Breathless ~1~...*Note - Page 143* - Page 52

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

161.7k

Users

143

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

...Aphrodite... thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
@ Pooja - First comment! Yayyy!! Glad you liked it sweet stuff! Riddhima was extremely feisty in this one! lol...Thank for your sweet comment, hopefully I'll be updating soon!

@ Borna - Ahh I'm sorry to have disappointed you Borna! Hopefully the next update will be something you'll enjoy reading.
I did an Armaan's point of view because I wanted to show his perspective on the whole situation. He's not a complete perverted villain....
I agree...I thought it would be useful to see what kind of girls Armaan is used to dealing with in comparison to Riddhima. No wonder she's got a hold on him already huh?
Riddhima's definitely got some character in this one....she can be extremely bitterly sarcastic and has quick wit. She's definitely stubborn and I'm totally with her on not being around him for the drive back to the beach so I guess that's why she's out driving in the night lol.
You really don't have to worry about the gang splitting up with the individual pairs....they'll remain as tight as ever.....
I'm so glad you like all the members so far...I've tried to make each one equally loveable!
I'll be updating very soon!
Thanks for your lovely long comment even though my update wasn't quite up to par this time round! I'll do better!!
p.s Call me whatever you'd like Borna!!! I LOVE nicknames considering I don't have any in real life! lol

@ Aakriti - Yup I finally updated! lol...Haha...the name did take a lot of creativity to come up with haha! Glad you appreciated it lovely!!
I'll definitely be updating asap! Thanks honey! xxx

@ Sameera - Haha! You make me laugh...yup it took me forever to update! lol Glad it made you laugh lol....Yup that's exactly why I did an Armaan's POV...to help understand the situation better! He is slightly infatuated right now lol...poor thing. It was fun to write up these two opposite girls completely beating Armaan down with their words! I felt his frustration lol...I'll be continuing asap...look out for it honey! Thanks for commenting lovely xxxx

@ Komzie - Yay....Don't know about the exams but the stress is gone...the acne is gone and the dark circles are sticking around but yup I'm happy happy! lol...thanks for asking.
Awww tired carcass...seems like you've got the same disease I had for the past couple of weeks lol.....stick in there honey!! there's light at the end of tunnel!!
Glad you liked Riddhima's sarcasm...it was fun to write her up lol...as for Armaan...agreed! But atleast he seems to be softening up ever so slightly! lol I'll update fast! Love ya right back Komzie xxxx

@ angullgrl91 - Hey! It's nice to meet you...I'm Shrina...welcome welcome...I'm really glad that you've been enjoying it so far and it would be MY pleasure to put you on the PM list! Glad you find it funny...I do try....Hopefully I'll see more of your comments in the next update! Thanks alot xxxxxx

@ Sakshi - Yayyyyyyyyy!!! I'm glad you freed yourself from the internetless prison!! Yup Armaan's POV was supposed to show what he was thinking throughout....so it turns out he's not completely completely perverted! lol Glad you liked Riddhima's feisty comebacks....she's pretty quick with her witty comebacks! Lol I carry hand sanitizer tooo!!...SWINE FLU ALERT!
Armaan was so much fun to write...and yup...he goes for the easy girls for sure! No wonder he's infatuated with Riddhima lol....
I missed the gang alot too....they'll come..promise! I'm glad you like them as much as I do...they make feel all cosy and warm haha.
I'll update asap and thanks for commenting lol!! I didn't think i was gonna get any Sakshi lovin this time round!
Love ya girl.... xxxxx

@ shristi - Glad you liked it honey!...You're welcome and I'll update soon! Thanks a lot xxxxxxxx

@ Radhika - Aww you're sweet. Have no idea how the exam went but I'm hoping it's well lol. Really glad you enjoyed the part and I'll be updating super soon! You're very welcome...thanks Radhika! xxx

@ armaankideewani - Aww have you been stressed? Glad to be your stress reliever in that case...lol...that's so cool...I've always wondered how people reacted to my PMs lol Comment asap honey...I'd love to know what you thought of it! xxx

@ GoldenPanda - Heyy! Yes I'm back finally!!
Oh my god...I'm seriously flattered...there are very little things in my life that come before food lol...wow! haha!
Awww I'm glad you loved it...it was hard getting back in to the swing of writing so that's a major encouragement boost! I tried to make the situation slightly funnier. Thank you!!! I was really starting to think that the bad language was starting to offend people...but that's just Armaan...his thoughts have no restrictions so he can swear to his hearts content....it gives him character like you say!
Aww it seriously means the world to me when you say that it wouldn't be realistic to have cute sweet parts so soon....My sentiments exactly! She's only really been there for a day now.
Oh Armaan definitely seems to be in to Riddhima so far but have you noticed that he only mentions her physically for the most part?? He still can't control his eyes when he's looking at her and when he's thinking about her it's the way she looks. Her eyes...her skin...her smell it's all more of a lustful thing as of yet.
Hopefully it doesn't come across that I'm moving too fast...
I'll update asap lovely...oh exams...I don't know...I'm hoping they went well...acne's gone though and I'm pretty much stress free! lol
Thanks for your concern honey! I absolutely love hearing from you...seriously!! I'm so glad you came across my FF. Thanks xxx

