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AMAZING FF!! Enjoyed reading and seeing the images.!! Please add me to your pm list. I somehow am not able to add you to my buddy list. Your FF is addictive, eagerly waiting for the next part.

@ Maggie131984 - Hey!! I don't think we've met before so here's a hearty hello from me, Shrina! I've just added you as a buddy and it would be my PLEASURE to add you to the buddy list! You are so sweet for taking the time out of your day to comment...thanks alot! I appreciate it...you'll definitely get a PM pronto when I next update!! xxx

Aww very nice update..loved it..i think best till date..agree no AR..but really funny..Nikki The Rapist, Muskaan The Fashion Police..lol..this update actually reminded me of old FF "Mister greeks gods Miss angry eyes..story line is totally different though..dont know y i remembered it but may be cause all youngsters were like this..lol..waiting for AR now..continue soon..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

hey... i just caught up with ur ff...and lemme tell u one thing.. it is one of the most refreshing stories ive ever read.. i mean.. u changed the whole armaan riddhima equation sooo successfully and smoothly... wow./.... pleeeease add me to ur pm list.//... i LOVE ur ff.... waiting for the nxt update!!! :)

hi

woooowwwwwwww.........quite a big mansion i must say.......very beautiful...........it felt as if i was ridz and meeting d gang.......g8.....muski seemed so cool and herself ....celebs and all.....angie 4 bizz is perfect.....rahooolllll aronauticals nice.............next time willl plzzzz mension their relationship with ridz n all...........u didnt even giv ammy and atul's profession.............waiting 4 it............the niki jumping and lesbian rapist part was hilarious..........lol......n d last part............breatheeee ridzzz hehe lol

update soon....nicee looooonnnnnnggggggg part

luv
kj

awesome update shrina!!! completely enjoyed !!


"Itne salo se doosre ladke se Nikki ko bachata tha. Ladki ki territory toh enter hi nahi kiya ' damn it!" 🤣🤣🤣

thanks for the PM!

Hey it was awsome mind-blowing Thx For the PM 😊

-amna

SUEPRRRBBB FF dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗I reallyyy enjoyed it 👏

I really loved their first meeting it was sooo cute 😳

@ Aarora - Best till date?! No way... I'm genuinely gobsmacked! Thanks! Oooohh I'm gonna have to check out this "Mr Greek Gods Miss Angry Eyes" FF...I don't think I've heard of it! Awww I know I know we're missing AR...Distance makes the heart grow fonder..I hope!!

@ saaw - Hey! I don't think we've met before. I'm Shrina...awww I'm so flattered. Refreshing's a huge compliment for me. I did try to make the AR relationship transition smooth and I'm sooo glad you noticed that! It would be my PLEASURE to add you to the PM list and I really hope you keep commenting! Thank you..xx

@ krazy4kash - The mansion is hugeeee...I agree! lol I'm glad you felt like you were meeting the gang cos I sure felt like that when I was writing it. Arghh I know I know...I skimped on the details like relations and Atul's profession (Armaan's was intentionally not written yet)...it's just that when I hit the 15th page on Microsoft Word my heart started palpitating!! I was like Shrina...who exactly is going to read your 3000 word essay? I'll definitely add the details soon! Glad you liked the psycho lesbian rapist part and the last line. I loved them too...I'll update soon and knowing me it'll probably be long haha! Thanks for the input lovely..i appreciate it.

@ sweetsugar - Awww I love Abhi!!! haha...glad you enjoyed the part gorgeous!! You're welcome!! Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment! MWAH! xxx

@ Amna - Aww...mind blowing! Thanks! You're welcome and expect another one very very soon! 😉

hey u should check it..its good one but incomplete..(
here's the link:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=999037