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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy
very nice update
thank goodness after so much of fighting
they are going to become friends
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

finally got the link...

well that was really nice...

AR were amazing..loved them

hope mayank will make for his mistalke soon..and love story jaldi shuru ho jaye..

and sajan...well love is in the air,,,,,

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Posted: 15 years ago
Maisha its superb. next part update soon and pls mujhe thoda jayada mayur scene chahiye.pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=18
nurse station
a=dr samrat aap aj saradin dr kirtike sath rehenge..unki scanning,blood test,x-ray,altasonography sab kuch ap karenge ok??
s=alright sir...
r=dr gunjan apki duty mere sath c.c.u mein ha.wahaki duty ke baad ap dr samrat ko help karengi..
g=ok ma'm...
a=dr nupur aap aur dr anjali general ward sambhalengi....
n=yes sir....
a=n finally dr mayank apki duty opt mein ha...
m=yes sir..then riddhima sees samrat's wound..
r=dr samrat apko ye chot kaise lagi???? armaan also sees it n gets tensed but doesn't react infront of everyone...
s=woh...ma'm actually ma gir gaya tha....
r=girneme itni chot????
g=ma'm woh actually kaal raat..she explains everything....
a=ab thik ha??? chot gehrito nahi ha na????
s=sir ap tension mat kijiye thik ha....
r=ok...get to work....all the interns leave....
then riddhima sees armaan tensed..
r=kya baat ha armaan???
a=riddhima..tumne dekha sam ke hatho me chot..oh my god itni bari chot aur mujhe nahi pata????
r=relax armaan....
a=kya relax??? woh mera bhai ha..uske har dard ka pata mujhe usse pehle hota tha par is baar..oh god!!! i'm so irresponsible....
r=armaan...shant ho jao..tum irresponsible nahi ho...tumhara jaisa bhai is duniya me nahi ha...samrat ne tumhe isiliye nahi bola kyuki woh bhi apne bhai ko pareshan nahi dekh sakta....aur wase bhi woh ek doctor ha apna khayal rakh sakta ha..so don't worry...chalo...duty pe jaana ha..
a=yuh...
general ward....
a=ab..dr nupur injection..
n=yes ma'm....
a=ok...ab next...
n=ma'm..main zaar pani pike auo???
a=sure..2 minutes...
n=ok ma'm...she heads for cafe....
mayank was also going to the cafe n they met at te opposite sides...nupur ignored him n started to go..
m=nupur..please nupur meri baat suno....
n=mayank maine tumse pehlehi kaha ha..mujhe tumhari koi bhi baat sunne me bilkul bhi interest nahi ha...
m=par nupur mujhe apni baat kehneka ek chance to do....she stopped n turned
n=chance??? mayank jo bhi tumne kia iske baad agar ma tumhe koi chance dungi na to wo meri bewakufi hogi...aur wase bhi tumhari wajase mere kaam par bohot se risk ayi ha..ma ab aur nahi laana chahti.....she leaves...
m=nupur tum chahe jo bhi karlo lekin tumhe mujhe maaf to karna hi parega....
samrat
s=ma'm abhi last test blood test...
k=samrat ek din mein itne sare tests/???ma to ekhi din me kamzor par jaungi..
s=kaise??? apko me kamzor parnehi nahi dunga..iisiliyeto ma yaha hu...ap befikaar rahiye..mere hotehue apko kuch nahi hoga....
k=thanks.....
locker room....
n=by god...pure 2 ghante lagadar kaam karneke baad ab jake rest mila ha..uff thank god..she opens her locker n finds a boque of red fowers with a letter
n=are..ye kisne rakha ha??? she takes out them...
n=woh!!!! kitne khubsuraat ha..are ye letter?? she opens n starts reading the letter...
nupur,
ma janta hu ke tumhe bohot bura laga aur tum bohot gussa ho mujhse aur hona bhi chahiye..jo maine tumhare sath kia woh accha nahi tha....phir bhi ma tumse mafi mangta hu...ma janta hu ke tum mujhe maaf nahiu karogi phir bhi apni dill ki tasalli ke liye tumse mafi mang raha hu...kyuki ye bari baat nahi ha ke tumne mujhe maaf kia ya nahi..ye maine rakhta ha ke mane tumse mafi mangi ha isse mere dil ko chen to milega aur mere dilka bojh bhi halka hojayega...kaal jo saab tumne mujhse kaha usse mujhe samajh me agaya ke galti sari meri thi.isiliye tumhe sorry bol raha hu...dilse sorry...duniya me jitne sorry ha sab sorry..ma tumhe forcely mujhe maaf to karwa nahi sakta....phir bhi ho sake to please mujhe maaf kardena....ma waada karta hu dubaara tumhe shikayaad ka mouka nahi dunga...
mayank
after reading the letter nupur starts smiling.....
n=pagal.....
m=jo kehna ha samne kehsakti ho ma bura nahi manunga....she turns n finds mayank standing behind her...
n=tum????
m=ha ma...so kya socha ha???
n=kis bareme???
m=mafi???
n=maafi??? mmmmm......ma
