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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Very nice and long update......thanks for Pm...continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
it's so nice maisha. superb. but rahul maskan anjali un logo ki keya jaroorat hai. 3 bahi behen hi to acche the. ye log ayenge to yeha per bhi screen space ki problem ho jayegi.😆.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
wow dear loved it
plz continue soon
liked sajan part
i mean loved
plz keep updating dear
and thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Tapoor

it's so nice maisha. superb. but rahul maskan anjali un logo ki keya jaroorat hai. 3 bahi behen hi to acche the. ye log ayenge to yeha per bhi screen space ki problem ho jayegi.😆.

😆 😆 😆
yeh u r right rahul muskaan anjali in sab ki kya zarurat hai lol just joking dear lol 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

hey!!!

that was really nice yaar..

liked it really too good...

sajan.....were so cute,,,

and mayur as always loved their fight....

and AR oye hoye,,,yaar,,,

update next one soon,,,

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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
It was really a great update.Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
guys..rahul muskaan atul anjali..they r not permanantly in my ff..just as supporting..frends of ar..there old dayss...and a little bit of fun..two or three parts....only..but main are sajan mayur kash...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

promo.........

kahi horahihai larai or sirf larai.....
"nupur=tumhari wajase ye hua hai..ab hum baahar kaise nikle???"
"mayank=meri wajase??? sari galti tumhari hai..."
to kahi horahi ha pyaar ki shuruat.....
samrat drops gunjan home..gunjan's dupatta is stuck to his button..she is taking it off n samrat is staring at her...both r very closee.....
in sabmein..kya riddhima bol degi armaan se apne dil ki baat?????
"a=kaho riddhima.......
"r=armaan...main....
guys...wait for my next part........ do comment....
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
part=6 after sometime riddhima broke the hug......armaan changed the topic as he noticed shy was shying very much.. a=uummm aaj sham kya karrahi ho duty ke baad??? r=ab..kuch nahi..kyun??? a=kahi bahar chale???woh actually mujhe ek patient ko dekhne jaana ha..sath chalte ha phir kahi ghumne jayenge.kya kehti ho???? r=cool....to thik ha..duty ke baad milte ha..... a=bye... r=bye.....she leaves then samrat comes.... a=sam tu yaha????duty ke waqt??? s=abhi meri break hai.... a=accha bol kuch kaam tha??? s=kyun abhi mujhe aapse milne ke lie waja ki zarurat ha bhai??? a=are nahi yaar..ma to bass esehi.... s=accha ye batayi...propose kia bhabi ko??? armaan was shocked a=kya??// s=bhaiya ma mayank nahi hu...ma janta hu ke aap dr riddhima se pyaar kate ho.....
nurse station...
n=yaar humhe yaha kyu bulaya hai???? duty ke waqt???
m=immergancy's tumhare time ke hisaab se nahi aata....
n=tumse kisne pucha????
g=guys please abhi shuru maat hojana ok???
riddhima comes....
r=doctors aap logoki duty change hogayi hai.....
n=meri night duty cancel????
r=aap itni lucky nahi ha dr nupur...mayank smiles...
r=dr gunjan aap dr khanna ko surgery mein assist karengi..aur apki duty yaniki general ward ki duty dr nupur sambhalengi.....
n=par ma'm meri duty to opt mein thi...
r=mere khayalse wo khatam ho chuki ha
n=oh yes ma'm...
r=dr mayank ap ki duty dr samrat ke sath ha childrens ward mein..aur phir ap donoki night duty...apki aur dr nupur ki....
m=yes ma'm...
r=resume your duty's...
armaan's cabin
a=tu ye kya bol raha hai sam???
s=bhaiya mujhse jhoot mat boliye...pehle din jab mai yaha tha aur aapki muse riddhima ke barema baate suni tabhi ma samjh gaya tha ke kuch garbar ha...aur uske baad mane aap donoko thori der pehle...dekha hug karte hue....aur kaal....
flashback...
samrat was coming to meet armaan when he saw armaan with riddhima so close....
s=bhai????????????? matlab mai sahi????
a=sirf dost????
r=arr........mmm....aaa..nnnn
flashback ends...
s=aur aj ye dekhneke baad mujhe to pakka yakin hogaya ha aap riddhima se pyaar karte hai aur woh bhi....
a=tu nahi sudhrega na????
s=kabhi nahi..pakad hi lia mane apko...
a=aab kya batau????
s=sach???
a=ha karta hu....bohot pyaar karta hu..usse...
s=to kehte kyun nahi???
a=pata nahi woh mujhe pyaar karti ha ya nahi.....
s=ofcourse karti ha bhaiya...i'm sure ye do saal sirf dosti nahi ha...
