I Hate You For Loving Me RN FF ch15pg64 - Page 13

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sur,

Hi Guglu1

Beautiful update. It was nice to see Devraj struggling with his emotions. His subconcious mind registered the fact what his concious mind was trying to deny. He knew he was being caught up in a maze- the maze of Love. Naina too was confused. Her realisation is also in progress. She too is fighting a battle with herself just like Devraj. You described it very well. yeah..naina is confusing him alot....

I found Karan's frustration highly amusing. Dangerous Beauty is an apt title for Naina. But he is no match for her. 😆 😆 😆lol its hard not 2 pity d guy

Devraj had gone to ask her about the attack and ended up dressing her wound. Naina had some emotions in her eyes as he dressed her wound. some progress finally...

Devraj killed Barry and for the first time he is perhaps a little frightened instead of amused. The picture of the bleeding arm kept appearing in front of his eyes. He is fighting a losing battle. Actually I should say both Naina and Devraj are fighting a losing battle.lol they might be losing it...but neither of them belives in giving in...

Great update.thanku! Keep updating soon. And please bear with me if I'm a little late with my comments.its alright!im happy dat u commented! thnx a bunch!

Love

Guglu

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part

Originally posted by: esha143

hi sur, hi esha
i just read ur fic now and it is 'fantabulous'👏thanku so much!
our RAJ seems to fit perfectly in whatever character created for him,be it DEVRAJ or RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT.he is simply marvolous as DEVRAJ here😛😛😛and obviously NAINA is always NAINA,wherever she is😉this is exactly the opp. shade of any other fic but nonethless not less than anyother fic.now i'll be looking eagerly 4 ur next UD.plz make it soooooon. yeah...dey make a gr8 pair! i wil try 2 ud asap thanku so much fr commenting

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Sur sweety.......Sur Sweety??? ye kya ho raha hai? Mai to first line me hi gaaliya expect kar rahi thi....

Finally finally u updated this fic......sirf is update ko padhke hi nahi is fic update hua ' is baat se hi hum dhanay hogaye 😆 😆 😆..... bhala ho priya ka aur uski wo beautiful note ka jis ki wajah se tum underground se bahar nikli aur jhat se update bhi ki.......thanxxxxxxxx priya 😃thanku thanku...lol..yaar kaha na sorry fr d delay...hum hindustani hai..yaha is statement se sab galtiya maaf ho jati hai...aur priya k to mai naam se darne lagi hu!

Now about the update......its awesome as always 👏 👏 👏 glad u liked it 👏.... superb.......fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is confused about rajs behaviour n raj is confused about his feelings aur main ye baat soch soch ke confused hun .....is fic ki writer kab is fic ki suspense clear karegi 😕 😕hehe ab to mai bhi confuse ho gai hu k agey kya karu...

naina ki chot raj pe kya asar dikhayee.....raj .....a ruthless don kya se kya bangaya ....i think he knows about his true feelings towards naina.....but he thinks pyaar word uske dictionary mein nahi hain....he is so confused.....wo jitna bhi confused ho last night .......but in the morning .... the dangerous raj is back .....aur usko dekhthe hi john is so scared 😆 😆lol..usko dekh k sab darr jate hai aur tum hass rahi ho???

the thing i liked the most (ofcourse after raj nainas bandage scene) in this part.....wo hain naina ka expressions......pehli baar naina ka cold look ke alawa aur bhi emotions reveal hua hain is update mein... usne softly smile bhi ki..... lekin uska haal bhi kuch tikh nahi lag rahi hain.....there is a fighting going on between her heart n mind......shayad wo ye soch rahi hogi .......ki jo aadmi uski itna parwa kartha hain she is plotting against him.....u wrote that part so beautifully yeah maybe

The idea of phone tapping was amazing......after all idea kis ka hain........hamare raj ka .....to wo superb hogi na.... karan ko is baar bhi naina ke against koi clue nahi mila.......naina is too smart... Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki naina is some how involved in the attack........naina s nick name suits her perfectly arre raj hai to smart to hoga hi na...ab dekhna ye hai k raj zyada smart hai ya naina ya fir karan....

Its good raj went with his professional instincts n he decided to talk with naina........but naina ki bleeding arm dekh the hi wo sab bhulgaya n itna pooch taach nahi ki us incident ke bare mein..........the dressing scene was so nice n cute i thought ek dhanka scene daal deti hu

Us driver ko maar diya raj ne...........aur jab karan ne naina se kaha thats what we do with traitors ...........to naina had a stange expression...............wonder what she is thinking????? kya pata...dimag thoda zyada hai na usme

good job sur .....the whole ud is so nice thnx again dear

Sur is baar late update ke liye maaf kiya......... but remember next ud tum agar jaldi nahi ki to pata hain main tumhari saath kya karnewali hun............. haaaaaaa........... abhi main kuch tikh se socha nahi.......kuch accha se sochke bataungi......ohk..... ohh..im dead scared isliye ud ek do din me kar dungi..its ready....

main tuje kaise samjaun yaar........i am dying to know this ....... I hate u for loving me.......ye kis ne kis ko kaha i understand dear..even i cant stand unsolved mysteries

thanx so much fr commenting yogitha

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

fab one......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanku dear

mujhe bandage scene sab se jyada achha laga...!!! LRL me bhi aisa hi scene tha...par yahan thoda ulta hai matlab Raj ki condition me naina hai...aur thoda khaash bhi hai yeh ...!!! kyoun ki us scene me toh RN k bich thoda DIMAGLESS talk hua tha...aur dono bass ek dushre ko dekh kar hi pet bhar rahe the...!!! par yeh toh tum ne kamal hi kar diya...!!! RN k bich voh scene....chooooooooooo chwwwweeeeettttt tha....!!! chalo kam se kam dono ek dushre k bare me soch toh rahe hain...bhale hi voh ander se kitne bhi confused kyoun na ho...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉u know priya i missed dat very scene in d serial...i felt soo angry....ajtak vo scene nahi dekha....din me 3 baaar lrl dekhti thi mai..aur tab bhi miss kar dia!

