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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

Part 6

first of👏 for writing a long part ..................i get to read more yeaaa i'm happy!!!!!!! I can tell😆😆......poor nidhi ppl saying her name wrong its simple nidhi!!!!!! I know thats it😆 to cute nikki.oh oh looks like someone is missing a special someone *coughs coughs* nupur misses mayank...who they kicked out of their life on theri OWN😡😡. no point in regretting now sweetyy.AK and SRK i wish i was there just luv themmm and the poem is lovely hun ur friend is talented she said thanks!⭐️.. though i got to say ur long part is stil tiny I know😆😆😆 anyways grt part thank you!

luved it..

-Sanam-

Part 7

hey hun truly amzing part i luv it thanks! ........so sweet ....u know that u are an amzing writer thank you so much, that's really nice of you to say do u know that.i'm guessing u already know that!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆

grt part do

luved it

I love that hun!

-sanam-

Part 8

Okay the part is realli short but it will do i guess it will do thank you, people get so angry.....aw they flashbakk was super super cute thanks! .my godd how cute they made a promise to each other to be ther and gunjan came she lived up to her promise that is amzinggg........................ Sisterly love😲😲😲 hey who grabbed her ?? i wana knowwwww read the next part!

wow u r great at leaving a cliffhanger thanks!

grt part nikki thanks!

just think it says " short part , but worth it"LOL 😆😆😆

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

Part 9

wow i'm coming close to the end😆.....its okay there r two more parts😆😆..okay so it was kidnapper who grabbed her i thought it was mayu😳😳...hey a girl can dreamm I know, I would've wanted it to be him too😆😆.....wownidhi saved her wow the little girl has guts i must say..................... she does FInally someone is realising their msitakes good .............aww she is gonna suprise them wowhoooo..............good job and i wish mayu is there too.......again a girl can dream you have all the rights to😆😆 grt part nikki luved it hun thanks dear

awww that's so cute

stunning part nikki thanks!

-sanam-

Part 10

wow the two weeks went pretty fast!!!!!! LOL😆😆 loved nupur and sammy part so sweet part and i'm realli happy nups came . atleast doing something rite finally!!!! yup!😆😆. the song was great fit perfectly with the part and kiddo and sammy convo super cute thanks!😳😳....... i wanted mayu too ................hmmphhh..................😲😲😲 she fainted omgshh wait.......is umm....lala..alal.......................a little guest on the way maybe??? yes it is!

amzing part hun thanks!

i can't wait to read moreee

i'm just happy nupur is improving yeah that's a good thing👏👏👏

-sanam-

PArt 11

awwwwwww the last part u have update till now.......... but oh well wow this part is short man.......... I'm sorry wow nups is preganat wowohooooooooo * dancing up and down** I know, I can tell how excited you are😆😆...........and aww nidhi is nupurs daughter lawfully ..................so sweett. nidhi is super protective she went and called mayu how swwet........and yea he is coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........i'm happy now!!// everyone is the scene btw them was nice i realli liked it thanks!

lovely part hun though short but goodd thanks!

she is gonna have a baby .........yeppiee!!!!!!!!!!

-sanam-

Oaky there i'm done commenting .............huhs............@@@ okay nikki i loved reading all the parts . realli like this ff. thank you! Can't wait for u to update now

do update soon

-sanam-

Thank you so much, I have never seen anyone do this much for me, this really means a lot to me. That was really sweet of you to do. It's great to have a friend like you!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 13-

DING DONG!

Nupur: Ab yeh kaun ho sakta hai?

I went to the door, and see someone similar

Nupur: Ma…ma… MAYANK!

Mayank: I'm sorry Nupur

I was way too shocked to even talk because I saw Mayank. What is he doing here?

Then Nidhi came walking down the stairs and saw Mayank.

Nidhi: Nupur kaha… Mayank?

Mayank: Hi Nidhi

Nidhi: Ab tum aa gaye

Mayank: Sorry gudiya! Flight nahi milthi thi.

Nidhi: Excuses, excuses

What the heck is happening here? I knew Mayank knew Nidhi the day he was going to go to America but why is he here and how does he know Nidhi so well?

Nupur: Nidhi, aap Mayank ko itna acha kyun jaanti hoon

Nidhi: Actually Nupur, voh mein Mayank ko bataya ki aap maa bene wali ho.

