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Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ GoldenPanda - Heyy! Yes I'm back finally!!
Oh my god...I'm seriously flattered...there are very little things in my life that come before food lol...wow! haha!
Awww I'm glad you loved it...it was hard getting back in to the swing of writing so that's a major encouragement boost! I tried to make the situation slightly funnier. Thank you!!! I was really starting to think that the bad language was starting to offend people...but that's just Armaan...his thoughts have no restrictions so he can swear to his hearts content....it gives him character like you say!
Aww it seriously means the world to me when you say that it wouldn't be realistic to have cute sweet parts so soon....My sentiments exactly! She's only really been there for a day now.
Oh Armaan definitely seems to be in to Riddhima so far but have you noticed that he only mentions her physically for the most part?? He still can't control his eyes when he's looking at her and when he's thinking about her it's the way she looks. Her eyes...her skin...her smell it's all more of a lustful thing as of yet.
Hopefully it doesn't come across that I'm moving too fast...
I'll update asap lovely...oh exams...I don't know...I'm hoping they went well...acne's gone though and I'm pretty much stress free! lol
Thanks for your concern honey! I absolutely love hearing from you...seriously!! I'm so glad you came across my FF. Thanks xxx

hi

g8 part.......tht begun thing was funny.....the gang is back luvvv thm........lol....ammy bichara bhukha gaya............waitn 4 d drive now..

luv
kj

omg...this part is awesome...loved it..when will they both get together....sigh..!! hehe....but thanks for the update....

@ swamii92 - Thank you! I'll try to update soon....you're very welcome for the PM. Thanks for commenting! xx

@ Rapi - lol...I agree...it does suck that we're in completely different timezones! Long distance relationships *sighs* will they ever work?? haha... You know what...the hindi issue has been grating on me since the start of this FF! Normally I never had an issue with hindi when I was doing wwrms but I can't write certain punchlines and things in hindi and have them be just as funny as in English. So i figured that in certain situations (hanging out with friends etc) they'd speak english and in pairs or something...they'll speak hindi. But I dunno...let's see. Sorry if you've been missing the hindi!
Agreed with the weight thing...especially if they're absolutely tiny and they're like "oh look at me I'm so fat"...ugh!
Glad you liked Rahul's line...lol I had fun writing it.
Thanks for the comment honey! Catch you later xxxxx

@ sweetaddiction - Aww...the parts will definitely be rolling so yay for everyone being happy! I'm totally excited about writing the next part...i think you guys might like the next one! Thanks for commenting lovely...looking forward to your next comment!! xxx

@ kd_luv - Awww...glad you liked it! The gang was definitely in demand so I'm happy that you enjoyed it! The ride back home should be really interesting...I've got a feeling you might like what's coming up. Aww you rock more...I love reading your comments! I always look out for them after updating! lol
Thanks for calming me down! I thought everyone would be getting frustrated at me because I'm working in slow motion! ha! The story is definitely progressing so that's good. Aww you grew fonder! haha....let's hope you feel the same way after the next update! Thanks honey! xxxx

@ caprigurl - Awww I'm glad you think so! I don't think we've met before...hey I'm Shrina *shakes hand* lol....Aww it would've sucked if you hadn't come across it...I'm so glad you did. Hopefully I'll be 'seeing' alot more of you...thanks lovely...oh 'll add you to the PM list too! xx

@ Naureen - Glad you liked the title lol...they're fun to come up with! Thanks honey xxx

@ Bornaa!!! - Yayy!! Have I told you how much I love your comments? Because I really do! Oh I think I needed to update quickly considering how long I'd taken a break for! lol
Awww I'm glad you were excited to read it..as long as you're excited I'll be writing for as long as I can!
I thought you'd like Atul in this update...he wasn't drowned about by the other characters even though everyone has such a strong personality. Haha! I can be quite sadistic with the choking right? What can I say....I choke on thin air all the time...I know how it feels! haha
The begun bhaji thing was quite a random addition to the update...I hadn't really preplanned it but it was fun to write! I agree...the fact that Armaan knew made the bit even more funny.
Ahh the car scene.....I'm glad you enjoyed it....it was so much fun to write up!
Atul knows her really well by now so yes...he definitely knows how to wind her up! The zipper thing was so disturbing so I totally get Anjie's annoyance...not to say that she's not hilarious! Especially her death glares...I agree!
Atul is flirtatious...maybe in a less subtle way in comparison to the other guys but he definitely has Malik blood in him. Anjali definitely triggers it in him.
I love you right back honey! I'm so happy you've enjoyed reading the updates...it gives me the incentive to write better parts!
Oh there's a lot of things I wish the show had but hey...I've stopped hoping...let's hope my FF can make up for all of that.
Thanks for commenting honey...I love reading them and I really appreciate the time you take out for them! Love you xxxxx

