NEW MaYuR FF! ~pyaar ke lamhe~ UPD8 Pg41 part7!!!!

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tvgirl21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: kOmAl_luves_KSG
do add the engagement scenes soon! i am the oracle i know all and then i will come to your house to know more of it all~! the all seeing oracle~! lol

lots n lots

of love

komal~!

Yep but i am gonna keep the rest a surprise!!! ill add the scene soon!!!
Love
Ashna😳

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tvgirl21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: verryberry
nice ff

thnx!!
Love
Ashna😳

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

What happened please update soon

please please pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase

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tvgirl21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: tshq2623
gr8 update....loved it...continue soon...

oh thnx sure will srry all testing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳

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tvgirl21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sharma.nat
What happened please update soon
please please pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase

srry yaar i got caught up in tests illl update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! i have a long part coming up!!!!!!!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Hey hun just read all the parts

must say u r very good writer

i just love this FF ,and especially part 3

love at first sight, wow how romantic!

cont super soon

x x

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tvgirl21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
Hey hun just read all the parts
must say u r very good writer

i just love this FF ,and especially part 3

love at first sight, wow how romantic!

cont super soon

x x

thnx a lot!!!!
thnx so much!!!!!
hehe i no!! lolz
sure will!!
Love
Ashna😳

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Part 1A
It was cool and Funny
The way Nups says pehli baar shaadi evn i laughed on it
Cool update
Both sis hav good bonding

Part 1B
It was lil senti
whole update was cool
But loved the way Sam is there for Gun
Hate RV
I thk Mayu will kill RV for sure
Why Nups didnt listened to Sajan yaar she would be safe na at least her heart wuldnt broke

Part 2
It was cool
Pata nahi The Mayank Sharma kaise Phisal gaya
He jus looked at her and it was love at first sight
Nups ki engagement hote hua bhi she was staring at Mayu
Bad very Bad But Good atleast Eye contact toh hua and She will forget RV soon
Hop Nups dosent break down after listening to the news

Part 3
It was awesum
mayu realised it was his Love
Love at first sight wit Mayank Sharma
Actually i felt awkward the way they were going on Talking and Sajan jus Grinning at them
It was cool
Waise plan change kyun
Aur ab tak Nups ko bataya kyun nahi ki RV left her and went away

Are i forgot to tell u one thk

Add me to ur pm list😉

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Nadz_YuNalover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

hey aashna i finally read ur pm lolz im sooo full of pms now im clearing them loved the CS sounds great hun, RV and nupsi RV is so mean and sammy sooo cute... mayu is also awesum! luved all the characters!
first part... nupur is so cute😆😆 pehli baar shaadi, i wonder what went wrong😕😕

cant wait to read more! awesum start with suspense😆😆

Good one👏

Will read the rest now😉

Luv
Nadz

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago

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Nadz_YuNalover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#150

Part 2:

OMG ashna its lovely im guessing her guardian angel will get engaged to her😉 but lolz i loved how mayu fell for her in one look and without looking felt that attraction😳 but doesnt nupsi love RV??😕😕 how can she fall for him😆😆 that was kinda wierd unless she was jst getting engaged but didnt love love him😆😆

Btw this was beyond remarkable:

~bina ehsaas ki iqrar kya

Bina mohabat ke pyaar kya

Uss hi ke saath hai zindagi

Uss ke bina kuch bhi nahi

Saare jo lamhe hai

Humhe saath mein rakthe hai

Inhe kathe hai pyaar ke lamhe~

You are sooo good yaar👏

Luved it

Nadz😳