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amazing ff.....i luving each n every part f it....do continue soon...

listen tht was nice ya...y do u think it was'nt ...obvs..the ice between thm needed to sort of break ...nd i guess this was the bst way .....loved how armaan evn though being a complete flirt has sensibilities nd a heart tht is somwhere full of love nd absolutely no ill feelings nd harm ....i also loe the small yetvery romantic gestures niki nd abhi share thts really cute .........beautifully written !
trust me ..ur doin a gr8 job ...........
i just grew fonder like i always say ........
updt asap ! 😊 waiting fr the bonfire party!

greatttttttttttttttt part Shrina......

shrina, i LOVED LOVED it....sorry my friend jsut got me into a habit of saying things twice, lol..he was actually drunk when he was doing it, but it sorta got to everyone..lol..neways
amazing part, no need to be nervous....update soon!! OMG, i cant wait for the bonfire, so cute how armaan and ridhima solved their issues, the end was so funny...lol...poor guys...and girls..lol..aww it was so funny

love,
sameera...

@ Sakshi - Whhhaaattttt???!! You're going to GOA? What?! Okay I'm presuming you're from India and I'm completely and totally jealous! Well atleast my FF came in handy somewhere lol! You better come back and tell me how it was! P.s I love that violet sunset pic too! Amazing stuff....oh and P.s.s NEVER apologize for long comments...you know I love them!

Yup!!!!! Gonna celebrate a joint birthday over there. lol

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Excuse me while go breathe a little!

ROFL! Dude... I love the way you write... enough said! I really don't know where to start.

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lol-- well a mouthful of pancake actually works pretty well here so even if u hav, here's another one :P
gr8 part !
my fav line was the one where armaan is struggling to keep his eyes on her face (She replied with a smooth voice and crossed her arms right under her 'Nooooo Armaan....eyes stay UP.))
that was classic.
i'm kinda of glad that u put in this part bfor the bonfire bcoz yea it prolly wdnt have fitted in as well if they dint have a good level of comfort. i'm REALLY looking forward to that part so pls do update sooonnn !!!!
thanx =)

heyyy shrina!

Shrina!!!!

@ Nidz - Yayyyyy first comment!!! Thank you so much....I'm glad you liked this part You have no idea how much I was planning to scrap the whole thing and just start from the bonfire. You're support means the world! I'll continue soon!

@ kd_luv - Exactly! The ice needed to break...otherwise they would've been cold with each other through out the bonfire! Armaan definitely has a heart in there somewhere...somewhere! He just has a lot of ego that needs to be deflated! Aren't Nikki and Abhi the cutest?!...I love them! But I'm biased because I've fallen in love with all the characters here....lol! Thank you so much! I get a bit nervous before I update because I'm a bit of newbie and you're always so supportive with your comments! Bonfire chapter coming up madame!! *salutes*

@ Prinnia - Hey!! Thank you lovely! You're always welcome for the PM and I'll update really soon!

@ Sameera - Hey! Thank you thank you?! (Nawww the twice thing is better left to the drunk and his gorgeous friend! lol) Awww I won't be nervous any more (well until the next chapter dum dum duhhhhhhh). I love a more comfortable AR tooo....there was no way I was going straight to the bonfire with all the tension! The bonfire will hopefully be great! Hopefully...Glad you liked the end lovely...I had fun writing it. Keep the comments coming pretty lady...you know I love them and I love you!

@ Nadz - Jaldi jaldi!! Can't wait yaar! Love your comments!

@ Komz - I'll take that as a...you found that funny?? Haha! You're so cute! I'm glad you liked it lovely!! I was trying to balance the humour with the tension and jeez was it difficult!! Hopefully the bonfire will be just as good!

@ sweetaddiction - Haha! Wooot mouthful of pancakes! I'm glad someone reads my silly little support comment at the end...thanks! haha! Haha! That quote was fun! Apologizing or not...Armaan will always always be Armaan! lol I agree...I didn't want anyone to feel odd during the bonfire! That would be strange so I'm glad you appreciated this scene. I cannot WAIT to write the bonfire scene. It'll probably be up before you know it!

@ saaw - Made your day sweetie? Thank you so much! I'm glad to have made you smile...I LOVE making people smile! I'll definitely update soon...Thanks for your sugary comment lovely!

@ Sakshi - Okay just for pretty ol' you Sakshi I actually did look up 'disappointment':
a feeling of dissatisfaction that results when your expectations are not realized...
Hmmm Im judging from your sweet comment that that's not your primary emotion right about now! Awww it is more than enough for me to understand what you mean! I'm glad you liked all the convos and just to know that you liked all the one liners makes me smile. Agreed! I didn't want to rush in to anything without settling their differences. I loved the whispering too! It's been done a thousand times before but hey I love their friendship! You have an awesome group of friends Sakshi! I hope you have a great journey to Goa! I'm so jealous of right now!
Anjie's always this villain everywhere...I thought I'd make her a little cocky, a little bitchy but with a great heart! It's hard to make her so strong but loveable at the same time so I'm so happy you like her!
Awwww I miss the gang too! Go, go! Watch the scenes lol
Yup it's not just an AR FF, it's just a little more AR focused that's all.... i'm just hoping I've got the skill to combine other storylines! arghh
Awwww 'Amazing'? You are SO sweet? I'll definitely be updating soon...I have some free time on my hands right about now....well probably a few days lol.
ps. you better NOT be sorry!!!! Love you girl and your comments. I'm so glad you take the time out for these comments...you don't know how helpful they are to me!
LOVE YOU!