NEW MaYuR FF! ~pyaar ke lamhe~ UPD8 Pg41 part7!!!! - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice promo dear

Do continue soon
Plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy ashna
promo was nice
but plzzzzzzzzz update fast



hey srry i had a lot to do sure will update today!!!
thnx
Love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Nice promo Ashna.
loved it .
plz try to update soon


hey fariaa
thnx a ot hun!!
will do!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Nice promo dear

Do continue soon
Plz pm me when u update
luv
Nidzy


hey nidzy!!
thnx !!
i will!!
Love
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys just wanted to say srry I could not update as I had tests again all theseweeks!!!!!!!! I am so srry!!!!! So I made this part extra long for u hope u love it!!!!!!!!!!

Part 4 life takes a turn!!

Sajan could feel this and so could Mayur that this is the start of something new for Mayur. This will turn to be something bigger and deeper than anyone could imagine and the beginning just happened. This was going to lead to something more they all knew. 😉

S(a little impatient)- jalti bata kya change hai plan mein Mayank!!! (Looking at the time) time to dekh!!!!!! Itni derr ho gayi!!!!! Theen (3) baj gaye hai!!!!!!!!!!!!! Humare pas sirf theen (3) aur ghante hai shadi thak jo chein (6) bajaye ho gi!!!!!!! Chal Mayank bata na!!!!! abhi itni tyaari karni hai ( he keeps rambling on)😡

Meanwhile M (thinking) - kya mein jo kar raha hu wo sahi hai????!!!!! Kya mujhe asse Nupur ko wo uss Ranvijay ke hawale kar dena chayien????? Kya iss plan se mein khabhi bhi kush rein payounga????? Mujhe nahi pata, pata hai to bas yeh: ki mein Nupur ko Kush dekh na chata hu. Uske chayerien par jo smile hai usse wahi par rakhna chata hu!!!! Aur isse shayad Nupur kush hogyi kyunki wo uss se pyaar karti hai!! Aur pyaar lene ke liye nahi dene ke liye hai. Pyaar mein sacrifice karna hota hai - HOLD IT MAYANK TU PAGAL HO GAYA HAI KYA ?????!!! TU PYAAR KI BATIEYEN (TALKS) KAR RAHA HAI???!!! TU THE MAYANK SHARMA AUR PYAAR????!!!! U R LOSING IT DUDE!!!! TU PAGAL HO RAHA HAI!!! TUMHE DOCTOR KI ZARORAT HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Par mein uss se pyaar karta hu!!!!!!!!! NAHIEN!!!!!!! TUM THE MAYANK SHARMA HO JISSE KABHI BHI PYAAR NAHI KARNA CHAYIEN!!!!! MAYANK TU USSKA REASON JANTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIRSE YAAD NAHIN DELANA CHAYIEN PAR WO RAAT KE BADH TU PYAAR NAHIEN KAR SAKTA!!!!!!!!! Shayaad mujhe Nupur ki zindagi mujhse jodh kar kharab nahin kar ni chaye. Isle mein usse jane-😡

S (seeing that Mayank is lost and probably hasn't heard a word he said he gets more annoyed) - MAYANK!!!!! HELLO?????😡

M( snapping out of his thoughts and looking at Samrat with a confused look)kya hua??? Tum kuch ke rahe thei??? 😆

S( sighing and deciding itz no use) - nahin. Ab chale??!😆

M- haan chalo😕

They both get in the car and drive off to find RV.

