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@ sweetaddiction - Yayyyy warm syruyppy pancakes!!! Though I have to say this morning has been one of the greyest, dullest and rainiest i've seen in oh about...a week?? Lol London hai yaar - kya kare?!
Ahhh the little red person is evil i tell you...you'll get sick of her soon enough! I'm glad you liked Anj's intro because I'm loving her in my FF...I know she can be slightly villanous in others but...mehhh...
Thanks for the syrupy support lovely and i'll update soon!!

@ Prinnia - Hey Prinnia! Thank you lovely! I'm glad you loved it and I'll definitely continue soon.

@ Nadz - WOOT! she commented! Part 3? Yup I loved me some suitcase scene so thanks for liking it!! Riddhima's got a sadistic sense of humour lol Atleast Armaan appreciates it. I love night texts so I thought i'd incorporate it into chapter 3...
Part 4? Awww I love how much effort you make commenting my silly chapters! I hope you know how much I appreciate it!
I tried to make the Abhi Niks cute but kinda of cringeworthy lol...Yup Muski is our very own fashion police and Anj is totally in to her business. Yup they lied but it's cool cos they'll get to chill out and get to know each other before the wedding prep!!
Thank you pretty lady! You know I love your comments!

@ lovely Komzie - Hows it going lurvely?? OMG thanks for the correction yaar...I just edited....bad hindi!!! lol oh my god thank goodness you didn't find it boring...sounds cliche but I was seriously considering either editing it or posting in two parts cos I thought no one would make it till the end! haha!
I think Rahul's alongside Abhi and Atul intro has to be favorite too....I tried to make him sexy but not in an 'Hi I'm Armaan' kind of way. There's no way I want personality twins in my FF lol. You're a musician?! Sweet! what do you play??
Oh the tune was supposed to be Rhianna's 'Umbrella' but even I thought it didn't sound like it....mehh...I like the sound of it though.
Awww hugs for Atul's intro!! haha! I haven't really come across too many Atul intros before but I want to still show him as a man but one whose playful and naive. I agree that I don't like people portraying him as an overgrown baccha! Who's Borna?
Awww I wish you an awesome holiday in Greece!!! Sun, sea and sand *looks out of bedroom window and sobs* I could use that about now with the crap weather here! THANK YOU! for your comment! I love you xxx

@ kweetrockstar - Thanks!! I tried to make everyones personalities slightly different so thanks for noticing! You rock for commenting and I'll update soon so keep a lookout! xxx

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@ Nadz - WOOT! she commented! Part 3? Yup I loved me some suitcase scene so thanks for liking it!! Riddhima's got a sadistic sense of humour lol Atleast Armaan appreciates it. I love night texts so I thought i'd incorporate it into chapter 3...
Part 4? Awww I love how much effort you make commenting my silly chapters! I hope you know how much I appreciate it!
I tried to make the Abhi Niks cute but kinda of cringeworthy lol...Yup Muski is our very own fashion police and Anj is totally in to her business. Yup they lied but it's cool cos they'll get to chill out and get to know each other before the wedding prep!!
Thank you pretty lady! You know I love your comments!

Lolz yeah mis late latif is back in action😆😆😆 lolz
hehe yeah i loved both the parts to bits and there sooo not silly😆
Actually i appreciate ur efforts in writing the part, designing it, PMing😆 i knw how difficult that is😆😆
I loved it! and yeah waiting for loads of DMG masti😃

You're always welcome for a dose of comments mixed with bak bak😆😆😆

Luv
Nadz😳
😆

thanks for the pm nupdate
love this part
thanks n pls continue soon
Love Sanam

wow it was really good
contd soon
thanx for the pm
loved it

hey......awsoooommeee.......the part was reaalllly sweeet n nice ...loved the abhi niks portion .....very cute ......i really liked each ones intro .....super choice of rooms they r sooo meant fr each one ....

gr88 goin grl ....

acha one more thing those room pictures mein the second one which u said iz armaan's room ....tht pic is not visible as in only half of it comes...i reallly want to see the room ,....cud u plz re post just tht pic if its not a prob ....!!

