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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome...a very nice ff...i was crying during the last few parts...well it was like i could actually feel all the emotions..! u r a brilliant writer..and plz pm me wen u start another ff....i was actually amazed at your knowledge of songs...that are out there....buh they were all good...!!!

keep writin
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow lovely ending...
its too good...
i really enjoyed your ff...
its full of emotions,love n hatred
fantastic ff...
do write a ff soon...AR....plz...i love dis jodi
thank u for giving us such an ff....
i just loved it
continue soon

love
debadrita
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Posted: 15 years ago
just loved it your all ur parts
this ff was different from others
it was just beautifull
but pleeeeeeeeese its request cont. soon
with new ff


byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee & takecare

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arluver15

hey di

that was gr8 parts
just loved them
thank god armaan got better
WOW they r together now
loved all the parts
just amazing
the whole ff was gr8
and for that
from bottom of my heart
luv u lods for re writing tthis ff for all the AR fan
lods of luv
nruti



Thanks for reading it again Nruti and commenting regularly😊

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Hi di,
I just want to say that after reading this whole wonerful fsc..i think I m yet again speechless to comment or I say I m short of words…
But nevertless…I can't shut my mouth or have any control over my fingies when they crib to comment. Hehe.
Amazing ff and Awesome parts. I would say I thoroughly enjoyed myself as a reader . I laughed, cried, blushed, angered….and cursed too…at several situations in their life…but finally had a GREAT! time.
Loved all the parts from 55-59. I had envisioned them to end up togather one day…but never so soon and THIS!! Way…But I think there couldn't be a Better way out than this one. I ADORED the letter/note thing…and Armaan's feelings..I always knew what he thought and his love for Ridz and his repentence..Still That note made it much clear and also expressed everything so aptly.
The impact of that heartfelt words Did finally managed to pirece Our Ridzzi's heart…how couldn't it…it was so enchanting. Then Armaan's illness, Riddhima's care, THE Re-union, their ROMANCE, Mr.chef, arnav and dia, THEIR LIFE IN Ramghar and the whole epilouge….every thing after that Rocked. Happy to see AR's teasing and flirting is back ..signifies every thing is back to Normal…and NOW both are equal participants I see.
Loved the Romantic scenes, the emotional scenes and all eequally. If I start to write my fav from the above parts..I will copy paste the whole parts probably…but just for records my most fav was the NOTE by Armaan and these lines……. I have realized (ehsaas) that the day I doubted the faith in your love and disrespected your honor, I lost all the faith and respect you ever had for me. and this…….. I may have committed a lot of sins, but I have loved only one woman in my life and I am willing to live the rest of my life with the memory of her love.
Apart from the NOTE other statements like "Armaan….wo pyaar baahar darwaaze ke peeche chup chup kar hamaari baatein sun raha hai aur ro raha hai!Then the other was "tum jahan bhi jaaogi, main tumhare peeche peeche aa jaaoonga….kyunki tumhare bina ek pal bhi jeena mere liye bahut badhi sazaa hai," and "one rose for every day you were not with me….tumhari yaad ke har din ke liye ek gulab hai," this particular thing reminded me of the time few yrs back when Abhi had gifted Ash exactly 365 roses for her bithday and he said that One rose for everyday..I found it very romantic that time..but this had to Beat it anyways.😳😊
Now I don't have any idea what to write in Conclusion today..I was about to write plz continue soon on the habit..but it din't take me much time to realize that..but I would say….WONDERFUL FF..and I hope and wish this Happy enging in "someone's..na..sometwo's life too…Wish 'THEY' will forgive the diffrences…and the End would be with EHSAAS and NOT Aap ki Kasam.
Thanx for this Beautiful and Fab!!! fanfic.👏👏👏
Love
Shraddha


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-Sai.[/quote]

Hey,thanks a ton for reading this old ff of mine and commenting so regularly. UR wonderful comments were always a treat to read after i posted the parts. Once upon a time i used to write a lot more regularly and i can see that helps with the flow of the story. Right now, i have been irregular and that's why my stories have become slower paced now😕 In a way, i am glad i re wrote Ehsaas for you- it's inspired me to write more regularly even if they are smaller parts😊 It's always good to know what parts the readers have liked- u are good about telling me😊 I know armaan was not an ideal man in this ff but i am glad u all still forgave him in the end just like ridz did- aakhir subah ka bhoola ghar wapas aa jaaye tho usey bhoola nahin kehte😃
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
THAnku di bahot bardhia main sooch rahi se ki right all the FF in Ar version to Plz Di Humble request and thanku for this wonderful FF love HEAVEN
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww di finally the end..i know missed to comment last time..but u were quick to update..lol..loved the FF.. beautifully written but to tell u truth was waiting for AR moments with their kids but FF ended..lol..even my favorite part was when Armaan stayed after Prateeks' Birthday n then Riddhima's realization..now will miss this FF coz every morning i was sure to get update of this FF..lol..will wait for more to come..
love ya..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hi Bheegi,

