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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice Update.Please write next part soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

hey!!!

that was nice one...

cute AR momets....

and like sanjan first meet...

and them mayur....wow..

update next one soon and plz pm me...

love

dipu

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi.I just loved all the 3 parts of your ff.Please update next part soon.And pls add me to your pm list.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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next part....
.part=4
mayank n nupur both r shocked to see each other...
s=nupur ye mera bhai ha....mayank...
n=ye tumhara bhai ha samrat????
s=ha kyun???
n=iske sath to tumhara koi mel nahi ha......shakal se to gunda lagat hai....
g=tum isse janti ho di???
n=bohot acche se ....ek numbar ka battamiz ha....
m=hello...ek to galat jaaga car park karti ho upar se attitude???
n=attitude??? ek to galti tumne ki ha aur sorry mai kahu???gunjan ye ek numbar ka shetan ha mai bol rahi hu ha...
s=bhai ye sab kya hai????
m=sam ye ladki mujhe parking lod mein mili thi ek to gari galat jaga park ki thi aur uparse....
n=hello maine pehle waha park kia tha tum badme aye the....aur waha par tumhara naam nahi likha tha ke ma waha park nahi kar paungi....
g=di chodo na........jane dona hogaya so hogaya...
s=ha bhai....abhi aj kaam pe pehla din hai...gussa nahi ok????
then armaan n riddhima comes...
a=gud morning doctors..ma hu dr.armaan malnhotra....aap logoka senior doctor aur supervisor..
r=aur mai hu dr.riddhima sharma..mai bhi aap logoko dr.armaan ke absense mein supervise karungi....n welcome to sanjeevani...
a=aap log bohot lucky hai kyuki sanjeevani mein internship karneka moka har kisiko nahi milta ha...ye baat ap sab jante ha...
r=isiliye yaha rehnekiliye aplogoko yaha ke rules n regulations acche se follow karne honge...
a=kyuki ap sab ka ye 1st year ha isiliye apko 3 chance milenge apki galti sudharne kelie...2nd year 2 chance...aur agar apke chances ke khatam hone ke baad koi galti hui to apke marks pe parega RED MARK..
r=aap logoke kaam pe hum apko points denge aur ussi points pe har mahine intern of the month chuna jayega...aur inhi marks pe red mark bhi par sakte ha so be careful...
a=ek baat meri dhyan se sun lijiye...sanjeevani mein har galtii ke lie chance milta ha lekin patients ko agar koi bhi problem ho to uske lie ek hi saaza hai.....YAHA SE BAHAR....
all of them were scared...
a=sanjeevani mein ajtak kisibhi patient ko nirasha nahi mila ha aur nahi milna chahiye....kan kholke sun lijiye....
r=aap logoke duty hours har din subhah 9 baje mai ap logoko yehi bata dungi....aur mujhe duty hours mein koi bhi intern bina labcoat ke nahi dekhni chahiye kahibhi..duty ke waqt sirf duty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pager humesha apke sath hona chahiye aur kan khulle rehne chahiye...
a=pager bajneke thik 2 minute ke anader imergency spot me hona hoga....samajhgaye aap log???
r=yaha par sanjeevaniki puri map ha..so agar aap rasta bhuil jaye to yaha se dekh lejiyga.........
a=waha aap logoke labcoats id card stethos n pagers pare ha le lijiye.....
all of them get them quickly......
a=abhi aap log dr riddhima ke sath jayiye..woh aplogoko sanjeevani dikha dengi.....
n=par di abhi....
r=(in anger look) dr nupur...dr riddhima n ma'm to you all....
