Aarzii.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..12/03 - Page 66

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

This was awesum guys Firstly Sujal gave a wonderful surprise to Kashish on her bday. And I luved their each n every scene. When the lady was saying all these.....I was thinking wat cud be the 'amanat'.....and now when I knw I'm just speechless.....u guys rocked the part. Totally awesum. I'm glad Kashish at least realized that its Sujal who is meant for her.....but she now thinks....he luvs sum1 else....ab Sujal khud nahi janta wo dono ore se Kashish ko hi chahta hai....to main Kashish k bare me kya batau. Btw, I hope Sujal reading her personal diary.....wont create any big problem.

Well, It was just simply amazing.....one of the best parts of this fic....(coz I knw many more r cuming ahead....hehe)....Pls continue soon.

P.S. Thank u guys.....for wishing me on my bday.

hey sumaiya sweetheart thank u soo much 4 ure lovely comments...we r glad u liked this part...yes Sujal did give Kashish a wonderful surprise on her birthday....we r glad u liked all their scenes....yes the amanat part must have confused u all initially and made u think but by the end u found out....thank u dear 4 liking the part...yes Kashish has now realised...nw only Sujal is left to realise....and yes she is under the misconception that he loves somebody else....about him reading her diary...maybe u will get 2 knw later if it causes any issues...soo sweet of u 2 think its one of the best parts of the ff....n we hpe u can say that bout the upcoming parts 2...we will surely cont soon dear n u r most welcome 4 the bday wishes...we hpe u had a gr88 day....keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome updates
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-17

Next morning.......

The crew that had come for the photoshoot is going back to Mumbai today........Sujal comes to the lounge to see everyone waiting for him there.........you can just tell from his face that he had a rough sleepless night........Sujal is really tired as he hasnt been able to sleep.........last nights incident is still fresh in his mind and he doesnt know how he will be able to face kashish.....but he doesnt see Kashish in the lounge with everyone else......so he goes to Ali.....

Sujal: Ali...Kashish kahan hai?

Ali: woh...woh kal raat hi yaha se chali gayi....Mumbai me uska aaj subaah koi zaroori kaam tha to....use jana pada....

Sujal just looks at him and feels guilty...he knew the reason she had left but still he was hoping that she was ok...

Sujal: hmm...theek hai...chale

Ali: haa chalo....sab intezam ho gaya hai....tum apni car me niklo...driver aa chuka hai...main crew ke saath aata hoon..

Sujal: theek hai...main chalta hoon...

The driver takes Sujal's luggage while Sujal follows him to the car........after 5 minutes they drive off........after an hours worth of driving.....Sujal's mind and heart are still fighting on whether to call Kashish or not.......he is really worried about her and he just needs to know once that she is ok..........finally after a lot of thought he decides to call her........the phone keeps ringing but there is no answer............by the ninth time calling her and getting her voicemail....Sujal starts to get really worried.......so he decides to call her house.........the phone rings again.......with ring each Sujal prays that Kashish pick up the phone.......On the other side Kashish was sitting on her bed holding her cellphone in her hand........with dried tears on her cheeks.......she puts her phone down and gets up and walks downstairs to pick up the home phone.......

Kashish: hello....

Sujal closes his eyes...finally he heard her voice since last night...he is so glad that she was fine that he sighs in relief...as his eyes become wet...

Sujal: Kashish...main hoon...thankgod tum theek ho...Kashish tum mera phone kyun nahin utha rahi thi?

Kashish takes a deep brethe and puts the phone down...

Sujal: Kash...hello...hello...

He realises she cut the call...he looks at his phone and dials it again...hoping she will answer again.. Kashish looks at the phone for a second than starts to walk towards her bedroom when her eyes fall on a picture of her and Sujal from Heer's Sagai......She looks at the photo as tears start to run from her eyes again...she looks back at the phone which is continuing to ring...she wipes her tears and walks back upto the phone answering it...

Sujal: hello...Kashish please meri baat to sunno...i'm really sorry...main jaantha hoon ke jo maine kiya woh galat tha par maine yeh jaan booj ke nahin kiya..woh pal hi kuch aisa tha ke...please Kashish...muje maaf kardo..

Kashish: Sujal....jitni tumhari galti hai utni hi meri hai....aur main is bare me jyada baat nahi karna chahti...aur ple...kuch waqt ke liye muje akela chod do...main kuch waqt ke liye akeli rehna chahti hoon....sirf akeli....

Sujal feels bad and guilty for making her feel that way...tears started running from his eyes because once again he became the reason for her pain...

Sujal: Kashish...agar tum kuch waqt akeli rehna chahti ho to main tumhe pareshan nahin karunga...lekin kal ke liye tum khud ko dosh mat do...kal jo hua usme tumhara koi kasoor nahin hai...saari galti meri hai...kyunki main bohat hi bura insaan hoon..sorry once again..

He cuts the call without saying anything further.....Kashish's tears starts to run from her eyes as his words kill all the feelings in her heart...she holds reciever close to her heart...

Kashish: Sujal....bure tum nahi ho....buri hamari kismat hai....tum kabhi bure ho hi nahi sakte...

