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Posted: 15 years ago
part=19
next morning...
nurse station
r=nahi nahi..isse waha rakhiye...ha..
armaan comes from behind
a=kya horaha hai???
r=oh..tum kuch nahi bass tayyaria karrahithi..intern of the month jo hai...
a=ha..yaad ha jab hum the tab tum pehli baar intern of the month bani thi...
r=ha..aur uske baad har baar tum hote the...
a=ha..hona hi tha...accha interns agaye???
r=ab takto agaye honge...kyu??
a=kyuki aaj agar late aye to kher nahi...kyuki board members araheha.
r=fikar mat karo..ajayenge...
locker room...
4 of them r gossiping...
n=wase tum logoko pata ha aaj intern of the month announce karne wale ha
m=malum ha...
n=wase iski koi zaruraat nahi thi....
s=kyun???
n=sab jante ha ke is baar intern of the month kaun banne wala ha???
s=accha?? kaun???
n=tum....
s=very funny....
g=kuch funny nahi ha...di sahi bol rahiha...is baar intern of the month tum banoge samrat....
s=chashmish.....
m=oye..tu to chup rahe bilkul..nupur thik hi bol rahi ha....nupur looked at him...
s=gunjan aj suraj kaha se utha ha pashchim se ya phir everest ke upar se??? gunjan smiled...nupur glared at him...
n=kyun???
s=nahi..kyuki aj subhah subhah humare mayank nupur ki tarafdari karrahe hai...
n=samrat...esa kuch nahi ha....
g=accha di...???
n=gunjan....
"sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare.."
m=abb..chalo..chale?? aj late hue to kher nahi...
n=chalo....all of them went ot nurse station....the nurse station was filled with chairs one side was for the senior doctors n one side was for the interns..mayur n sajan sat there n rm,anjali,kirti sat on the other side..then ar came on the stage....
a=good morning.. everyone....aj ab sab jante ha ke sanjeevani ke new interns mese intern of the month chuna gaya ha.sanjeevani mumbai ki sabse famous aur best hospital ha..zahirsi baat ha yaha par doctors bhi sabse best ha aur inhi best doctors mese aj humne aur board ne milke intern of the month choose kia ha....dr ridddhima..riddhima comes to the mike...
r=hello everyone..ajse 2 saal pehle mene aur dr armaan ne bhi ye award aur medel jita tha aur humhe pata ha ke iski khushi kya ha..soo hum yehi chahte ha ke humare interns bhi humarehi tarah bane....ab mein board ke head ko request karungi yaha stage pe aye aur intern of the month announce kare...sir..please..(board head=bh)
bh=aur is baar ke intern of the month ha....there was silence in the room......DR SAMRAT...
everyone started clapping...samrat was very happy n so was all of them...he got up n went to the stage..
bh=congratulations...
s=thank you sir..he shaked hands then received the award n certificate from him..
r=congrats dr samrat...
s=thank you ma'm...then he walked upto armaan..he was feeling to cry...
a=congrats...
s=thanks....sir.....he walked down to his frends n sat down...
r=so everyone....hum umeed karte ha baki sab bhi dr samrat jitni mehnat karenge aur agli baar intern of the month banenge...thank you...everyone stood up n began to congrats samrat
g=so..congratulations
s=thanks chashmish...
n=kyu bola tha na?? congrats yaar.she hugged him
s=thanks yaar..tu sachme jotishi ha..
n=woh tu hu....
m=brother..very hjappy for u..he hugged him
s=thanks brother....
then a ward boy came to them...
w=aap charo ko dr armaan ke cabin me bulaya gaya ha....
m=humhe?? kyu??
g=lagta ha urgent ha...
s=hum ate ha..he took his rewards n went to armaan's cabin....
armaan's cabin
s=sir hum andaar asakte hai??
r=ayiye...
n=ma'm humhe kyu bulaya gaya ha???? armaan came to them n without telling them anything he hugged samrat.everyone was mouth-open.
s=sir...
a=abe sir badme..pehle tera bhai hum ma....samrat hugged him back...
s=bhai....kya hua??? ap ro kyu rahe ha??? armaan left him..
a=ye to khushi ke asu ha...mera bhai?? intern of the month....tujhe nahi paata sam..aj ma kitna khush hu.....
s=bhai...ap fikaar mat kijiye...apka aur mom dad ka sapna hum dono zarur pura karenge...hana mayank??
