ArTi / Mayur OS Gallery - updates on pg48,50,52 - Page 33

Do I need to tell you that it was not only awesome but brilliant... I read this OS in the Potential scenes wala thread.. as someone suggested that we should not comment there but just hit the "LIKE" tab.. i did that..

perfect 👍🏼

Hey Divzzzzzzzz,

I am so tired but as I had promised I had to come, it was more a promise to myself so that divz has a beautiful smile on her face early morning, i don't know when would you get to read this comment but Divzzzzzzz i read this in the potential MN scenes thread and i sooooo wanted to write a big comment there but I know its not recommended to do so. But I am super glad to have the OS here.😃

Where to start from, from the beginning, now that isn't so hard hehe. You have written the scene totally in line with the track, it seems as if I am watching the show it self only this time the dialogues are beautiful😳 and screen space is perfect hehe.😆

I loved how at last M has time to think alone about what happened, how he behaved, how he should have behaved and how things were on a different stage at the moment. I am so glad that M here is able to see that somewhere he was wrong too, in the show toh he is still farrrrr from realising this hehe. When he does, how i wish they use these wordsssssss! Divz so send this to the Cvs as well.😊

Walking back to an empty house has what has always made me feel so alone and abandoned, i know how it feels. Just a few days back when N walked into that empty house and now its Mayank! I loveddddddddd how you so wonderfully and so intricately described his frustration. Aww her dupatta reminded him of N but would the sadu M accept it readily, not at all hehe.😆

The part which touchedddddddd me the most was the part in the end, where M thought of his N and the rain.I don't know why but instantly i thought about KJ scenes although the walk in the post confession is most recent but when i think of MN, KJ scenes always flash first in my mind. I missssssssss them together. I know I always say that I want them to be separate but my melting heart would just melt at the sight of them together.☺️😍
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Beautifullyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy written Divzzzzzzzzzzzz, do write more and more!👏 👏 👏

Love you loads.

Hey Divz lovely OS....

Wish we get to see something like this...

beautifully written i just loved these lines

he would call her first thing in the morning and let her know..that he loved her, loved her enough to forget his pain, loved her enough to be happy for her, loved her enough to walk with her, For they were together in love and life. Now and forever.

Mayur are & will be in love forever....

I love your work to bits.....do write more.............

luv
Nidzy

Hey Di...

sorry divya.. i'm replyin so late... since i'm out of town...
awesum OS....
luvd it 2 d core....
thnx 4 d pm...
-supriya

I'm dancing

Sweet OS hun!! Even her dupatta and the rain, every small thing reminds him of her!! Aww.. Thats soo cute!

Divya what a perfect OS..........

Perfectly describing the real Mayank Sharma........... I wish CV's could read it and got to know what are the demands of character and what the real characters are..........

You are amazing yaar........... Mayank missing his wife......... and realizing his mistake still fighting with himself for her to understand that he was angry on himsefl not over Nupur........... and best part was helding her dupatta and remebring about her while eating food and a smile crept over his face.............

Amzing OS, Loved it..........