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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey divzzzzzzzz,

I am sooooooooo glad to see this gallery, it feels at home in here. I feel as if its my own gallery divz.

Wowwwwwwww well i loveeeeeeee each of them, i loveeeeee them so much that reading themagain and again is a treatttttttttt.

From the beginning to the last one like from where they first met, to breaking apart to uniting, each and every OS took such a swift turn. You portrayed everything sooooooo well, it all seems damn real divz.

I loveeeeeeeeeeeee the way you have of delicately dealing with emotions, all these emotions and feelings are soooooo simply yet genuinely described that one can't help it but instantly connect to you and loveeeeeeeeeeeeee thy work.

i totally concur with musky and anu.

divzzzzzzzz please write more and sooner na jee.

God bless.

Oh senny 🤗
Ofcourse this is home 😊 for u and me!!

Thank u soooo much Senny...I just love reading ur comments..they are so sweet and touching!!

Thank u for saying the emotions felt real...!! I m so glad u cud connect to it..!!

I love u for loving my work n writing those wonderful comments!! 🤗

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
hey hun

congo on ur os gallery!

Loved all the os, they were amazing

plz pm me next time u update!

thank u Zoah!! 😊

Glad u liked em...will pm u for sure 😊

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Divya (Divz)

@ch0c0lates

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Awesome work Divya...i am so glad that you opened this gallery....please keep PMing me when you update :)

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Mayank & Nupur - The Rain

It was their first weekend apart, Nupur was missing him, she was hating every moment of being away from him. she thought of the irony of it all, when they were together they hardly spent enough time together and they were always fighting. Now when they were closer in their hearts they were forced to be apart..She looked out of the window, it was raining. She smiled lightly, she loved the rain, she always did, but now, she loved it even more as it reminded her of the times she really enjoyed herself in the rain.. with Mayank. The sadu akdu ladka had danced in the rain with her on valentine's night..she thought of this and smiled, how could I have not known then?? Then she thought of the day they had confessed to each other, he had walked her home, and it had rained that day..she had run for cover then, while he got wet. Then they had played in the rain. She thought of the last day he was in Mumbai, they had been caught in heavy rains then as well. She smiled again, then a tear lurked around her eyes, she blinked it away...she couldnt help it, she was missing him. She felt like something melancholy had taken over her heart..She decided to get wet in the rain, that always made her feel better. She walked up to the terrace...she dint run into the rain like she usually did, she stood along the side wall, again.. watching the rain.. The terrace, also brought her memories of the one person she missed the most...The day she had felt something like love for him...the day he made the world's best coffee..She thought of Uday bhaiyya's birthday, she had gotten ready especially for him and she smiled thinking how she was unable to say I love you to him...They were together with each other and she couldnt say it..But now....She said to the rain...I love you Mayank...!
I love you too Nupur ! Her heart turned into a mangled mess as she tried to believe her ears, she turned around in shock and surprise as she saw him standing there watching her. She was rooted to her spot, he walked forward...and hugged her..! I missed you Nupur , she just held on to him, the elusive tear threatening to make way to to her flushed cheeks. He pulled her into the rain....they stood there holding hands and enjoying the rain as it cleansed their hearts off all the unhappiness they had felt during the week they had been away from each other.

After which they talked about what transpired in their lives in the week away from each other, the babloo, the plan, the project, the poem..but these were mere words, their happiness was in being with each other ..sitting side by side knowing that they were meant to be.

Edited by myownarea - 15 years ago

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

awesome awesome os....just loved her thoughts....loved it....sorry my vocab falls short wen it cums to ur oneshots...😃......awesome once again....

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

beautifully woven into words Divya.. I can just imagine that scene. ultra romantic..👍🏼👏

Edited by kaldivya - 15 years ago

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Hey divyaaaaaaaa wowwwwwww i lovedddddd it.

Rain and MN have a really old relationship and you it all sooooo well, divz why don't you write for MN, awwwww it would be wonderful if you would write for them man.

RP and AB will loveeeeee their job as well hehe. I lovedddddddd the way you portrayed the parts where N remembers about him, the good times and reflecting upon her thoughts now and then, i loveddd how she gradually came back from the memories and felt this pain of not having M with her.

awwwwwwwww the suprise in the end by Mayank must have flown nups away hayeeeeeeeeeeeee.

i lovedddddddd your conversations element which is soooooo important but i don't know why these Cvs don't get that man.

excellentttttttttttt work man.