m=tera to pakka ha par mera ma nahi janta...
s=abe yaar...
a=idhaar aa....he grabed him n 3 of them gave a brotherly hug...
n=bass..ab bohot hogaya they broke the hug...
r=ha..samrat humari treat kaha ha????
s=treat???
r=ha..aur ye ma senior dr banke nahi balki frend ki hasiyaat se bol rahi ho....
s(in a low voice)=bhabi ke haque se kab bologi??? armaan heard that n kicked on his leg....
r=kya kaha???
s=kuch nahi.....
a=treat..thik ha..aj sham humare ghar whats say?????
n=great!!!!!
s=to tay ha..aj sham sab humare ghar ok???
all=ok....
evening...
sharma house...
riddhima's room..she is taking out one by one but can't decide which one 2 wear......
r=uffo..kuc samajh me nahi arahahe...kya pehnu??? sare red dresses armaan dekh chuka ha in mese kaunsa wala pehnu jo usse aj bi accha lagega???
armaan
a=riddhima ko kabhi kuch accha lagta ha aur kabhi kuch aur...ma kya kru????
riddhima
r=oh god..kya karu??? gunjan comes..
g=di ye file....she sees the mes..
g=di ye sab kya ha????
r=kuch maat puch kuch samajh me nahi arahaha ke kya pehnu....
g=di itni sare dresses kuch bhi pehenlo wase bhi tumpeto sabkuch suit karta ha..
r=janti hu..par ma kuch khass pehenna chahti hu..u no kuch special....
g=special?? ek kaam karo tum esa kuch pehno jisse koi khass yaade ho..jo tumne kissi khass mokepe pehna tha???
r=khass moke pe??? HAAA...ha ek esi dress. thanks gunjie...ma abhi taayar hoke ayi...
g=di bhi na....
armaan..
a=ek ghanta ho chuka ha..par kapda ek bhi choose nahi hua....
s=bhai....woh kya haal ha room ka..apto maayank ko bhi piche chod gaye...
a=apni bakwass band kar aur meri maadat kar
s=kya hua??
a=are yaar party mein kya pehnu kuch samajh menahi araha ha...
s=saaf saaf kehiyena bhabi ko impress karneka tarika dhundna ha...
a=ha...
s=ha?? thik ha..to kuch esa ha jisse pehenkar apne bhabike sath kuch accha ya phir romantic aur interesting kia tha??? jo ap donoke lie bilkul new tha???he thinks for a while....
a=ha...hai esa thanks yaar abhi ja mujhe ready hona ha.....
mayank
m=umm...nahi ye suit nahi karega...nupur ko kya acha lagega??/ dude...tu pagal hogaya ha kya??? mayank aur ladki.nevver......kabhi nahi...mayank ke life me ladkioke lie koi jaga nahi ha...sirf n only frends or timepass....wase khudke sath bagbag karnese accha ha apni daily diary mehi apni dilki bate likta hu.....he takes out the diary n writes....it is his daily diary he has wrote everything therre how he met nupur....what is his likes n dislikes everything....
m=mmm ajke lye hogaya....par nupur jaisi ladki aur ma?? noway..tu bhi pagal ha......
nupur
n=mayank ko ye zarur accha lagega....pata nahi kyun ma uske bareme soch rahihu..par kuch to hua ha....
in the end it shows nupur smiling n thinking about mayank n mayank not paying any attention to his mind...
precap:all the 3 girls come 2 the party.....armaan sings a song n he say's I LOVE U 2 RIDDHIMA infront of everyone......
guys....u must be thinking what is the new mayur track.i u don't like it'll be short but it is a new track of mayur love story......do comment...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
lucario thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very good update.....waiting for confession...continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy
it was simply freat update
just loved the ar portion and brothers hug
n waiting for the confession and mayur track to continue
plzzzzzzzz update soon
n thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi maisha
Lovely update.
Loved brothers bonding so much.
Wow so mayur love story coming up.
Hmm just waiting 4 it.