...Aphrodite... thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
@ one_ashi - Oops...I nearly didn't see you there! Sorry....Oh don't worry about it! lol...I love all the comments I get! I'm glad you found it funny!! I feel the same way about the squabbles...the mush and romance can get a bit slow sometimes!! Awww thank you! I was wondering whether I had it in me to write an update after so long! Oh nothing would've made me cringe more than Riddhima screaming "BUT I LOVE YOU!!!" at the sight....ugh! Not that Riddhima loves him...yet.......I agree....I was trying to make this mature. She's only been around for a day believe it or not! lol
Thanks for not minding the language! I thought it was necessary coming from Armaan!
I'll update super soon....thanks for your comment lovely xxxxxxx
bushrayou thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME part! loved it!! thanks for the PM!

hope you update soon with a longer part i could have read on forever!

cupid-struck thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
atlast an update!!!!shrinz how was ur exams dear???
hilarious update......armaan is really startng to feel sumthing for ridhima..........poor chap armaan....ridhima ke samne hi band baj gayi........he'll go running after her......but ms silicon slut pecha hi nahi chodti🤣
"Let's finish off babyyy....I'm still horny"😆
"Riddhima man....don't be like that"
"Armaan man....your fly's undone"😆
and many other dialogs were too gud👏
update soon😃with the whole gang...and RM PARTS😉
-Prajna😳
MelodiousDreams thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...


@ Borna - Ahh I'm sorry to have disappointed you Borna! Hopefully the next update will be something you'll enjoy reading.
I did an Armaan's point of view because I wanted to show his perspective on the whole situation. He's not a complete perverted villain....
I agree...I thought it would be useful to see what kind of girls Armaan is used to dealing with in comparison to Riddhima. No wonder she's got a hold on him already huh?
Riddhima's definitely got some character in this one....she can be extremely bitterly sarcastic and has quick wit. She's definitely stubborn and I'm totally with her on not being around him for the drive back to the beach so I guess that's why she's out driving in the night lol.
You really don't have to worry about the gang splitting up with the individual pairs....they'll remain as tight as ever.....
I'm so glad you like all the members so far...I've tried to make each one equally loveable!
I'll be updating very soon!
Thanks for your lovely long comment even though my update wasn't quite up to par this time round! I'll do better!!
p.s Call me whatever you'd like Borna!!! I LOVE nicknames considering I don't have any in real life! lol

Yay for nicknames!
You didn't disappoint me, Shrina! I don't think that can happen very easily! 😊 I'm just not an AR ultra-fanatic, that's why my reaction wasn't as enthusiastic as it was for previous parts. But no matter! I'm enjoying the story as a whole, and I guess I'm warming up to Riddhima slowly. Armaan is a different scenario, but let's see what's in store, eh?
*salutes* All-righty! No worrying for me! 😃 I'll take it easy and enjoy the show...err...story.
*sigh* Not up to par...*shakes head* It was an awesome update, Shrinz! I'm just biased towards certain people. *cough* *cough* Let's leave it at that, for simplicity's sake. 😛
Love ya, hun!
...Aphrodite... thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
@ bushrayou - I'm glad you liked it! Thanks...oh you're very welcome for the PM honey! Awww lol..if my updates get any longer my FF will surely be long enough to be a book within a couple of weeks! haha....That's so sweet....hopefully you'll be able to read on forever in the future too! xxx

@ Prajna - Hey Prajna!! Ooohhh I don't know about my exams but hopefully they went well! Armaan's definitely interested in Riddhima but I don't think this situation's put him in her good books! Haha!!...Miss Silicone Slut won't leave him alone...so true!
Glad the dialogues made you laugh Prajna! I'll be updating soon with all the gang so look out for it sweet stuff!! Thanks honey xxxxx

@ Borna - Oh I totally get you....but don't worry the gang's going to be coming back next chap so hopefully you'll get your AA fix lol. Exactly...sit back and watch/read the show/story haha! Oh I get you now...well special focus on your fave characters will be made 😉 Atleast you weren't disappointed...phew!!
Thanks lovely! xx
topsyturvy23 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update plz ypdate asap
...Aphrodite... thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
@ Sanju_Veni - Thanks! I'm glad you liked it...I'll update asap! xxx
sweetaddiction thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
lol -- i love the comparison of love to silicone :P
interesting part-- a bit slow given that it was just one setting and nothing much happened-- bt i tink it was also important coz it got ammy to think....
hope ur exams are going well--
wen r u done ??
aangelis thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
excellent update! luved riddhima's comebacks. could u plz add me to ur pm list?

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 10 months ago

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni · 2 years ago

Sarang | AarYa FF - Chapter 28 page 24 - 27/1/25

Hi guys, thanks for loving Dolent!! Here is my new story. As the title suggests this ff is about love and affection 💖 Soon I'll post the first...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".