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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...
@ Shilpu - Heyy lovely! You know it's so funny that you say that you like reading about all the characters instead of just RM because I was thinking a couple of days ago when you had commented. I was like 'oh my gosh she still stuck around' cos I remember you saying you'd only read the RM parts! Trust me it's flattering that I converted you to all the characters too! haha!
Lol the satellite navigation thing is basically that Muskaan kept getting lost everywhere because she wasn't used to travelling without a TomTom. It was just a silly joke..lolll don't worry about it!
Yup Muskaan may not be as innocent as she seems....i didn't want to make them all cutesy cutesy.....everyone has a distinct personality!
I think you'll enjoy their drive home Shilpa...but let's see....yup they are portrayed as slightly different in this ff.
Awww thank you for not minding the slow progression....I just hate skipping over bits and pieces!!
Thanks for the lovely longggggg comment....I love how YOU love all the couples...it makes me feel gooooodddd!!!! Love ya right back honey xxxxxxxx

haha, I know i said that in the beginning lol. But your writing is just awesome makes me want to read it all!! Actually i only read all other couples in your ff sincerely lol. Other ff.. i just kind of skim over them.. or not really read haha. Hope no one other than you is reading this comment, warna band najegi meri LOL. Don't you worry about me running off anywhere!! Im and glued to this ff!! Keep checking whenever i pass by!! I prolly increase the number of views by atleast 10 - 20 in a day lol.
Oh got it lol. I thought there was something more to it, and i just could not understand it lol. I know gps is such a necessity these days. Luckily i only travel to places where i know the route lol.
Haan im loving every person's personality in this ff!! Each person has a different and unique personality of their own. And it sticks out in each person! That is what draws me to read more. It is not just always romance and cuteness like most ff's there is alot more to each person than that, and i love that you don't just skip over those parts!
Haha I'm sure i will enjoy anything you come up with!! It is sooo capturing!! Love the ideas that you get!! So will be buzzing around your ff alot for the next part haha.
And yes.. skipping does get annoying.. so im glad you pay attention to it all!!
haha i know after i posted my comment i was like woah i talk too much haha.
But that is just how your ff is!! It is awesome, and deserved a awesome detailed comment!!

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Aangeli

@aangelis

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Posted: 15 years ago

#562

great part. so much awkwardness between AR. i like atul in this ff. all confident and stuff. continue soon (:

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#563

what a nice surprise for the start of a cold weekend! loved the update! and love the speed of the ff you shouldnt worry about that, the longer the story the better :) thanks a ton!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#564

loved it, shrina!! i lovee how Muskaan is not portrayed as overly physco in this ff.And Rahul is amazing, love the way he's depicted in your ff! thank god!! cant wait till your next part!!

lots of love,

Sab

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...Aphrodite...

@...Aphrodite...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#565

@ habs - Awww that's sweet! I'll update soon...you'll be happy to know that I've started!! Thanks for giving me the boost! xxx

@ Shel - I'm glad you liked my speed! I did try to get this update out there asap! The gang was in demand so they had to come back....It's great to know you found them funny! I do try...
The drive back should be fun...will update asap!
Thanks Shel xxxxxxx

@ Shilpu - HAHA! your comment made me laugh...I don't think anyone reads my comments except for me so i think you're in the clear. lol....I'm majorly flattered you're sticking around though! haha...I always check the number of my views as much as my comments because that's important to me so thanks for the 10-20 boost! haha!!
I agree...it's not always about mushy mushy romance! I did want something else to draw you to the FF....
Wow...'capturing' lol...I hope you say the same thing when I'm on my 54th chapter and we're still on the 2nd day...lol!!
You don't talk too much! I love reading your comments...especially the long ones! Thanks honey! xxx

@ aangelis - Glad you liked it honey! Yup an awkward AR and Atul has earned quite a fan following! lol...who would've thought huh? thanks for commenting! xxx

@ bushra - aww is it cold where you are too?? It's fah-reezing here! Thanks for the encouragement! Keep commenting lovely! xxxx

@ Sab - Oh god...tell me about it! I absolutely hated it when she was shown as this crazy chick in DMG sometimes....I really wanted to tone her down in my FF. Glad you like Mr Garewal in my FF...I've got a feeling you'll like the next update...*crosses fingers*.....
Thanks Sab..xxxx mwah!