Thanx 4 ur PM
Update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
ehy maisha.awesome update.....cont. son..thnx d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely ff
y r u not pming
anyways i liked ur all parts
loved it
plz continue soon
if u r pming than pm me too
love
sana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear...... eagerly waiting for mayur new track hope it will be more romantic and interesting,,,,,,,,,,,, omg armaan proposing ridzi wow,,,,,,,,,,,, its gret.,,,,
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Posted: 15 years ago
New mayur track? kaunsa track? dekho yaar jo bhi karo pr mayur ko alag maat kar dena. kiyui ki main ye tolarate nehi karpaoongi. awsome update yaar. keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

loved teh epi//

the brothers were too good,,

and eger to know what is so special with AR,,,

plz update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
part=20
in the evening.....
malnhotra mansion.....
s=mayank...kaha ha yaar?? ma tayyar hu.....
samrat is wearing the talent parade coat with black shirt..
m=kyu chilla raha ha??? he came out wearing the new year party dress
s=are yaar sablog atehihonge....
m=koi baat nahi ma tayyar hu.....
s=bhai kaha ha???
a=yaha hu..armaan came down wearing the dress which he had wore when he n riddhima danced salsa for the irst time...(red shirt with black waist coat n overcoat.)
sharma mansion
n=gunjan zara idhar ana.....
g=ayi....gunjan came from her room wearing the talent parade dress...
nupur was wearing te new year dress
n=are wah!!! tu to ajj bohot sundar lagrahhiha...kisikelie khass tayyar hui ha???
g=di!!! tum bhi na..esi koi baat nahi ha....
n=accha???
g=wase ye to mujhe tumse puchna chahiye
n=kyu????
g=ajkal kisi aurko tum bohot zyada impress karne lagi ho aur koi bhi tuhe bohot support karne laga ha.. n=ee...si..koi baat nahi ha aur ridzy di kaha ha??? hum late ho rahe ha na???
g=ha..ma bulati hu....
r=koi zarurat nahi ha.ma tayyar hu...both looked at riddhima n kept looking at her...
malnhotra mansion...
a=yaar armaan..hum to agaye.par ridzy aur baki sab kaha ha????
ar=raste pe hi honge...
s=ab bhai...
ar=excuse me.....kya hua???
s=baat karni ha....
ar=ha bol...
s=bhai aj ma intern of the month bana hu..hua hu na????
ar=ha....
s=ap bohot khush ha....ha na???
ar=ye bhi puchne wali baat ha..ofcourse hu....
s=ap mujhe koi gift denge?? jo ma chahu????
ar=tu bol tujhe kya chahiye???
s=pakka na doge??? badme baatse badlogeto nahi na????
ar=teri koi baat dali ha mane??? promise manunga....
s=thik ha to ma ye gift chahta hu ke aj ap sabke samne RIDDHIMA KO PROPOSE KARE ar=kyaaaaaaaa??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
s=ha..mujhe yehi gift cahiye....ma aj apni hone wali bhabise milna chahta hu
ar=tu pagal ha sam????matlab..aj.....sabke samne....matlab..riddhima..se.I LOVE U??? no way..mujhse nahi hoga
s=bhai apne promise kia tha!!!!
ar=tujhe to!!!! ma thorina janta tha ke ye kehne wala ha tu.....
s=bhai ma aj apse kuch mang raha hu ap mujhe nahi doge???
ar=sam....
s=bas...agar aj ap bhabise nahi bolenge to ma hi unhe keh dunga...aur mujhe koi nahi rok sakta..ap bhi nahi....then samrat leaves from there.....armaan began to think what to do.....
after some time...
3 girls arrived...at first nupur came in....then gunjan n finally...riddhima....(wearing the salsa red dress n hair curled)
n=di aj app itni sundaar lagrahiho...ke koi bhi dekhega na to pagal ho jayega.....
r=nupur....chup chal....
mayank noticed that they have come so he went to them....
m=hi....
n=oh..hi!!!!! mayank looks at her
m=nice.....
n=huh?? sirf nice????
m=ha....
n(in mind)=saru kahika....
m=kuch kaha???
n=nahi.....
g=hi mayank....
m=hi gunjie..looking pretty..
n=gunjie???????
m=ha...n riddhima also looking awesome..superb....
r=thanks mayank....ab chale???
m=ha..they leave n nupur is still there....
n=by god...sabko kya kuch nahi kaha par mujhe...issse mane thikhi samjha...saru aur akru....
inside....
ar=ha..woh...he can't utter anything else as he has seen riddhima..looking for him n now she is also still as she has seen armaan....
r(in mind)=mujhe pata tha armaan ke tumbhi yehi pehnoge...
ar(in mind)=riddhima....tumne bhi yehi dress pehna ha..matlab tumhe yaad ha ke isse humari yaade ha....