INSIDE

Gunjan was standing there watching Nupur talking about Mayank and she was smiling. Gunjan was glad that even if for a few moments atleast Nupur had forgotten about that idiotic Ranvijay!! Ugh every time she thought of him she would shudder! 😡

N(grinning)- Gunjan di aap Mayank ko kya palay se janti hai??😲😲

G( teasingly) - haan wo mera second boss hai and kyunki hum sab roz milte hai to hum bohut ache dost hai. Kyu tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?? 😆

N( sarcastically)- yea right mujhe aap se kab jalan hone lag gayi??? By god di!!!!!! Aap bhi na!!!! ( she turns her heaed and ends up looking at the time and gasps in tention) di!!! Time to dekho char (4) bajne wale hai!!! Jaldi tyaari karo aur khod tyaar ho!!! By god di !!!! dulan mein hu ya aap??? Aapko time dekhna chayien tha aur ulta mein dekh rahi hu!!! Aur aap ke mou par tape hai kya???? Khuch bhol kyun nahin rahi ho????😡

S ( smiling and rolling her eyes )- Nupur, jab tum bhol ti ho to kisse aur ko bholne ki majal???? ( giggling) aab itna uchlu mat tyaari ho chuki hai, sirf mujhe tyaar hona hai mein ja rahi hu.😆😆

Still giggling Gunjan walks out of there and after a while she is coming down stairs wearing a light blue anarkali style suit with lots of silver embroidery on the kurta. Her hair are let loose and curled at the bottom. She is also wering light makeup to match her suit. Nupur watches her come down with a smile on her face.😳

N( teasingly) wow di!!! Lagta aaj Samrat jij ko to paaka heart attack hone wala hai!!😆😆😆

G( suddenly shocked and tensed) kyu????😲😲

N( laughing at her older sister's innocence) arre di isliye kyunki itni khobsurat ladkhi dekhi nahin hogi !!!!!😆😆😆

G( blushing and playfully smacking her younger sister on the arm) - tu bhi na Nupur Pagal hai!! 😳😳😳

They both play around with each other waiting for everything to happen. One of them wanting to start a new life with RV and the other hoping that RV doesn't show up at all.😳😡

IN SAMRAT'S CAR

Samrat is driving and Mayank is sitting in the next seat. Both of them are quiet and nervous. Both of them hoping that it will all work out and RV will agree. Though Mayank's heart was also hoping he would say no but Mayank didn't listen to his heart and let his brain do the controlling.😕

After a while they reach the place where they think RV can be according to Samrat's knowledge. They walk in the little villa which belonged to his dad where RV comes when he is upset, confused, or simply missing his dad. Mayank knocks the beautiful brass handle against the beautiful wood door that has a chestnut polish.

One knock

Two knocks

Three knocks

Suddenly the door opens and there stands RV. He sees Mayank and Samrat and his smile that he put on turns into a smirk and he rolls his eyes.😕😡

RV(sarcastically)- ao ao aap dono ka hi intazar ho raha tha. Andar ao. Bolye BHAI aur CUZINkya chayia tha aap ko?

Mayank couldn't believe that after what he did to Nupur that this disgusting guy still has the guts to not only smile and talk normal but to actually look them in the eye as if nothing happened.😡😡😡

M(angry)- disgusting!! Mujhe vishwas bhi nahi hota hai ki tum jasa insahan bhi pedha (born) ho sakta hai. Tum he to narak mein saran chayie hai!!😡

RV(laughing)- thank you for the compliment. Mein bataun ki mein narak mein kyu nahin hu? (he advances toward Mayank until they are at eye level. Both of them intimidate neither of them stopping glaring, neither of them wanting to back down. Both of them determined to win.) Chalo batata hu. Wo actually bat kya hain a Mayank mein itna burahu ki narak bhi mujhse darta hai aur mujhe torture karne se katrata hai kyunki mein hu hi assa!😆

M( now fuming)- Tum!!! Tumhe to mein-😡😡

S(cutting him off and holding him off)- kya karha hai dude!! Pagal mat ban!! Aur tu Ranvijay kya bhakwas kar raha hai. ( he leaves M and goes to RV and holds him bythe shoulder) chal ranvijay bachpana chohr aur cha humare saath Nupur thera wait kar rahi hai.

