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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing update.
Loved sajan!
cont soon and thnks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maisha
amazing update dear
oh feel bad for Sam
i hope everything will b fine soon
OH GOSH Mayur and Sam convo was fantastic
i jut loved it
good job maisha
and mayur scene is so cute n sweet
beautiful update.
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsw updt yaar.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was nice and sad as well
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!
loved it!
do cont. soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanks yaar

tumne mere comments per gaur kiya but my sweetipie please update thoda jaldi karna i am waiting for it.
ab mjht khatam ho gaya inhi ff's ka sahara hai 😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...........sam so cute yaar...........................do continue soon..................
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Posted: 14 years ago

part-81

at night..in samrats room..samrat n mayank were talking.... s=yaar.....kaal ma nahi rahunga....garunteese kehsakta hu...chashmish man udass hoga.. m=woh to hoga...tujhe miss jo karegi.. s=hey..iv an idea...kaal...tera birthday ha..aur bhai bhabi kaal do din keliye panchgani jaraheha.. so hum charoi...kaal birthday akeleme mana sakte ha...wats say..gunjan ke gharpe????
m=great idea..ma abhi nupurse kehta hu..
s=nahi..kaal kehdena..aur ha..ye le..
m=birthday gift abhi??????
s=abe idiot.....gift nahi...gunjaan keliye letter.....kaal usse dedenaa..
m=oohhhooo.....love letter
s=wahi samaj lee....usse dedena...dekh kaal subhah usse baat nahi karsakta....kyuki duty pe to...allowed nahi ha..aur ma tab parhai karunga...so...usse ye leter dedena...khush hojayegi,...
m=theek ha....
the next morning...
nupur n gunjan were in the locker room....waiting for mayank...when mayank comes....gunur starts singing...'haapy birthday to u......happy birthday to u...happy birthday dear mayank...happy birthday to u..."
mayank was surprised...nupur came n hugged him....
n=happy birthday my sweet mayu.....
m=mayu???
n=ha....mane theek kia ha..ajse ma tumhe mayu bulaungi..sweet hana???
m=ab....woh..
n=mujhe pata ha...accha...ye lo..tumhara gift...sabse pehle mane gift dia na??
m=nahi...sabse pehle...samrat ne gift dia ha.....
gunjan hearing samrats name...became a bit sad...
n=how sweetttt........accha mera gift to kholo......
mayank opens it...it is the same gift...which nupur gave mayank..the heart shaped locket... in it mayurs pic...
m=ab....nupur...ye???
n=ha.....ye ha....nupur..matlab...I....ye heart ha....LOVE... aur tum...ho..U.. means...nupur loves mayank....sweet na?????
mayank looks at gunjan..who was gigglingg....
m=ab...ye mujhe pehenna parega????
n=haa....kyu??? accha nahi laga????
m=ab....accha ha..par nupur...ma isse nahi pehensakta..par humesha apne pass rakhunga...theek ha????
n=accha...koi baat nahi.....
m=thanksss.....
nupur gives him a peck on his cheeks...
n=happy birthdayyy...
gunjan was smiling seeing them together....n remebers about samrat.....he used to flirt with her.. tease her...disturb her in the duty times....romance in the fireescape..n all....
n=mayank...
m=hmmm..???
points at gunjan...mayank goes to her..
m=kaha kho gayi??
g=kahi nahi.....happy birthday..
m=thankss...aur mera gift????
g=ab...sorry abhi nahi ha...badme dedungi..
m=mazak karraha tha..par tumhare lie..mere pass kuch ha..
g=mere lie???
m=ha.....samrat ne bheja ha..
g=samrat ne??? kya?????
mayank gives her the letter....
m=ye lo...samrat ka....love letter....
gunjan smiles..n blushes..
m=hayyyy......sam hota to ye kehta...issi smile ki mujhe talassh thi..
gunjan blushes...n runs from there with the letter...nupur was also happy...
n=by god....
m=kaal raat royi thina?????
n=ha..tumhe kaise pata???
m=sam ne andaza lagaya tha..ke shayed kaal raat royi thi...
n=samrat bhi na..accha ajka kya programe ha???
m=welll......tum donoke gharme??? wasebhi bhaiya bhabi nahi ha...
n=cooool......gunjan bhi khush hojayegi..
m=to theek ha..usse batadena...
gunjan comes in the firescape...n opens the letter.....
