It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

Hi Bheegi,
Fantabulous, excellent, mind-blowing, cute, chweet, romantic...I've totally run out of words but haven't been able to convey what it exactly felt like reading this part.I've been waiting for this part since the last few days and I tell you it was really worth the wait. I can't even mark my favourite lines in this part because then I'll have to copy paste the whole part. You made the best decision to write it from Armaan's point of view. As you know I'm your greatest fan of all the romantic fics but this is more chweet and cute.👏 Love ssh57

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~sumedha~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

rejerbed~!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank god you updated i would have died in another few days di!
love
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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

hey di..nice part..

Armaan had to be in a diff school..n he sort of did'nt like it there..but his parents felt that he was a gem in front of those kids..that made him happy atleast :)..

one day he saw Padma n his mom on talking terms finally..n Ridz invited him to his b'day party..he was def surprised..but when he learnt that its a Knicks game, he so wanted to go!

everyone had a ball that evening..n she held his hand cuz they both were lost..aww so sweet..

Ridz got a bad feeling towards the maths teacher cuz he kicked him out..aww..!..n thats why she was doin bad in maths..though thats not really bad!..

Then finally they landed in middle school..lol, i can so relate to everything cuz i'm the same age right now..😳..they started checkin out gals..n she was always ignorant of his showing off ways..

he went out wid Susan..n flirted wid her in front of Ridz..but she did'nt care..lol..that made him more curious abt her..nice..

he fell in d bball game..n he got so mch of attention..but later it died down..n Ridz visited him..she had got a book n a game of chess..both he did'nt like!..but he played it..n started enjoying it..he even got better than her!..wow..

later she gifted him her camera..n he was happy..he took so many pictures..n his 1st picture was of her!..;)..nice..

when he returned Susan wanted to get back with him but he ignored her..she deserves that..n Matt teased him abt being a nerd..but he did'nt wanna lose his popularity..so he said he hates Ridz..n she heard it!..omg..n she felt so bad..aww..i hope he makes it up to her..

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

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sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#324

loved it
it was so cute
contd soon
the 6th 7th 8th soo cute
thanx for the pm

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KASH_rocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#325

hey,
what a part it was.....
when i just thought that riddhima n armaan were becoming frnds....BANG.....how do des idiot so-called frnds of armaan have to come in bet. everytime.......

i feel so bad for riddhima poor gal...
waiting 4 d next part
thanx 4 d pm

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Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#326

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!! Thats all i can say bheegi, because unlike the last three parts that covered all the 'kid' version, this ones a little more to what i can remember distinctly in my life...i say, middle school life is the WORST time period of your life...i still hate mine :S but anyways...i loved the part...the flow was amazing and simple as it was, i liked it tons! great going bheegi,...looking forward to more!

Kiran

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Suvarna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#327

Wow Bheegi ... you have so subtly shown changes from being a kid to being a pre-teenager.

Oh well, Armaan's thoughts are coming out very well, but then truly ... very eager to hear Riddhima's end of story too :( I know you have mentioned its Armaan's narration, but maybe he gets hold of something that will show her thoughts/emotions? No doubt she also feels something for Armaan, first she including him in her list of best friends, then those chess sessions and finally giving him her camera. But then only other emotion from her is 'I Hate you Armaan' :(

Thanks for the PM and waiting for next update.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#328

Thanks for the PM !!....Bheegi di😃 I absolutely loved the part.🤗.infact in this FF I am loving all the parts more than the previous!!I was right when I judged that Armaan really cares for what Riddhima feels or thinks for him he may mask his feeling by being a Mr.Devil but Riddhima matters to him more than anything else.I loved when he clicked Riddhimas pic the first thing when she gifted the camera which shows her prority in his heart and it was touching that he yet possesses those pics he clicked with Riddhimas first ever gift to him!!..The chess games got them together. finanlly and at a mature level ..and I loved his confession about teenagers could be friends above the neck level...Armaan has definitely got checkmated😆....awesome job Di..Loved it loads!!

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Sri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#329

hey sangeeta di..i hope i can call u di..
anyways reading something like this is truly a change for me...and i am really enjoying it...
May be a story told from ones perspective is always interesting....n when it is armaan (here) its more entertaining too..
anyways....so padma have forgiven armaan ,,n rids invited him for her bday too.....loved when rids catched armaans hand..he cared for her..he was fallen for her....
days passed n they were in same school-teenage,,ahh!!everything...new,changed n attractive..hehe!!!
armaan - the attention seeker again has did everypossible way to seek attention.... lover boy!!!
but rids-armaans meeting n chess encounters were good...n he has developed interest in chess n photography thanks to rids..n it was first her photo who he took..so sweet!!
may be he was enjoying her company n so was she...
but again armaan as he is couldnt hear anything against him n said he didnt like rids..which she heard.....hmm..armaan!!!!
u knw what everytime rids says she hates armaan she just trying to herself that she cares for him n loves him..
n everytime when armaan hurts rids n makes her hate him...hes just trying to love her more than he did before,,,,,
hehe!!

its really interesting ..hoping to read the next part soon..
thanks for the PM!!

sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago