FF: Memories of a Lifetime- Mayur; Chp14-p65-NEW! - Page 14

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@ Nishithini : Awesome AVI (your avtar) :D

nice part yaar......mayur in reunion......nice......mayu hugged nupur.....wow....thanx a ton 4 the pm......do cont. soon.....i hope they'll be togther again....in show...as well as in this ff.....

my god this update was sim[ply fab......i loved it!!!!! he hugged her?....wow....plz continue sooooooonnn

Hi.Nice update but you left it at a very crucial point.Pls continue soon......

Heyy Rach!!

Originally posted by: shinz

finally..after ages u have updated.and is it good....u bet!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
rach.......the way u potrayed nupur's feelings.the turmoil within her.......PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!
i really like this aditya guy.......it would be cool to watch a story between adi and tanvi!....and that hot dress....olalala.the boys were drooling and so was mayank!!!!!!! 😆 😆
i just hope mayank really starts liking her...seeing that she is already head over heels in love with him!!!!!!!! 😃

coming to my fav part.....the hug...............unexpected...but definetely a surprise not a shock..that was cute..😳
ps- next time u better update quickly.......do not dare to keep us deprived of this wonderful story by not updating..and do update love aaj kal!!!!!!!
please!
pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Aww Shinzy...yeah..i know I updated really late...and I'm sorry for that😳
I'm glad you liked the way I described Nupur's turmmoil...actually..i just put myself in her place..since Nupur in this ff is a complete replica of me...and the feelings just came out...it was easier that way..
Yep, Aditya is really adorable.. Oh Adi and Tanvi? Well, you just have to wait and see what's next..i won't reveal much...Yep, that HOT dress...and Mayank drooling over Nupur..all thanks to our darling TANVI!
Well, let's see if mayank starts liking her or not..as i said..i won't reveal too much already..lol yeah...Nupur is already n love with him..but then..there's something known as ego..right?? (you'll get what i mean as the updates continue...since its all in the past)..
Yep..i knew the hug would be unexpected to most of you..and even to Nupur :)..

I promise I'll update quickly...right now im working on Love Aaj Kal and Forever and For always..

Originally posted by: Nishithini

edited...

I told you its gonna be awesome and its actually awesome. you were hesitating with out any reason.

nupur still couldn't move on even after 10 years!!!!......this proves how much she loved mayank. but what actually happend 10 years ago?? did mayank cheat on her? I feel sorry for nupur. but I know u will make everything alright. 😃

amazing update. continue soon.

Thanks so much Nishi...lol..i guess i really was hesitating without any reason..
Yep, Nupur is still unable to move on even after ten years...yes she did love Mayank a lot indeed...lol..to find out what happened ten years ago..you'll have to wait...since all of it unveils in the upcoming parts...yep...as i mentioned before the part...every story has an end..but in life...every end is just a new beginning...i hope that answers your question..

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

oh my gosh, truly awesome update yaar!

i simply loved it!

tooooooooo gooooooooooood!

thanks for the pm!

Thank you sooo much..I'm glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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sorry rachna..!! i'm so late in editing,,!!

But i loved this part..!! I'm really liking this FF...since destiny's over...this is starting to be my fav FF of yours..!! hehe

10 years its been and she;s still not over him..! The reunion was awesome.....soo nupur was apprantly looking very beautiful.!! hehe....And mayank hugged her..! All of a sudden..!! LOL

even i was surprised..!! hehe

My favourite was the flashback though...! y'know these kinda things happened so much in our school...by god...girls crying over exams and practicals...LOL

hmmm...mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ke it was a personal experience..? haan..?? with your crush...?😆😉😉hehe....

so sweet of him to ask about nupur....! awww....

i really can't wait till the next part..!! i wanna see how they interact...!because nupur is a bundle of nerves in front of him.>!!😆😆

do continue soon..!!

Hii Nidhi...no probs...as Nupur would say, "der aaye durust aaye"..
Aww...thanks soo much....many were upset on Destiny ending..so i'm glad this FF could make up for it... :)
Yep, she still hasn't gotten over him even after ten years. Yup, Mayank hugged her. Lol, you were surprised too, and so was our poor Nupur.. :)

Oh, really? I didn't know people would like the flashback, i was apprehensive of the flashback only...but it turned out your favourite..so im really happy about that. Well, ha, this is based on personal experience only, but i added a little more to it in the FF, jab ki the original is a teeny bit different.. :) Yep, he asked Nupur why she was crying. he's deffo sweet.

LOl, yep, Nupur is hell nervous, and after the hug, it's gonna be fun watching them interact...i hope you'll like what's in store for you.