"hey chashmish....kaisi ho..... ab dekho.. rona mat start karna..ma theek hu......im finee...tumhe booht miss karrahahu..... welll....parhai me man laganeki koshish karahu...par lag nahi raha ha..tum kaisi ho??? maan udass mat karna...aj sham hum milenge...ok???? so..be happpy....aur man lagake kaam karo... ok??????? rona maat...warna...warnaa.. ha..warna ma naraz hojaungaa....
ok byee...misss u...lovee u...
lotss of hugss n kissesss for uu....muaaahhhhh
samrat..."
after reeading the letter...gunjan smiless...n hugss the letter...n kisses it.,..
g=miss u toooo......
at night
gunjan was in her room....n nupur was aranging the table...when the bell rang....nupur opened it.. it was mayank...
m=heyyy..
n=hiii....aklee?? samrat kaha ha???
m=woh..ajayega......tumhare liee...white roses..
n=thankss...andaar ao..ma bass khana laga rahithi...
m=tumne banaya??
n=pagal ho kya??? gunjan ne banaya..woh tayyar horahiha..so..mane kaha ma arrange karleti hu.....
m=aur cake???
n=mane banaya ha...vanilla cake...
m=kya vanilla??? but nuipur....mujhe strawberry cake pasand ha..
n=par mujhe vanilla...yummmyyy!!! aur tumhare birthday pe...cake meri pasand ka hogaa.. samjhe...no ifss no butss..
m=ok fineee..theek ha..tumhare birthday tum strawberry katna..ok???
n=ok...
gunjan in her room..she was getting rready...when....she heard a noise..someone was knocking on the window....
g=kaun ha????
she went to the window..n opened it.....
g=aaaaaaaaaahhhh samratt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was none other than..samrat..
g=tum....tum khidkise kyu aye??? darwaja khula ha..
s=par..mera darwaja tumhare khidkise shuru hota ha...ab....hath to do..
g=ha...andaar ao..
he comes in....
g=tum paagal ho kya?????
s=pehle hug to do...
gunjan smiles...n hugss him..samrat also hugss her..
s=miss kia???
g=hhmmmm...
he breaks the hug..n gives her a rose..
g=ek rose??? itne kanjus ho????
s=are nahii....ek din keliye..ek rose...kaal phirse ek..
gunjan smiles..n takes it...
g=tum khirkise kyu aye??????
s=tumhare kamreme aneka mera aur koi rasta ha kya??????
g=aj to darwajese asakte the na....
s=ummm...maan nahi kia...accha bhook lagi ha..
g=chalo...khana tayyar ha..
s=chalo.
they comes down..nupur was surprised.,..
n=samrat...tum kya superman ki tarah asmaan se tapke ho??? kahase aye??
s=gharse..
n=mujhe pata ha...par darwajase to nahi ayee..
s=gunjan ke kamreka khirki ha na!!!
n=tum sudharne wale nahi na????
s=is janam me nahi.....
g=accha mayank..cake kate???
m=chalo chaloo.......ooo.....
nupur brings the cake...n then mayank cuts the cake..while they sing happy birthday..... then mayank feeds first sam..then nupur...n gunjan.....
then all together...four have the dinner,.....after dinner..they were sitting in gunjans room....chatting....
s=aj dinner bohot accha tha...gunjan thankss...tumhare hathome..to....
m=jadu ha..rite???
s=ritee...nupur kya hua?? chup kyu ho?????
n=mujhe icecream khana ha...
g=di...fridge me nahi ha..
n=mayank jake leke ao na...plzzz...
m=mujhe nahi khana ha......
n=nahi khana ha..to kamsekam leke to aoo..plzzz....
m=parr....
s=mayank ja naa....plzzz....
n=mayank..chalo...hum leke ate ha..in love birds ko akela chod dee.....
m=theek ha..chalo...
n=hum icecream leke ate haa...
s=jaldi anaa.......mujhe bhi khanaha.....
mayur leaves...sajan were alonee......it seemed to rain..
g=samrat..barish hone wali ha shayed....
s=chalo..chad pe chalte haa...
g-nahi.....
s=chalo na..plzzzz........
he drags her...to the terrace,,,
mayur
m=nupur..kamsekam car me chalte..ye pedal?????