She continues to cry for sometime..when she hears the door...she puts down the receiver and quickly wipes her tears...its Heer returning from her night duty...Heer sees Kashish and is surprised to see her return early..she goes upto her and hugs her

Heer: di aap agaye..i missed you so much?

Kashish: hmm...bas aaj subaah hi aayi lekin tumhari shayad night duty thi..

Heer: haan di...aaj night duty thi...khair meri chodiye...aap bataiye...how was Ladakh?...aap bohat lucky hain di ke aapko phir jaane ka mauka milgaya...aur aapki birthday kaisi thi?

Kashish: jaisi honi chahiye waisi....aur ab pata nahi...Ladakh jane ka mann nahi karta...bahot badal gaya hai waha sab kuch..

Heer: di...aap aisa kyun kehrahi hain?aap to hamesha se wahan waapis jaana chahti thi

Kashish: jana chahti thi...ab mann nahi kar raha...aur shayad ab kabhi wapas nahi jaungi..

Heer: di aap aisa kyun kehrahi hain..kuch hua kya wahan?

Kashish: kaha na mera mann nahi karta ab waha jane ka....aur aisa kya ho sakta hai jo hona chahiye..

Heer: di aap pareshan lag rahi hain..kuch to hua hai...

Kashish: kaha na ki aisi koi baat nahi....ab itni badi ho gayi ho ki apni Dii se behas karegi.....kaha na kuch nahi hua.....ab tu jake fresh ho ja...main kitchen me lunch banati hoon..

Kashish leaves from there but Heer isn't convinced about what Kashish said but she doesnt ask any further questions and decides to leave it then goes to her room to freshen up.....Kashish goes into kitchen and gets a pot to fill up with water....she turns off the tap and gets some water to wash her face and wipe of her thoughts and tears.. On the other hand, Sujal has stopped crying but he is still cursing himself for what he did....it seems as if everything has finished.. He looks outside from the window seeing her face filled with tears when she looked back at last moment...He closes his eyes tightly...wanting that sad image to disappear from his mind........he wants to see her smiling again...just like the old times.....he couldnt believe how one moment in their life ruined everything.....

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12.30 at night........

Sujal was in his bedroom with Ali.......both of them were drinking beer like the old time........but this time Sujal isnt able to stop himself from drinking............he continued to drink on after the another.......Ali gets suprised at seeing Sujal drink so uncontrolably..........and knows that something is bothering Sujal for him to behave this way..........

Ali: Sujal...sab thik to hai...mera matlab tum to do ya teen se jyada nahi pite....aur aaj to tum ek ke bad ek khali kiye ja rahe ho....

Sujal look at Ali.....completely drunk...

Sujal: woh kya haina Ali...mujse ek bohat badi galti hogayi...mistake...tum jaante ho na mera kya matlab hai..

Ali: kahi tumne.....kahi tumne kisi ladki ke saath kuch galat to nahi kiya na.....Sujal...bolo na...

Sujal: haan kiya maine...ek nahin...do do ladkion ke saath...muje do ladkion se pyar hogaya hai.....

Ali: tum...tum pagal to nahi ho gaye...do ladki se pyaar....kabhi socha hai ki jab un dono ko pata chalega to kya hoga.....ek to woh park wali...aur dusra main galat nahi to Kashish....sahi kaha na....lekin tum park wali se to abhi tak mile nahi...iska matlab tumne....tumne Kashish ke saath....tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho...woh bhi Kashish jo tumhari sabse achchi dost ....

Sujal: jaanta hoon...bohat bura insaan hoon main...muje Kashish ke kareeb nahin aana chahiye tha...par main khud ko rok bhi nahin paaya..aur meri is galti ki wajah se maine apni best friend ko kho diya..

Ali: main janta tha ki yahi hoga kyunki jis tarah se tum uske kareeb jane lage the....ab Kashish se koi baat huyi ki nahi...pata nahi woh tumhare bare me kya soch rahi hogi..

Sujal: maanta hoon ke main uske kareeb jaata gaya..lekin main khud ko nahin rok paaya..bohat koshish ki maine usse door jaane ki lekin har baar mera dil muje uske aur kareeb le aaya...meri usse zyada baat nahin huyi..woh akele rehna chahti hai...main bohat hi bura hoon....

Ali: baat kis had tak ja chuki hai...kyunki tum yeh to samaj rahe ho na ki woh ek ladki hai.....aur Kashish kis tarah ki ladki hai woh hum sab jante hai.....isi liye kahi tum sari had to par nahi kar gaye ki woh isi liye tumhara chehra dekhna chahti nahi...

Sujal: Ali main jaanta hoon ke Kashish ke paas hote main khud pe kaboo nahin kar paata par main itna bhi burra nahin ke main itni girri huyi harkat kar sakta hoon...main uske kareeb zaroor gaya..lekin maine apni haddein paar nahin ki...maine aisa kuch bhi nahin kiya jisse ke Kashish ki izzat pe koi aanch aaye,.main usse shayad ab pyar karta hoon.,aisa karne ka soch bhi nahin sakta

Ali; ab jo gaya woh to ho gaya...ab aage kya socha hai.....use milne jana hai...use yaha bulake baat karni hai...kya karna hoga muje..

