It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320

Loveddd the update Bheegi! I love the emotions you put into each and everyone of your FFs! Especially the changes a teen goes through, you've explained that SO WELL! I hate when people think of their image as the most important thing in the world, now because of that...Riddhima's hurt. I can't wait to see what's next! Thank you so much for the PM! Continue soon!

Love,
Zaynah

thanks Zaynah!Teens go thru this insecure phase,esp when they are trying to fit with the cool crowd😕 Let's see if this snub makes Ridz are stronger person

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(Flashback) The Judge -Your Honour Bheegi shahiba arrives at the Court. (The proceedings begin shortly) (Ok so this case is against Defendent Shraddha. Charges- Always reporting Late to comment on the latest ff by bheegi di.) My Lord aka Bheegi di: Defendent! Do you want to say any thing in your defence? Shraddha: Yes your honour. Bheegi di: Permission granted.You may proceed. Shraddha: Thank you your honour.*sniff*sniff* I have notthing much to speak in my defence BUT..... just some things. Your Honour aap hi socho ek toh mujhe meri padhi troubling, uspar se Screen awards mein Shahid ke Anchoring, upar se flu ka mujhe attacking , baki bacha time kaha for commenting......for commenting....ea holding...asking for forgiving!!!! The court room went silent for a few minutes after the confession.Shraddhas heartbeats doubled the rate. Every one was waiting for the Final Verdict and then........... Bheegi di: Shraddha you will have to comment first and then I will decide what to do about u? Mar diya jaye ke Chod diya jaye Bol tere saath kya saluk kiya jaye???

😆😆 UR really funny Sai! U should start writing some ffs...u have quite an imagination and a good senseof humor.

Ok the verdict is....bachchi samajh kar usey chhod diya jaaye😃

😆 (Flashback Ends) So here I m to deliver my comment- First of all Hi di !!!(Wow!!! ...Finally I can call her that..yayyyyy) Wonderful part di. Just adorable. Loved the way you showed the progress in their life and the changes and challenges they came across in growing years. Some things here have been described so aptly by u, that I don't feel the need to talk any more. About Armaan-Riddhima having rekindled their friendship, who could be more happy than me And the whole A- story….I too have an optimist in me just like Armaan who wants to think what he wants to be the scenario. "I know," you were annoyed, "I..I just don't like the teacher!" Your first sign of rebellion against your dad or did the math teacher remind you of what happened between us? Did you start hating your math teacher because he kicked me out of the school? I have always wondered, but perhaps will never know the truth. I bet you don't even remember it any more. But , Alas! Things again Back to square one. Like a game of chess, the battle lines had been drawn. Unfortunately, at that age, my image, popularity and reputation were under checkmate and like a traitor, I blurted out the most hurtful words from my mouth that day, And Here I wanted to confess how much I have fallen in Love with Riddhima in this part specifically. I Just Loved the fact that she even after being a daddy's daughter can stand up for something she truly believes in…and secondly for her being an 'Indian Nerdy' as others claim her to be… here I think this is the place I have found where she Excels Armaan again.

yes,in many ways she is more secure than armaan but armaan is the one who is willing to take risks here....anyways as u will see here both A and R are learning and neither is perfect...both make mistakes at one point or another


I can say that cauz I have always been a bit different in my life and a bit reserved and as a child and even through my initial college years I have always maintained my stance irrespective of the results good or bad. But what I always had with me is my 'Real Identity' which I still do and have managed to get every happiness in life. What I really want to say here is that 'If you want You to respect Your-self Let your-self, be the commander-in-chief (in Armaans language 'Take the charge') and follow your heart rather than adjusting your life and masking your identity to others wishes for the sake of fear of loosing something or greed of gaining something.' I know I m boring you with my jumbling..but I don't know I so strongly felt for this part that my fingers just itched to project the thoughts going on in my mind.

that is a very good point...ur absolutely right...no i love it when u analyse stuff so i am not bored at all