Mayank: Haan Nupur, and I'm very sorry about what happened. I should have never left you.

I hugged him and tears started falling down.

Mayank: Ab toh mein papa bane wala hoon!

Nidhi: Ab mujhe ek chota sa behen ke bhaiya honga

Nupur: Haan!

Mayank: Toh Nupur…

Nupur: Kya?

He goes down to his knees and takes hold of my hands

Mayank: Nupur will you marry me?

Nupur: Mein toh tumhari toh hoon phele se!

He stands up and hugs me.

Nidhi: Oh god, phir se!

He lets go of me and we both smile at Nidhi's childness.

Nidhi: Nupur medicine!

Nupur: Dava? Dava toh mujhe nahi leni hai

Nidhi: Come on Nupur!

Mayank: Nidhi, Nupur toh doctor se dar thi hai aur medicine se dar thi hai

My mouth went a little open and punched Mayank playfully on the arm.

Mayank: Nupur…

Nupur: Kya?

Mayank: Dava!

Nupur: Fine!

I took the sour medicine. Ugh! It tasted so gross. Felt like I was going to puke.

It was 11 p.m. and we were all watching a movie because it was Saturday night. I didn't realize when I fell asleep on Mayank's shoulder.

(This little part when Nupur was asleep)

Nidhi: Mayank!

Nidhi points at Nupur.

Mayank: Nupur ko sone do. Bahot pyaari si lakthi hai

Nidhi: Of course you would say that afterall she is your wife.

Mayank: Leken aap Nupur se kum nahi haan.

Nidhi: Thanks Mayank oops, I mean papa.

Mayank: Ab so jao.

Nidhi: Tikh hai. Good night!

Mayank: Good night.

Mayank carries Nupur in his arms up the stairs

When I woke up I saw Mayank right by me. I brushed his hair.

M: Nupur

I was surprised he was awake.

N: Mayank, you're awake?

M: Hmmm… leken tum itni subah mein?

N: Ab mein kya karo? Shooting ka times aisa hua

M: Vaise, Filmfare Awards nahi aana?

N: Haan, but it's going to be in a little while . Right now, no films

M: Kyun?

N: Because I want to spend time with you!

I hug Mayank.

2 months later…

I go to the doctors with Mayank today to find out if our child will be a boy or a girl.

The doctor is checking.

N: Doctor, kya lardka honga ya lardki?

D: Dono!

M: Matlab

D: You're having twins, one will be a girl and one will be a boy

N: Sach mein!

D: Haan. Congratulations!

M: Thank you doctor

D: Ab aap mere saath chalo, thode medicine dena hai

I had my phone with me so I immediately called Gunjan, who came back home last week from her honeymoon.

G: Hello?

N: Gunjan!

G: Hi di!

N: Mere paas khush karabi hai

G: Kya?

N: I'm going to have twins!
G: Sach mein?

N: Haan

G: I'm very happy for you di

N: Thank you, aur tumhara honeymoon kaisa tha?

G: Acha tha

N: Of course, tum toh Switzerland mein thi, maaza toh ayenga

G: Haan

N: Samrat hain?

G: Haan yaha hain

She calls Samrat

S: Hi Nupur

N: Samrat good news!

S: Kya?

N: I'm having twins!

S: Really? Ab mein kaka ho gaya

N: There's still six months left

S: Leken Nidhi…

N: Oh ha!

S: Anyways congratulations

N: Thank you, ab mein chalti hoon. Okay? Bye

S: Bye

Mayank comes back in

M: Ab chale?

N: Haan

It's four in the morning. Strongly I felt the need of strawberry ice cream.

N: Mayank

M: Hmmm

I shake Mayank even more

N: Mayank!

M: Kya Nupur?

N: Mujhe strawberry ice cream gaye

M: Strawberry? But you hate strawberry

N: Mujhe abhi abhi gaye!
Typical mood swings. That's what happens when you're pregnant. And right now I was really mad.

M: Okay, leken kaha jaye?

N: Anywhere! I want ice cream, that too, STRAWBERRY!

M: Fine let's get strawberry

N: No I want dark chocolate

M: Huh? Phele strawberry phir dark chocolate?

N: I DON'T CARE JUST GET ME ICE CREAM!

