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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

oh god Divya....how do you do it i don't know....but while reading i always feel like i'm present there with the two of them...

lol

the way of writing...the descriptions portrayed the emotions so well. I couldn't tell that it was a fanfic or a real scene..!!
Them watching that barn scene together....lol...i can't imagine the hotness there. And you captured it so well....i was overflowing with anticipation..!!

uffff....lol

Creatives didn't make them kiss....but yoou could have..!!LOLz

I thought he would after saying all that....but the fact that they didn't kiss made it so mcuh more authentic. If that makes sense.

I'm in love with your one-shots...!

Plz ddooo write more sssoooonn...!! hehe

Great job..!!

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

wowwwwwww !!

they r just tremendously amazinggggggg

i simply loved all of them

each word carries each emotion.........all touched 2 my heart ........

the way u written them were like each emotions is going inner .......the passion love ,emotional bonding all was felt

this all so felt real ..........all i was imagining in reality i simply adore it

🤗

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Divya.....wow...it's beautiful.....kay likhati ho tum yaar.....👏👏

simply loved it.....😳

you understanding of ArTi/Mayur touched my heart....😭😭

you truely are blessed with art of writing.....please write more....😊

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

awww divyaaa....

every singly os was beautiful, amazin, awesomee, sweeet and touchingg!!!

i loveddd it!!! this was jus soooo greattt!!!!!

im lookin fwd to a lot more os noww!!!

plz pm me wiv updates!!!

these os were jus superb!!!
xxxx

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

divi chechi.........🤗............................

duniya ke saaaaaaaaaaaaare saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare thnxxxxxxxxx to u for givin us d bestest......heavenly.......super perfect........sizzlin ARTI oneshots back to back............my utter most fav ws obviously d last one.....coz its where they confessed!!!!!!!!.......(hmmmm evn though i knw nw it can nevr be real......),,,,,,,jo bhi ho.............chechi.............u r d bestest in writin ARTI os...none cud beat u in tht.....n pata hai....i luv ur one shots on ARTI much more than ur single mayur ff.......😉.........srsly chechi.......thnxx a zilion ton..........plzzzzzzzz meri maano toh aap sirf ARTI os hi likhna........😳...........coz ab real ARTI moments ab shayad hi honnge..,,,,,bt i wanna stil c tht ARTI moments...evn though its in OS...i wont mind....so plzzzzzzz di....do write moreeeeeeeee n moreeeeeeeee perfect ARTI os lik dis........😳

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Navi

@Navi_44

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

awwwww soo cute

they r just super duper amazinggggggg

a you write really good yaar... each word had soo much emotion and it was just awsome

this all so felt real ..awsome job yaar!!

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

heyyyyyyyyyy divz i am sooooooooooo in love with your work that whenever i am down, i just come here and read your OS and leave with a smile,

pleaseeeeee write more and soon na.

hugssssss.

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

OMG divya!!! awesome yaar!!
i wish ....woh hi hua hoga.....
seriously yaar.....best one shots!!
please write more.plz me😳

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

congo di on the os gallery di!!
i just reread the ones i've already read n i also read the new ones
they all r mind-blowing!
ur an amazing writer!
i hav no clue how u do it!
anyways waiting for ur nxt os (n ur ff updt, when r u updting??)