a=n sir to you all.....or dr armaan....choice is yourss.....ek aur baat mujhe duty hours par kisibhi intern ke pass cell phone nahi dekhne chahiye...aapke lockers pe hone chahiye....sp all the best doctorss....
all=thank you sir....
r=follow me.....riddhima at first takes them to the general ward
r=ye hai general ward 1....yaha pe total 25 beds hai....aur uske pass mein ha general ward 2..waha 20 beds hai.....yaha par patients ko discharge karnese pehle....regular chekup....ki liye rakkha jaat ha...
n=chi..kya colour ha walls ka..ye sure di ne nahi kia.....
g=di...chodo na..itna bhi kharap nahi ha....
n=tujhe kaunsa kharap lagata hai..tu chup kar....
r=dr nupur!!!!!!
n=mmm...yes...dr..riddhima...
r=jab mai baat karti hu tab ksii aur ko bolneka permission nahi ha....
n=sorry ma'm
r=agese dhyan rakhiyega....abhi hum i.c.u mein chalenge....
i.c.u
r=sister inki dawai ka dose baar dijiye..thank you....yaha par imergency patients ko rakha jat ha..yaha par atleast har din ek doctor hota hai....agar apke pager pe imergency ho to sabse pehle yaha ayiyega....aur ayah par pin drop silence hona chahiyega....
s=ma'm c.c.u???
r=dr smarat c.c.u pe abhi log allowed nahi ha...waha par critical aur bohot imergancys hai..waha par senior doctors ke sath apki duty hongi....
s=ji ma'm.
now o.t
r=yaha par senior docotors ko assist karneka sapna har kisika hota hai...specially dr armaan ko...samrat noticed a smile on riddhima's face as she sated armaan
r=aur khud bhi yaha operation karna....to agar apsabaka bhi yehi sapna to mehnaat kijiye.....abhi ap locker room jayiye aur apne important saman lockers mein rakh lijiye....phir hospital dek lijiye...kalse aap logoki duty start hogi...mai chalti hu..she turnes again...
r=n interns ek aur baat...kabhibhi galtise bhi dr armaan ke samne patients ko leke koi galti aur timing mein late mat hoyiyega....goodbye!!
all of them went to the locker room....
g=locker room to accha ha hana di???
n=ha...mera locker wo raha!!!! mayur's locker was on the same side but up down n sajan's locker was on the same side..left right...
s=mm..sorry..please..
g=thanks....
n=tumhara locker yaha hai??? yaha bhi mera picha???????/
m=hello miss jhansi ki rani..
n=kya?????????
m=thik ha banded queen chalega?????
n=tum to...tumse baat hi nahi karna...
m=mane kab kaha mujhe karni ha?????
n=ufffff!!!!!!
s=ye phir shuru hogaye.....
g=mmm...hi i'm gunjan..she raised her hand....
s=samrat...both shaked their handss.....n the other side mayur were looking each other in anger....
riddhima's cabin...
"knock"
r=come in....
a=hi....
r=armaan tum..kuch kaam tha????
a=kyun kya main tumse sirf kamse hi mil sakta hu ese nahi????
r=are nahi nahi...
a=woh free tha too socha.....
r=sure...ma bhi bass interns ke file dek rahi thi..betho na....
a=ha..so kaisa lagraha ha??? senior doctor aur supervisoer banke???/
r=mmm thorasa nervous....lekin accha bhi...
a=apne din yaad agaye......
r=ha....lekin tumhe khudko sambhal na hoga...
a=mujhe kyun????
r=kyuki dr armaan apko jab gussa aata ha apko kuch aur sujta hi nahi ha.....shuru ho jate ha...
a=par....
r=armaan..interns humse sikhenge....agar tum itna gussa karoge to wo yehi sikhenge....aur ma janti hu tum ye nahi chahte......
a=paat hai..tumho na..mujhe tum sambhal lena....
r=accha??? kab tak???
a=sariu zindagi.....she felt shy...armaan holded her hand...
tumhineto kaha tha ke tum sabsamay mere sath rahogi????
r=ab.....haa.....wo.....ma abhi ati hu.....she got up from chair but he again hold her hand.....came near n whispered in her ears...