a=aaj jan chuka hu....
s=to kab batoge bhabiko????
a=bohot jald...baass tu ab dekhta ja...paar ha ye baat abhi kisi aur se mat kehna..mayank se bhi nahi.ok???
s=ok bhaiya....
canteen...
n=uuff....by god..abhi jake thora sukun mila hai....tu baata surgery kaisi thi???
g=acchi thi.....
n=chal kuch order karte hai....
g=nahi di...meri duty khatam ho chuki hai..
n=tu ghar kaise jayegi????
g=mmm ridzi di ke sath....
n=thik ha.....then mayank comes...
g=hi mayank.....
m=hi gunjan.....he sits
n=-excuse me tumhe kisine beth neko kaha kya???
m=nahi...
n=to tum yaha kyu bethe ho????
m=yaha par kahi likha nahi ha ke mai yaha nahi beth sakta....samrat comes...
s=mayank meri duty khatam ho chuki hai..ma jaraha hu.bye..
m=bye...
g=di mai bhi chalti hu..apna dhayan rakhna aur ha jhagra mat karna..ok???
n=bye gunji...
s=mm chashmish..ghar choddu???
g=mm no thanks..ma riddhima di ke sath gari ma jaungi....
s=ok..bye..kaal milte hai..
g=bye....
ar
r=armaan lagat ha is patient tumhe bohot pasand karta ha...
a=ab kya kare??? ma hu hi itna handsome....u no naturally...
r=ya ya..sab janti hu...
a=nahi tum to janti ho baccho se mera lagav....
r=pata hai...
a=yaad hai ek baar hum lonavlaa gaye the waha saree bacche injection lene se mana karrahe the...
r=aur phir humare dr armaan ne unpaar jadu kia aur wo ek minute mein man gaye aur laga lia injection ha na???
a=ha...par tab hum interns the...aur
r=aur abhi...senior doctorss...
a=waqt kitni jaldi guzaar jaat hai....
r=waqt ke sath sath insaan bhi badal jaat ha...
a=aur uske feelings bhi.....
r=huh!!!! ma to bhul hi gayi....
a=kya hua????
r=are aaj nupur ki night duty ha aur gunjan ko mere sath ghar jaana tha...mai usse bina batay chale ayi..woh pareshan horahi hogi...
a=tum usse cal kardo....
r=ha...
parking..
g=di kaha hai??? cell ringss..hello??
r=gunji???
g=di tum kaha ho?? ma kabse...
r=gunjan mujhe kuch kaam agaya..isiliye ma chali ay..tujhe batana bhul gayi thi....
g=oh..koi baat nahi di...mai ghar chali jaungi.....
r=thik ha bye....
g=bye....
a=hogaya...
r=ha..
a=ab chale???
r=ha..par jaana kaha hai???
a=chalo to sahi....
parking...
g=abhi taxi ya auto kaha milega????
then samrat comes in his bike...
s=hi chashmish...
g=oh hi....
s=abhi tak gayi nahi????
g=aab...wo riddhima di ko kaam agaya isiliye
s=chalo mai chod deta hu...
g=nahi nahi.it's okay..mai khud chali jaungi...
s=zid maat karo...aur mausam bhi kharap lagraha..kisi bhi waqt barish ho sakti ha..so come on....
g=par...
s=agar mujhpe baros ahai to chalo....
g=thik ha....
reception....
n=sister....patient no 23 ke blood samples ke report layi jaldi....
s=doctor thori der mein..woh mujhe store room se kuch medicines lani ha immergancy ha...
n=aacccha ap report layi..ma tabtak medicines leke ati hu..kyuki ward mujhe wahise jaan aha..ok???
s=par docotor suniye.....but before she could say nupur left....
then mayank came...
m=sister..woh 14 number patient ki file...kya baat ha sister????
s=wohh dr nupur...store room...
m=kya hua???
s=woh store room ka darwaja ke lock kharap hai...ek baar lag jaye to khol ta hi nahi.....
m=aur???
s=dr nupur store room mein gayi hai....galtise darwaja....
m=mai dekhta hu.....he wents to the store room...
nupur wents in n leaves the door open....then she heards mayank searching her...
m=nupur!!!!! nupur!!!!!!
n=kya ha??? ese tarzaan ki tarah kyu chillah rahe ho?????? jante nahi ho..ye hospital hai....he comes in
m=chalo yaha se...
n=kya??? par kyun???
m=kyu...ki........
n=dekho..mai yaha dawai lene ayi hu......mujhe lene do....
m=par..meri baat to suno.....
n=kuch nahi sunna ha...chalo jao yaha se...she tries to put him out...and by mistake she closes the doorr...
m=NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n=kya hua......
m=darwaja lag gaya...............
n=to khula bhi ja sakta hai.......she tries too open it......ye khulta kyun nahi?????????????????/
m=mai wahi to batana chahta tha ke lock kharab hai......lag jaye to khulta nahi phir.....
n=KYA???????????????????????????????????????????//
m=ha....ab betho sari raattt yaha.....
n=what??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
precap:
samrat drops gunjan home...mayur r stuck in the store room...ar go to the basket ball court....
guys do comment.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
really nice update yaar
mayur locked in a room
i will have fun reading that
n sajan and kash were simply great

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