M: Tikh hai chalo, don't wake up Nidhi, she has school tomorrow

N: Chalo ABHI!
M: Okay

Mayank looked a little scared.

We went to a hotel and got dark chocolate. Little did Mayank know I was acting this

M: Ab khush?

N: Mein toh phele thi

M: Matlab

N: I was acting Mayank. Ab pata chala ki pregnant hone bahot mushkil hain

M: Toh tum yeh keh rehi ho ki tum acting kar rehi thi?

N: Haan, afterall I'm Nupur Sharma

M: Aur hamesha hongi

I smiled.

N: Ab chalo, mujhe neend aa rehi haan

M: Haan chalo.

We go back home and go to sleep.

5 months later…

Nupur: Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nidhi: Maa kya hua?

Nupur: It's kicking!

Nidhi: Kya?

Nidhi felt my stomach

Nidhi: Matlab ab pero hain

Nupur: Yeah, strong feet

Nidhi giggled.

Nupur: Yeh haasi kyun aa rehi hain?

Nidhi: Kuch nahi, bas uhi

Nupur: Nidhi!

Nidhi: Okay! Sorry!

Nupur: Mayank kaha chalegya?

Nidhi: Hospital mein, aur kaha? Leken Nupur, there's only 2 months left, then aap skuh shanti se reh sakti ho

Nupur: Thanks Nidhi, I needed that

Nidhi: Koi baat nahi!

Nupur: Mein takh gayi, mein soti hoon

Nidhi: Tikh hai.

I go to sleep. When I woke up, I was in the car with Mayank right by me driving.

M: Now you wake up!

N: Mayank, hum kaha jaa rehi hai

M: A wonderful place

N: Leken kaha?

M: Wait just for five minutes

N: Okay

Mayank stopped the car.

N: Hum aa gaye?

M: Wear this

He gave me a blindfold

N: But…

M: No buts! Put it on!

N: Okay…

I put it on and we start walking

M: Now take off the blindfold

I take it off and I am amazed. We were at the beach, and there was a table especially for us.

N: Mayank, yeh sab

M: Sirf tumhare liye

N: Mayank!

I hugged him for about 2 minutes.

M: Ab chalo chate hain

We walk to the table and Mayank opens the chair for me, I sat down and he sits down too. This was just like a dream.

N: Toh Mayank, phele tum toh bilkul unromantic te, ab kya ho gaya?

M: Tumhare saath shaadi kiya toh tumhare romantic picture mein hamesha aaisa nahin hota?

N: Haan, oh no, kissi ko hum dono ko dekhya toh?

M: Don't worry Nupur, this is one of those abandoned beaches, not a lot of people come here.

N: Thank you Mayank, leken Mayank…

M: Kya?

N: Yeh idea kaise aaya?

M: Actually, Nidhi aur hum dono soch rehe the…

Flashback-

Mayank is getting ready for work while Nidhi is eating breakfast about to leave for school.

Nidhi: Papa!

Mayank: Kya Nidhi?

Nidhi: Aap hamesha kaam karte ho

Mayank: Toh

Nidhi: I mean spend some time with Mama

Mayank: Toh hum kya karte

Nupur: Hum nahi aap

Mayank: Matlab?

Nidhi: You'll be doing this all by yourself

Mayank: Nidhi! You know I won't be able to do this by myself

Nidhi: Hmmm… chalo sochte hain

Both are thinking about what to do

Nidhi: Idea!

Mayank: Kya?

Nidhi: You that beach that's half an hour away from here, the one that no one goes to?

Mayank: Yeah…

Nidhi: Vaha chalo!

Mayank: Aur kya karenge?

Nidhi: Have a date! Like how you would've done it when you were both dating

Mayank: Wow Nidhi, how'd you learn this?

Nidhi: Picture mein aur kaha?

Mayank: Sach mein Nidhi tum bilkul Nupur ki taraf ho

Nidhi: Jaanti hoon, Nupur ne yehi kaha

Mayank: Ab mujhe jaana hain kaam ki liye

Nidhi: Tikh hai bye papa!

Mayank: Bye Nidhi!

Flashback ends

N: Oh toh yeh sab Nidhi ka idea hain?

M: Ab main kya karo?