a=tumne to kaha tha ke tum free ho?????
r=haaa....wo..sister ko test karne dia tha...report leke aati ho....she ran away from there...
a=(himself)ab to mujhe lagta ha ke riddhima bhi mujhse pyaar karti ha..aur ye sach ha ya nahi..main pata karke hi rahunga......
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
in the evening......
sharma house...
n=ma to thak hi gayi..mera skin dekh kitna dull ho chukaha......
g=di!!!!!!!
m=kya hua????
n=mom..dekho na..ekhi din me mere chehreki ye halaat......
m=lekin iske wajase tu jo teri mom ka sapna pura karegi wo????
n=isiliye to mom mujhe dukh ha afsos nahi.....
m=mujhe pata hai....all of them sit down....
m=gunji tu bata....kaisa laga????
g=bohot accha mama.....waha sab bohot acche ha....
m=kisise dosti hui????
g=ha mama.....mayank aur samrat.....
n=mayank!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tu pagal ha kya??? us akru..saru....battamiz se tune dosi ki....
m=kyu????
n=mama aap nahi janti wo bohot hi....
m=samajh gayi uske sath tera jhagra hua isiliye wo saru akru hogaya hana????
n=mama!!!!!!!
m=aur samrat??????
n=mmm.....woh bohot accha ha...sharif hai..helpful ha..attitude nahi ha...shant ha...dilka bhi accha aur saccha ha aur sabse bari baat dikhne me bohot hi accha ha....
m=accha??? tu kya kehti ha gunjan???
g=ha...mama....di sahi kehrahi ha....
n=dekha....riddhima comess.....
r=hi!!!!!
g&n=hi di.......
r=hi mama...kya baat ho rahi thi????
m=baas ajke pure dinki history......
g=hum mama ko humare kaam ka pehla din kaisa tha baat rahe the.....
m=beta mujhe 1 hafte ke lie malaysia jaana ha...
r=kyu mama????
r=woh clients deal waha final karna chahte ha jo humare company ke lie bohot zaruri ha....
g=mama apna kahyal rakhana........
n=aur ha mama...mere hero ko dhundna...
r=nupur......mama aap akele sambhal payengi na......
m=ofcourse beta....
r=okay.....
malnhotra mansion..
a=mayank!!!!!!
m=ha bhai...
a=sun mujhe kaal hospital jaldi jaana ha..tum aur sam jaldi ajana ok????
m=okay bhai....
a=der ki to.......
m=nahi bhai please....
a=okay....
next day.........
a=gud morningg....he was going to his room when he saw riddhima in his cabin...
a=riddhima!!!!!
r=ha....she turned n her dupatta fell on armaan's face...(asmani started to play)
armaan removed the dupatta gently...
r=oh..sorry....gud morning..
a=gud morning....tum itni subhah yaha????
r=ha woh..aj tumhara 8 baje operation ha interns ka pehla din isiliye......
a=tumhe mere bareme sab yaad rehta ha....
r=kyu nahi??? akhir ma tumse........she stopped...armaan had a loving smile...
i mean tum mere best freind ho........
a=sirf dost??????
r=aaa...h..aa??he came closer n she stopped as table was behind....
a=pakka??? sirf dost????
r=arrr.....maaa...nnn........koi ajayega....
a=itni subhaha tumhare ilawa aur koi yaha nahi ayega...then armaan's pager rang n he let her move....
mm...operation ki tayyaria ho gayi????
r=ha.....
a=ajao....
r=(to herself) ye armaan ko kya hua ha??? wo ese kyu bol raha tha...kahi usse meri feelings paata to nahi chal gayi????
armaan goes to the door n turns. he sees riddhima confused
a=(himself) tumhare dil mein kya ha ye mai janke hi rahunga dr riddhima!!!! n a cute shetani smile...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice and long update.....liked mayur nok zhok......and arman and riddima's convo.....nice one....thanks for Pm...continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!