nehow ....the part was wonderul u kno i am growing fond of this ff ....day by day !!

waiting fr the next part eagerly ......spc coz u ended this one at "the handsome voice's entry "' not fair ......hahahhahhah jus kidding wil WAIT FR THE UPDT ND CHK DAILY ....thnx to u !!

hahahah....very well written !

it was awesome shrina..👏 just loved, loved to read it.. once and then again..! 😃 very captive intros.. loved Anjie, thoroughly professional yet friendly, though still getting used to muskaan's fashion police.. she always came across to me as so careless type.. lolz
d first part was definitely d best.. ridzi trying to recall a feminine voice among all those '"Ay soni mere saath chal na." and "Tu cheez bari hai mast mast" .. 😆 her convo with nikki was amusing.. especially nikki shyly saying "Abhimanyu mere hone wale..'" 😲 😆.. and abhi's reaction like 'now i've got to save her from girls too!' 🤣

update was full of fun with witty one-liners scattered everywhere like gems.. seriously i wanted to pick each and use them in my comment here but they are too many.. 😉 besides, u can easily guess my choices.. 😛
mention of street fighter brought some memories back.. chun lee used to be favorite with me too.. equally for her fighting skills and smile.. 😉
aww so i got, umm three correct..?! haha fair enough.. 😛

looking forward for more.. thnx for d PM..😳

fabulous part!! plz continue soon (:

@ Nadz - haha!!! comments mixed with bak bak! classic! gotta love you Nadz! FF writing can be tricky though especially for a newbie like me!

@ RM_lover - Heyy Fana!! Thanks gorgeous!! I'll add you to the PM list now! Woot woot! Thanks for commenting!

@ Sanam - Hey! You are very very welcome for the PM and update...don't mention it! I'll definitely continue soon so keep a look out darling!

@ Sanjana25 - Hey Sanjana! I'm glad you liked it sweet stuff...I'll deffo continue soon and annoy you with another PM! Thanks!

@ kd_luv - Awww you're super sweet! I really like Abhi Niks here too! Ahh sorry you couldn't see Armaan's bedroom.. I'll update my Breathless Beckons now but here's the link just in case you still can't see it:
http://i34.tinypic.com/352i6gp.jpg
Hopefully that's better. Do let me know! As for you're comment?! I love how you're loving it day by day! You're amazing for leaving such a nice comment. I'll update soon so you get to find out what happens after the 'handsome voice's' entry! lol Thanks!!

@ Rapi!!!!! YAYY!! You're comment blew me away...*whoosh*....I LOVE Anji too...it seems like she always gets a bad rep though :(
Hopefully we'll get more familiar with Muskaan along the story...Fashion police arghhh lol
I'm so glad you liked the first part!! Yeh I had to channel the minds of disgusting perverts to get those slimy comments haha!! I love Abhi Niks!! I was trying to make them as interesting as possible because for some reason when you show a couple that's already in love they look kind of boring. But maybe that's just my opinion?!
Awww no joke Rapi...I swear to you...I had to go ahead and reread my part to look for all the wit because I hadn't noticed it so much while I was writing...thanks for bringing it to my attention!! I never thought I could pull off being funny!
I LOVE STREETFIGHTER!! Enough said! Haha...Even though Chun Lee's not my favoruite I still love her! Thanks Rapi! love you!

@aangelis - Thanks lovely! I'll definitely try!! xxx

Hey darlin;

Hey miss Shelina!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
I know I already wished you on your birthday thread but I thought I wish you here too!
Awww I love your comment!
Yup we finally got to meet the gang! 4 chapters later! lol
That's so sweet that you felt like you were there because that's exactly the effect I try to go for!
Haha the 'dolle sholle' quote had to be edited all thanks to AshiYuvi4Life who quite kindly told me it wasn't 'tolle sholle' *sighs* kya kare....NRI hindi se chala leti hoon!
Thank you so much and I'll definitely try to continue soon. I love you!!
Have an awesome birthday darling! xxxx