Ok Apart from this I wanted to mention some lines I loved here - Surrounded by other 'bad boys' or 'troublemakers,' made my parents appreciate what a gem of a kid they had given birth to! (bade badahi na kare,bade na bole bol
rahiman hera kab kahe,lakh taka mero mol…I don't know why but this doha of Rahim was something which came to my mind after going through initial paras)

i remember that doha from my school days😃
Somewhere deep down, my 10 year old heart was expecting gratitude from you, but instead you were back in my house after six months, just to call me a liar! A lesson I learnt early in my life- have no expectations especially when you expect them the most (Although I don't completely agree with Armaan here..but still it is the best thing to do 'Some-times')

in life....that's the only way to avoid disappointment😕
I know an A- was like failure for you and your dad, but to me your A- had in a weird way, made a connection with me that only an imperfect guy like me could relate to. Attention seeker that I was, I cherished each moment of this hollow admiration (yeah hollow- although it took me years to realize how phony those licentious looks were from the opposite sex.) As my fan following exploded, so did my ego and over confidence Overall a very Delightful part and again a Sutli bomb. Plzz continue soon.

he he...i like the way u say Sutli bomb.I just hope it just does not blow up at the wrong time😆
Thanx and Love Sai.(Awating for your verdict) P.s- Plzzzzz di Maaf kar dio haan. Mein toh abhi nanhi muni rahi hoon sacchi...jyada nahi bas kuch das-gyara saal badi hoon mein apni 11 saal ke cousin se. 😛

arre yaar...please no maafi waafi....chill and take ur timejust like i do with updates and replies😃
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awwwwww im loving this FF!!!! its too good!!! you've explained everything soooo clearly.. cant wait for the next part!! do pm me!!

This ff is awesome and I mean it like you fan actually relateto all the things happening and it is making me remember my middle school days and I have to admit u r a really good writer and also is it really true that boys accutually noticed those things and all I have to say was I just love this ff and btw u don't have to pm me I keep track of this ff and the part that armaan likes her so he irratates her is really sweet and armaan is such a cute boy and I bet riddhima likes him too but he being a boy just doesn't get it anyway plz plz plz plz plz update real sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon


Love Aisha

hey i loved it the way you have it from armaan's point of view usually all stories are from ridhz's point of view and i really like it the way you have proved armaan to be a sensitive guy with a lot of testorne levels i can so see armaan in the guy you portrayed. please continue soon would love to read more

Originally posted by: tarm

Oh god u shudve warned me about da puberty part lol. the last part had to be the best part... im beginning to like Ridz more nw she really has changed as in shes more confident nw i like dat. Plz mke the nxt part longer and tnx for the pm. Tahmina😉

thanks tahmina. yeah, a teenage story without puberty would be incomplete😆

[quote=bleesing_beauty]Teenage boys and their mentality. Gosh. Im so much in love whe this FF dat i feel like reading it again n again. U described everything so nicely. Pls cont soon [/quote]

Boys will be boys even when they become men😃 If u read it again- that's the best compliment for me😊

[quote=JAZZ_ACUA]I TOTALLY AGREE.
T JUST LOVED THE PART.
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON AND ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST. PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT.

LOVE JIA[/quote]

thanks Jia!yes, i will add u to the list😊

[quote=riddhan]hey the part was fantastic have no words to describe but felt sad as wenever ar become friends something happens n one gets hurt n plzzzzzzzzzzzupdate soon the next part as m already anxious to know wat happens next[/quote]

thanks Riddhan! Yeah, their relationship is like a see saw right now...let' s what happens in high school next😊

[quote=panjwani]hey u r a amazing writer veyr well written i just hope ridhima understand armaan one day he truly loves her from long[/quote]

thanks Panjwani! Yeah, it'd be hard for anyone to really understand armaan if he continues like this...he should come out with his true feelings😳

[quote=sweetaddiction]OMG-- this is like the first thing i've been cheking EVERY day for the last couple of days and today wen i cheked i was SOOO happyyyy (for obvious reason, ie the update)

soo good-- i loved the whole thing except for the last part-- bt well as u proved with the changing skls thing and with armaan's fall bad things lead to good ones so hopefully this one will too !

totally enjoying this whole ''from wen i was a kid til now thing'' and esp coz its from armaan's POV--

looking forward to the nxt update !!
take care. til nxt time =)

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thanks sweetoo! Yeah,writing from a boy's POV is something new for me too as I know how a girl thinks but boys as we know are different😃 Let's see what ups and downs happen next😊

[quote=hannahdmg]Loved the update. also love how you delineate all these small but important experiences that a child goes through, through their school journey

Hannahxx[/quote]

Thanks hannah! I am sure a lot of readers can still relate to their school days here...it's been sometime for me though😉

[quote=nanthini9]loved this part...lyked the transition to high school - when are we going to get to see riddiz pov[/quote]