really nice..long one...liked mayur...and the AR wow..

AR momets were really good,,,,

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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

wow that was a really long update

thanx for that
loved mayur fighting ....they are just too good
and armaan ridhima portion was also reallynice
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part=5
locker room...
gunjan is already there.then samrat comes....
s=hi.... g=oh hi samrat.....gud morning... s=gud morning...so ready kaam ke pehle din ke lie???? g=ha..par thora sa nervous..then samrat noticed about something gunjan... s=hey..tum specs pehenti ho??? g=ha..kyu tum nahi jante??? s=nahi..kaal to nahi dekha tha.... g=kaal nahi pehna..woh specs ke begar mai clear nahi dekhti kal lences pehne the..par unme mein zyaada comfortable nahi hu na isiliye...agar koi khass ocation ho tabhi chashme nahi pehenti.. s=thik to ajse tum mere lie chashmish ho.. g=chashmish???? s=ha...kyuki tum chashme pehenti ho..isiliye.... g=par aj tak kisine mujhe chashmish nahi bulaya... s=isiliye to sirf ma bulaunga..... g=ok.... s=wase..nupur kaha ha??? g=woh di ko subhah uthneki adaat nahi ha..aaj itni jaldi uthi ha par late hogayi..isiliye ma auto se chali ayi aur woh apni car mein ayengi..... s=well phir to aur jaldi aana hoga...kyuki 9 bajneme 10 minute baki ha... g=kya????? nupur... n=oh god..aj ke hi din itna traffic kyu ha????late ho gayi to riddhima di nahi chodengi mujhe..... sajan g=di bhi na...zarur silence karke rakha ha....samrat?? tum kisi phone laga rahe ho??? s=mayank ko..woh bhi same..raat ko derse sotaa ha aur subhah nahi uth pata..isisliye mai apne bike pe aya hu aur woh apne bike pe ayega..par paata nahi kaha ha??? mayank m=shit!!!!!!! iski start bhi abhi band honi thi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn...agar mein late hua ...aur agar bhai ne laptop..NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 chal ja mere baap......he was trying his best to start his bike..n with all his efforts his bike started n other hand nupur's traffic was cleared.. n=yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sanjeevani here i come.... m=bhai mera laptop tayyar rakhna.... sajan s=god!!! mayank.....bhai ko pata laaga to chodenge nahi.... g=bhai???? s=ha..armaan bhaiyaa.... g=you mean dr armaan????? dr armaan tumhare bhai ha????? s=ha..ma aur mayank twins ha....bhaiya hi humari duniya ha..humhe apne jaan se bhi zyaada chahte ha....
g=riddhima di bhi......
s=riddhima?? i mean dr riddhima??? your'e joking rite????
g=nahi...wo humari bari behen ha....aur mama ki beta..
s=ma???
g=ha...mama...hum 3 behono ki duniya......samrat's face became dull n sad....
g=kya hua samrat????
s=maa ka pyaar...paat ha gunjan tum jitni acchi ho uthnihi lucky bhi ho...tumhe maa ka pyaar jo mila..
gunjan understood what was his meaning....
g=samrat..she kept her hand on his shoulder n stood beside him..he looked at her...
s=mane aur mayank ne kabhi bhi mom ko nahi paya....baas dus saal tak dad ne sambhala phir car accident mein unki mot hogayi .....usdin ke baad hum aaj jo ha sirf armaan bhaiya ke waja se....unhone humhe is laayak banaya....paata ha...wo bilul dad ki tarah ha unki haar baat mein dad ha..wo humhe sambhalte hai.humhe khush rakhte ha par khud kabhi nahi batate ke kitne dukhi ha...
g=tum unse bohot pyaar karte ho na????
s=bohot...ma apne bhaiyoke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.....
g=paata ha tum bohot acche ho....tumhare andaar ek saccha dill ha....
s=thanks....
"sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare".......
s=sabhi to nahi ha...sirf hum hai...
g=aaaj ye dono zarur dant khayenge.....
s=chalo....both go to the nurse station...
parking...
nupur's car enters she gets out quickly....
n=aj to di maar hi dalegi.....at the time mayank's bike stops her way.....
m=tum...yaha tumhe koi muesuem dikta ha jo bich sarakh pe khari ho???
n=hello..tum dekhe bike nahi chala sakte??? bhagwanne akhe di hana.....
m=aur tumhe per di hana chalne ke lie????
n=dekho mr saru akhru..mai already late ho chuki hu...tumhari wajase mujhe aur der nahi hona ha...
m=mujhe bhi nahi honi ha..so just excuse...n he left from her side...
n=huh!!! idiot kahika......bilkul bhi tameez nahi ha.....
nurse station...
armaan is firming in anger..riddhima is also angry but a little low...samrat is noticing the anger in armaan..riddhima is praying...
