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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#311

loved reading it Divya .... ...thanks for the pm

Edited by nanditasingh - 15 years ago

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#312

superb os....... i hope it happens the same in the serial also...

do write more............

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#313

amazing OS simply awesome

you have done it again Diva!!!

I loved it!!!!

lekha

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Aneesha Kaushal

@theaneesha1992

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#314

wahooo divz di 😲 ...amazing😊, out of the world👏 and what not...
all complements r less for this wonderful piece of writing...i must say that the show needs u badly i mean really badly😆....the way u described mayanks feeling......in each line the dilemma he was going though came out perfectly...the love vs the anger and ego ....u know mayank sharma too well ⭐️Divz di⭐️ ...luved it

thanks so much for the pm ....keep writing more

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#315

Heyyyy divya
That was a lovely os
Keep writing
Thanx for pm

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PureBliss

@PureBliss

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#316

Beautiful...it was completely beautiful. Wish we get to see something like this in the show as well :)

The way u wrote M's feelings was just perfect. And MN in rain *sigh* and M reminiscing about his moments with N....this was all so beautiful!

Do write more OS's :D

--Avani

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#317

Divya, 🤗

Another beautiful piece of work from you. You know us Mayurians and Artians so well. You always press just the right spot and send us off into a magical dream.

This OS was just beautiful. Every emotion so clearly defined, so true, so clear. I loved the voice in mayank's head trying to teach him right from wrong.

Two lines I immediately fell in love with were "Going back home to warm dinner and a non-stop chatterbox for a wife was usually the best part of the day, he realised with a sigh. He would of course miss the latter more than the former"

These were so apt. So wonderfully true. I loved how you emphasized how Mayank was missing her and realizing her absence more and more looking at and feeling her in all her things.

The last para was truly msmerising. Beautifully written.

Have you ever considered writing for MJHT? I think you should. Trust me it would make all of us as happy as can be. You and your flawless writing is just ENCHANTING.

Bravo. Great Job. I will be waiting impatiently for your next piece of work.

-Daania