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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Very nice update....loved all couples convo...loved how sammy teased armaan.....waiting for next update...continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

hey!!!!

that was really cute one,,,,

sajan were sos weet,,,'

the convo betm sam and army was really cool...

and mayur get stuck in store room god knows kitana ladenge,,,hahaha

and AR ohh wow BB match ,,,cant wait for that match dear update soon....

love

dipu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
part=7 mayur n=kya???????????????????????????// hum yaha phass gaye hai???? ab mai kya karu..sari raat tumhare sath..kabhi nahi..mai saari raat foothpath pe rehlungi par tumhare sath nahi..kabhi nahi... m=mujhe bhi tumhare sath rehneka koi shok nahi hai......
n=chup!!!! bilkul chup...ek to tumhari wajase hum yaha phase hai koi idea sujhneke ilawa tum yaha dialouges marrahe ho???
m=meri wajase??? tumhari wajase!!!
n=kya????
m=ha..mane to tumhe rokneki koshish ki thi..par kya kare jab maharani bolneki shuru karti hai tab koi kuch bhi kahe unko to koi kheyal hi nahi rehta hai na????
n=dekho........mai manti hu ke galti meri hai....
m=ab aya na uth pahar ke niche....
n=par tum yaha kyun aye???
m=kya??
n=tumhe yaha aneko kisne kaha tha ha???
m=mai to yaha tumhe ye batane aya tha ke darwaja..par uske pehlehi tumne...
n=tumhe yaha aneko kisne kaha tha..na tum yaha ate,na mera dimag garam hota,na mai bahar nikalti aur nahi ye saab hota..
m=bhalai ka to koi zamanahi nahi raha.....
n=ye bhalai ki hai tumne...to phir burai kya hai?????
m=dekho nupur...
n=kya dekhu??? tumhe?? dekhoge to tum ab mujhe!!! then she hit on his shoulder...
m=ooucch.......
n=dard hua?? itneme?? sari raat yaha rehneka dard to abhi bhugatna baki ha mr.mayank...
m=tumhe to..he hit her on her cheeks...
n=ha..tumne mujhe chaat maara...how dare you..again she hit him n both started figthing..atlast mayank shouted n holded her both hands n pulled towards him.......
m=NUPUR!!!!!!( the tune played when nupur used to fall on mayank) bboth had a eyelock for two minutess...then again nupur started the conversation....
n=tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe pakad neki.....chodo mujhe...
m=thik ha..he left her n she fell down...
n=ouuucccchhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
m=dard hua??? itneeme?? abhi to puri raat baki ha hai na nupur??????
n=mayank!!!
m=are baapre....both started to running.....there was huge table in between both runned by it's side....
n=tum bhag kaha rahe ho????ruko...
m=nupur..ye hospital hai..ruk jao......dekho...there was an empty boxxx.....nupur picked it up
n=ab ye lo..she throwed it over him.....he quickly sat down......
m=pehle mujhe lagta tha par aab to mujhe yakeen hogaya hai ke tum puri pagal ho....
n=kya kaha???????? then she picked up many boxes n throwed over him..some hit him...
m=tumhe ma nahi chodunga..he started to throw...paper balls fro the bin.....n the fight continued for a long time....
sajan
on road....
s=chashmish..mujhe pakadlo.....
g=nahi koi baat nahi...
s=chashmish..mai hi hu..koi aur nahi..pakad sakti ho.....she smiled at this n put her hand on his shoulder..
s=ye hui na baat
g=samrat ek baat kahu???
s=kaho..
g=tum bike bohot acchese chalate ho......
s=thanks...meri hobbie aur favourite past time hai....
g=dikhta hai....
ar