Hmmm.....it's basically armaan's POV for a while. U will get glimpses of ridz's feelings here and there😊 thanks dear

Originally posted by: masin

omgsh di!! i cannot stress enough on how well u described those teen years!!!!!!! LOL...im turning 16 soon and i still remember those middle school years!!!!! i loved them....but yea...at times it was hell!!!!
oh...good so u can give me some anecdotes from school u still remember😉
u described each and every emotion soo well....tht i'm truly speechless!!!
aww thanks samra!
and armaan....o dear.....he really needs to learn when to keep his mouth shut! and ridz...i really like her character..sweet and simple! i wonder if u're gonna shed any light on her relationship with other boys...or if they found her hot?!?!?!
yeah, next chapter has this issue coming up😉
can't wait to read moreee thanks for the pm and please keep me posted
sure..will do samra!
loveee Samra :) <3

[quote=kashish]hey di thanks alot for the pm! wow! oo..loveis in the air...OMG..and that also at sucha ayoung age..but i guess thats how it is in the foriegn coutries..love the AR scenes..they are so cute! wonder what will happen next..what happens to make ridzi fall in love with armaan... cant wait to read the next part..pls continue soon!![/quote]

thanks kashish! Yes, this story is based in US, but i think kids in India behi kuch kam nahin hain ab😆 Let's see when AR will finally confess....or at least realize what they feel😳

[quote=khahani]

Hi di,

How are you? Visited IF to take my mind off things and saw ur PM, read the last two part and for a moment forgot all my predicament in life at the moment!

Armaan is a typical high school image conscious kid, who also happens to have a heart that only beats for Riddhima, but his feelings for her is buried very deep inside. He is the bad boy we always love and cry when he is hurt and laugh when he laughs!

Excellent portrayal of Armaan's character, there is no loophole in his character. I am sure we all had a Armaan in our school😳

Your ff are always a pleasure to read.

Love you and thanks for your advice I needed it.

Nahida[/quote]

thanks Nahida. Hope things are more stable at ur end. What did u decide? I am glad u like this armaan....yes, I am sure we all had an armaan like him in school we still remember😉😳

Thanks again for taking out time to read my ffs😊

[quote=sweet+mittal]

hey di awesome part first armaan behave very bad and then he feels guilty about it and then say sorry to ridz and play with her u explain very well about AR while they grow up pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon can't wait till they really grow up hehe love ya mittal[/quote]

thanks mittal! yeah, gradually they will grow up....lekin pyaar ka izhaar kab hoga?😳

[quote=ahenseven]Hi di...how are you...Omg that was such a great update...you did an amazing job as usual...i really really really like your style of writing...it's a little I cant say weird but I don't know maybe different to imagine them as kids while reading your ff cause I think this is the first one like this...but that's what makes it all the more amazing...thanks a lot and take care...love neha 😊[/quote]

thanks ahenseven! I am fine..and u? Yeah, even for me this is a new way of writing- from a boy's POV and that too when he was a kid😊 I am glad u like it so far

[quote=ssh57]Hi Bheegi,
Fantabulous, excellent, mind-blowing, cute, chweet, romantic...I've totally run out of words but haven't been able to convey what it exactly felt like reading this part.I've been waiting for this part since the last few days and I tell you it was really worth the wait. I can't even mark my favourite lines in this part because then I'll have to copy paste the whole part. You made the best decision to write it from Armaan's point of view. As you know I'm your greatest fan of all the romantic fics but this is more chweet and cute.👏 Love ssh57[/quote]

thanks ssh! Aww...ur comments mean a lot to me for sure. I am glad u like this ff and yes, this one is going to be more on the cute side instead of heavy duty romance😆 Lagta hai writing ka chaska aapko bhi lag gaya hai...good u have started QSS part 2...congratulations 👏👏

Whoa..kids and everything going in their minds.

Good that Armaan's parents, specially, mom understood her son's worth. She seems to have mellowed down a lot, or are we more to see of her?

Hand-holding and promise was cute 😳.

Riddhima unknown to herself seems responsible for all turning points in Armaan's life so far - bad boy to good boy, career choice.

Highschool prom will be in coming parts. I am curious about that part, who goes with whom 😉.

Thanks to annu127....here are some cartoons for part 4:

ee, ye lijiye...haazir hein! 😆

wow loved it please pm me soon and add me in ur list