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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hey maihsa.hosain(sorry don know ur name.................nice update comt soon .....................n if possible plssss provife the link for ur further updates in the pm.....................thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
very good yaar.............. keep updating and add me to yur pm list..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Maisha it's so sweet. i love mayur part. pls update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

hey!!!

that was sweet part..

aslways mayur were cute,,,,

loved the way san tease armaan..

and AR ohh they are really cute.....

precap ohh ammy is angry again...

thax for pm...all the best for exams....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
nice part and best of luck for exms
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
thank you guys....i will continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
part=9
that night samrat n armaan left from sharma house....
in riddhima's room riddhima is looking at the moon standing at the window n remembering about armaan.gunjan comes.
g=kya soch rahi ho di?
r=ha?? kuch nahi....
g=kuch to ha bolo na di....armaan ke bareme????
riddhima looked at her
g=mujhe paata tha....
r=kya???
g=yehi ke tum armaan ke bareme soch rahi ho...
r=tujhe kaise pata chala???
g=tumhare chehrepar ye khubsuratsi smile aur ye sharam tabhi ati ha jab armaan ki baat hoti ha...
r(smiles)=chup..shetan...
g=sachi bolo na tum armaan ke bareme hi soch rahi thi na????
r=ha.....pata ha ma jabhi bi uske sath hoti hu na mujhe bohot acha lagta hai....
armaan & samrat in their house
s=bhai ab jab mujhse koi baat nahi kehte to mujhe bohot bura lagta hai....
a=kaunsi baat sam???
s=apki ajki date ki baat bhabi ke sath....
a=pehli bat woh date nahi thi aur dusri riddhima ko bhabi maat bol.....
s=ok thik ha par ab mujhe bolo na ke aaj kya hua??? apne unhe baata dia???
gunjan & riddhima
g=ek baat di kya tum armaan se pyaar karti ho???
r=kya?????????????????
g=di jhut maat bolna...mai janti hu tum karti ho par ab nahi manogi..par di pyaar chupaye nahi chupta
r=gunjie...
g=di...abhi tumhe shayed ye ehsas nahi hogaa...par dheere dheere sab samajh mein ajayega...
riddhima is confusedd
g=raat bohot hogayi hai abhi so jao.....gud nite...she leaves the room....
r(to herself)=ab mai tujhe kya batao gunjan??? mujhe khud nahi paata...itna janti hu ke armaan ke lie mere dil mein kuch khass ha.....jo aur kisikelie nahi ha..par kya???
armaan & samrat
s=kya???? apne aj bhi nahi bataya????
a=maine koshish ki thi..par...
s=par kya??? unhone mana kar dia???
a=nahi..mai chahta hu ke riddhima ke muse sunna...ke woh mujhse pyaar karti hai....
s=par bhai...
a=tu chinta maat kar..banegi to riddhima hi teri bhabi..aj nahi to kaal
s=woh to banna hi parega....it divides into 2 parts.,...1 part riddhima confused..n 2nd part armaan smiling...
next day...
locker room...
gunjan arrives late...
s=hi...
g=oh hi...aj bohot late hogayi....
s=brefing mei abhi time hai....
g=accha samrat tumne di ko kahi dekha???
s=kya???
g=ha di ghar nahi ayi hai......
s=chashmish shayed tum bhul rahi ho ke mayank aur nupur ko night duty mili ha...
g=ha par duty to subhah 7 baje tak thi woh to 1 ghante ke lie ghar ane wali thi...
s=shayed late hogaya ho aur wo mayank ke sath rehagye ho...
g=mayank bhi ghar nahi aya????
s=mm nahi....
"sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare.."
s=chale????
g=ha..samrat tum galat ho..woh dono ekdusreko dekh bhi nahi sakte aur ek sath!!! impossible..
s=thik ha chalo dekh lete hai kaha hai....
nurse station..
ar comes...
ar=morning doctors....
r=well doctor nupur aur mayank kaha ha???
a=abhi tak aye nahi?? night duty karke???
s=sir actually woh dono subhah ghar nahi aye...
g=humhe laag woh hospital mein honge par.....
r=par kya????
s=par woh dono yaha bhi nahi ha..pata nahi kaha gaye????
a=ap log jayi aur unhe abhi dhund ke layiye.....
sg=yes sir....they leave....