Sujal: nahin...is baar nahin Ali...main uska saamna kaise karunga ...main usse pyar karta hoon lekin woh mujse pyar nahin karti...to main kaise jaaun uske paas...main bas yahan se jaana chahta hoon kuch waqt ke liye...taki Kashish ko koi pareshani na ho..

Ali: ek hafte bad is film ki London me premier hai....uske bad tum kuch waqt wahi ruk jana....shayad tumhe ek brake ki zaroorat hai...shayad waqt ke jate yeh mahol thik ho jaye...

Sujal: yeh theek rahega...par main ek hafta intezaar nahin kar sakta...muje jald se jald jaana hai Ali...thak chuka hoon main apne jazbaton se ladte ladte...main pagal hojaunga...

He drops the bottle from his hand and holds his head in his hands...tears flow continuously from his eyes

Ali: thik hai...hum dono kal raat ki flight se hi chale jate hai.....aur tumhara dard main samaj sakta hoon...lekin phir bhi tumne to apna dard mere saath bat liya...lekin Kashish...use main achche se janta hoon...woh kabhi Heer ko nahi batayegi....khud akeli hi sehti rahegi.....khuda use himmat de..

Sujal looks up at Ali...

Sujal: maine aisa kyun kiya Ali...mujse yeh kya hogaya..zindagi bhar jiske ghum baantne ka vaada kiya tha maine...usse hi maine is tarah itni bade dard ko sehne ke liye chod diya..aur dekho na kitna bebas hoon main...uska dard main baant bhi nahin sakta..

Ali: Sujal...pyaar me jab tak dard na ho tab tak woh safal nahi hota...dard hi to pyaar ko aur gehra banata hai...kyunki dard se rishte hamesha ke liye judte hai....yahi dard Kashish ko tumhare pass khich ke layega....intzaar karo Sujal....tumhara pyaar yunhi nahi jayega....lekin Kashish ka pyaar ab dil me hai to tum us Park wali ko apne dil me nahi rakh sakte ....tumhe ab Kashish ke saath wafa karni hai....bhul jao us parkwali ko....

Sujal: shayad tum theek kehrahe ho Ali...ab muje us parkwali ka sapna nahi dekhna chahiye.....muje Kashish ke wafa karni hogi...main usse is tarah akele nahin chod sakta...main uska intezar karunga..usse apna ke rahunga..

Ali: achcha ab yeh baki ki bottle me wapas rakh deta hoon....bahot pii chuke ho tum......aur main bhi chalta hoon..

Sujal: hmmm...theek hai...kal milte hain...bye

Ali: Bye Sujal....apna khayal rakhna....

Ali picks up all the empty bottles as well as the unopened ones from the floor and leaves the room...Sujal gently places his hand on the floor.....getting up from there after supporting himself...he manages to stand up...slowly he walks towards the bed in a drunken state.......suddenly he just falls onto the bed..

Sujal: i'm sorry Kashish...i'm sorry..

He falls asleep on the bed....on the other side Kashish opens her eyes as soon as Sujal falls on the bed....she is sitting at the window starring at the moon....her heartbeats start to increase as she is feeling restless....she stands up while holding the curtain in her hand....

Kashish: Sujal.....muje pata hai main aaj tumhare pass nahi...lekin ple apna khayal rakhna...mere liye hi sahi...jise tum apna dost mante ho....

Sujal is continuously taking Kashish's name in his sleep...he is still not able to forget what happened...finally he knows that he is in love as he blurted it out in his sleep,.

Sujal: i love you Kashish

Kashish closes her eyes as she feels a unknown feeling in her heart.....She can still see the images of the previous night flashing in her mind...she isnt able to forget them.....tears start to flowing from her eyes as she knows she will never be able to hold onto the person who is destined for her...because he loves someone else...the night passes with the two suffering deeply in their own misery.........

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Next morning...

Sujal arrives at SG studio by 8am because he knows that Kashish comes by that time so he wants to try and speak to her...he waits for 15 minutes but she still didn't show up so he goes to his cabin thinking she won't come today......at 8.45 Kashish comes to the studios after gathering herself...knowing that she has to do her professional life...and whether she admits it or not...she wanted to see him once more...she walks to her cabin and sits down...Sujal is unaware that she is here...Kashish starts to work when she remembers she has to get the photos approved from Sujal before sending them to the magazines...she doesnt know what to do and how can she face him...

Kashish: zindagi itne imtehaan legi aisa kabhi socha hi nahi tha....main aaj is kadar is mod pe hoon jaha pe mera dost...mera boss...mera pyaar sab ek hi insaan hai..

She has to be strong and face this situation though...because she has to fulfil her duties...so she picks up the file and leaves for his cabin...she reaches his cabin and stands outside...she is about to knock when she holds her hand back for a moment...she closes her eyes and just knocks...Sujal who is standing near the window while looking out of it tells the person to come in without looking at who is at the door......

Sujal: come in..

