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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 10:

Its 7 am in morning ,a new day with a lot of happiness and test are waiting 4 the newly couple who are sleeping , mayank and nupur are sleeping on the same bed . mayank is facing the back of nupur .nupur turns toward mayank in sleep and put her hands on the chest of mayank which wakes mayank and he sees nupur hands on his chest he kisses her hand and move her hand toward his heart and says"I love u nupur "and smiles toward looking nupur face , he get up from the face and open the window and the cold breeze touch his face and he looks at the first ray that touches his face and he closes his eyes and see the face of nupur and then he open he his eyes and turns toward nupur who is having a small sweet smile in her wedding dress like a angel ,he goes near her and sit besides her head and keep patting her head like a loving hubby and then he says "thanks nupur 4 coming in my life nw finally I have some one which I can see with my close eyes , u r going in breath in this world but u will live in my heart in me now , I love u nupur " . And he gets up to take a bath, he turns to move but nupur hold his hand in sleep and mayank looks nupur and says"haay janu tum to neend mein mera qatal karnay ko tayar ho " meanwhile nupur move her hand holding mayank in her hand under her head due to which mayank again has to sit near her head and mayank is nt getting angry infact he is loving the nice and sweet moment between her wife and him ,he didn't move his hand bc he didn't want to disturb nupur sleep as she was realy tired during the wedding and put his head on the the back of bed and he sleep there ,

On the other side in khana house gunjun is looking at the clock in her room with a really tense look at the face as she is waiting 4 nupur arrival 4 pag pairay bc she need to talk to her bc of the letter she is holding in her and keep murmuring to herself"di yeh kiya ap ne , kyun ik bar bhi nahi bataya apne , ap ni janti is ka anjam kiya hoga , yeh sab sirf aur mayank jiju ko hi nahi hum sab ko dard ki kis manzil tak lay ga ap nahi janti , ap ka bachpana bohat kuch kharab karday ga aur ap jab tak yeh janay gi bohat dair ho jay gu aur jab ap phir agar is sab ko sambaltay huay takk jayin gi aur koi bhi apko nahi sambal pay ga mein bhi nahi . ap jaldi ayin shayad mein abhi roik sakun apko is dard ki manzil ki taraf janay se "and crying silently as her mom is sleeping in next room

(back to samar and pritha house):

Nupur gets up and see mayank is sleeping right next to her sittingly and she looks at mayank and see that she is holding her hand thinking she might have holded his hand in her sleep but why didn't mayank tried to remove his hand why?kahin yeh mujse sayi ka pyar to nahi karta kiya par kiasay koi kisi se ik nazar mein itna pyar kar sakta hai aur who bhi muj jaisi larki se jo is rishtay se duniya ki akri hat tak nafrat karti hai ,kaisay? Leaving all this she tries to get up without disturbing mayank and before going he covers mayank with the blanket and goes to have a shower and after few mins wearing sky blue saree

