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Debolina Roy

@Healer.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#281

😍 😍....

i'll fill in the blanks a soon as i come in terms with the real world 🤣

edited :

oh man u ArTi writers are so bold and brave 😆 😆...mujhe ek gaana yaad a gaya thanks to his attentivness in the flight mujhe neend na aye mujhe chain na aye...koi jaye zara dhoond ke laye na jaaney kaha dil kho gaya 😆

waisey even i wonder why is he itching to go back to work hun? 😳 😳 😳 i love the forced tracks wala comment ROFL

that cracked me up big tym ROFL

....aaah bullying, pulling her legs...where did u get tis inspiration from 😉 😉 😳 😳

awww the way u sowed his longing for her...thinking abt her always i these 6 days...spending more tym with each other than the average husband wife do (again hubby-wife 😆)

the break up part...it was very brave and bold f u too mention tat bit 😆 😆 😆....but there is love for sure na 😊

as i said before...the longingness (yeh dooriyan after effect brushed in kya ROFL

) getting jelous , longing for her voice 😆 😆😆 , her laugh Day Dreaming

.....you made him sound like a totally , deeply and madly in love guy Day Dreaming

....suffocated without her clearly indicates 😉 😉

sheesh now i shud make a passionate Arjun VM ROFL

....u showed it too much over here that i can actually imagine the depth of love...erm maybe love 😉 😉...iss tis love..meine na jaana 😆 😆

thanks for the wonderfull OS divya..thanks a lot for the dedication i loved it to BITS 🤗

Edited by debolinaroy08 - 15 years ago

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princess_dj

@princess_dj

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#282

Lovely OS Divz..............i loved it...........

Makes me wonder and hope that certain somene does really think this way.............😃

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Haila..............what an OS..................me love it to the BITS...........😉

ah....i knw missing some is so so so painful, esp when u spend around 16 hrs together everyday...........

😃

and the living in denial was so cute....................

i also like the rambling...........on and on and on............abt certain someone.................😉

this update makes me sing...........

kahin na laage man

kya hai ye soona pan.............aha aha........

mujhe tum bata do

koi to dawa do...............aha ......aha.......

har ghadi ab khyalon mein aa raha koi

har ghadi meri neendon mein aa raha hai koi........

is this love...........maine na jaana.............aha haha............😳.

Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#284

its my sheer luck that i just opened my pc and i am instantly reading ur os......😃 without ur pming me!...😔

so it arjun na? wow....i love when u write about arti......cause it looks real.....and i love real things....though i can never write such realistic things.....i end up adding something superficial...😆

and the way u explained things with connection like making him smile....and he loves teasing her...somehow really catched my attention and i can't help but love it!

when we are so attached to people...and we are used to be in their company.....we seem to mind if they aren't there.....its so strange.....we like to work if we are accompanied by them.....and we don't like rest if thy aren't with us.....we find some part of us incomplete...

they dated and broke up? this is ur imagination! cause i think if arti dated ever, then are never going to break up! haina? oh! he misses her so much! i wish this happens for real.

aww....he is so sweet......he is so much in love.....but ya...let it not be so until he realises it...

beautiful os! u have the ability to explain the human feelings.......it was enjoyable and lovely!

i so loved this one!

do write more.....and plz pm also! i don't wanna miss os like these!

love,
Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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shinz

@shinz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#285

WTH!!! i was so sane today!!

will reply later when im back to sanity!!

but OMG!!😍😍😍😍😍

reserved!

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#286

its just awesome...............
amazing
outstanding
i think arjun also might be thinking the same way about rati .................. as you wrote in the shot.....
its truly amazing and hey just write the next part soon.....................i mean on their meeting..........
please............ i will be waiting for this..........and please do pm me whenever you update............

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#287

Divya... awesome OS.... this reminds me of the song from Rocky....amazing lyrics I tell you....

Kya yahii pyaar hai...haan yahii pyaar hai...

Dil Tere bin kahii lagta nahii....

Waqt guzarta nahii....

Pehele mai samza

Kuchh aur wajah inn baatonki

Lekin ab jaana

Kaha neend gayi meri raatonki....

Intersting how both must be missing each other....and he knows he loves to be with her 24/7.... but doesn't want to accept his feelings... LOL....

You wrote Arjun's mind Vs heart battle beautifully Divz.....

Love it.... hugs and kisses for writing his....

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Marium

@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#288

awesum os

plz pm me when u write again an os

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Sabah

@a little faith

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#289

Divya,
"I feel like doing silly things for her just to see that lovely smile on her face. I Want to laugh with her, have I told you, she has a melodic laugh just like her voice. That reminds me, I want to hear her sing for me, and I want to see her expressions as she hears me sing in my horrible voice."

Love has so many manners in which it expresses itself. I loved these. Thank you for adding beauty to my life.

Love Sabah