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Avinash

@lucario

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Short but still a Nice update......continue soon......waiting for next...tc.

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DIPIKA

@dipu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey!!!

that's really nice one...

really liked it.......

plz conti... soon.....and add me in pm list....

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Maisha007

@Maisha007

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

sorry guys..for a short update but i'll update a bigger one n pm u guyss.....do comment....

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

heyy

nice update

n no prob if it was short

do continue soon

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

nice part liked it continue soon

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Maisha007

@Maisha007

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

thanks guys here goes....

part=3

inside...

r=gunjan agese left ja waha nurse station ha udhar nupur ka wait kar thik ha?

g=thik ha di..par di tum kaha ja rhi ho?

r=gunjan..mai yaha doctor hu...mujhe kaam hai tu ja mai badme milti hu ok???

g=ok di riddhima leaves n gunjan goes to nurse station

r=sister apne doctor armaan kahi dekha????

s=ha woh apne cabin mein ha aphiko dhund rahe honge

r=thank you...she heads for armaan's cabin

armaan's cabin

armaan is checking some important files n is very serious.samrat is alaso with him

s=woh bhaiya..apka cabin to bohot acchese decorate kia gaya ha.....

a=thankss...

s=isne kia???

a=riddhma na

s(shocked)=riddhima?? ye riddhima kaun hai bhaiya???

a=woh mere sath docotr hai aur tum logoki senior docotor...

s=aapki dost bhi???

a=ha.....kyun???

s=nahi baass ese hi.....

a=accha sun tu ab nurse station pe jaa....mai thori der baat aata hu.....

s=ok bhaiya...he leaves n riddhima enters.

r=hi doctor armaan malik..

a=ab arahi ho tum??kabse dhund raha hu...

r=sorry..par kyu dhund rahe the??? kuch kaam tha????

a=tum janti ho na riddhima meri daily shedule tumhare paasss hoti ha aur uparse aj naye interns arahe hai....

r=relax armaan sab thik ho jayega...mai hoo na.

a=kabhi kabhi sochta hu ke tum nahi hoti to mera kya hota?/

r=don't worry mai humesha tumhare sath rahungi....armaan looked at her lovingly...

a=sach??? she felt a little shy n asmani bg tune started to play....

r=ab mujhe kaam ha woh naye interns ki file leni ha mai tumhe milti hu......bye...she quickly escaped from there

a=bye....

r=(to herself) mujhe esa kyu lagta ha ke jo mai armaan ke lie feel karti hu woh bhi mere lie karta ha???

a=(to himself)kya riddhima janti hai ke ma uske lie kya mehsus karta hu????

nurse station.....

g=ye nupur di kaha reh gayi?????

mai jake dekke ati hu...but her dupatta was stuck....

g=ye kya hua????oh god..nikalta hi nahi ha....shitt....she was trying her best to take it off...then she pulled it very hard n her leg slipped n crased samrat's chest n both fell down...sajan tune started to play....gunjan was on samrat.her hair was moving on air samrat was stuneed to see her...

g=i'm...i'm really sorry......samrat did'nt realize..

g=i'm sorry...he came into sense

s=oh..sorry..both got up she got her dupatta

s='i'm really sorry....woh ma..

g=nahi i'm sorry woh mujhe dekkhna chaiye the mera dupatta..

s=it's okay koi baat nahi hota hai........

g=thank you....

n=hi gunjan tu yaha hai aur mai kabse tujhe....looks at samrat..hi!!! ma hu nupur.....

s=hi i'm samrat.....new intern...

n=hum bhi..mera matlab ma aur ye meri choti behen gunjan he looks at gunjan

s=hi!!!

g=hello...."samrat" mayank callss

s=bhai app kaha the???

m=wo mai..then nupur n mayank noticed each other.....

both=TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

sorry guys i'm a little busy these days...sorry for short update/...i'll try to write more...do comment...

Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago

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Angle.

@Angle.

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

really amazing. pls update next part soon.

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Niharika

@X..Niha..X

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Great update . Loved the ar part the most . Thanks for the pm .

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

awesome update dear

plz continue soon

love

sana

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Swaminathan

@swamii92

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

really nice update
continue soon
plzzzzzzz pm me wid ur update

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