Kashish takes a deep breath and opens the door......she heard his voice after 2 days....her eyes are lowered as she steps into his office.....Sujal who was looking out of the window,turned around as he heard her footsteps...by now he can recognize and feel her presence whenever she is close to him...he feels so relieved at seeing her........its been two days since he saw her and his eyes are yearning to catch a glimpse of her...he closes his eyes for a moment.....trying to capture her image in his mind...because he doesnt know if he will get to see her again before he leaves...........

Sujal: Kashish...tum..

Kashish: woh....woh....yeh photos drop karne aayi thi....inhe dekh ke finalize karke mere cabin main bhej dena...sham ko editing karke kal printing me bhejna hai..

She put the photos on the desk and is about to go when she stops at hearing his voice...

Sujal: Kashish...muje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Kashish: lekin muje bahot kam hai..

Sujal: Kashish please...tum ek baar muje bolne ka mauka to do..

Kashish: Sujal..muje tumse koi baat nahi karni....

Sujal: lekin muje tumse baat karni hai Kashish...please yahan betho..

Kashish: main ja rahi hoon.......

Kashish starts to walk away......Sujal walk towards her in frustration and holds her hand in his and pulls her towards him....

Sujal: jab tak tum meri baat nahin sun leti main tumhe nahin jaane dunga..

Kashish: Sujal...mera haath chodo...chodo mera haath...muje jana hai...

Sujal: nahin chodunga...jab tak tum meri baat nahin sunti,main tumhara haath nahin chodunga...

Kashish: Sujal jane do muje....chodo mera haath...muje dard ho raha hai..

Sujal: maine to hamesha hi tumhe dard diya hai...lekin ab nahin...main tumse maafi maangna chahta hoon Kashish...please hosake to muje maaf kardena...ab main tumhe aur pareshan nahin karunga...jaa raha hoon main yahan se...taki tumhe aur pareshani na uthani pade

He go of her hand and moves back

Kashish: ja rahe ho tum....achcha hai ki tum ja hi rahe ho...yahi hamare liye achcha hai..

Sujal: mere liye acha hai ke nahin woh main nahin jaanta...lekin agar tum is baat se khush ho to mujse zyada khush aur koi bhi nahin hai...yakeen maano Kashish...maine kabhi bhi tumhe takleef nahin deni chahi..par anjaane me maine hi tumhe dard de diye...hosake to meri is bhool ko maaf kardena..

Kashish: Sujal...maine pehle bhi kaha na ki is galti ke liye hum dono hi jimedar hai...isi liye ab hum ek dusre se mafi na mange to hi achcha hai....achcha ab main chalti hoon....Good Luck for premier....Good ....Good Bye Sujal...

Sujal: bye Kashish...hosake to mere liye apna khayal rakhna...shayad ab yeh baat kehne ka haq main kho chuka hoon..par phir bhi main yeh kehne se khud ko rok nahin paaya...

Kashish: tum bhi apna khayal rakhna aur ho sake to mere liye hi sahi apne aap ko sambhalna...kyunki aaj bhi main tumhe is tarah nahi dekh sakti.....

Kashish looks at him for a moment and turns around walking towards the door..

Sujal: Kashish...

She is about to open the door but stops and stand there with her hand on the knob...

Kashish: hmm..

Sujal turns away from her...trying to hide his tears from her...

Sujal: i...i...i will miss you...

He closes his eyes tightly and clenches his fists to stop his emotions from overflowing...

Kashish: me too......

Kashish closes her eyes and walks out while holding tears in her eyes........Sujal turns around as the door closes behind him...he falls to the ground completely shattered...he felt as if his life has fallen apart........he sits holding onto the chair for support.....Kashish ran to her office and closes the door behind her....she sits down on her chair while putting her head on table crying.......she is also shattered........cause she never thought she will have to face this situation...she doesnt know when she will get a chance to see him now...as he is leaving and she cant do anything to stop him...she cries bitterly thinking how much her life has changed in 2 days...on the other hand Sujal is still on the ground holding onto a chair...as tears flow from his eyes...both cannot control the flow of their emotions.....so they let them out...

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5.30 in the evening.....

Most of the staff of the studio has already left........only a few people remain......Sujal just finished talking to the travel agent asking for the confirmation of his tickets for his flight to London.......the agents tells him that he will fax it right now.....Sujal thanks them and cuts the call...on the other hand Kashish is the fax room talking to someone on the phone......she is waiting for a fax from the printing office but the fax machine keeps getting jammed which is starting to irritate her...

Kashish: dekhiye...main samaj sakti hoon ki aapne already 4 bar try kar chuke hai...lekin aap yeh nahi samaj rahe hai ki mere liye yeh orders milne bahot zaroori hai muje editing pe kaam karna hai...ple ek bar try kariye...

The man on the phone tells her that will try once again and if it doesnt work this time then it not his fault.......because he has been sending it over and over again but the fax machine keeps getting jammed.......Kashish is now getting mad so she bangs the fax machine in frustration...

Kashish: dekhiye jab tak fax muje nahi milta aap koshish karni nahi chodenge...samje aap....ab dubara bhejiye..

