EHSAAS (AR version) pt 57-end pg 53 10/27

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 15 years ago

#401

hey di

that was gr8 parts

just loved them

thank god armaan got better

WOW they r together now

loved all the parts

just amazing

the whole ff was gr8

and for that

from bottom of my heart

luv u lods for re writing tthis ff for all the AR fan

lods of luv

nruti

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@ammy-ridz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#402

Hi di,

I just want to say that after reading this whole wonerful fsc..i think I m yet again speechless to comment or I say I m short of words…

But nevertless…I can't shut my mouth or have any control over my fingies when they crib to comment. Hehe.

Amazing ff and Awesome parts. I would say I thoroughly enjoyed myself as a reader . I laughed, cried, blushed, angered….and cursed too…at several situations in their life…but finally had a GREAT! time.

Loved all the parts from 55-59. I had envisioned them to end up togather one day…but never so soon and THIS!! Way…But I think there couldn't be a Better way out than this one. I ADORED the letter/note thing…and Armaan's feelings..I always knew what he thought and his love for Ridz and his repentence..Still That note made it much clear and also expressed everything so aptly.

The impact of that heartfelt words Did finally managed to pirece Our Ridzzi's heart…how couldn't it…it was so enchanting. Then Armaan's illness, Riddhima's care, THE Re-union, their ROMANCE, Mr.chef, arnav and dia, THEIR LIFE IN Ramghar and the whole epilouge….every thing after that Rocked. Happy to see AR's teasing and flirting is back ..signifies every thing is back to Normal…and NOW both are equal participants I see.

Loved the Romantic scenes, the emotional scenes and all eequally. If I start to write my fav from the above parts..I will copy paste the whole parts probably…but just for records my most fav was the NOTE by Armaan and these lines……. I have realized (ehsaas) that the day I doubted the faith in your love and disrespected your honor, I lost all the faith and respect you ever had for me. and this…….. I may have committed a lot of sins, but I have loved only one woman in my life and I am willing to live the rest of my life with the memory of her love.

Apart from the NOTE other statements like "Armaan….wo pyaar baahar darwaaze ke peeche chup chup kar hamaari baatein sun raha hai aur ro raha hai!Then the other was "tum jahan bhi jaaogi, main tumhare peeche peeche aa jaaoonga….kyunki tumhare bina ek pal bhi jeena mere liye bahut badhi sazaa hai," and "one rose for every day you were not with me….tumhari yaad ke har din ke liye ek gulab hai," this particular thing reminded me of the time few yrs back when Abhi had gifted Ash exactly 365 roses for her bithday and he said that One rose for everyday..I found it very romantic that time..but this had to Beat it anyways.😳😊

Now I don't have any idea what to write in Conclusion today..I was about to write plz continue soon on the habit..but it din't take me much time to realize that..but I would say….WONDERFUL FF..and I hope and wish this Happy enging in "someone's..na..sometwo's life too…Wish 'THEY' will forgive the diffrences…and the End would be with EHSAAS and NOT Aap ki Kasam.

Thanx for this Beautiful and Fab!!! fanfic.👏👏👏

Love

Shraddha

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#403

Hi Bheegi,
Really loved this ff.To show my appreciation for your humour and your romance I've picked out all my favourite one liners in these 3 concluding parts :

1.If I had known that it would take a bunch of blood sucking mosquitoes to get you back, I would invited them over to dinner a long time back!"

2.Dr Malik, aapke naye hospital mein bahut personalized treatment milta hai!"

3.Do? Kahan hai doosra? Ab wo tho sach much mera nahin hoga!"

4."Surprise?" Armaan asked, "kahin Anjali tho nahin hai?"

5."Sorry…sorry….aise behudaa mazaak karne bhi nahin chaahiye…par kya karoon, I like the possessive Mrs Malik!"

6."one rose for every day you were not with me….tumhari yaad ke har din ke liye ek gulab hai

7."utaarne mein jo mazaa hai, wo sirf main hi jaanta hoon

8.Armaan and Arnav usually end up with watery eyes and runny noses after the chaat, but little Ms Diya eats chaat as if it were icecream…just like her mom!