r=(oh god..ye nupur aur mayank kaha ha....late to bohot ho chuke ha..armaan ko please shant rakhna bhagwan..please)
s=(to himself) mayank kaha ho..aj tumhari kher nahi....then mayur came running...
m=sorry...sorry doctor..woh alarm....armaan looks angrily....
m=mera matlam.bike start nahi horahi thi.....
r=aur aap dr nupur????
n=ha..woh ma'm traffic bohot zyada thi...so sorry..ma'm....
a=hogaya???? he throws the file on the floor!!!!!!!!! riddhima gots scared.....
a=aap sabko mane kaal hi sabse pehli baat kaha tha..ke LATE MAAT HONA...lekin aplog..ap dono..mindblowing kaam ke pehle din late....
r=armaann..
a=aap donoko mai kya kahu????? waqt ke bareme bilkul laparwa.....aur ye sanjeevani ka sabse baara rule ha...
mayur=sorry..sir agli barse dhyan rakhenge...
a=dhyan to rakhna hi parega...warna....
r=armaan.....calm down...doctorss....app log agese please khayal rakhiyega warna aap logoke report mein pehla mark hi red hoga......
a=apki ajki duties ha...
r=dr samrat..dr gunjan..general ward....
sajan=yes ma'm.....
r=dr mayank....i.c.u..
m=ok...
r=dr.nupur....opt....
n=ok ma'm....
a=aur ha...ap log aj raat ko night duty karenge subhah 7 baje tak..and again 9 baje report.....
r=armaan lekin.....
a=ye aap logoki punishment ha....
m=but....
a=no ifs..no buts...get going..all leave for duty.....
corrider
n=that's impossible....night duty????
m=exactly..aur woh bhi duty ke lie?????/no way...
s=ab late hue ho to karna paregaa....
m=kya karna parega???? raat ko mane ajtak chatting ke ilawa kuch nahi kia ha....aur..then riddhima comes in their way...
r=doctors..mane apko warn kia tha na ke late maat hona....kyuki uske baad dr armaan ke gusse se apko koi na bacha payega...shukre kijiye ki aj ap log bach gaye....agese khayal rakhiyega...now get to work....
i.c.u
m=sister inka sugar high ha...medicine thora kam dijiyega okay???
s=yes doctor...
m=well..yeh filhaal rest kare..ma bahar se adhe ghante baad ata hu....
general ward....
samrat is cheking an old lady n gunjan an old man...
g=aap bilkul chinta maat kijiye ap jaldi yaha se discharge ho jayenge...sister inki ye dawai ajse nahi deni ha...ok???
s=ok...
g=abhi ap so jayi... she stands n sees the other side samrat..he is talking to the old woman
s=aunty aap biluk chinta mat kijiye...bilkul bhi dard nahi hoga....
a=beta.....tumne kaha to zarur nahi hoga..gunjan is continously atring at her n a smile appeared on her face...
s=hogaya...dard hua????
a=nahi...riddhima was passing from there n saw gunjan smiling......
r=ye gunjan..ese..then she noticed that she was smiling at samrat....
r=pagal....she went from there....
g=(samrat kitna accha ha...sabka kitna khayal rakhta ha.....)
samrat gets up n sees gunjan looking at her....he goes to her...
s=chashmish..ese kya dekh rahi ho??? comes to her sense....
g=kuu...cc..h nahi..bye...she moves from there but turnss..
g=tum bohot acche ho samrat n leaves...
s=(himself) tum bhi gunjan.....
corrider....riddhima is running to armaan's cabin......opens the door....
a=riddhima kya hua?????
r=aa.....rr.....mmaaan....w...ohh.
a=ha kya hua..walks to her....
r=armaan anjie aur dr kirti wapas aaraha he.....
a=WHAT????????????????????????????????????????????????//
r=ha..dr kirti i delivery ha....aur unke sath anjie bhi....
a=woh that's great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
r=aur.....
a=aur kya?????
r=mr n mrs grewal bhi.....
a=mr n mrs...matlab?????
r=are buddhu rahul aur muski!!!!!!
a=kya????? par woh....mr n mrs....
r=ye sab chodo...jab ayenge sab paat chal jayega.....
a=actually purane din..purane dost.....
r=ha.....kitna mazza ayega..hum sab phirse ek sath....
a=ofcourse...n he hugss her......(asmani tune playss...)
riddhima is shocked.....but is happy n hugs him back.....armaan is very happy.....
a(ma janta tha riddhima ke tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho....warna tum mujhe nahi hug kartii....)
r=(kya armaan bhi mujhse pyyaar karta hai????)
samrat sees all this n has a smile....
s=jo maine sochatha wahi ha..bhaiya ap to bare chupa rustaam nikle........
precap..
mayur having fight in night duty....samrat drops gunjan home....ar goes out together...
guys hope u all like it....do commennt.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely yaar
mayur always keeps on fighting
sajan were really adorable and ar were also really gud
continue soon
nd thanx for the pm

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