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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: rkmnkp
Mahi mein harron aur woh bhi from u????????
lol

its not possible.

Ok so now Nikki

I have to make this post long. oh god

U'll see

u all will see.

lol

Nikki I am soooooooooo 😲 that

I wasn't the first to comment.

I had plans in my head that

I will be first to comment. I know, your master plan

But I guess many people

took that chance from me,

Ok back to this part.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

*Thowing chapples* ouch!

(Don't worry let me complete my sentence, lol)

*Throwing chapples and coming to hug you*

(Abb theek hai?) haan.

I love this part

to the core

Not basically Earth's core

u see I can't go there you take everything too seriously

lol

ok ok

I'll stop. thanks!

I realli love this part,

Everything was so well described. thank you!

And Sammy flirting with Nupur and Nidhi.

lol

that part was too good. thanks

I had a huge smile on my face,

and my friend who was sitting next to me

waz like

"What in the world, is she smiling for" pagli!

lo;

now she is gone to get something to eat.

thinking I have lost it or something. she probably does think that

And yeah Gunjan's shaadi was so

😍

And love the part

where she tells Nidhi that

"Jb tum maayke jaaon gi, tab pata chale ga"

And you know when I saw

the word

"Maayke"

I thought you like misspelled

Mayank's name haha, I wouldn't do that

lol

and yeah

the song was superb too.

Hey the ending is quite

shocking

Nupur fainted?????????????????

I have billions of questions on that

but my main will be

why?????? pata chalenga

lol

ok will wait

actually can't wait. oh god

so when you come on IF

(I mean now, lol)

update it!!!!!!!!!!! well then, I'll have to

I want to read the next part.

and thank god you are not planning to end it

warna

I will damki you or something oh no!

you know what a fablous Damki'er I am

(lol I don't know if that word exits, but I said it does, so shhh.)

Nikki update it

I mean go right now.

Follow my orders

becuz I am older than you yeah like by one year

and you should listen to elders

lol

Ok Mahi well I thiknk this is pretty long true

so if you have any shak

then please call me

my number is

1234567890 I called you and you didn't pick up 😆

lol

I hope you don't call me

becuz this is pretty long

haana Desi girl? yeah it is, it took me 15 minutes to reply to all of it

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#212

Soooooo sorry, this part is also short. But the next one will be long, really long

Also I'm not going to be able to come on IF next Sunday and Monday. Sorry! I'm going to be out of town.

Here's the part:

Part 11-

Nidhi: Nupur… Nupur!

I woke up finding myself on my bed

Nupur: Mein yaha kaise?

Nidhi: Nupur aap maa bane wali hai

Nupur: KYA!?!?!?!

I got straight up from my bed

-Flashback-

Nidhi: Nupur! Doctor hai yaha?

Doctor: Mein ek doctor hoon

Nidhi: Toh dekho kya hogaya

The doctor checks

Doctor: Congratulations, she's pregnant.

Nidhi: Kya? Voh maa bane wali hai!

Doctor: Ha, kya tum iski beti ho

Nidhi: Umm… ha

Doctor: Toh ab tumhari saath ek chota bahiya ke behen hogi. Ab tumhari maa ko ghar le gayenga.

Nidhi: Tikh hai

-Flashback ends-

Nupur: Mein… mein… mein maa bane wali hoon

Nidhi: Kyun Nupur? Iss me koi problem hai?

Nupur: But Mayank…

Nidhi: Arre hai… Mayank. But Nupur…

Nupur: Kya Nidhi?

Nidhi: I told the doctor that I'm your daughter

Nupur: You are already my daughter

Nidhi: Kya?

Nupur: Ab tum meri lawfully daughter ho

Nidhi: Sach mein? But Nupur, I always call you Nupur sorry!

She puts her hands on her ears.

Nupur: Koi baat nahi.

Nidhi: Nupur mein abhi aati hoon

(Note: this little part of the story that's purple is from my point of view, not Nupur's because she doesn't hear this conversation)

Nidhi goes into her room and goes through her closet.

Nidhi: Kaha hai voh card?

She finds the card that Mayank gave her.

Nidhi: 1-345-322-6784

She calls the international line.

Mayank: Hello?

Nidhi: Hello Mayank!

Mayank: Yeh kaun bol raha hai?

Nidhi: Mein Nidhi.

Mayank: Nidhi?

Nidhi: Jab tum American pe jaa rehe the aur mein almost mar gayi?

Mayank: Oh Nidhi! Kaise ho?

Nidhi: Abhi mujhe aap ko ek baat ki barre mein kuch pooch na tha.

Mayank: Kya Nidhi?

Nidhi: Aapki ex-wife Nupur thi?

Mayank: Yeh tumko kaise maloom?

Nidhi: Kyun ki mein Nupur ki beti hoon, adopted beti.

Mayank: Kya! Nidhi…

Nidhi: Abhi time nahi hai, jaldi India pe aaga

Mayank: Kyun?

Nidhi: Kyun ki Nupur maa bane wali hai, aur jab Nupur ka ki…

Mayank: Nupur ka kya?

Nidhi: Bahot kuch

Mayank: Matlab

Nidhi tells the story to Mayank about Nupur getting kidnapped and the whole story.

Mayank: Don't worry Nidhi, mein 5-6 din mein India pe aa raha hoon

Nidhi: Tikh hai, ab mujhe jaana hai

Mayank: Bye Nidhi

Nidhi: Bye Mayank

(Conversation ends)

Nidhi: Nupur, sorry maa. Pata hai, kal mera janam din hai.

Nupur: Maloom hai

Nidhi: Kaise?

Nupur: If I didn't know then how would've I have been able to adopt you?

Nidhi: Oh yeah!

Nupur: Were you talking to someone?

Nidhi: No…

Nupur: You sure?

Nidhi: Of course!
Nupur: Ab chalo.

Nidhi: Kaha?

Nupur: School pe, you're going to be late

Nidhi: Ugh! School…

Nupur: Jana honga.

Nidhi: Chalo.

I drop Nidhi off and I plan to surprise her on her birthday. I go to a shop and buy her a necklace. I knew she would like it.

Thank you!

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#213

Awsome I am first!😆

Ok first of all

Nikki this part is too short!

and wow

Nupur having a baby?

Kool

and I love Nidhi's and Nupur's relationship

they are so cute together.

Thank god Mayu coming

waz waiting for him

awsome Nidhi's b-day.

Want to read more

plez do update soon.

will be waiting

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#214

okay nikki

my xamz are done

i'm back and ready to comment on parts i have missed

it might take a while to comment though kk

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#215

Hey Nikki

Nice update dear

I loved it

though the part was short it was gr8

Wow Mayank is coming back

I hope Mayur get together

plz continue soon

luv

Nidzy

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#216

Hi nikkie,

Lovely update.

Wow so Nupur is pregnant?????

Hmmm interesting.

Loved nidhi as usual.

Mayank back to Mumbai.

Great news.

Nice part.

Kep it up.

Than 4 pm

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#217

hi nikkie

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update

thank god nidhi na mayank ko bulaliya phone kar ka

he is comming back yayyyyyyyyyy

nupur maa bana wali hai by god

its a good news 😆

anyways fabulas update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

N thanx for the pm dear

love u !!!

sana!!!!!!!! 😳

Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#218

hey nikki......awesum update yaar
finally mayank is coming back.......great
thanks to nidhi not u
tmhe main kab se keh rahi thi bt u weren't bringing him back
now i m soo happy
bt wat abt child n of whom?????
i actually didn't get that......plz tell me
if its not mayank's child than why nupur is so chill with it????