Really loved this ff.To show my appreciation for your humour and your romance I've picked out all my favourite one liners in these 3 concluding parts :
1.If I had known that it would take a bunch of blood sucking mosquitoes to get you back, I would invited them over to dinner a long time back!"
2.Dr Malik, aapke naye hospital mein bahut personalized treatment milta hai!"
3.Do? Kahan hai doosra? Ab wo tho sach much mera nahin hoga!"
4."Surprise?" Armaan asked, "kahin Anjali tho nahin hai?"
5."Sorry'sorry'.aise behudaa mazaak karne bhi nahin chaahiye'par kya karoon, I like the possessive Mrs Malik!"
6."one rose for every day you were not with me'.tumhari yaad ke har din ke liye ek gulab hai
7."utaarne mein jo mazaa hai, wo sirf main hi jaanta hoon
8.Armaan and Arnav usually end up with watery eyes and runny noses after the chaat, but little Ms Diya eats chaat as if it were icecream'just like her mom!

9."How big is the patient bed in the exam room?" she asked mischievously.
Thanks a lot for another fabulous ff. Love, ssh57



hey thanks a bunch for quoting these lines...u all flatter me seriously😆 I love the blood sucking mosquitoes as my fav but thanks a ton again for reading and commenting regularly. i will def watch ur VMs..can i use them in my stories??
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks...

@ Mittal....thanks for reading both versions and commenting regularly. A big hug to u mittal...how's nursing school going?

@lil desi goddess...i love that Pukar song too. Was good to 'see' u back with this ff. keep reading and commenting as and when u can

@xreemax....thanks again. i will write a new AR story after pehchan

@desire...i will write a fresh AR story after pehchan

@ NJ...no problem dear. All stories are not made for everyone. I understand and as a writer, try to write different kinds of stories each time...hope to see u in pehchan soon

@simi...aww thanks girl for redaing this version. actually, i think this story suits AR more than AK. I am not sure about my other AK stories as they are very AK-ish lolz. TA to date is also my fav...thanks for reading it again
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kshanikaa

I have been getting a lot of homework from my teacher since last few days!! Thank God, she is on a break now!! 😉 😆
he he...ur funny. yes, teacher will become lazy again with once a week updates of pehchan😆

hii di
Dont mind the above Pj. The "ehsaas" period ended....while giving a pretty smile on its readers' faces.....!!! 😊
no no...love all PJs and GJs😆
I cant comment about just some parts now...its about the whole story...I simply loved it.
Again di, to appreciate this ff i can just say that it was your ff....written by You!!
A lovely story, pretty good moments and i think i wont be wrong in quoting that this one was by far, the most sensuous ff amongst ur AR ones. Loved it for its naughtiness, devotion, exploration of new seasons of life, double-meaning lines 😉, falling in love with the accompanying fall in respect, intracacies of relations, friendship, trust, values, internal satisfaction.......and the list goes on.

aww...thanks dear. This story as u know is inspired by an old novel and movie but of course i had to AR-ize it😆

For these parts, some great incidents and lines--
He brought such beautiful smiles on people's faces with his artful surgery, but the person he wanted to bring a smile on the most would never smile again'.
Isnt it ironical that we are able to keep the whole world happy around us, but sometimes the one we love so dearly is left disappointed by us? These are called colors of life.

yes, that's an irony of a plastic surgeon's life. A lot of them are so busy in their work that they actually have a very high incidence of divorce. neurosurgeons have a 95% divorce rate😕
Riddhima Gupta?? that was a serious point....heart-breakening!!
Riddhima's expert hands performed surgical procedures on the little teddy time and again.
😊
Armaan'.never have any expectations in life'..expectations always lead to disappointment when they are not met! easy to say but not so easy to follow!!! yeah...but it's a hard fact of life and the only way to attain happiness

he had always been good at reading her body language, although he could never read what her heart really wanted. Good one! thanks
Armaan you have not lost me forever, but won me forever." Finally, they won overcoming all the hurdles!! yeah, armaan's letter would have melted the hardest of hearts😭
nurse'main Mrs Malik bol rahi hoon....Stay as angry or ignorant u can be, but once you see your love suffering, all those resolutions and imaginary walls come down falling apart!! exactly!
kahin treatment plan mein interfere na kar rahi hoon 😉 😆
Koi pooche tho keh dena ki yeh bachcha chef ka hai, milkman ka nahin!.....
Thats the first and only line in whole ff which i could not understand. 😆 he he...another PJ. haven't u heard all the milkman and mail man jokes of housewives having affairs with them when their hubby is out😆?

loved your story di....it was indeed a relief to some AR fans....Thanks for this treat. This ff was marvellous and different also. Liked AR roles here. And the bigest quality of this story had been its simplicity and innocence of leads!!! So a nice ff with a spicy tadka!! 😆
thanks...yes i realized that this wa sa simple story i wrote 2-3 years ago. life and my stories have become more complicated over the years now😆 thanks for ur wonderful remarks all along...student you get an A++ on this assignment TC

Keep up the good work in future!! 👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey i love your story can you add me on the PM list when you start new one
thank you

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