r=kase na yaad ho armaan humare lie ek special moment tha......
ar=ha..then samrat comes n brokes the eyelock...
s=bhai...yaad rakhna....n he goes to riddhima....
s=hi bhabi....i mean riddhima!!!!
r=hi.....
g=hi samrat....
s=hii..................his mouth remained open.......
g=kya hua????no response.......
n=samrat mu band karlo warna makkhi ghuss jayegi....
s=abb...sorry...hi chashmish...acchi lagrahi ho..nahi bohot acchi lag rahiho...nahi bohot khubsuraat lag rahi ho...
g=ab...thanks....
n=aur ma????
s=tumto humeshasehi sundaar ho...
n=thanks ma janti hu.....
a=hi ridzy.....
r=hi guys....
mu=ridzy bari acchi lagrahiha.....
r=thanks guys....
ra=riddhima yeh to wahi dress ha na...jo
r=ha wahi ha....
k=riddhima pe bohot acchi lag rahi ha....
armaan was watching her from behind the wall...
s=bhai ese dur se mat dekhiye aj nahi bola to ma hi bol dunga...
ar=par yaar kaise?????
s=thik ha..apka kaam ma thora asaan kar dunga....
ar=matlab???kya karega tu????
s=dekhtejayiye..kya karta hu....
everyone was enjoying the party.....
m=ab tum kuch nahi lerahi???
n=ab..no thanks...
m=wase usdin ddlj dekha???
n=ha...kyu nahi dekhungi....esa kabhi huahi nahi ke srk ki film ho aur ma na dekhu....
m=umm..interesting....
n=tumne dekhi????
m=mere pass time nahi ha.....
n=kyu??? itna kya busy ho jo srk ke film bhi nahi dekh sakte???
m=ma chat karraha tha...my hobby...
n=chat????
m=hhmmm.....ab excuse me...
n=mayank ki to koi bhi adaat mujhse nahi milti.....
ar=ab..guys..attention....aj sam ki khushi me ab sab aye thank you..everyone clapss.....
ar=sam aja....mayank brought a cake n 3 brothers cut it n fed each other...
s=thank you..par ajke din armaan bhai ne mujhe kuch ek zyada accha hi gift dia ha....
ar=abe ye to marwayega....
r=kya???
ar=kuch nahi....
m=accha esa kya ha?? mujhe kyu nahi pata???
s=bhai ne abhi bataya....aur woh gift ha bhai mere lie ek gana gane wale ha
ar=kya???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? everyone clapssss...
ar=sam...
s=ha bhai...he comes to armaan n whispers in his ears....
s=ganeke bahane bol dona...2 in 1 so bhai ready?????
ar=thik ha......
a=woh pehli baar jab hum miley...hatho mein hath..jab humchale..hogaya ye dil diwana...hotha a pyaar kya kisne jaana....
riddhima looked at him....
a=teri akhon me jannat basake chala...
teri zulfo ke chao me chalta chala..tere naino me chan..
tere labs pe khushi...
tujhkoo hi ma mohabbat banake chala......
samrat starts to play the guitar....
a=woh pehli baar.............hum chale....goes near riddhima
hogaya..........kisne jaana....
teri akho me......mohabbat bana ke chala.....
he takes her hand.....
a=woh pehli......hogay shuru ye silsile...
hogaya.....kisne jana....
both started dancing.....there eyes were fixed.....then he turned her....
a=khilti kaliome dhundu bas tere nishan
mana janu ha akhir ye kya karwa
tujhe dekhu to aye lab pe khushi
khuda na kare ho kabhi duriya.......pulls her again...
woh pehli baar...
jab hum........kisne jaana....now samrat asked gunjan to dance..n mayank asked nupur....both sajan mayur n rm started to dance....ar was in middle......
a=hogaya hu ma pagal ab tere lie..
tere bin dil bechara ye kaise jiye
mane khoke ha chan payi tujhme khushi...
tu bani janejana meri zindagi.....
woh pehli baar........kisne jaana....
armaan dances with riddhima salsa.....n all of them were around them...at the end armaan sits on his kness n riddhima is infront of him...
a=I LOVE U RIDDHIMA....
precap: riddhima acceppts his love...both gave each other a hug....
all of them has to go lonavla to sanjeevani medical camp for iilll children....
guys...do comment....n enjoy😊
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago

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