9."How big is the patient bed in the exam room?" she asked mischievously.

Thanks a lot for another fabulous ff. Love, ssh57

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#404

hey di awesome and wonderful last couple parts

this is the one ff is like express train just keep going without waiting hehe

i love both AR in this ff their romance is so cute

love the name arnav and diya

now pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon ur pehchan ff

love ya

mittal

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#405

sangeeta, what a perfect way to finish up one of the best ffs i have ever read... i loved all the songs used, especially kismat se tum mile ho.. we have such similar song choice...

please do write more stories...

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reema

@reemz.malik

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Posted: 15 years ago

#406

I loved this FF!!!!!!!

This is one of the BEST FF i've read!!

Please do keep writing these kind of stories...

loved the way you portrayed the story..

and of course loved ur writing style... :)

love reema😳

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desire_20

@desire_20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#407

loooved d ff.... but y did it end so soon..... u should relle write another AR ff soon, i'd love to read it

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kshanikaa

@kshanikaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#408

I have been getting a lot of homework from my teacher since last few days!! Thank God, she is on a break now!! 😉 😆

hii di
Dont mind the above Pj. The "ehsaas" period ended....while giving a pretty smile on its readers' faces.....!!! 😊
I cant comment about just some parts now...its about the whole story...I simply loved it.
Again di, to appreciate this ff i can just say that it was your ff....written by You!!
A lovely story, pretty good moments and i think i wont be wrong in quoting that this one was by far, the most sensuous ff amongst ur AR ones. Loved it for its naughtiness, devotion, exploration of new seasons of life, double-meaning lines 😉, falling in love with the accompanying fall in respect, intracacies of relations, friendship, trust, values, internal satisfaction.......and the list goes on.

For these parts, some great incidents and lines--
He brought such beautiful smiles on people's faces with his artful surgery, but the person he wanted to bring a smile on the most would never smile again'.
Isnt it ironical that we are able to keep the whole world happy around us, but sometimes the one we love so dearly is left disappointed by us? These are called colors of life.
Riddhima Gupta?? that was a serious point....heart-breakening!!
Riddhima's expert hands performed surgical procedures on the little teddy time and again. 😊
Armaan'.never have any expectations in life'..expectations always lead to disappointment when they are not met! easy to say but not so easy to follow!!!

he had always been good at reading her body language, although he could never read what her heart really wanted. Good one!
Armaan you have not lost me forever, but won me forever." Finally, they won overcoming all the hurdles!!
nurse'main Mrs Malik bol rahi hoon....Stay as angry or ignorant u can be, but once you see your love suffering, all those resolutions and imaginary walls come down falling apart!!
kahin treatment plan mein interfere na kar rahi hoon 😉 😆
Koi pooche tho keh dena ki yeh bachcha chef ka hai, milkman ka nahin!.....Thats the first and only line in whole ff which i could not understand. 😆

loved your story di....it was indeed a relief to some AR fans....Thanks for this treat. This ff was marvellous and different also. Liked AR roles here. And the bigest quality of this story had been its simplicity and innocence of leads!!! So a nice ff with a spicy tadka!! 😆

Keep up the good work in future!! 👍🏼

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#409

oki, no i didn't scheme to desert reading this fic, but i didn't read anywhere beyond what i had on the AK version in the first go... for some personal thing in my head... sorry about that bheegi, i do enjoy ur fics much in general...n had to let u know ..

hoping to see pehchaan updated soon, and thanks (even though i didn't get to this) for working otu an AR version on this fic!! im sure u could do many more such and would love to read them !! :)))

cheers,
nj

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Simone

@-simi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#410

Hi di 😃 it was a pleasure reading this all over as AR version! thanks so much again for taking the time out and rewriting it!!..😃 all the VMs u included were really nice and brought back all the memories of KaSh!!

this FF reminded of ur old FFs and i went back and read 'The Turtleneck Girl' and some of 'Tumhari Amanat' again 😆😆😆And i cried all over again reading TA! 😭 that one is beyond emotional! 😭

hope to see u back in action with Pehchan again 😃

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