n=mayank..tum zarabhi romantic nahi ho.....shadike baad..mujhehi sara romance karna paregaa.....
m=koi shak????
suddenly....rain starts.....
m=oh shitt...
mayank tried to run..but nupur holded his hand...n started to dancee......
n=iss suhani weather ka maza to looo.......kitna romantic weather ha....chalo dance karte haa......
m=tum pagal ho?????
n=haaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nupur puts his hand on her waist....n another hand with her hand..n then starts dancingg........mayank twilrs her...n again pulss her....
sajan
sajan comes in the terrace n sees raining heavily....samrat forcely takes gunjan in the rain........
g=samrat thand lagjayigi..
s=chashmish...is barish ka maza lo....kitna accha lagta ha....
g=tum pagal ho...tum bheegte raho...ma jarahihuuu....
gunjan turned to leave..but she felt her dupatta was stuck...she turned n saw samrat holding her dupatta...
g=samrat.....
he pulls her..by the dupatta....n holds her from waist....n takes her hand..on hiss... n starts dancingg....(PEHLI BAAR MOHABBAT)
thode.....bheege bheege se thode nam ha hum.....
kaalse soye woye bhi to kaam ha hu.....(samrat twirls her...n again pulss her close..gunjan hits his back)
thode bheege bheege se thode naam ha hu...
kaalse soye woye bhi to kaam ha hum......(slides his hands from her...)
dil ne kaise harkat ki haa......pehli baar....
mohabaat ki haa......(holds her from waistt)
akhri baar...mohabbat ki haa......(kisses her on back...her shoulder)
pehli baar..mohabbat ki haaa..(slowly turnes herr aroundd..n cupss her facee..)
akhri baar..mohabbat ki haa.......(kisses on on lips...)
mayur
akhee...dubi dubisi...suramyi madhaammm.....(nupur was playing in the rain.... n mayank was looking at her lovinglyy....)
jhile..pani pani ha..bass..tum aur hum.....(nupur throws water drops on his face)
baat baari...hairat ki haa.....(mayank takes her hand...)
pehli baar....mohabbat ki haa......(pulls her closer..n pickss her up...)
akhri baart..mohabbat ki haa......pehli baar mohabat ki ha...(puts her down)
akhri baar..mohabbat ki haa......(kisses her on cheekss...n then bents down to kiss on lipss. nupur pushes him..n starts running..mayank runss.behinddd...)
sajan
gunjan brekas the kiss..n starts blushingg...she takes stepss backkk....but samrat holds her dupatta..n pulls her backkk...he takes off her dupatta from her neckk....n touches her back..gunjan closes her eyess...he turnes her aroundd...gunjan opens her eyes.....samrat comes close to herr....n gunjan feelss..his lipss.on her neckkk...she closes her eyes..n hugss him...samrat holds her from waisttt.....n pullss more closer....he kisses her on neck...then cheekss...eyes...n then lipss....
mayur
mayank finally catches her hand....n pulls her to him....he carresses her eyes with his fingers...nupur closes his eyes with her hand...mayank closes his eyes...n nupur kisses him on cheekss....mayank smiless...n kisses her on cheeks..n forehead....n again they start dancingg...
pehli baar....mohabbat ki haa....(mayank twirls her..n twirls her....)
akhri baar....mohabbat ki haa......
pehli baar...mohabbat ki haa.....(samrat twilrs gunjan...n then picks herr like zdp)
both sajan n mayur dancing in the rain....n then samrat n mayank put...gunjan n nupur down... nupur hugss mayank....both hugss eachother...in the rain..
sajan looking at eachotherr......gunjan feels shy...so she runs insidee...samrat also goes behind herr...
PRECAP: n=dekhiyena jiju...gunjan aj ayi nahi ha..so mane socha ke....uska locket thora theek kar deti hu...
ar=ma help kar deta hu.....
ar=ye sab kya ha??? love cards?? love lettersss??? chashmish?? gunjan ko chashmish kaun bulata ha??? aur ye sare love letterrss??? gunjan..ka...affair chal raha ha????? par kisse????
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Posted: 14 years ago
gunjan ka affair..................mazaa ayega....doesnt amy noe dat sam calls gunj chashmish..................cant w8 4 next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsomeee updt
keep it up...
continuee soonn...

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