Armaan said" No one knows about these pictures, they go with me everywhere" just made me say "AWWWWWWW". it was such an Armaany thing to do. ;)
Awwwwwwww, the ending was just soo sour.. :( Obviously he ended up hurting her again.. The "I Hate you Armaan" proved to be more significant than I thought it would.. :P Want these words to change sooon di.. :P
Cheers,
xx

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Kajal Mukherji

@coolgal96

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

oh god! i luved r FF...hi i m KJ..and just caught wid ur FF..its luvly..plzzz update soon..n a longer part! wud u mind adding me to ur pm list?

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

Amazin prt! I jt love it! Plz cntd asap!

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs
Di !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pehle to one"MEGA" sorry..Haven't been able to reply, since I had exams et al.. :)
When i first read the intro., i had no idea the story would take such an amazing turn.. :)
Isn't it amazing, how kids get such things in their minds that lead on to so many bigger things in life? :)
Wonder what the story is going to be like.. :) I meant, other than amazing of course.. :)
Loved how Armaan defended Riddhima.. :) Its such an Armaan-y thing to do.. :)
Loved the story so far di, i really cannot wait to read more.. :)
Cheers,
xx

sorry Cutie! Just saw this old comment of urs....it'smy mistake.I would never be upset with u😃....sodon't take it to heart.Yes, those armaan-y traits have always been there in him esp when it comes to Ridz😳

[quote=nidha1983]Always i hate u Armaan nooooooooo i mean i Luv him how can i hate so cute so sweet jada hogaya sorry actually I luv Karan nah Ritu mar dalagi now stop all this

really rocking update di just came to check Ritu's pm and see ur one update so decided to read it and also replied coz den i don't get time but simple one reply no gift this time but di don't u think this time i too need a gift coz i have replied see i have 127PM including ur one but i have replied so sweet one di Armaan is rocling and Ridhima is too Nice so touching and so patience in her just love her from core of heart plz continue it soon actually after 6th so that i can't miss i know i m selfish even that's not possible coz i m afraid of sea den how thanks for the pm but i give u my new poetry

From Armaan "Sapno mein roaz aati hai woh,
Jane fir kahan chup jati hai woh,
Is Jism ki rooh hai woh,
Jane fir door hai kyun,
Is dil ko dhakhati hai woh,
Jane kyu sharmati hai woh,
Mujhe itna chahati hai woh,
Jane fir kyo chupati hai woh........" To Ridhima

From Ridhima "Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mera Pass nahi hai woh,
Fir bhi mera Saath hai woh,
Chahe main uski khwahish nahi ,
Fir bhi mera Jeena ki Aas hai woh.....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Chahe mujhse Door hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Rooh hai woh,
Chahai meri dhakhan nahi hai woh ,
Fir bhi mera jeevan hai woh,
chahe mera humsafar nahin hai woh,
phir be har lamha saath hai woh....

Chahe mujhse Anjaan hai woh,
Fir bhi meri Pehchan hai woh,
Bas mera dil ka ek Armaan hai woh,
Bas meri Jaan hai woh....." To Armaan[/quote]

Thanks Nidha! Yes, i should give u gifts this time for ur prompt reply😆 How about lots and lots of good wishes, hugs and kisses??😃
Yes, ridz is very caring here but poor gal keeps getting hurt one way or another buy badmaash armaan😭
lovely poetry as always👏👏👏
U can read next update when ur free...no rush😊

[quote=nina] just soooooo loooved It

you decribe everything sooo welll 👏

Those small moments and all were just so cute i mean their moments i mean their teenager "moment" LOL

that chess and camera was just SUPERB

OMG he said that only because of tha stupid friend awww poor riddz 😭

And he HAD to choose between his rep and her ??!!!!!!!and he went wid his "cool dude rep" 😭

Poor riidz , I sooo looved this udpate its just soo brilliant 👏

Will be waititng for the next udpate 😉😃

Just hope that you'll update sooon 😳

Love, Nina ^^[/quote]

Thanks Nina! I am glad u liked this part.Middle school years are def very tumultuous for all kids esp with theirinsecurities😕....poor ridzie got the rough end of armaan's insecurities once again. lets hopw armaan can rectify this in next part😭

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

Another great post Bheegi. I personally love how you took this story forth from their toddler years to adulthood. With each passing update the story is getting better and better and loved how you explain everything about Armaans apprehensions of being "desi" in the white world. This update took me back to my middle school years and personally I was just like Riddhima the typical nerdy girl. It was highschool that took me out of my shell.

I am really anticipating the next part to see how Riddhima transforms and how Armaan reacts.

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

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Heyyyyyyyyyyyy bheegi !!!!!!!!

that was an awesome- fabulous- beautiful- cute- and lovely and marvelous update !!.. loved reading it loads !! :D it was just soooooooooo fantastic !!

armaan's dad taking charge during those six months and his parents accepting and appreciating armaan for what he was.. and being proud and happy abt their son :) padma and riddhima meeting up with them after the six months and armaan feeling guilty and angry... his emotions were soo well penned !!... and then riddhima inviting them for her b'day...awww... thats soooooooo sweet...she is such a good girl... armaan's happiness was sooooooo very nice :)

the match was sooooo very well-penned... riddhima and armaan's moments... shashank starting all the talk abt grades and not noticing riddhima's annoyance and embarrasement...parents often tend to end up doing that... they never realise, that they might've accidently embarrased their kids with their talks ;) but padma coming in to the rescue once again...she's like a angel sometimes, sensing the emotions correctly and chaging the topic at the right time !!... i really like her ! :D :)

the middle school !! the emotions, changes in feelings, attitudes and beahviour were penned sooooooo very well... all the boys talks and stuff was good... armaan being the heart-thorb in middle school... this getting into his head....hmmm..understandable... his first ever girl-friend but he always seeked riddhima's attention and reaction for whom armaan was a part of the wall and who ignored his acts really well,...awww.. !! :)

the days after his accident..and his time with riddhima...armaan actually liking the meets and looking forward to them !! i loved their meets... they are sooooooo very cute !! :) armaan finding his new passion - Photography... and riddhima being the reason for it....awww :) :) his little secret abt his treasure of photos...awww...thats soooooooo sweet !!!..

then armaan breaking riddhima's heart once again.... the act of saving his so-called reputation costing him his very good friend !!... riddhima's shock and hurt as she heard him was sooooooooooo painful... i feel sooooooo sad for her !! :( :(

it was a beautiful update....

awaiting the next part !! :) continue sooooooooooon :D

thanks for the pm!!...

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 15 years ago

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#338

Great update di,
once again u left me spellbounded with ur writing skils n ability to understand teens so well
loved the way u put all the emotions of every character
looking forward to more of it

thanx for pm

-Huma

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#339

Arakshit sthan ko upyog mein laya ja chuka hai :)

(Updated my comment on pg 41)

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 15 years ago

#340

Bheegi ji like always.this part was filled with emotions ....👏

when both moms gave them time to spent with each other ,i was more than happy .I thought now they would settle in a bond of friendship but again this teen age nd repo😡😡

All things were falling down perfectly but no Armaan ko aadat hai na khud ko Adonis ka avtaar batane ki .why at the end he always mess up all ???????????...

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