Sujal opens the door of the fax room as he needs to pick up his fax...he stands there at the door as he sees Kashish standing there..he quickly thanks god that he got the chance to see her once again before leaving.......he notices she is mad.......the guy on the phone tries one final time seeing that Kashish is angry....but again the fax machine gets jammed...... Sujal sees Kashish getting frustrated as the paper is jammed again...Sujal looks at her and walks in as the door closes behind him...

Sujal: Kashish...kya baat hai?...tum itni pareshaan kyun ho?

Kashish: kuch nahi woh is fax ki waje se mera sara kaam ruka hua hai...

Sujal: ek second main dekhta hoon...

Sujal walks towards the fax machine and looks at it..he opens it up from the side where he sees a lot of paper jammed...he tries to pull them out but he has no luck.......the papers were stuck badly in the machine...

Kashish: Sujal...thik se karo....use apni aur khicho..

Sujal: Kashish khinch to raha hoon...lekin yahan itna paper jamma hua hai ke yeh poori tarah se phas chuka hai...

Kashish: tumse kuch nahi hoga....ruko main madad karti hoon..

Sujal: Kashish rehne do...main technician ko phone karta hoon..tum thodi dair wait karlo..

Kashish: muje yeh fax abhi ke abhi chahiye..

Sujal: Kashish..miljayega...have a little patience..main koshish kar raha hoon aur abhi technician ko phone kardunga nahin hua to...

Sujal continues to try and pull the paper out but it isnt moving.......Kashish looks at him in frustation......and she comes and stands next to him while pulling the paper..

Sujal: Kashish kya kar rahi ho..peeche hatto...chot lag jaayegi tumhe...

Kashish: kuch nahi hoga...abhi ho jayega..

Sujal: Kashish zidd mat karo...bohat zor se phas chuka hai yeh paper...hatto main dekhta hoon...

Kashish: main piche nahi hatnewali...kisi bhi keemat pe...muje yeh fax xhahiye...

Sujal: Kashish...tum...

She manages to hold one of the paper which is stuck, tearing half of it in the process...she lost her balance and is about to fall when she grabs hold of Sujal's shirt for support and ends up pulling him along with her accidentally as she fell to the ground with Sujal on top of her...her eyes are closed and she is breathing heavily due to the fall....Sujal moves back when her hair gets stuck on his shirt button..Her hair gets pulled as he moves back,forcing him to move back down towards her...he moved his gaze,not looking into her eyes,as he cant risk loosing control once again...

Sujal: sorry...woh..main nikaal deta hoon..

He moves his gaze to his shirt button,trying to take out her hair..

Kashish: its ok main karti hoon...tumse nahi hoga....

She moves her hand landing hers hands on his..He looks into her eyes because he not able to stop himself any longer the moment he feels her hand on his...after coming back to reality..he moves his hand down letting her take her hair out...she tries to take it out while he keeps staring at her.........she looks at him but this time she controls her heart as much as she can....she closed her eyes and pulls her hair which are stuck on his button.....she feels lot of pain but its nothing compared to what she has been going through.....she opens her eyes and tries to push him...but he is so lost in her that he doesnt realise that she is pushing him........finally he realises she has taken her hair out..he looks down and moves back getting up..she is still on the floor...he gently places his hand out for her to hold so she can get up..she looks at his hand and holds it while getting up....

Sujal: tum theek ho na...tumhe chot to nahin laggi?

Kashish: nahi main thik hoon....

Kashish looks at him and again she is lost into his eyes....there is fear inside her which doesnt let her to go from there.......when all of a sudden they hear a fax coming out...They both look towards the fax machine at the same time...they look at each other and walk to the fax machine...Sujal picks up the fax and sees its for Kashish...he takes it and hands it to her...

Sujal: lagta hai fax machine theek hogayi...yeh raha tumhara fax..

Kashish takes it from his hand...

Kashish: thanks....

She turns around and starts to take steps towards the door when she looks back...

Kashish: have a safe journey ....

She looks down and opens the door and leaves....Sujal watches her go and gets lost in thoughts about the past moment...he feels good that atleast he got to see her again...to feel her touch and her presence in his arms...he is brought back to reality by a second fax.......it is the ticket confirmation he come for...he picks it up then leaves for his cabin...

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9.45 at night.....

Sujal and Ali are driving to the airport...Sujal is lost in his own world whilst Ali is checking the passports and tickets and sees that the ticket confirmation is missing...

Ali: Sujal...ticket confirmation kahan hai?muje mil nahin raha..

Sujal: hmm...kuch kaha tumne kya...

Ali: Sujal!kahan khoye huye ho...main ticket confirmation ka puch raha hoon...kaha rakha hai woh?

Sujal: oh...woh...woh main SG Studio apne cabin me hi bhul aaya...

Ali hits his hand on his head...

Ali: lo...ek aur musibat...Sujal ek ghante me flight hai aur tum ho ke...ab wahan waapis jaana padega...driver studio ki taraf gadi ko le jaao...

