RM: Ek Rishta thoda hatke!!!upd 21/5 pg32 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
OMG how did i miss this???
Awesome concept Apoorva⭐️.. n such a fab part!!!!! loved it to core..

N such crackling dialogues..especially these ones..:


R- Oye Banadariya..galti toh teri hai..toh yeh bechara paise kyun dega???
M- Loo aagaya becharon ka masihaa.....Oye piddey..teri problrm kya hai8...tu apni tang biich me mat aada..yeh mera mammla hai..aur waise tu mere side me hai ya iske???
Rahul comes near Muskaan puts his arm around her shoulder & smiles

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M- papaji...r u sure ki yeh mere hi mum hai???
Rahul laughs......

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really looking forwrd to it... updates soon😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
PArt 2:

RM decided to go for a movie...Muskaan was on time ..Bt RAhul as usual was now here to be seenn...

M- Kutta kamina...nalayak...kahan hai yeh Rahul ka bacha????

Rahul comes talking on phone....

R- Bye sweetie..take care....Hi Muskaan....

M- Hii ke bache..kahan tha???

R- Heelo...by the way main apne ma-bauji ka beta hu..Yeh"hi" kaun hai???(laughs)

M- Dekh RAhul tere inn faltu jokes pe mujhe bilkul hansi nahi aati ok????

R- Tu hansna mat yehi behetar hai...

M- Kyun???

R- Kyunki jab tu hansti hai na tab aaspaas ke bache daar jaate hai..dekho chudail hans rahi hai.....

M- Saale ..kamine nikaame nikhtaaee....Main tujhe chudail lagti hu????

R(looks into her eyes)- I am sorry...

M(surprised)- Tune mujhe SORRY bola????

R- NAhi...chudail ko....(laughs)

Muskaan looks at him..kicks him hard...he falls on the ground & she laughs...

R- Gadhi...tu hamesha mujhe gira ke hansti hai..ab utha mujhe...

M- Kyun??? Tu khud nahi uth sakta/???? MAin jaa rahi hu.....

She turns to go..Rahul gets up...bt his cell phone breaks & he is picking it up...A car coming in his direction he doesnt see it..Muskaan turns to tease him..she sees the car...Runs..Pulls him...

M- Saaale..idiot...aankhe nahi hai kya??? Stupid..itni badi gaadi nahi dikhti???? Kuch ho jata toh??? Rahul..tu ek dum idiot hai..pagal hai...(tears forming in her eyes)

R(smiles)- Jhalli...tu roo rahi hai???

M(blinks back her tears)- rooye mere dushamaan..

R(hugs her)- Thanks...

M- Shut up...meri film miss kar di....

R- Aree abhi tak kahgatm nahi hui hogi..lets go...

M- Mujhe film staring ke titles se dekhni pasand hai warna maza anhi aata...

R- Ya rite(rolls his eyes)

Muskaan looks at him Stamps on his feet...

R- AB kya??

M- Sorry kaun bolega????

R- O ya...SORRY...'

M- WAise tujhe late kyun hua???

R- Hmm..woh..main ek meeting me phas gaya tha...

M(holds his ears)- Meeting me??? SAale..jhoote..apni kaunsi cilent ko BYe sweetie.....take care..aisa keh raha ha??? Huh???

R- Trere kaan abde tez hai???

M- topic change mat kar..kaun ladki thi???Date pe gaya tha?? Teri gf hai??? KAbse??? kya naam hai uaskla??? Mujhe kyun nahi bataya?????

R- Arree CID ma hai kya??? Woh log bhi itne sawwalo nahi puchte honge...

M- Rahul..bata na...

R- Kyun??? U r Jealos???

M- Dekh Rahul..main Muskaan hu..Muskaan kaur Chadaa..teri inn stupid flrity lines ka mujhpe koi asar nahi hoga..ok????

R- Very funny..main tujhpe try bhi nahi karna chahata..ok???

M- Haan...tu waise smart hai..tujhe pata hai ki main tujhe bilkul ghaas nahi dalungii toh tu mujhepe apna time waste kyun karega....

R- Ya rite....

