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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 13-

Nidhi: Nupur chalo

Nupur: Kaha?

Nidhi: Doctor ke paas

Nupur: Kyun?

Nidhi: Medicine lena hai aur check karna hai

Nupur: Leken doctor ke paas?

Nidhi: Kyun? Koi problem hai?

Nupur: Nidhi yeh baat kissi se mat batao

Nidhi: Kya?

Nupur: Mein doctor se dar thi hoon

Nidhi starts cracking up, she then starts laughing really hard. I felt embarrassed.

Nidhi: Tum… doctor… se dar thi… wah Nupur wah! Sach mein Nupur doctor se?

Nupur: Yeh tumko mazak lakta hai?

I said that very angrily and Nidhi stops laughing.

Nidhi: Nahin, leken chalo na

Nupur: Tikh hai

So we go to the doctor and the doctor tells me this:

Doctor: Nupur aap sehi salamat mein hai, tumhari bachi normal hai, and perfectly healthy. Now, you need to be careful as you're carrying a child, that too your first one.

Nupur: Leken doctor, larka hai ya lardki

Doctor: Nupur, tum sirf 1 week pregnant ho!

Nupur: Oh sorry, I had no clue.

I felt embarrassed.

Doctor: Koi baat nahi Nupur. Take these medicines.

Nupur: Thank you doctor

Doctor: Your Welcome and congratulations

Nupur: Thank you

I got the medicine and went back home with Nidhi.

Then I got a phone call from Gunjan.

Nupur: Hello

Gunjan: Hello di

N: Gunjan!!! Aap kaise ho, aur tumhari pati…

G: Di…

N: Sorry sorry leken aap kaise ho

G: Main tikh hoon leken main sun gayi ki aap bevhosh ho gayi, kya yeah sach hai di?

N: Ha Gunjan

G: Kya hua?

N: Mein maa bane wali hoon

G: KYA!?!? Congratulations di

N: Thank you

(Over at Samrat and Gunjan's house while Gunjan was talking to Nupur, Samrat comes in and Nupur can hear just saying so you guys won't get confused)

S: Chasmish!

G: Samrat mein phone pe baat kar rehi hoon

N: Samrat hai?

G: Ha di, Samrat

N: Toh Samrat… oops I mean jija ko keh do ki main maa bane wali hoon

G: Samrat guess what?

S: Ki tum bahot koob surat ho?

G: Samrat…

N: Gunjan bolne do naa, afterall, he is your loving husband

G: Di, tum mere saath hamesha kyun mazak karti ho?

S: Kyun ki aap bohli si hai, and a complete idiot

G: Samrat!!!

She start hitting him on the shoulder

S: Leken kya hua Nupur ke saath?

G: Voh maa bane wali hai

S: Sach mein?

G: Ha

Samrat yells in the phone:

S: Congratulations Nupur!

N: Thank you! Aur ha Gunjan,

G: Haan,

N: Aaj Nidhi ka janam din hain, and I want to keep a surprise party, she's at school right now so once she comes home, we'll celebrate. Can you and Samrat come?

G: Of course we will. Kab hain?

N: 5 baje

S: Hum kaha jaa rehi haan?

G: It's Nidhi's birthday.

S: Oh! Kab?

G: 5 baje

I end the call. I felt really good talking to Gunjan. She was always my sweet little sister. I went to buy the cake (chocolate cake, Nidhi loves that) and was preparing the house. I really liked it being simple because it was going to be me, Nidhi, Gunjan, and Samrat. No one else and it was going to be a sweet and nice birthday.

Gunjan and Samrat come, with a gift. It was an Anarkali dress. I knew Nidhi would love it. I saw Nidhi through the window.

Nupur: Okay guys! Turn off the lights!

Samrat turns off the lights.

Nidhi: Nupur, why is it so dark in here?

She turns on the lights.

Nupur, Gunjan, and Samrat: Surprise! Happy birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Nidhi, happy birthday to you!

I could tell by the expression on Nidhi's face that she was happy! Samrat walks up to her.

Samrat: Happy Birthday Sweetheart

Nidhi: Thank you!

I walk up to her

Nupur: Happy Birthday Nidhi! Ab chalo cake cate hain.

I light up the candles.

Gunjan: Ab wish karo.

(In Nidhi's mind)I wish Mayank comes back soon, then everything will be right!

Nidhi blows out the candles.

Samrat: Ab Nidhi, presents jaye?

Nidhi: Of course!