The driver turns the car and starts to drive back to the studio........after 15 mins they reach the studio.....Sujal tells Ali to wait for him and he will go and get the fax......he goes inside the studio and straight to his cabin and opens his drawer and gets out the fax...he picks it up and leaves his cabin...he is rushing out when he suddenly comes to a halt......his whole body just freezes on spot at the words that he heard and the voice thats singing them.......he couldnt believe that it is the same song and the same mesmerising voice he heard that day in the park...he follows the voice trying to figure out who his mystery lady is.......the voice takes him towards the door which he closed in his heart forever....it is door of Kashish's cabin...He just looks at the door of her cabin for a moment...thinking that everything is just an illusion...it had to be...how could this be true...he proceeds to the cabin door as he notices the light is on and the door is slightly open...he moves near the door and looks through the door...his eyes grow wide in shock as he sees Kashish before him...singing the same song in the same sweet voice that he heard in the park......he closes his eyes in frustration as he cant believe how they can be the same.....he opens his eyes to make sure it is Kashish who is singing the same song.....his mind and his heart cant believe what they are listening..But it is the truth that he is seeing before him..it is all real and not an illusion..Sujal can not believe the game that his destiny is playing with him...he has millions of questions running through his head which he wants answers for.. when all of a sudden his cell phone starts to vibrant when he looks down and sees its Ali's message for him to come out in hurry...as they need to rush to the airport..Sujal looks at towards the phone then back at Kashish...he wants to go to her...and confront her and ask her about all this...he wants answers to his questions...but there is no time...he has to leave...he looks at her one last time...capturing her image in his mind...and her voice in his heart..He leaves from there with a smile on his face and unconditional love for Kashish in his heart..... He is feeling so relieved...finally the confusion he has been living in is finally solved...the guilty feeling of being in love with two women has gone...because they are both one person..he can now love her whole heartedly...his love will just be for her.......He walked towards his car where Ali is waiting for him...sujal passes him the letter and sits down ......he didnt say anything because he is still in surprise that how can his life can be..Ali is in too much of a rush to notice anything...so the driver rushes to the airport...After 20 mins they reach the airport as the last minute call to board the flight is being called.....Ali rushes in clearing the check in and luggage....they processes to security after they took their seats in the plane..........Ali who is sitting beside Sujal watches him as he reaches out for his bag and opens it...he takes out a piece of paper and looks at it whilst reading it.. Ali looks at him but doesnt pay attention....he closed his eyes while getting some sleep....on other side Sujal is holding the paheli that is written by Kashish in her diary....

Aarzii Paheli

Paheli hoon main ek ulji huyi Kashish kii

(Sujal realises its a part of Kashish that noone knows because she kept it a secret)

Phir bhi nazane kyun sulji hoon main khud sii

(He knows that only she knows her two personalities and lives no one else)

Jannat ke chaand pe bethi main ek

(He can visualise her sitting on the swing under the open air while it rains on her)

Pehne safed moti ki bani mala lal dhage me

(the clothes that she wears- red and white-now he knows why they are her favorite colors)

Chute hai kadam jannat zameen kee

(He remembers how she swing in the open air...her feet hitting the ground every time she comes down...he can still hear the sound of her anklet.....he takes it out of his pocket and looks at it then gently moves forward and kisses it)

Tutte hai taare chuke jism ko mere

(He remembered how the rain was falling on her body.....it seems as though the rain felt blessed each time it got the opportunity to touch her)

Aash laga bethi hoon main ek farishte kii

(He knows that she is waiting for her love and is hoping to meet him soon)

Tod dega dhaga jo bana kachcha saa

(He remembers how they kissed the other night...how she responded back...hope starts to live in his heart that she loves him too)

Rishta pehenake apne pyaar kaa

(He feels as though she is waiting for him and he decided to make her his forever when he return)

Sang le chala apne ek chote se aashiyane

(He promises to love her and to be with her forever...he is not going to lose her this time)

Ban jaungi sirf uski saat janam tak

(He knows that she will never leave his side...and will be there with him always...)

Ehsaas hoga is pal ka tere aane se

(He knew that she already know that he would never leave her side...he gets that feeling everytime he looks into her eyes)

Aarzii si mulaqat banegi janmo ki dori

(he can still visualise the moment they looked in each others eyes for the first time in the park...he never knew that one accidental meeting would turn into an eternal love....)

Vaada karungi beimtihaan mohabbat kaa

(He knows she is the only one who can fill the emptiness of his life with her unconditional love)

Sujal looks at the paper in his hand...finally he solved this puzzle...now he knows the meaning behind her words...and now there are no doubts in his mind that Kashish is the same girl he saw in the park...and he loves her only her...he is so happy that he shakes Ali out of his sleep...

Sujal: Ali!...Ali jaldi utho...

Ali wakes up with a jerk as he hears his name ...

Ali: kya hai SG...sone dona.....waise bhi London jake sone ka waqt nahi milega..

Sujal: meri itni badi confusion solve hogayi..aur tumhe sone ki padi hai..Ali tum jaante nahin aaj main kitna khush hoon

Ali: kyun.....Kashish ne haa kar di tumse....ki kahi tumhe plane me woh parkwali mil gayi....kahi teesri airhostess hi nahi pasand aa gayi tumhe...

Sujal: don't worry...woh haan bhi kardegi aur muje mil bhi jayegi...ab main usse kabhi bhi khud se dur nahin jaane dunga..