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#566

simply brilliant! honey, it was too good!=)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#567

shrinaaaa!! like him?...I loveee him!!

and i know, they went a little overboard with that.

like honestly, just because she was portraying a punjabi girl with a vibrant, and bubbly personality doesn't mean she has to act like a full-on wacko!! but what can we do, those cv's!! *sigh*

sorry, i cant help but rant sometimes😆

ooo, really!! that just made my day..or rather night!! lolzzz

superr excited for your next update!!

ly girlie!

~Sabz

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#568

haha Shrinz lol, bachgayi haha. Shrinz.. ab toh even if you try to get rid of me.. Im not leaving lol. Loveeeeeeee Rahul sooo much in your ff!! I mean he is such a cool dude!! His music, the way he is, his wittiness, everything about him is sooo awesome!! Muskaan nahi hoti toh mai chance le leti haha. And also Muskaan... love how you dont show her as the typical loud punjabi kudi haha. Don't get me wrong, i loved her like that in the show.. but it gets too repetetive when alll ff's show her like that. I like how in your ff Muskaan is totally sophisticated!! RM love story.. i think im liking RM more here than in the show lol..*kisiko mat batana* haha.
Yes even in real life romance is not the whole thing, so i love how you pay attention to other relationships too, friendship, bhabhi devar, the whole thing!! lovely how you incorporate it all!! That is prolly one of the reasons why the ff is moving in slo-mo haha. But i love the slo-mo of it all as i said!! It's is almost like we get to know the characters as people.. not just as any other story we read haha.... ok lol i might sound mad getting to know story people haha.. *scratch that last part* haha. haha.. no worries.. it is not about the days that pass by.. it is about the moments, the relationships, and the fun that we get to read about.. philosophical much?? lol. Im glad you like long comments.. cuz i seem to to give them alot.. esp on your ff haha.

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Reine

@Reine

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Posted: 15 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...
@ Sakshi - Haha...I'm glad you liked it even though we're stuck in the land that stops time! lol Atul's got a great fan following at the moment! Who would've thought huh? I'm so happy you found him as funny as I do...aww your BBQ party sounds like so much fun.
Aww you seem like you're in a good place right now!! A complete contrast to me at the mo...ugh!
Haha!...Begun is aubergine/eggplant....
I've tried really hard to give everyone equal importance...and making everyone equally likeable...which is surprisingly hard!! lol Thanks for noticing!
Oh Shubhankar's coming next week! I'm sure he'll be a lot of fun!
I'll update asap and yes I'll definitely PM! haha!
Please don't worry about the friendship and stuff fading...it'll all remain...promise! I agree..DMG really screwed up with the lack of friendship!
Haha...charge that cell baby! You're going to need it for my next update!
Thanks lovely...and you better not apologize for the comment baby! I loved reading it! It makes my day! xxxx

lol yeah, Goa truely is amazing! And so is this FF. I feel a connection cos we are all supposed to be at the same place :P

yeah....I love this Atul. Even Rahul. Both of them are a huge surprise! Amaizing! I love the way you are taking their story ahead...All the guys get equal importance! hope that goes with Shubhankar as well, after all, he is a senior doc :P

Yeh, BBQ was awesome....my friends were amazing, and surprisingly, so were our families! ROFL Aww! come here then, join us and the DMg gang :P

LOL okay, sorry, I am awfully with Hindi and veggies and food stuff in hindi always manage to confuse me! lol

yes, I agree with you, its really hard to give all of them equal importance! but you do that so well, your ff is presently on my fav. lists! I read only a handful of them, but I like reading the best :P

I am glad you are gonna keep the friendship going! Thats one complaint I have in DMg, besides many others. :P

WOW! I'll surely charge my cell then! Dont wanna miss giving you long comments :P Dont tell me I didnt warn!

And please, give me a lonnnnnng update! My essays are so damn long, I am sure a writer like you could give us much more.....in length I mean :P

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 15 years ago

#570

Of course Atul has a huge fan following! he's Atul! He's my Pankit Bhaiyya!

Yay! I'm excited for the next update now! bring it on! i end up reading it at 3 a.m. anyway and then laugh my ass off while I roll on my bed and cover my mouth tightly hoping my mom doesn't walk in here and give me that... DO I WANT TO KNOW? type look. rofl!

Long comments... you know you're worth every word! And that's saying a lot since I don't normally leave long comments.

Sadly, I won't. My makaan is out in the khets away from the noise pollution. BLISS!