r=armaan hum bb court mai kyun aye ha aur wo bhi raat ko????
a=kyuki dion mai humhe time nahi milta...
r=ha par yaha kyu?? kahi aur chalte....
a=kyuki yaha jo ha woh kahi aur nahi hai......
r=esa kya ha????
a=humari pehli mulakkat!!!!!
r=are hai.....
a=aur phir humne apne dostoke sath yaha kitni sari bb matches bhi khele the na????
r=ha har bar girls vs boys..ya phir
a=boys vs girls..par jo bhi hum boys hi jittethe...
r=accha esa kisne kaha ????
a=weel...u no hum boys tum girls se zyada accha khel te hai
r=oh really???
a=ofcourse....
r=to thik ha ..chalo aj phir ek baar mai aur tum.....1 o 1...4 basketss....
a=dekhlo...
r=dekhlia....
a=sochlo
r=sochliaa......
a=ok.....
r=aj tumhari sari akkar nikal ti hu dr armaan
a=we'll see..
r=we'll see......
mayur....
m=baas abhi aur nahi......
n=ha..mai bhi thak gayi hu..baki ki larai badme...
m=ok
n=par ab yaaha se niklenge kaise???? tumhare pass phon hai????
m=nahi..locker mein...
n=mera bhi
m=koi baat nahi kaal subhah jab sab ayenge aur humhe nahi payenge tab humhe dhoond hi lenge....
n=ha...par abhi kya kare???
m=yahi sona parega....
n=ok.....
ar
armaan throwed the ball n both started playing....riddhima took the ball...armaan was trying to take the ball but she didn't let him.....n did the first basket!!!!
r=yes!!!!!!!!
a=well done....
r=dekhte jao...
again the basket was on riddhima's hand but unfortunatley armaan took it n did the basket....
a=woh!!!!!
r=ha ha ha ha very funny.....
after that riddhima tried much but armaan did all the three baskets
a=only 1!!!!
r=paata ha..mai hi karungi......
but unfortunately the last basket was also done by armaaannn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cause armaan tricked her by coming too close of her n putting his hand on her waist or whispering in her earss...so riddhima felt shyed n gave the basket!!!
a=yipeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
r=ye nahin ho sakta.......tumne cheating ki hai.....
a=accha?? kya???? he started to come closer of her.......
r=woh......
a=bolo basket....
r=arr....maaan.. bijli chamak rahi hai....
a=m ai kya cheating ki hai riddhima????? he pulled her towards him from her waist...
a=kaho riddhimaa......
r=woh.....suddenly it started raining....a=oh god barissh...chalo..he took her hand both sat on the car n left....
all the time in car riddhima thought" ye kya horaaha hai mujhe???"
sajan...
s=thank god barish bhi tabhi start hui jab tumhara ghar agaya.....
g=thank you samrat...she tried to ran but her dupatta was stuck...turned n saw it was stuck to his button...
s=ek minute..he got off n tried to put iout it...
g=mai kaarti hu..she came very close to take her dupatta as it was raining n couldn't see properly....then gunjan shout!!!!!!
g=aahh!!!!! n she hugged him......
s=kya hua chashmish???
g=woh...bijli...
s=koi baat nahi mai hoo na...she realized that she was hugging him..she let gop off him....
g=sorry....
s=koi baat nahi,......
g=tum andaar chalo....barish rukh jaye to chale jaana......
s=par...
g=koi baat nahi samrat chalo...
s=ok......
precap: mayur spend the night in store room....sajan n ar spend the night in sharma house....
sorry guys for late update..my wexams r going......sorry again n do comment...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
best of luck for the exams
nd it was a awsome blossom update
just loved mayur fighting
ar romancing
and sajan were too good
plzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