Ali: kya bol rahe ho.......hua kya Sujal......kya Kashish ab tumse naraz nahi ya kahi woh tumse pyaar...

Sujal: Ali...yeh dekho...yeh paheli Kashish ne likhi hai...tumhe khud samaj ajayega...

Sujal shows Ali the paper...Ali reads it but looks at Sujal confused because he doesnt understand it..

Ali: ab isse kya sabit hota hai....isme yeh to nahi likha ki woh tumse pyaar karti hai....aur nahi yeh ki tum usse pyaar karte ho....ab saaf saaf bataoge ki kya hua warna main sone ja raha hoon..

Sujal: arre Ali...tum samaj hi nahin rahe ho...Ali tum yeh to jaante ho na ke mere dil me Kashish aur us park waali ladki ke liye feelings thi...lekin aaj mere saamne jo sachayi aayi hai...usse shayad tum bhi nahin maanoge...tum jaante ho...Kashish aur woh park waali ladki...woh dono ek hi hai..

Ali: kya....dono ek....nahi Sujal tumhe koi galatfemi hogi...woh ek kaise ho sakti hai.....muje to laga Kashish tumse sab baatein share karti hai to....Sujal muje lagta hai tumhe galatfemi huyi hai..

Sujal: aisa ho hi nahin sakta...ab to shaq karne jaisa kuch raha hi nahin...tum jaante ho...abhi jab main studio gaya tha to Kashish wahin pe thi...woh wahin gaana ga rahi thi jo us din woh park me ga rahi thi...uski awaaz main woh kashish aaj bhi maine mehsoos ki thi...jaise maine us din ki thi...aur phir yeh Kashish ki likhi huyi Paheli...isme saaf zaahir horaha hai ke Kashish hi woh ladki hai...bilkul issi andaaz me maine Kashish ko us din paaya tha...woh dono ek hi hain Ali...muje do ladkion se nahin...balke Kashish ki dono pehchaan se pyar hua hai...bohat pyar...

Ali: aaj main bahot khush hoon Sujal ki aakhir kar tumhari mohabbat ko khuda ne manzil de di...main janta tha ki meri dua yuh khali haath nahi jayegi....ab mere bhai dair mat kar aur hosake to jald hi use hamesha ke liye apna le...use teri aur tere pyaar ki zaroorat hai...aur tuje....tuje teri tanhaai zindagi ko sambhalne wali ki..

Sujal: jaanta hoon Ali...ab main aur dair nahin karna chahta...ek baar yeh premier hojaye to main agle din hi waapis aana chahta hoon...ab main Kashish se aur dur nahin rehsakta...muje uski zaroorat hai...bohat pyar karta hoon main usse...bas ek baar main yeh jaana chahta hoon ke uske dil me kya hai mere liye...ek baar woh muje haan kehde...phir main zindagi bhar uska saath nibhaunga..

Ali: Sujal....uski juban kuch bhi kahe...lekin maine uski aankhoin me tumhare liye pyaar dekha hai...woh bhi besumar...aur main kabhi insaan ki aankhie joothi nahi padhta.....woh bahot pyaar karti hai tumse..

Sujal: mera dil yeh mehsoos karsakta hai Ali...maine bhi uski aankhon me apne liye pyar dekha hai...lekin main ek baar usse pooch ke hi rahunga..main uske mun se sunna chahta hoon...ek baar hum waapis laut aaenge,tab main uske dil ki baat jaane ki koshish karunga...par muje mere pyar par poora bharosa hai...shayad woh haan karde...Ali uske pyar ki khatir to main apni pehchaan bhi badalne ko taiyaar hoon...kyunki woh hai to zindagi hai...woh nahin to kuch bhi nahin..

Ali: Sujal....main dekh sakta hoon ki tum Family life bahot jald shuru karnewale ho...Good Luck buddy...for your new life..

Sujal smiles at him..

Sujal: thanks Ali..pata nahin tum nahin hote to mera kya hota...thanks for always being there...i just hope tumhari kahi huyi baat sahi hojaye...khair maine tumhe jaga diya uske liye sorry...ab tum so jao..

Ali: so jau...itni achchi khabar di hai tumne...mera chota bhai ...pyaar karta hai...yeh to bahot badi baat hai...i just wish ki hum log Mumbai hote to main ek bahot hi shandar party deta....khiar ab London jake hi..

Sujal: nahin...hum Mumbai aake hi karenge...jab muje mera pyar miljayega to...

Ali: jaisa tum kaho....ab main bhi so jata hoon aur tum bhi so jao..

Sujal: abhi abhi to jaaga hoon dost...muje aaj neend nahin aayegi...tum so jao...

Ali: achcha baba jaisa tum kaho.

Sujal smiles at him whilst Ali smiles back at him...then he closes his eyes and goes to sleep...Sujal is wide awake...thinking about Kashish...he loves her so much and is waiting for the day she says the same to him.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey….

