FF: Memories of a Lifetime- Mayur; Chp14-p65-NEW!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

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sorry rachna..!! i'm so late in editing,,!!

But i loved this part..!! I'm really liking this FF...since destiny's over...this is starting to be my fav FF of yours..!! hehe

10 years its been and she;s still not over him..! The reunion was awesome.....soo nupur was apprantly looking very beautiful.!! hehe....And mayank hugged her..! All of a sudden..!! LOL

even i was surprised..!! hehe

My favourite was the flashback though...! y'know these kinda things happened so much in our school...by god...girls crying over exams and practicals...LOL

hmmm...mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ke it was a personal experience..? haan..?? with your crush...?😆😉😉hehe....

so sweet of him to ask about nupur....! awww....

i really can't wait till the next part..!! i wanna see how they interact...!because nupur is a bundle of nerves in front of him.>!!😆😆

do continue soon..!!

Edited by hgrhr - 15 years ago

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#122

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Oh that was damn freaking awesome..!! Just couldn't help reading it...!! each and every bit of it just took it's toll on me... There's a disturbed feeling inside me that wants to know what actually had happened in the past and what is going to happen now..? I really feel attached to this fic... It's not merely a fic by a girl who's just 15 ... I was really looking forward to their meeting... and great you insert in here.. :D

It was great on a whole.. Flashback was quite amazing then.. She was going to flunk >> "Haww" :P Anyways, Mayank was usually well-defined... Loved every point that defined him..!!

Good Job, Continue soon...!! It lies next to impossible to wait :D

Edited by -Armaan- - 16 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Superb loved it he hugged her

Even he felt attraction towards her su[perb

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403848

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Hi. 😊

Awesome!! Em eagerly waiting for the coming updates!! Please continue your other FF also! 😊

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shinz

@shinz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

edited at pg 15.......do see!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

by god rachz.......wht an awesome update..........n btw mayu recognised nupsi?????woww.n on top of tht he hugged her????i think nupsi ke liye yeh raat 10 saal ke baad ki bestest night hogi...na?thnxxxxxxx a ton dear for this rockin update..wow.....nw i'm super-duper xcited to c wht happens next...plzz continue sooon...😃