' new ff -secret' part 1-page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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im feeling very bore so i thought to write some .this true storythis type of incident alwys happen in our city..
it is true story


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" secret"
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some time our life changed in years, and some time in one day, some day one day give us happiness and one sorrow but some time one day change our life tooooo. we dont know what will happen next only think the one who belong to us only belong to us......

some time we devote our life for the loving one...........

or some time we keep secret frm them some mistry..............

nu(pov) - i was very happy to know that a new member is coming to our house but only god knows that some time one good news give us whole life sorrow tooo. i dont know i have to run to save him or to save everything which i only have.........
my baby disu he was the one which i have . how anyone was so blind cant see anybody happy.....how any one can be so heartless in
cold blood they do this, everything happened infront of my eyes but i couldnot do anything ...why .......

i alwys think the same incident flash in my mind several time ,,,,, in dreams alwys where i saw the blood of my loving one ...... they are lying and i was running to save ..... now i only hear their cryies ,their shriek in my dreams.............

my chain of thought broke when some one tapped my shoulder , suddenly i was afraid but when i turned and see my son with his big and cute smile ....... i hugged him .he was the one which i have now.....he too hugged me....

his hairs,his smile alwys remind me anshu. he was same coppy of anshu .....same smile and eyes too .........

dishu-mummy what ru doing here,he asked with innocent smile..........


nupur- well ,thinking about you...........i pinched his cheeks.


dishu-mom ,why you alwys pinch it ......and why you think alot about me ,,some time think about you tooooo........ im not a child now ..you see im 6 years old now ..
i can bath my self ok and comb my hairs too and polish my shoes like elders.......and i can make sandwich tooo mom........
now take care of you .you are going older day by day .......

nu make sad face.....

dishu- dont fell sad mom ....you know you r looking more and more beautiful .worlds best and beautiful mom.
he was talkin talking not stop for a minute remind me again about him.....
and what can i say only hugged him...........

********************8 tell me you like when i will continue otherwise not
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Posted: 16 years ago
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obviously continue yaar!
this is tooooooooooooooo good!
plz pm me as well!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

obviously continue yaar!

this is tooooooooooooooo good!
plz pm me as well!

thx surely pm you
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this is awesome......i loved it frd..........do continue.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey brilliant adi, do continue man,
excellent,
who was anshu?
i guess we would get to know later, was he nups boyfriend?
all in all keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Arre yaar aditi, why did u stop there.
U r as u know a wonderful writer-plz continue soooonnnn.
Continue please.
Thank u 4 the pm.
And do continue to pm.
Continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice plzzzzzz cont and pm me
pl cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey interesting start
please pm me wen u continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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do continue adi yaar

awesome

and pm me

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow yaar...
gr8 concept!
luvd it...
pls do cont...
nd is this a true story????
amazing!!!
do tell kis ki kahani hai ye! i mean sachchhi kahani!!!!
lol
anyways, thanx 4 d pm...

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