hey!!!

that was sweet part..

ohh mayur was really cute yaar,,,

i liked when she said.."ab bas baki ladi kal karenge"...

and sajan were also good,,,,

and AR wow yaar,,,that match was really amazing.....hope armaan make her speak her heart soon,,,

all the best for your exams,,,

lovbe

dipu

lucario thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Very nice update......Pls continue soon......best of luck for exams
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
hey!!!
that was sweet part.......Pls continue soon
IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
wowowowowi really love your all 7 parts plzz contuied soon
Maisha007 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
part=8 ar
a=riddhima...riddhimaa....
r=ha... a=kaha kho gayi???
r=kahi nahi...
a=tumhara ghar agaya..
r=oh.....thankss...par tum ghar kaise jaoge???
a=kyun??
r=armaan itni tez barish horahiha..is mausam mein aur ratko gari chalana safe nahi hai...
a=koi baat nahi mai chala jaunga...
r=nahi..tum andaar chalo barish rukh jaye phir chale jaana
a=par..
.r=par var kuch nahi..
a=ok baba...tumse batome koi nahi jeet sakta....both ran inside...
g=di....kaha reh gayi thi...
r=wooh.barish ho rahi thi...
g=par..she sees armaan behind...
g=sir????
r=gunjan....
a=gunjan mai hospital mein tum logoke lie sir hu par bahar armaaan so..okay???
g=ha...
a=abhi hum andaar aye???
g=oh sorry... they come in n saw samrat
a=sam???????
s=bhai aap????
g=ab...woh samrat ne mujhe ghar chora tha aur tabhi barish hone lagi to....
r=koi baat nahi..wase bhi bahar barish bohot zyaada horahiha...samrat bethoma zara change karke ati hu...armaan....
a=ha ma bethta hu...
g=mai cofee lati hu....riddhima goes to her room....in the way gunjan stops her..
g=di..tumne to kaha tha ke tumhe koi kaam ha phir tum aur armaan ek sath aur tum dono itne bhige hue???
r=gunjan woh....
g=kya hua di????
r=uffo gunjan....ye sab badme bethkar bate karenge ma abhi change karleti hu warna thand lagjayegi..
g=are ha..jao.
r=tu tabtak coffee bana le...
g=thik ha..
r=accha sun....armaan ki coffee mein 2 chamach chini 1 chamach dudh dena thik ha???
g=ok di...
armaan & samrat
s=kya hua bhaiya???
a=aab..kya hua haa???
s=wahi to ma janna chahta hu kya hua????
a=kya hua?? kuch bhi to nahi...
s=bhabi ke sath date kaise thi???
a(smiles)=acchi..aab..mera matlab.kaunsi date..kaisidate ha??/ tu kya bol raha ha sam???
s=bhai ma mayank nahi hu .....janta hu ap bhabi ke sath bahar gaye the na???
a=dekh sam.....
s=agar ab mujhe sab sach nahi bolenge to mai bhabi ko bol dunga ke aapp unse pyaar karte ha...
a=ma tujhse nahi darta
s=accha??? BHAB....
a=abe chup beth mere bhai......batata hu mere baap....
s=ye hui na baat......
a=ek shart pe bataunga...
s=kya???
a=tu kisiko nahi batayega....
s=paaka vaada
a=aur tu usse bhabi nahi bulayega.....
s=kya???????
a=matlab abhi nahi...badme....
s=accha thik ha.....
a=to hua.....
g=coffee......
a=ghar jake....
s=ok.....
g=kya hua????
s=kuch nahi....
r=gunjan lagta hai ke dono bhaiyoko humari company acchi nahi lagti......
s=ya phir donoko sirf un donoki hi company acchi lagti ha......
riddhima blushed at his words..gunjan smiled armaan kicked on his foot...
a=agar tune kuch bhi ulta sidha bola to ghar jake teri kher nahi....
s=oh...sorry...
g=ab...di betho na....ye lo coffee....
a=abb gunjan meri coffee mei..
g=2 chamach chini aur 1 chamach dudh....
a=ha....
s=woh itna to shayed ma bhi nahi janta....tumhe kaise pata???
g=riddhima di ne bataya....armaan looked at riddhima..she was hiding her face...she changed the topic..
r=accha ab tum dono ye batao tum logoka din kaisa ja raha ha???
s=din kaisa jayega..kam karte karte hum khud zindahi nahi rehte....kyun chashmish???
ar=chashmish??????????
g=ab...woh....
s=woh kya ha na ke gunjan chahsme pehentiha to mere lie woh chashmish ha....par sirf mere lie...gunjan smiles....
r=woh...that's sweet....
a=vase tum logoko apne kaam me mazza to atta ha na???
s=ofcourse bhai......
g=ha...jitna thakan lagta ha woh dur bhi ho jaata ha patients ke chehre par muskaan dekke..
r=jab hum tumhara jese the kitna shararat karte the ha na armaan???
a=ha...dr kirti daat nahi sun lete the to kaam mein dhyan hi nahi lagta tha...addaat si hogayi thi...
g=dr kirti???
a=humari senior doctor....
r=sachme mujhe bohot yaad ate hai woh din...
a=mujhe bhi.....4 of them kept gossiping....
mayur...
n=uffo..ye raat to aj jaise kaat hi nahi rahi ha....pata nahi kab yaha se bahar niklungi???mayank...mayank!!!!! no response...
n=ye kaha mar gaya??? mayank.... she stands n goes to the other side n finds mayank sleeping peacefully...
n=wah!!! mai yaha pareshan hu aur ye kitne mazese so raha hai???? by god.... mayank..utho.....
m(in a sleepy voice)=kya hua...sone dona....
n=mayank hum store rooom mein band hai kisi hotel mein nahi ha jo tum so rahe ho...chalo utho..
m=nupur please sone dona..aur khudbhi so jao...kaal subhah sochenge kya karna hai....
n=tum ese nahi manoge..looks around n sees a glass of water...
n=ab dekho..she takes the glass n throws the water on him....
m=aaa!!!!!!!!!!!!! he immediatly gets up.....
m=tum pagal ho kya?????
n=ha hu aur tumhare sath reh kar shayed mar bhi jaungi.....throws another glass of water.....
m=tum to...he holds her both hands...
n=mayank kya karrahe ho...chodo mujhe....
m=tumhe khulla chona matlab marjaana ha..samjhi....
n=mayank..leave me.....she tries to push him...n mayank falls with nupur over him....
nupur's hair falls on him...both have a eyelock... then it divides in three parts
one part sajan r sitting n smiling...ar in the middle looking at each other n last mayur r on the ground...looking at each other...
precap: a=kaha ha dr mayank aur nupur????
sg=sir humhe nahi paata.....
in the store room....
r=aap dono yaha kaise aye?????
n=woh ma'm galtise
a=lagta ha aplog apne galtise kuch nahi sikhe!!!!!! lagta ha apdonoke marks par pehla red mark parna chahiye.....mayur r shocked......
guys i'm sorry for short update....my exams r going on so i'm a little busy..but i'll continue soon..till then enjoy n do comment....
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
wow yaar
nice part
sajan and kash just roxx
mayur were really gud
thanx for the pm
n continue soon

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