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Posted: 15 years ago
*sigh* Phew, thank you guys. I really didn't want to continue, but under extreme blackmail I had done so. I was in double minds whether to continue or not!... Thanks for telling me! Although my friend won't be too happy..... Ah, who cares about her!😉
Love,
Sheena <3
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

*sigh* Phew, thank you guys. I really didn't want to continue, but under extreme blackmail I had done so. I was in double minds whether to continue or not!... Thanks for telling me! Although my friend won't be too happy..... Ah, who cares about her!😉

Love,
Sheena <3

Hey Sheena your comment left on my ff dear.
I know you already read it at editing time but i did make some changes.
Have a look
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi sheena how r u dear 😛yar tu ne tu buri tarha rula dala abhi is dead 😭but that was awsome 👏please continue soon we will wait please update asap ok😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
yar sheena when will u continue ur ff😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jsdoll

yar sheena when will u continue ur ff😭



seeee sheeeena! it's not only mee 😛😛 you have to continueeee!😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes Sheena, we're all AN sadists...
Killing Abhi off is one thing...trust me I've done that many a time in my head when certain depressing sadistic scenes came to me *shudder* I never had the courage to write them as I didn't want to make everyone sad, and anyway it hurts me as well...
But getting him to tell Sid to marry Nikki is an entirely different situation.
You made me so depressed that I can't say anything about it, but the thing is that I loved it. I'm strange...I really am. I say I love the guy and then I say I like the fact that he's been killed but no. Don't get me wrong...I loved the way you wrote it.
I've written that their hearts constrict with pain and they feel so empty so many times in my FF and scenes, but the thing is that I didn't feel it before...when I read it, it sort of sent me into a kind of reverie. I was staring at the screen for quite a while before I managed to digest it and that's when I gathered my senses and continued reading.
And no, please don't continue. Don't kill me. Shucks, even the emoticons don't look sad enough for me to add one here.
I don't want to read about Nikki and Sid. It sounds too weird, and I don't even want to know how weird it would look.
If you wanted to show how Nikki dealt with everything after his demise, that would still be bearable.
My poor Abhi.
But coming at the depressing end of my depressed post, I just wanna say that it was all well written, Sheenu. All said and done, no matter what situations we write and whatever we do with Abhi, he's always alive...in our hearts, hai na? 😳
Uh. FINALLY an emoticon. My post was looking so dull without one. LOL. So here's another one 😆
Write something else, Sheenu. Something sadistic, but don't you dare pair up Nikki and Sid. *threatens*
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone,
I updated part 25 of my FF Just One Breath Away
So sorry for the delay. But thanks for the patience.
Comments, gaalis, jootis, everything is welcome!
Love,
Khushboo.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone!

I am seeing a lot of people are missing AN a lot and would be happy to see them once finally before DMG ends ....
So here is a last shot at it. Send a msg to Amita Devdiga ..... request her to bring our AN back. I have already sent her a mesage with links to our thread in IF and petition link. Maybe she will listen to us.....
I know lot of you people feel that what is the use of seeing them just for a few episodes ..... even I felt the same way when Shale sent out that PM ..... and told her too.
But now as the show is coming to an end .... my heart yearns to see Abhi and Nikki just before the whole thing ends .......
Please forward this msg to all others in your buddy list who u think will make the effort to bring AN back .....


Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
************* Return of ABHI - NIKKI ************

'NIKKI ........'

'Kya baat hai, Abhi? Why are you shouting like this? You know I am not deaf not am I at the other end of the world. I am right here, in the next room. What is the problem?' Nikki came into the room, looking flustered ..... she was wearing an apron, with a ladle in her hand, looking as if she was ready to hit someone.

'Sid called ......', Abhi replied with a distracted look. He was standing, with a concerned look on his face.

'So ....?' Seeing the look on his face, now Nikki was also worried. 'Jaanu, he is your brother .... and he does call you often, doesn't he? Atleast everytime he is trouble and needs your help, which I think is pretty often!' she said with a smile, trying to joke and make Abhi smile. 'What did he have to say? What trouble is he in this time? I am sure you will be able to solve it without any problem, so why should you be worried about that? Anyway, did he say how their honeymoon was?'

'Nikki ..... he said he is divorcing Ridhima' Abhi replied in a very soft voice, his eyes full of sadness and concerned.

'WHAAAAAT .........?' Nikki shouted in a shocked voice, her eyes wide, unable to believe what she just heard, 'Abhi ..... what did you say? Divorce? But how is it possible? They just got married the second time, they are just back from their honeymoon! And divorce? There has to be some mistake .... you would have misunderstood ..... Or wait!' she said now she was standing in front of Abhi, her hands on her hips, looking like a teacher ... ready to take a naughty student to task, 'It must be one of Sid's tricks. Wait till I get my hands on him. I am going to wring his neck for this one!' she said waving the ladle which was in her hand in air threateningly, 'You know his sense of humour .... it is very odd .... he doesn't take anything seriously .... he must be thinking .... chalo Bhai ' Bhabhi did not come for the wedding ....let me take my revenge on them .....and kill them with shock!'

'Nikki .... Nikki ....... ' Abhi was now taking Nikki's face in his hands, looking at how flustered she was hearing this disturbing news, trying to hide behind her blabbering said, 'He was serious! And he was very upset ...... but said he did not want to discuss anything. He wanted us to be the first once to know .... since you are so close to Ridhima .... and just said 'Sorry' and disconnected. He didnot let me say even a word.'

Nikki just sank into the sofa .....shock written all over her face ..... suddenly her eyes filling up with tears .....she said softly,

'Ridhzi ..... Abhi ......what will happen to her? She had been so happy when we last talked to her. She said that it was her decision to go ahead with the wedding with Sid once again .... and she was doing it for the two of them this time .... not for anyone else. And now this ...... she must be completely broken.' Nikki said tears rolling down her cheeks,thinking about what Ridhzi must be going thru right now, how heartbroken she must be.

Abhi did not know what to say .... he was torn between his little brother and Ridhima. He was not sure what the problem was. He had never heard Sid so upset. So if he did not want to divorce her .... and Ridhima also had been happy with the wedding, where was the problem? What was the bloody miss understanding between the two, that they had to divorce each other?

'Abhi .......?'

'Nikki .......?'

They both started to say something at the same time, but then Nikki indicated for Abhi to continue, as she wiped the tears from her face,

'We need to go ..... talk to Sid and Ridhzi ...... and find out what the problem is ..... I am sure something major has happened ...... we cannot do anything sitting so far away' Abhi said to Nikki, still in deep thoughts, contemplating, worry written all over his face ......

'Yes... we have to go immediately. We need to get to the bottom of this ..... I am sure it is something that can be worked out .....' Nikki nodded her head agreeing with Abhi and murmured to herself.

*********************

Hi AN lovers ..... here I am once again ....😊
U guys know how desperate I have been to see AN in the last few episodes of DMG. But not having heard from the CVs 😭 , my frustration is growing ..... and so ..... to relieve some of that frustration .... I thought will pen down something ... I have no idea how this will go or where it will lead to ..... but will continue if u guys feel like reading more about 'AN's return' ....
Or better still you all can also try writing a oneshot .... or a Short Story .... with your own ideas ..... I am sure all the AN fans will love to read about it ......
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Part 2 updated -
Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Annieeeeeeeeeeee.

You're awesome!
I really want them in DMG as well - they're the damn reason I started watching it... *sniffles*

Hopefully they'll return for the last week perhaps? *looks hopeful*

Anyway, beautiful beginning. Write more please. =D

<3

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