RV( throwing off Samrats hand disgustedly then smirking and rolling his eyes he sighs and walks around Samrat and stands back right in front of him)- bhai bhai bhai. Apko ek bar mein samajh nahin ata kya? Tum bhare to nahin ho raye ho na?😡

M(now bazing with anger)- tamese (respect) se baat karko Ranvijay!!!!! Tumhara bhara bhai hai samjhe!!!!!!😡😡

RV( now angry and annoyed at the same time)- to?? Mein kya karo?? Waise mane to nahin bola ta ki mein iska bhai bana hai.😆

S(now angry)- tum dono bhand karo ye bhakwas or tum Ranvijay boo tum arre raho na.😡😡

RV shakes his head no which angers Mayank more

M- tumhe pata hai tum ek both achye larki zindagi kharab karne wale ho!! Tumhe sharm nahin ati????!!!!😡😡

RV- no (sarcastically) oh srry should i? ( he smirks)😊😲

M- theke hai to mat ao!! Nupur ko tum se zyada acha laedka mil sakta hai!!!😡😡

RV snorts and thinks ya right!😆

S ( now worried and upset) - plz mere bhai pz Nupur ke sath aisa kyun kar rahe ho?? Wo tum se bohot pyaar karti hai aur tumhare bina wo jee nahin payigye!!😕😕😭

RV(annoyed)- to?? Mein kya karo?? Mujhe paise nahin chayien to mein kyu shaadi karo?? Aur waise bhi uss old fashioned thinking aurut ke sat kon rahe sakta hai?! Yuck not me! Mujh jaise raj kumar ke liye to lardkion ki kami nahin hain to mein USSE kyu chunu?!😡😡😡

M( hearing this it was like a spear was pierced into his heart multiple choice and as if a fire was burning in him. A fire of vengeance anger protection and other feelings he could not understand. He cuched his fist and tried to control himself to not rip his throat out right his second which was what his hea and heart ( for once) were telling him to do. He tried to speak calmly as possible)- Ranvijay tum abhi issi waqt Nupur ko jo kuch bhi bola hai uss ke liye srry kahoi gaye.😡

RV( enjoying the way Mayank is trying to control himself he takes advantage of the situation and argues)- nahin kaho ga kya kar lo gaye??!!!😡😆😉

Mayank couldn't hep it and grabbed RV by his collar and said

M( says this slowly loudly and clearly)- SAY SRRY NOW!!!!😡😡

Samrat was getting annoyed, so he went to stop this cause he had enough! He pushes Mayank back and stands between the two and says

S- bas karo tum dono!!! Chalo yahase Mayank wo nahin ayega humne khoshish ki thi!! 😡

Samrat drags Mayank out and they both angrily and silently get in the car and head back. Both of them scared that what would they say to Nupur and Gunjan?!😕

~ uss ki ankhein

Uss ke hounth (lips)

Har ek wo jo cheez

Jo mujey uski yaad dilati hai

Mujh ko har ek usske saath ka pal satha tha hai

Kya ye pyaar hai?

Kya in lamhon ko hi katein hain pyaar ke lamhe?~

Srry for the delay guys!!! I love u all!!! Hope u ike the mega update!! Plz comment!!

Love

Ashna😳

Edited by tvgirl21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ashna
nice update
love Mayu 😳 hate RV 😡
cant wait to read the next part
do continue soon
thanks for the pm
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey hun
nice part
cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shna nice update dear
thanks 4 updating...........i thought u have forgotten abt it......😆
well it was nice
do cont soon n dont delay this time ..........ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi AShna,
happy 2 c ur update after long time.
loved mayank and sammy.
the tried at their best.
but stupid RV.
I hate him.
but i m happy now mayur will b together.
nice part.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice part

Gun Nups talks were really Shweet
It looked lik Mayu will kill RV

Why the hell always his mind takes over his heart

Anyways whole part was good

Hop Nups dosent breaks down after listening the news

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