Her hairs are wets and water drops are falling on the floor and she comes into the room seeing mayank is still in sleep and comes and sit infront of dreesing table and starting brushing her hairs and see her mangalsutar is missing from her neck and then she think might be its fell on the bed and goes at bed on her place and tries to find he mangalsutar without disturbing ,but without knowing the water drops falling from her hairs are felling on mayank and he wakes up and sees nupur is so close to him . she is just a inch away from mayank face ,mayank heart beat is getting fast and fast , mayank controlled himself looks at nupur as she is finding somethink and then suddenly nupur smiles bc she founded her mangalsutar and tries to move but he feet slips and she fells on mayank ,looks at mayank who is already starring at her no ides from how long and he is looking happy bc of the fell she is keep satrring at mayank and having a eye lock together ,she feels irritated by mayank gaze and her fall and tried to get up but again slips and fell on mayank seeing this mayank smiles and give her the signal of stop and she is lieing on mayank chest hearing his heart beat 4 two mins he hold nupur by her arms and make her stand and he too stand near her and sees the reason of her falling , he takes the mangalsutar from her hands and hoilds her hand and take her infront of the dressing table and moves her hairs from her back which leaves a current in her body as she is thinking something else and mayank looks at nupur looking down rubbing her hands slowly and he smiles at her and put the mangalsutar arounf her neck and make her turns and take the sindoor box from the table and fills in her mang and she is geeting shy in her life first time a unknown feeling is moving in her heart , mayank understand his feeling and make her look at himself and she looks in his eyes and see a lot of respect and love for her ,mayank is looking at her mix emotion and says "mein janto hoon nupur tumaray dil mein aur tumary dimag mein kiya ho raha hai par chinta maat karo , mein apnay pati honay ka who adhikar abhi nahi jatun ga ,pehlay hum ik dusray ko janay gay peechay gya , ar jab hamar pyar aur yeh pyara sa rishta apnay urooj par hoga tab hum apna rishta agay barhayin gay ok par tab tak hum dost hian har baat apni ik dusray ko kahain gay aur har mushibat ka samna sath karain gay tik haina nupur "and nupur is just looking at him how did he get what she was thinking and why he did this 4 her , if he wanted he would have done anything to her without even asking ,without even knowing what she wanted but he didn't done anything he respected her and loved and when we love a person with respect we donot need anything more than that do we need anything else friends?she in returns smiles and mayank smiles back and goes into washroom and first time she started respecting a man without having so much hatred toward the man cast and its true some one is always different for us because love stands for that person which makes him different from rest right friends?

Nupur respect mayank why?love is arising in her heart but how?mayank loved her self and wanted to wait 4 nupur love but will he ever able to get it ? will anyone will find out about nupur?will gunjun able to stop her sis?

Keeping staying me friends 4 knowing more

This is all for nw friends enjoy the newly wedding couple and their married life filled of tests .do leave ur comments they are really close to me

Edited by maria_awan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
first i thought maria you forget that you write this ff,but after alot of time u update and afte rreading the update i love it aaj to two two happy things happen first you update or aaj mjht bhi bauhut mast tha
or ye update bhi maynk is so understanding ...lakin gunjan ke baation se muje darr lag raha hein ke kahin nups kuchwrong na ker de
muje maynk ke baat bhut achi lagi lovely update
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi maria,
happy to c ur update after long time,
and it was wonderful.
Here u potrayed mayank as a perfect gentleamn.he is really very nice person.
And nups.
what was her plan?i m really worried about 4 it.
hope nups fall in love with mayank soon.
Awesome part .
loved it so much
take care

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very Nice update....thnxx 4 The pm...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
its a great update yaar.

per nups ne keya kiya?

gunji itna upset kiyu hai
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tapoor

its a great update yaar.

per nups ne keya kiya?

gunji itna upset kiyu hai

hi dear nupur has got a plan to test mayank plan and gunjun is tense bc that test will hurt all of them in the end if mayank know the truth 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

first i thought maria you forget that you write this ff,but after alot of time u update and afte rreading the update i love it aaj to two two happy things happen first you update or aaj mjht bhi bauhut mast tha
or ye update bhi maynk is so understanding ...lakin gunjan ke baation se muje darr lag raha hein ke kahin nups kuchwrong na ker de
muje maynk ke baat bhut achi lagi lovely update

hi dear i know i got alot of personal and professional problem jis ki wajah se mein apni ffs ki taraf nahi apayi but mw back ne and i will upadte it soon again 4 u all ,yah mayank is so nice bc he loves nupur and gunjun is tnese bc of nupur letter😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update, loved it.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i loved the update

it was toooooooooooo short.........

but very nice.........

i loved it.......

mayank is so understanding..........

do continue soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar!!!...i was waiting for ur update!!!!....please update soon!!can't wait for nupur to fall in love!!!....pm me😳

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