Aarzii.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..12/03 - Page 67

Hi kashish,Summi iam really very sorry for late comment main thoda busy thi.Part 16 bohot hi accha aur special tha. Special to hona hi tha kyunke 16^th part jo tha.Sujal kashish ko jis tarah se thriller wish kiya bohot hi accha tha magar mujhe lagta hai ke aisa wish to sirf lover😉 hi karsakta hai ek normal dost to aisa wish nahi karta lekin kashish hai ke samajti hi nahin.Aur accha hua sujal ne galti se diary ka naam nahi liya jab kashish ne usse poocha ke use kaise pata ke ye uski favourite chocolate hai.It's so sweet of kashish ke usne sujal ke saath chocolate share kiya.Sujal ne accha kaha ke woh agli baar comedy aur romantic tareeke se wish karega kashish ko to comedy accha laga lekin iam sure agli baar sujal usse romantic❤️ tareeke se hi wish karega aur jaise sujal ne kashish ko kamre tak choda aur haath par kiss kiya ye accha laga.Mujhe boat ka scene aur usme sujal kashish ka convo bohot hi accha laga.Woh market mein fortune teller ka scene bhi accha laga aur woh fortune teller sujal ki hi baat karrahi thi aur jis tarah se us fortune teller ne paise nahi liye aisa woh tabhi karte hai ke jab aap bohot hi khaas insaan ho aur aapki kismat bhi utni hi khaas ho.kashish ke puraani ghar ki yaadein bhi bohot hi acchi lagi.Jis tarah phir se kashish sujal par giri 😉accha tha aur sujal jis tarah se kashish ki bachpan ki yaadein samet raha tha accha laga.Sujal ne jis tarah kashish ke birthday ke liye saraa intezaam kiya bohot hi accha tha aur tum dono ne jis tarah se us jagah ko bayaan kiya bohot hi khobsoorat tha.Jis tarah se kashish ne sujal ko date ke bare mein bataya woh to shocked😲 rehgaya magar mujhe laga ke sujal ke rehte hue kashish ko kisi ghatiya doctor ke saath date par jaane ki zaroorat kyun padi. Ab itna khaas mauka hai to barish to hogi hi aur jis tarah se dono dance kar rahe the bohot hi accha laga.Tum dono ne ye baarish ka scene bohot hi accha likha hai.Mujhe laga barish mein sujal kashish ko itne kareeb se dekhega to woh pehchaan lega ke kashish hi park waali ladki hai. Aur barish mein woh kiss bohot hi special tha to woh amaanat kiss hi hai aur waqay mein bohot hi special amaanat😳hai.To aakhir mein kashish ko samaj aagaya ke sujal hi uski kismat hai magar woh yeh jaan gayi ke woh kisi aur se pyaar karta hai.

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

Mind-blowing part

I really liked the way sujal got kashish to get out of the room poor kashish got really sweet but atleast she got an amazing surprise.I really liked sujal's idea of surprising kashish and im glad sujal easily handle the situation when kashish asked him how he knew about her favourite chocolates if she found out that he read her diary then she would defiantly be angry with him.Kashish is so sweet I really liked the way she shared her chocolates with sujal and the best part was the way u guys potrayed kashish's innocence.sujal is such an amazing person I really liked the way u described sujal's concern towards kashish and also how he always tries to make kashish happy.It was really sweet of sujal to drop kashish to her room because she felt scared going alone.Cant wait 2 see how sujal wishes kashish on her next birthday I hope it is in a romantic way rather than comedy.

The scenes when kashish took sujal to her favourite place were amazingly described I really liked the way u described the sun rising and kashish enjoying her self to the fullest and sujal lost in kashish,the scene were sujal tries making room 4 kashish on the boat was really beautifully potrayed.i really enjoyed the scenes were kashish was remembering her childhood moments and it seems sujal has become part of all those beautiful moments.The scene when kashish takes sujal back to her old house was really nice im glad she found some momentos of her child hood stored in the attic and I really enjoyed the scene were kashish was gone fall down and sujal came on time to support her.The fortune teller was an intresting aspect of the part I really liked the way u described the relationship between the fortune teller and kashish it seemed the fortune teller still remembered kashish after so long.It seems what ever the fortune teller said was true I hope the leaving part does not happen.

The last scene between sujal and kashish was mind blowing I really enjoyed the way u described the romantic part between Sk and sujal is so cute he got kashish a beautiful dress and it seems he was so lost in her when she came down wearing the dress.I really liked the way u showed how sujal planned everything out by bringing kashish to a beautiful place,and theirl dance was amazingly described and finally the kiss between the 2 I hope this does not affect sujal and kashish's relationship cant wait 2 read the next part to see what happens between the to.

Originally posted by: Shagun*

ooooooow its amazing story line. i like most.
amazing touch my heart.

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Great update yaar, sorry again for not commenting for such a long time. Beautifully written guys, the sweet moments b/w Sujal and Kashish were described really well. And the last scene was brilliant, the romantic scene, i curse the stupid thunder for ruining such a perfect romantic moment. lovely update and thanx for the pm.

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome updates

too good

superb

mindblowing

loved the updates

great going

fantastic

plz continue soon