M- topic change mat kar.....LAdki kaun thi???

R- Aree koi nahi...TAnaya naam hai...bas kuch din pehle hi mila tha...she has a crush on me....& she is well good....& .....

M- BAs ho gaya....waise tera cell phone tut gaya kya???

R(looks at his phone)- PAta nahi yaar...isse me TAnaya ka no hai..i cant lose it....

M- Jara dikha toh.....(takes the cell phone & then smiles wickedly)

Next day:

Muskaan is in her room...Rahul comes very angry.......

R- Tune kya kaha????

M- Kya ??? Kiss baare me bol raha hai???

R- Tujhe sab pata hai ki main kya bol raha hu.....

M(smiles that she knows her paln was successful Bt makes most innocent face)- Tu kya keh raha hai RAhul????

R- Dekh mujhe sab pata hai..ok.....yeh meri 12th setting hai jo tune kharab ki hai......

M- Maine kuch nahi kiya...(trying very hard to ctrl her laughter)

R- Tujhe kyun mazaa ataa haimeri setting kahrab karne me???

M- Yaar Rahul tu kab samjhega ki tu jaisi ladkiyaan patata hai woh tere tyope ki nahi hoti...

R- Aur isliye tu unhe bhaga deti hai????

M(geting senti)- NAhi,....kyunki main tujhe kissi aur ladki ke saath nahi dekh sakti....

R- Kya????

M(laughs)- Tujhe kya laga...aisa ghissapitta diaoluge marungi???huh???

R- Yeh joke tha???

M- Tha toh???

R- I dont like jokes...

M- I dont like u....

R- I dont like u either..

M.M- Ab chilla kyun rahe ho???

R- Kuch nahi aunty..bas aaeave hi...

M.M- Phir jhagda hua???

RM look at each othre & give killer looks....

Yeh kaisa ladka hai

Yeh kaisi ladki hai...

Iska main kya karu

Isse main kya kahu

Yeh ladta hai

Akadti hai

Jhadgta hai

Bigadti hai

Dewwana hai

Dewaani hai.................


M.M(looked at both of them..RM always loved to create filmy sutautions)- Phir bhi dono dost ho na??????

RM look at each other & smile............

hahahahai re haii re yeh ladka karta nadnaiyaan kyun pucho toh hai.iii..
KAbhi yeh humse ladta hai kabhi jhadgta hai..koi paas iske naa aana
Yeh ladka hai dewaana hai dewanana....
Yeh ladka hai dewaana hai dewanana....


hahahahai re haii re yeh ladki karti nadanaiyaan kyun puchotoh hai.iii..
KAbhi yeh humse ladti hai kabhiakadti hai..karo dur se ched khaani
Yeh ladki hai dewaani hai dewanani....
Yeh ladki hai dewaani hai dewanani....


RM were dancing singing...around the house....laughing....

Muskaan's mom smiled.....

M.M- Dono pagal hai par saath me kitne aache lagte hai.....

Precap:

Both mothers looking for the boys N girls for the children

Hope u like it...plzz comment criticize.....
Firstly i thought i would directly go into muskaan ko dekhne ladkewale..bt then i thought..firstly i would show more of RM..their type of relationship....
Ur feed back is really very important........
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
loved muski's jelousy........great part,..........cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
very cute part! update soon bachha!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Cute part,sweety....!!
Loved the way u showed RM's relation...especially the part where Rahul is abt to have an accident...soo sweet.....reminds me of Srk-Kajol from KKHH..!!
Cant wait to know what lies ahead!!
Continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Cute part!!
Thanks for the PM!!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
wow, this was so cuteee!! i love how their relationship here, and everything was funny and sweet!!
thanks for the PM!!
continue soon please!!
lots of love,
Sab
Edited by Sab93 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awww very cute part yaaar..loved it..and muski is hilarious...and loved KKHH song sequence...they r just too goood at it..thank u for the pm and i m waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
haha RM are soo cute ....loved their talks in the start infact loved them all through the update ....looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Awww so SWEET!!
RM are portrayed PERFECTLY!!!
Update ASAP!
Love Imane

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