Wow…ek aur dhamakedar part…..finally…….sach sujal ko pata chale he gaya…….finally…..you wont believe how happy I am that they can finally be together…..jab Sujal ko pata chala ke Kashish Mumbai pehle se he ja chuki hai…..kitna dard howa hoga use……aur sirf dard he kyun use to kitna guilty feel howa hoga……….aur usne kitna try kiya Kashish ko phone karne ka……..lekin Kashish bhi na…….she is hurting a lot also……the fact that she found her love but thinks that he loves someone else and on top of that losing a friend like Sujal….that must be a lot of pain………finally they did talk even if it was for a little while………and heer of course notices how much hurt kashish was in……..if I was her sister I would have bugged her like crazy until I got to the end of the problem but heer understands that kashish needs her space and lets go of questioning her…….

Finally they meet face to face after the kiss…wow …..how painful…..and it hurt more when u lose more than one thing…..a love…a friend…a soulmate…..I feel soo bad….but everything will have to work out……..after all sujal knows that park girl and kashish is the same......the fax scene is amazing….a nice romantic break from the emotional tension……….from kth we have the mouse…then lift…then chair…now we have fax machine…….ab aur kya baaki hai office maine….lol……….

Also the aarzi pehlie was solved…….he understood what kashish wrote……..I wouldn't have guessed that but the explanation and the peheli was perfectly written……

Geez…used perfectly too many times…but it is the truth the part was prefect and amazing…..thnks for the parts sweeties……best of luck for the future parts……..ple bring sujal back soon…..need the love confession soon…….

Luv

Mira

p.s –this time short hai……..lekin next time might be big….lol….just kidding……

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Posted: 15 years ago
grt prt dear
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was really good
contd sooon
loved it
finally sujal has found his love
waiting to see what happens next
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part !
I hope the next part has the confession !
Plzz fast forward the story to sujal coming back to India !
I think sujal should have barged into the room right then !
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow very lovely finally he got to know who the parkwaali gal is...............sujal n kashish both r feeling bad n upset but their own thoughts r making them to stay away................n not confiding to each other.................sujal is going to london n hope kashish now feels more than usual for him......................both love each other but dont wanna confess nor accept it.................but thank god sujal now ceme to know abt kashish being the park gal.................now he will make every step very strongly to make kashish speak out.....................this is one part i was waiting from the beginning finally its out..................am happy with it but sujal at this moment had to go to london that too for a week........ok he has time to think abt planning how to make kashish his..................forever............the drinking scene was nice..............ali has always been a support for sujal n he understands both sujal n kashish very well..................oh god kashish is so very impatient to take get the fax n this time also they both fell together but in a different way this time sujal was on top n kashish below him n sujal this time somehow controlled his feelings..............but the pain both r undergoing is unbearable.................hope everything turns out fine sooner..............cont soon dears..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
mujhe sirf yeh yaad aara haai is part ke lie

Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Milke bhi hum na mile Tum se na jaane kyun meelon ke hai faasle
Tum se na jaane kyun anjaane hai silsale
Tum se na jaane kyun sapne hai
Palkon tale tum se na jaane kyun
Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na



Aaa ..
Nigahon mein dekho meri jo hai bas gaya
Woh hai milta tumse hubahu
Ooo jaane teri aankhein thi ya baatein ki waja
Huea tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi Tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi Apne nahi aise hain
Humko gile tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle Tum se na jaane kyun
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na


Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na .. aaa tu jaane na ..
Khayalon mein lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya
Bola kuch na tere samne
Ooo Huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar ke
Dekho tum na mere hi bane
Afsos hota hai dil bhi yeh rota hai
Sapne sanjota hai Pagla hua soche yeh
Hum the mile tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle Tum se na jaane kyun
Anjaane hai silsale
Tum se na jaane kyun sapne hai
Palkon tale tum se na jaane kyun
Kaise btaayein kyun tujhko chahe yaara btaa na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baagi aankhein tujhe samjhaye
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na

EDIT: ab mujhe kuch kehnaa hai dhyaan se suniye AHEM AHEEM *clears throat to get attention*

Once agai Kashish and summi di it's da best emotional part tht I have read till date .Sujal was leaving n SK were crying hard. Then I just loved Ali and sujal's little chat andthen sujal got the meaning of Kashish's paheli..... ye hona hi tha....phir bhi....it was gud to Imagine
finally confusion clear ho gaya ki Kashish hi parkwaali ladki hai
i also hope Sujal ko uski mahobbat mil jaaye.. aap log aisa karo ge naa mere lie please

PLZZZZ Sujal ko Confess karao naaaa I am getting Desparate for a confession waali part
Edited by ranbir_lekha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
U knw wat guys.....u r the best. Pehle pehle mujhe bahut bura lag raha tha.....Sujal was leaving n SK were crying hard. Then Sujal n Ali's touchy convo....everything was gloomy. But achanak se jaise saare badal hat gaye.....aur suraj nikal aya....hehe. Sujal heard Kashish sing that samesong....n now he realizes he loves only one girl immensely...n thats his Kashish....thats simply gr8. I knw ab Sujal apne pyar k liye kuch bhi karega....but I hope everything remains ok until he returns....koi problem na ho jaye.

And I luved the way Sujal got the meaning of Kashish's paheli.....waise to ye hona hi tha....phir bhi....it was gud to c...I mean read....hehe. Pls continue soon.


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