@ Sakshi - Haha...I'm glad you liked it even though we're stuck in the land that stops time! lol Atul's got a great fan following at the moment! Who would've thought huh? I'm so happy you found him as funny as I do...aww your BBQ party sounds like so much fun.
Aww you seem like you're in a good place right now!! A complete contrast to me at the mo...ugh!
Haha!...Begun is aubergine/eggplant....
I've tried really hard to give everyone equal importance...and making everyone equally likeable...which is surprisingly hard!! lol Thanks for noticing!
Oh Shubhankar's coming next week! I'm sure he'll be a lot of fun!
I'll update asap and yes I'll definitely PM! haha!
Please don't worry about the friendship and stuff fading...it'll all remain...promise! I agree..DMG really screwed up with the lack of friendship!
Haha...charge that cell baby! You're going to need it for my next update!
Thanks lovely...and you better not apologize for the comment baby! I loved reading it! It makes my day! xxxx


@ Komzie - Hey homie!! Glad you enjoyed it honey! I for some reason had a hard time writing this one up. But hey it was fun!! Atul's got the biggest fan following lol!! Good for him...I love him too!
The car scene was sooo much fun to write....especially with AA....hilarious!
Rahul is my personal crush in the FF too...but to be fair I'm crushing on all three of them. Considering all these characters are made up by me....does that make slightly schizophrenic?? mehhh....whateverr lol...yeh I've got a feeling you're going to like the next update but no guarantees!!
AA's ride should be good too....why thank you...I take pleasure in surprising you guys! haha!
AR?...honestly...haven't even thought about what their ride is going to be about...but that's like most of writing...lastminute.com
Thanks for your loonggg comment....I LOVE them and you know it!
Look out for the next update....love ya honey! xx
Ps...are you going to have internet connection in Punjab??

@ Sanjana - Thanks...I'm glad you liked it!!

@ Pooja - Thanks honey...I'm glad you liked it. You're always welcome for the PM! Look out for the next update! xxxx

@ Habs - Awwww I'm so happy you liked it!! The guys are my favourite too!! So much fun to write! I'll update soon...love ya right back hun! xxxx

@ GoldenPanda. - Oh I like overdramaticness!! haha!
Aww I'm glad no one was offended...I'm a bit of a worrier! Okay...note taken I'll just carry on with the pace it's going and for sure you can call me whatever you want!! I love nicknames!!
I'll have to double check part 8....maybe I was coming on a bit strong but let's see where this goes...maybe the lust aspect didn't come across all that well!
Awww...I never even knew I had a writing style till everyone told me they really liked it. It's a pleasant surprise! Aww thanks for the creativity comment! I'd like to think I'm pretty fun to hang out with.....but doesn't everyone eh? Where abouts are you from GoldenPanda?
Next part is coming up fresh out of the oven...and I'll be sure to rest up this Christmas! Thanks for the comment honey! I loved reading it and I love ya right back Ms GoldenPanda. xxxxxx

@ KJ - Aww glad you found the begun thing funny....and the gang is most definitely back. I know they were slightly missed! Drive should be fun! Can''t wait to write it up! Yay! thanks for the comment honey! xxx

@ Huda - Lol...it will surely happen!! When? Even I don't know! lol let's see...as for this update I'm glad you thought it was awesome! Thanks for the comment lovely! xxx

@ Prajna - Thanks!! The next part is coming up soon! Hopefully you'll enjoy it lovely! xxx

I'm blown away by all the awesome comments!! Thanks guys! I know it takes me a while to reply but it's just because I reply in bulk as you can see!! lol.....LOVE YOU GUYS!! I wouldn't be writing without you!

@ Shilpu - Heyy lovely! You know it's so funny that you say that you like reading about all the characters instead of just RM because I was thinking a couple of days ago when you had commented. I was like 'oh my gosh she still stuck around' cos I remember you saying you'd only read the RM parts! Trust me it's flattering that I converted you to all the characters too! haha!
Lol the satellite navigation thing is basically that Muskaan kept getting lost everywhere because she wasn't used to travelling without a TomTom. It was just a silly joke..lolll don't worry about it!
Yup Muskaan may not be as innocent as she seems....i didn't want to make them all cutesy cutesy.....everyone has a distinct personality!
I think you'll enjoy their drive home Shilpa...but let's see....yup they are portrayed as slightly different in this ff.
Awww thank you for not minding the slow progression....I just hate skipping over bits and pieces!!
Thanks for the lovely longggggg comment....I love how YOU love all the couples...it makes me feel gooooodddd!!!! Love ya right back honey xxxxxxxx

@ Princess52 - I haven't even started writing up the next part yet lol....hopefully in the next few days! Thanks for the enthusiasm! I'll hop right to it! xxx

@ angullgrl91 - Glad you liked it honey! Thanks for commenting!

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Hey Shrina darlin: