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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey shrinz...

sorry cudnt reply earlier😔 but im back with my bak bak😉

Okay first of all, I LOVED IT 👏

Armaan being naughty and praising the girl😆😆 and then ridz getting irritated with 'ms woman driver' 😆😆😆 i loved how she got back to him but i thought she did insult him a bit too much😕😆😆 but then he was way tooo much😕😆 loved how the whole gang was on armaan😆😆 they all were telling him off, bechaara😆😆 but atleast he understood that he was wrong😳 loved how anji and muski were on about 3yrs flirting😆😆 and 3yrs annoying😆😆 and the sexy sisters😆😆 love how you get all ur words and amke it sound so realistic... the whispers behind the door was also funny😆😆😆 loved anjie annoyed on atul😆😆 bechaara atul and then loved how atul was like armaan ka dil phat jayega😆😆 and armaan was like aur kya phatega😆😆 okay enuf of it, i reli loved the part when armaan apologized to ridz and she acted like she was leaving, loved the closeness and then the two options thingy😳😳😳 soooo cute😳 love armaaaan😳 and the best part when they were thinking if she is bewakoof and he is unpad😆😆😆 loved how they played along to act like they hated eachother and everyone fell off😆😆 Oh gosh basically i loved the whole Part
🤗

Jhappis for that😉 and lastly, which idiot told u that it was dissapointing😕😡 It was damn good yaar and the bonfire to aata rahega if u didnt write this part it wudnt be the same man, it was toooooo gooood😃

luved everything😃 Hope u njoyed my bak bak😆😆😉
Anyways jaldi jaldi update karo😃

Luv u
Nadz😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEy shrina....lovely update ....totally enjoyed reading ......I love your dialogues yaar and ofcourse your detailed descriptions .Yes, was actually waiting for the bonfire ...but i think this part was important ....and i loved it 😛...waiting for the next part .....hoping to read more abt the other characters also 😳
Edited by sweetsugar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Nadz - YAYYY! she's back! Awww thank you for all the clapping people....lol!! Glad you liked the convo with 'Big Assed Brunette' haha! Yeh Riddhima was harsh but my god....Armaan killed her! Yeh the gang told him off but with good reason! Yeh without a doubt Armaan seemed to be crushing on the 'sexy sisters' for a while....*sighs* he has a problem! Awww thanks for saying my dialogues are realistic!!! That's sweet cos I always try to make them believable! lol....now we know why Atul seemes to get beaten up so much! I love him though!! I'm glad you're starting to fall in love with Armaan....lol! Yeh their little role play was fun to write!
Awww thank you for all the jhappis!!!! 🤗
You're so sweet! Haha! No one told me it was disappointing lol...I was just worried that people would be looking forward to the bonfire too much! Silly Shrina and her silly Breathless Beckons! Thanks for the confidence boost Nadz! You're awesome! and I LOVEEEE you bak bak and you know it!!! I'll update jaldi jaldi!! Thanks for taking the time out Nadzz....I LOVEEEEE YOUUUU.....

Saba -Hey lovely! You've totally made me happy cos I know you're more of a RM fan and the fact that you liked it enough to comment is AMAZING!! Thanks for the details and description thing...I do tryyyyy! I'm sorry about the bonfire thinggg....if I added it to the end of the chapter the chapter would've been like 25 pages long! lol....I'll make it up to you but I'm glad you enjoyed the scene nonetheless! You'll definitely get to find out a little more about the characters tooo!....Thanks for commenting gorgeous! I appreciate it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
continue soon wid RM part plz!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ cute gauri - I'll continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey darlin;
Sorry for the late comment........😆.......
Great update hun....
As usual Armaan seem to irritate Ridz but am glad they made up....cutely written......
The gang totally against Armaan....lol.....good for him...😆....
Loving the way the FF is shaping....I love your writing style & thanks for the beautiful pics........awesome, brilliant.....super......
Pls continue soon.....very soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Shel Dev - Hey! No problems! Believe it or not I did think...'Hey...where's Shel Dev?'...I'm glad you commented!! I'm happy they've made up too... and yup the gang were giving Armaan a hard time but he sure enough deserved it!
Awww thank you so much for the sweet compliments...they're such a huge encouragement for me...the pics are no credit to me....
I just google for them! God bless Google lol
I'll be continuing soon lovely....keep the comments rolling!! xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey

just saw your ff and love it!!
please continue soon
~anjie
(will write a longer comment later but right now so much hw left to do)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heey Anjie!! (cool name 😊 short for Anjali?) I'm so glad you commented and let know that you liked it! I really appreciate it! Awww I look forward to the long comment but your right...hop to the hw! I hopr you carry on liking it and carry on commenting....I'm Shrina btw...nice to meet you * reaches out to shake hand* lol xxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...



@ Komz - I'll take that as a...you found that funny?? Haha! You're so cute! I'm glad you liked it lovely!! I was trying to balance the humour with the tension and jeez was it difficult!! Hopefully the bonfire will be just as good!



Do u need me to repeat the ROFLING? I LOVED it! It was DAMN GOOD! 😆

love ya!

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