N: Leken tum bahot cute aur sweet ho Mayank, bilkul mera

M: DDLG ka Raj right?
N: Haan, leken tum Raj nahi, sirf mera Mayank

M: Leken tum Simran…

N: Kya? Mein Simran nahi hoon! Mayank mein tumko chor doongi nahi!

M: Let me complete my sentence, tum Simrat ki taraf bilkul ho, but you belong to Mayank

N: Awww… Mayu!

M: Nupur, phele maa mujhe ko Mayu bulati thi, ab tum bhi?

N: Hey, I'm your wife, Mayu

M: Nupur…

N: Tikh hain, sorry!

M: Nupur, tum bhi na!

N: Main bhi na kya?

M: Your still the same from the first day we met

N: Pata hai, leken kaha kab aayenga? Vaise yaha toh koi restaurant nahi.

M: Maloom hain, meine phele si kaha laya

N: Okay, toh chalo hum kahte hain

M: Tikh hain

We eat dinner and chat. I looked out at the ocean

N: Mayank,

M: Ha Nupur

N: Look at the ocean

M: What about it?

N: Isn't it beautiful

M: Bilkul tumhare taraf

N: Tum kab se yeh romantic ban gaya?

M: Jab humhare shaadi hui thi tab

N: Phir bhi,

M: Well Nupur, I'm your husband, don't I have a right to be romantic?

N: Hain

M: Chalo hum walk karte hain beach par

We were walking and holding hands. I felt that strength inside me when we were holding hands.

N: Pata hai Mayank, humare baache pero hain

M: Matlab?

N: They kicked

M: Sach mein!

N: Haan!

M: I'm so happy, now there's only two months left

N: Haan, I'm so happy.

We didn't even realize it was getting dark but we were still walking in our own, beautiful world. I realized it was getting late when I saw the stars

N: Mayank dekho!

M: Kaha?

N: Look at the stars!

M: They're always are going to be with us, in bad or good times, just like how I will be with you

N: Aww, Mayank you're too sweet

M: Yeh toh main jaanti hoon

N: Ab chalo late ho raha hain and our home is half an hour away

M: Haan chalte hain

N: You know what Mayank; this is one of the best days of my life

M: Meri bhi

We go back home and Mayank went upstairs to freshen up. When he left, Nidhi comes right by me.

Nidhi: So kaise tha date mama?

Nupur: Bahot acha, afterall it was your idea

Nidhi: Maloom hai

Nupur: Ab 11 baje, aur tumhari school bhi hain kal. Ab so jao

Nidhi: Tikh hai mama.

Nupur: Goodnight!

Nidhi: Goodnight!

Mayank and I soon went to sleep too. This was my third best day ever, my first one was my wedding, second was when Mayank confessed to me that he loved me, and today was my third best day. Everything was going perfect in my life.

Okay guys, this was 6 pages long on word, single spaced, typed. I hope I have made you happy because I made this longer and Mayank and Nupur had a date on the beach. I was planning to end this soon but I'll try adding more parts.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Nikki

I'm the first to comment Yipie 🥳 🥳 🥳
Wonderful update dear👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
I simply loved it
Wow Mayur are going to have twins
The date on the beach was awwsome 😳 😳 😳
cant wait to read the next part
do continue soon
luv
Nidzy
Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Awwhhhhh.. Nikki.. This was so realistic and so sweet.. First of all, Nupz gets shocked on seeing Mayank at the door.. and then the news of twins and then the most romantic date... I can really imagine all these and visualize them... And they were looking so damn HEAVENLY.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy update

sorry for short comment
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey my cute little friend........how are you?
well abt part......it was awesum.... 👏👏👏n a longer one too
finally mayank is back.........i m soo happy
n beach scene was too good.......
loved it............n mayur are going to have twins ....
lovely nikki.........
do update soon
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ress*******

nikki going to sleep will comment in the morning😆

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww Nikki,
it was supeb update.
very very nice.
mayur were so cute.
loved them a lot.
And nidhi- she was sweet, lovely, helpful as usual.
Nidhi is the star of this ff.
and awwww mayur r going to become a parents of twin.
it was really very good news.
loved the beach also.
lovely part.
keep it up
thanx 4 pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update

wow mayur are togather
date on beach fantastic
and nidhi is so sweet

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