a=damn!!!!!
r=armaan shant ho jao...
a=kaise riddhima??? itna laparwa koi kaise ho sakta hai????humbhi interns the....par...
r=armaan..please calm down...chalo hum bhi dhunte hai....
sajan
they r looking for mayur
s=apne dr mayank aur nupur ko dekha???
g=apne???
s=kisine bhi nahi...
then the nurse comes...
n=dr nupur aur dr mayank......
ar
a=riddhiam..kaha ha woh dono????
r=armaan...
sg=sir...
a=yes..kaha ha woh dono???
s=store room mein......
a=kya????
they tell the hole story...everyone rush to store room.....
a=ye lock to wakeme hi kharab ha......
s=sir darwaja torn parega...
g=par chabi????
s=usse pehlehi tod dete hai...
mayur....
n=uffo!!! kaun itna awaz karraha hai????? then she remembered everything....
n=oh no mayank!!!!!! mayank utho.....
mayank opened his eyes....
m=kya hua???
n=mayank..hum yaha band hai..humhe yaha se bahar nikalna hai...
he gets up....
m=oh shit!!!! ha..chalo..then they heard sound from outside...
a=ready????
s=all set...both broke the door n came inside.....nupur was standing infront she stepped back n landed in mayank's arms
mayur tune started...both were just staring at each other.....
a=DOCTORS!!!!!!!they broke the hug n standed properly......
r=ap dono mujhe batayenge ke yaha kya hua ha???
n=wo ma'm.....
a=dr nupur ek baat humesha yaad rakhiyega ke doctor banne keliye dhiraj rakhna parta ha....jo apme nahi ha.....
n=nahi sir..woh actually kaal rat....
m=ma'm mane isse rokne ki koshish ki thi..par...
r=apko yaha aneko kisne kaha tha.....
m=wo..ma'm
a=apni galti chupanike koshish mat kijiye dr mayank.....
r=galti ap dono ki ha samjhe?????
a=aur iskeliye ap logoko saza milni chahiye...
mayur r scared....
a=so doctors kya kehte ha aap??? mujhe lagta ha ke aplogoke marks par pehla red mark parna chahiye....
mayru r shocked...riddhima looks at armaan....sajan r scared...
n=nahi sir..please sir..sorry sir..
m=yes sir...please sir...esa mat kijiye.....
r=armaan..please nahi...she holds his handss...
a=riddhima.....inhe itni duty's do ke inhe store room to kya cafe janki bhi fursaat nahi mile......he leaves from there angrily....
r=ap sab ko shayed akkal agayi hogi?????
n=ma'm...
r=enough dr npur......mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna ha......dr samrat apki duty ha children's ward mein..
s=yes ma'm
r=dr gunjan pathlab....
g=rite ma'm...
r=aur app dono....dr nupur ap agle 2 ghante mein mujhe general ward ke sare patients ke blood samples with reports lake dengi...
n=ma'm..
r=1.30 ghante...
n=ma'm please....
r=1 ghante......
n=ok ma'm...
r=gud....aur dr maaynak..ap mujhe agle 1 ghante me general ward 2 ke patients ke urine samples n repots lake denge..ok???
m=yesss ma'm....
r=get 2 work...she leaves from there...
n(to herself)=mein ye kabhi nahi bhlungi....tumhari wajase mujhe aj itni daat mili ha...tumhe esa sabak sikhaungi ke zindagi bhar yaad rakhoge...dr mayank
m(to himself)=sabak to tumhe sikhana hi parega...bina galtiki bhi mujhe itni daat...just wait n watch dr nupur...
n it shows both r looking each other at angrily.....
precap:sajan plays with the kids in the kids room..n samrat falls on gunjan while playing...dr kiti..anjie n rm comes to sasnjeevani.armaan gives dr.kirti's case to sajan...mayank plays some prank with nupur....
guys do comment!!!
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

hey!!!

that was really cool yaar,,,

i mean sam and ammy's talk....like the way you describe the scean,,,like that devide into two part and ammy and ridz..really cool yaar,,

gunji try to make ridz understand her feelings...

and mayur...ohh "bechare to gaye"...ohh ridz sound like a kirti,,good,..

armaan ohh are hero is angry ....well i think ridz will deal with that...

well precap sounds cool myur's prank,,,

update next one.....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
hey nice one.......cont. soon.....thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
really nice update
continue soon
n thanx for the pm

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