Samrat: Then here you go, from Gunjan and me.

She looks at the salwar kameez and smiles.

Nidhi: Thank you so much!

She hugs both of them.

Samrat: Mera idea tha.

Gunjan: Samrat, jhoot mat bolo, meine chose kiya gift

Samrat: Meine!

Gunjan: Meine!
Nupur: Stop it guys! Tum bhi na!

Samrat: Sorry!

Nidhi: Koi baat nahi

Nupur: Ab mera gift jaye?

Nidhi: Maa, tumse zaaiyda gift mil sakti hain?
Samrat: Mein!

Wow, Samrat, really had to spoil the mother-daughter mood I said that in my head

Gunjan: Samrat!

Gunjan playfully hits him on the arm

Nupur: Dekho

I give her the necklace.

Nidhi: Wow, thanks Nu… I mean maa.

She hugs me.

Nupur: Koi baat nahi beti

Gunjan: Come on let's eat cake

Samrat: Aur voh bhi chocolate

Nidhi: Chocolate? Chalo!

I smiled at her sweetness and childish acts

All four of us ate cake and just had fun.

There was a phone call.

Nidhi: I'll get it

(Nupur doesn't hear this so it can't be told from her point of view)

Nidhi: Hello?

Mayank: Hi Nidhi

N: Mayank?

M: Haan, tum kya kar rehi ho?

N: Aaj mera birthday hain aur Nu… maa meri liye choti party lakhi

M: Oh aaj tumhara janam din hain, Happy Birthday Nidhi.

N: Thanks. Papa.

M: Papa?

N: Haan, kyun nahi acha laga?

M: Nahi, ab mutse Papa hi bolana.

N: Tikh hai, leken Papa.

M: Haan

N: Kab ayenge?

M: Bahot jal mein

N: Leken kab?

M: Kaal

N: Kya?

M: Haan Nidhi, I'm coming tomorrow.

Wow, that took me a while to type up. Anyways, I hope your happy now because I made this part long (in my world) and Mayank's coming back!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ahem Ahem

Nikki tumne kya bolla??????
This part is long??????/
Kis angle se yeh tumhe long laagtha hai?
Well anywayz
mein start bhi nahi hona chahati
abhi
lol
this part is mindblowing
sachhi
and Nupur scared of doctor
lol
thatz hiliries
and
awsome scene between Sajan
and haan
I am sooooooooo happy
Mayu coming back
finally
now all
I have to do is wait for the next part
do continue soon
and yeah u noticed
I am first
yeahhhhh
letz party again
awsome
everything is awsome
and
awwwwww
Nidhi is gonna call Mayu papa from now on
realli cute
abb you better update
warnaaaaaaa
well mein soch ti hoon
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi nikkieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,

phew atlast im able to grab the second place to comment after so long anyways,
well this update was fabulas love samrat gunjan alot and yeh how can i forget nidhie and nupur too were good loved samrat gunjan and nupur birthday surprise for nidhie awesome yaar really a good update i must say i really liked nidhie and mayank convo finallyyyyyyyyyy mayank is comming back in next update i hope so and yeh now plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue i cant wait to read more yeh liked how nupur said to nidhie that she is scared of doctor 😆 overall loved the part like anything do continue soon N yeh thanx for the pm dear.
love u!!!
sana!!!!!!!!! 😳
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwsome part Nikki .........
Gr8.....
i loved it to the core
ha ha ha Nupur scared of Doctor
wooow Mayu is coming back
cant wait to read the next
do continue soon
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i loved this part.......

i wanna write big comments

but they r meant for big updates.......

but i loved the entire scene sequence.........

i loved how it did unfold.........

continue soon...........

i loved how mayank is coming back

and nidhi would call him papa......

loved each bit of it.....

do continue soon.................

with a BIG update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey nikkie,
lovely part.
loved nidhi as usual.
loved the b.day party.
sajan were cute also.
ohh nidhi so sweet- she called mayank as papa.
i really loved it.
i m so happy now mayank is coming.
fantastic part.
keep it up.
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwesome prt
thanxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next prt soooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
did u just say this part is long?
it was damn short!
tho loved it!
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Nikki... Loved this part and was really happy to see Nidhi calling Mayank "Papa" and he likes to be called like that and then Nupz scared of doctor... Now that was some joke 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

okay finally i'm free and doing nothing now i'm gonna read it and comment on each part i have missed kk

😛😛

-sanam-

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