m=nupur..tumse pehle ma phirse tumse sorry bol raha hu....tum meri baat nahi sunrahi thi isiliye...anyways...I'M SORRY...
n=i'm also sorry...
m=tum kyun sorry bol rahiho???
n=sabak sikhaneke chakkar me kuch zyada hogaya
m=kuch zyaada nahi hua....balki kisiki akhe khol di....
n=par galtito galti hoti ha....
m=kehte ha kisiki bhalai ke liye uch galat karo to woh galat nahi hota...
n=woh!!!! i'm impressed...kaunse film ka line ha???
m=film nahi...kahawaat ha....
n=oh...
m=so??? mafi???
n=thik ha maaf kia..both smiles...
m=ab friends???? forwards his hand
n=mmm....ok....both shakes hands....n smiles..
samrat
s=ma'm....apko ghabraneki koi zaruraat nahi ha..sare reports thik ha....gunjan comes...
g=mmm..iska credit sirf tumhe jaata ha...
s=chahsmish tum..
g=ha.hello ma'm...
s=mujhe kyun???
g=jis tarahse tumne ma'm ka khayal rakha isse to koi bhi patient healthy aur fit rahega...
k=gunjan sahi kehrahiha.....
s=thanks
k=wase mujhe ye khana accha nahi lagta..kya roz roz ekhi khana???
g=ap fikaar mat kijiye ma'm kaalse ma apkeliye khana gharse laungi aur woh bhi apne hatho ki banaihui...
s=woh..mere lie hoga????
g=mmmmm....ok...
after duty....
n=uuffo..ye gunjan kaha rehgayi?? aj ddlj dikhane wala ha..aur n she crashes with mayank...
n=ooouucchhhhh............
m=ooppssss i'm sorry...
n=it's okay.....
m=mmmm ghar jarahiho???
n=ha...aj ddlj dikhane wali ha na...
m=ddlj????
n=ha..dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge....
m=oh....i seee
n=meri favourite hero ka favourite film ha....
m=shahrukh???
n=ha...tumhara bhi favourite ha???
m=mm..nahi...mera favourite shahid ha...
n=kya????? shahid..aur woh bhi srk se pehle???
m=ha any problem...
n=tum pagal ho..srk ke karib bhi koi nahi asakta
m=mane kab kaha ke koi asakta ha???
n=to phir ye sab....tumhenito kaha ke tumhe srk ke zyaada shahid pasand ha....
m=tumhara gusse wala reaction dekhne keliye...
n=kya???
m=mujhe gunjan ne bataya tha ke tumhe srk kitna pasand ha balki tumne to uski ddlj dekhne keliye 2 din gusse me khana bhi nahi khaya tha...
n=gunjan bhi na...
m=kyu??? mujhe hi to bataya..akhir ma bhi to tumhara dost hu...kyu???
nupur is feeling shy now....gunjan comes..
g=di chale???
n=ha.chal ghar jake mujhe ddlj dekhni ha...bye mayank....
g=bye...
m=bye...then samrat comes...
s=so chale?? he saw mayank was looking forward but there was nothing...he shakes him
s=mayank....
m=ha..ha chal....
s=isse kya hua?????
at home..
nupur is in her room...her tv in on but she is lost in mayank's thoughts....while mayank's laptop is alsoopen but he is only moving the mouse n thinking about nupur...
samrat is doing the first aid n thinking about gunjan how she did that.how her hair was flying.gunjan was in kitchen..cooking rajma chawal when she remerberd about samrat n was smiling on her own.......
armaan was watching his album photos with his frens(atul,anjali,rahul,muskaan,kirti n riddhima) he began to think when to say riddhima the three words...
riddhima was on her room looking at a photo of her n armaan on the valentines day...
it divided into six parts...girls was on top n boys down...mayur left..then ar n then sajan....
precap: intern of the month is announced...all of them goes to celebrate...they force armaan to sin a song...n he sings...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice update......happy that patch is done....and intern of the month.....waiting for results...continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey really nice update
wow yaar three love stories
one has already started one in middle and one is about to start
plzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Maisha,
lovely update.
loved mayur patch up scene
liked A-R and Sajan also.
Great update.
Plz try to PM me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update. pr tumne pm nehi kiya. issiliye mujhe pata hi nehi chala ke tumne kab update kiya. per maisha dear it's sooooooooooooo nice. mayur ke bech dosti to hogayi pls ab pyaar me der maat karna.
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

that was lovely part ...

loved mayur....

loved the way he says sorry,,.,,

sajan were cute too...

and last one was the best....i liked this style of your...

well armaan is gone sing,,,well cant wait for that plz update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey maisha sorry for the late comment ...............just came through the parts ........awesome job......thnx for the update cont. soon.....thnx 4 d pm........

hey a request can u plss provide the link for the page u hv updated..........

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