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Posted: 15 years ago
SILICONE??!!! 🤣
omg....r u kidding me???
I really missed the gang... But this was hilarious!!!!!!
take ur time with the update...it better be good!
how were ur exams??? mine went okay.... Christmas ki chutti ayegi abhi.....so i can sleep in abit now!!!! 😉
btw..is that u in ur pic???
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ sweetaddiction - haha...i thought you might have! lol
Awww sorry you found it slow....I agree...it got Armaan to think. Oh exams are over for now...finally! lol. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next update a little bit more...thanks for your honest feedback xxxx

@ aangelis - what??!!! I had to check my pm list...how have i not added you already?? i'm crazy...thanks for reminding me and expect a buddy request from me soon! Glad you liked Riddhima's dialogue!!...thanks for commenting honey xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Shrina, you dont have to thank me. lol

Yeah, I liked it!
But I want the gang for the next part! Cant do without them! lol
Yeah, I have had a hand sanitizer on me for like 3 years now! lol
Oh! You will get my love. lol
Hope you update soon. I am still on my cell. lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ AbhiNikiLuver - Heyy!! loll...glad you liked the silicone-ness...haha! The gang are coming back next update don't worry!! I'll try my best with the update lol. My exams? Oh i don't know...hopefully they went well....I'm glad you feel confident about yours!! Well done!! Lucky you!!! Christmas holidays are fun!
Yup that's me in the pic!
Thanks for commenting honey!! xxxxx

@ Sakshi - Don't fret the gang are coming back next chapter!! Woot woot!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ armaankideewani - Aww have you been stressed? Glad to be your stress reliever in that case...lol...that's so cool...I've always wondered how people reacted to my PMs lol Comment asap honey...I'd love to know what you thought of it! xxx<br><br>



Heheh, well i commented! :D Errm, its on Page 68! :D...hehe =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Sneha - The word 'interesting' always scares me and i've got alot of it for this update! lol....*bites nails*
Please please let me know of the bits that you weren't too fond of....it'll only help me for the future...
as for the bits you did like...Yup Armaan compares Riddhima to the girl...which is crucial because I wanted to show you guys what kind of girls Armaan deals with regularly lol. Which is probably why she's had an effect on him!
'Silicone Slut' oh god...I also wonder where i come up with these names...geez!!
The antibacterial soap comment made me laugh too...I completely agree...just because she's innocent doesn't mean she's stupid. I feel like innocent girls are always made out to be these candy coated nice nice girls that let people walk all over them...nuh uh not Riddhima!
Lol...thanks for liking my writing!
Oh god...I really wasn't too sure you'd liked this update but as long as you're impressed I'm a happy bunny. Though don't forget to tell me the bits that you didn't like!
I'm writing up chapter 9 write about now!
Thanks for commenting Sneha!! xxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

im speechless..what an update Shrina!!

everyone's totally right you really dont cease to impress/shock/interest!!
can't wait till your next part!!
how was/were your tests, btw? i hope your ok and not stressed out like earlier.
lots of love,
Sab
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Sab! - Hey girl!! Haha....I've got a lot of 'hmmm...that was 'interesting'' comments today so I'm slightly nervous because where I come from...'interesting' means awful!! Like oh her face is 'interesting' lol But I'll take the compliment nonetheless! Tests? Oh I hope I did well...but no I'm not stressed anymore...thanks for asking lovey! We have to catch up!! Thanks for commenting Sab...xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

dont worry bout it!! interesting deff is not always a bad thing, and everyone loves your ff!! lolzz, im speechless cuz that was one very well written( im not sure if ti fits into this category) monologue, sorta from Armaan's POV. thats good!! yes we do need to catch up!!

Edited by Sab93 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Sneha - The word 'interesting' always scares me and i've got alot of it for this update! lol....*bites nails* <br>Please please let me know of the bits that you weren't too fond of....it'll only help me for the future...<br>as for the bits you did like...Yup Armaan compares Riddhima to the girl...which is crucial because I wanted to show you guys what kind of girls Armaan deals with regularly lol. Which is probably why she's had an effect on him!<br>'Silicone Slut' oh god...I also wonder where i come up with these names...geez!!<br>The antibacterial soap comment made me laugh too...I completely agree...just because she's innocent doesn't mean she's stupid. I feel like innocent girls are always made out to be these candy coated nice nice girls that let people walk all over them...nuh uh not Riddhima!<br>Lol...thanks for liking my writing!<br>Oh god...I really wasn't too sure you'd liked this update but as long as you're impressed I'm a happy bunny. Though don't forget to tell me the bits that you didn't like!<br>I'm writing up chapter 9 write about now!<br>Thanks for commenting Sneha!! xxxxxxx<br>



Haha, well..i really can't seem to find any other word for it..cuz you see, i LOVE reading FF's and especially DMG ones cuz each one of them is SO different! But there are only a few that excite me, that make me want to read more..and Breathless is one of them! Cuz i mean, its different! This wouldn't happen in DMG ever, so this FF is in my favoriteeeeee FF list right now, and im pretty sure it will be! :D here
Hahah, seriously Shrina, there are NO parts that i wasn't fond of, its just that for a 15 year old to read all that, and appreciate it..you know what I mean right :P..Altho my friends say that i know too much for my age..mehh oh well! So yeah, until now there are no parts/scenes that i wasn't fond of..i liked and LOVED all your updates until now! =)
Ohhh yeah, Armaan the Playaa! :P I mean, i can't blame him, he so HOT, he gets all the attention! :P MMmmmhmm, i love how everything connects! :D Ahh! you're doing an amazing job! :D
"I feel like innocent girls are always made out to be these candy coated nice nice girls that let people walk all over them...nuh uh not Riddhima!" SO TRUE.
OMG! you're already writing another part!! YAYY! that makes me happy now! :D I have exams from tomorrow, so that's why im stressed, but reading FF's, esp. Breathless makes me happy :D here. When are you gonna update?
Btw, did your exams finish already?
Lovee,
Snehaa!

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