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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#501

woot! u finally updated! and gosh was the update steamy.. i loved the name Silcone Slut! superb! gorgeous... please do update sooner than later!=)

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Sammy

@-ArohaAngel-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

finally shrina..ive been waiting my whole life..lol..lemme go read it now

*EDIT*

kay, awesome part as usual..funny as hell...lol poor armaan...girly u need to quicken ur updates..lol...got a better hang of it after reading armaan's POV..haha...the guys so obsessed with ridhima..poor chap! dude i seriously loved ridhima's come back..and the horny girl..baby im still horny LMFAO...i like had a laughter attack there..lol...awesome update..continue soon :D

Edited by aRohAAnGeL - 15 years ago

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

Shrinz!!! That was... yeah. Okay then moving on!

YOU'RE BACK!!! How were the exams? stress gone. Clear skin? no dark circles? HAPPY HAPPY? I better get positive answers to all of those questions or I might just drag my tired carcass over there and smack you.

Back to the update... Okay I loved Ridz in this. Never thought I'd say that. Seriously... she was HILARIOUS! in any sense. as for Armaan... NO COMMENT! *sigh* all men are the same.

Update super duper fast!

love ya!

komz

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#504

hey! i just started reading your fan fic!! its pretty hilarious...love the plot!! cant wait for the next part..can you pm me when you contintue again? thanks!

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#505

Shrina!!

I am here to comment. Got a notification on my cell about your pm, and here I am! lol

And coming to the part, I was surprised a lil bit, but liked it! lol

Actually, I didnt really expect Armaan's POV while he was busy having 'fun' with that girl! lol But yeah, it was all cool with him thinking about Riddhima all the way! lol

Riddhima is awesome! I am amazed she could make a come back like that after being scared to death just a few minutes ago! And I love the way she responded to him! I would have gladly given him my hand sanitizer if he were to touch me with those hands for the next one month! Lmao (yeah, I carry a spray bottle in my purse :P)

Armaan was amazing! Scre never hit a girl rule! Lmao

I dont believe he went to a girl like that! Her last question had me wanting to laugh and slap her all at once! Lmao!

But Armaan's thoughts are awesome! cant not think of Riddhima! lol

I missed the gang a lot, but I do understand that they will come in! And they better! :P

I really love your gang lots! Love their friendship, and m glad all of them are given equal roles!

Please update asap! See, I did comment! And I am using my cell! lol

Cheers,

Sakshi

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shristi

@shristi sarda

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#506

hey cool part...
thanx for the pm and update soon.....

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#507

That was really nice update!

Thanks for the PM..

i hope your exam went well!!!!!!

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#508

Shrinaaaaa! thanks SO much for this update, i really needed it! hehehe omg! When i saw ur message, i was like YAY!! thankssss! :D will read right away and comment! =)

Edited! :D

Woaaaaah, Shrinaaa. Woaaah. What is the right word to describe this "steamy" update!? :P Well, "interesting"? Shud I say? Hmm..probably..

Would say Liked some parts, but also loved some parts :P(no, not the part where he thinks of silicone slut! :P) but when our dirty-minded Armaan thinks about our sweet Riddhima and he compares the fake to the real. Loved the fact that She has an impact on him, a HUGE one. Altho there were some parts i would have preferred not to read..its a Fanfic, a story, and its Breathless, which never fails to impress me, so i would read it! =)

Btw, loved the name "Silicone Slut"…you really do come up with creative names huh?! :P Hmm, watt else can i say..Ohh yeah, there were 2 dialogues that i absolutely LOVED:

"I'd really appreciate it if you washed your hands with antibacterial soap before you touched me. I don't want to catch a sexually transmitted disease thanks."

Mannn, Shrina, i LOVE Riddhima in this FF. She is innocent yet she is aware of what is going on..she is big headed and if she doesn't like something, she would say it IN YOUR FACE. thats what I LOVE about her! :D When i read that dialogue, i actually said "OOOOH, IN YOUR FACE, Armaaan" :P hahahahaha.

Holy mother of jesus you HAVE to be kidding me'
This dialogue just made me laugh..i love the way you write! :D

Pheww, lastly, you have never failed to impress me, and this time too..you have shocked me!
Will be looking forward to the next part! :D Please update soon Naa! =)
TC
Snehaa!

Edited by armaankideewani - 15 years ago

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GoldenPanda.

@GoldenPanda.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#509

Shrinaaa finally! You're back! :D

Okay, I was like really hungry when I decided to check IF before I was going to go out to grab a bite to eat. But I saw your PM and got hooked to reading part eight, in other word's food came second! That doesn't happen often! lol

Anyways back to the part itself! I absolutely LOVED it! It had everything in it and it was also funny! I found the part with the undone fly and the horny silicon slut really funny! And I don't mind Armaan's bad language, it just give's his character life and personality! This part was definitely needed, it can't be all sweet and cute all the time then it wouldn't be realistic either. So I think you're doing a great job! What I didn't expect though was that Armaan would be THIS into Riddhima already. So much that he wasn't even able to have sex with that silicon chick.

I am eagerly looking forward to the next part! Don't keep us waiting for so long again! Btw how did your exams go? Are the dark circles and the acne gone now? Hope you're doing well! And thanks for the PM :))

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Rammaza

@one_ashi

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#510

lol although I would love to I don't really have the time for a long comment, would like to say I was laughing all the way through! I do love mush and romance but to be honest the squabbles pre-love are the best!

Thanks for the pm! And no don't worry you certainly havent lost your touch! I applaud Ridhimma's response I thought she might act a little more childish and show her early emotions but I'm glad she didn't, and about language... well it seemed quite natural coming from the characters you've built so no need to worry! 😉

Do continue soon!