sach kahun toh ...main Naina k upar pura trust nahi kar pa rahi hun...!!! yaar kuch toh hai...jis ki wajah se mujhe us k kaam thoda suspicious lagta hai...!!! 😕 😕 😕 nyways...voh tum thode hi na batayogi...us k liye toh sayad next year ka wait karna padega...jab tum ud post karogi...!!!😆 😆 😆😆 😆 😆yaar ab tum sab milke uske piche pad gaye ho! achi bhali ladki hai..aur mera ud nxt year se pehle ho jayega ok...aur mai to kuch nhi bataungi...tum apne dimag ka tel nikalo! lol

pata nahi kab...in dono ko is baat ka ehsaas hoga ki yeh dono ek dushre k liye kuch khash feel karne lage hain...!!! hoga hoga zarur hoga naina pahli baar apne tough attitude se bahar nikli...sweetly smile bhi kiya...aur Raj k bare me socha bhi...!!! hehe finally pata hai mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki sayad naina ko kisi ne HIRE kiya hai...!!! 😕??? wellll....ulta dimag...hai...isiliye ulta soch rahi hun...nyways....tum toh is suspense ko clear kar hi dogi na...10/12 saal me...!!!!maybe...13 saal me i think ab tumhare ud karne ki jo speed hai...us k liye kah rahi hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!! aur tum itna chota ud kyoun deti ho...??? thoda long post karo na...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃arre meri typning hi itni slow hai itna sa ud type karne me bhi ghante lag jate hai

yeh devraj naam ka banda toh bada hi chalak nikla...!!! sab ka phone tapp kar raha hai...aur kisi ko pata hi nahi hai....wow...!!!aise hi thodi na abtak zinda hai!par karan ne naina k liye ek perfect naam socha rakha hai...in fact naina k kaam se yeh naam suit bhi karta hai...!!! par bicharea karan is baar bhi fail ho gaya...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛poor guy

raj ne us driver ko maar diya...achha kiya...!!! vaise bhi zinda rah kar koun sa teer maar leta...achha hua jo raj ne use goli maar di....!!! yeah vo traitors ka yahi haal karta hai! lekin yaar...yeh Raj k dil me bhi naina k liye thoda sa shaq toh hai hi...!!! by d way last me naina ka strange expression...us driver k death k bare me sun kar ...mujhe naina k liye shaq ko aur bhi badh raha hai...!!! abhi nxt ud me sab pata chalega..dont worry

aur main apne gusse par kaboo rakhti hun...tab tak tum next ud post kar do...varna...sach me kuch achha nahi hoga...!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡dekho priya agar tum aise mujhe darati rahogi, to mere hath kaampne lagenge aur fir mai type kaise karungi???

aur haan is baar jaldi ud karna...kyoun ki is baar main dhamki nahi denewali...balki tumhare ghar par main sidha MUGAMBOO ko bhejnewali hun...!!! phir tum dono shaanti se baith kar ud kab karna hai...tai kar lena...okkkkk!!!😆 😆 😆😆 😆 😆u know mujhe mugmaboo kafi funny lagta hai..dunno why..but still i undrstand ur intention well...ud jaldi hoga dont worry

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part Sur...!!!

Naina's bleeding arm has stirred something in Devraj's mind...!!! After knowing about the barriers that are in between even their thoughts of loving each other, I can't wait to see how you give a shape to their relationship.

Continue soon.!!!

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Hiii

Nice update..Devraj is such a cold blooded murderer..He killed that driver as if u was killing some insect..

He is very dangerousyeah..hes not our sweet raj aftr all!

Karan is always suspecting Naina but den she is very mysterious..Even Devraj was doubting her.. Well i dont think its easy fr him 2 trust people

I dont think Naina is very innocent... lol nobody does

But he is very concerned towards her..I think he has fallen for her.. hehe ab ye to hona hi tha na

Update soon ill try

Bye bye tc!

Can u pm me please..add me in yr buddy list.. did i miss u last time? im sooo sorry i wil surely pm u dis time

thanku so much for commenting!

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Gr8 that u updated. uh...i know iss baar delay kafi zyada ho gaya..im sorry! I'm actually happy to c Devraj concentrating on his attack.....warna to wo zyadadar Naina k bare me hi sochta....not that i mind....coz at the end of the day she is his Naina....but phir bhi he needs to find out who dared to attack him. 😉😉good sumi...professionalism is very imp!

Naina had sum emotions in her eyes but this tym Raj (I'm going to call him Raj only😳😳) was too bz in his thoughts to notice that. Khair koi baat nahi.....aaj nahi to kal sahi. Karan didnt find any proofs against Naina.....hmm....thats gud....hehe sahi kaha tumne vo kabhi to notice karega...poor karan though

Par Sur....pata hai mera dil karta hai ye fic ek hi baar me padhlu....mujhse ye suspense saha nahi jata....lekin kya kare....I knw mujhe w8 karna hoga. Aur tum na jaldi jaldi UD kar dena....taki hum readers ko zyada w8 na karna pade....😛😛....ab main kaise samjhau....mujhe iss fic ki ending janne ka kitna shauk hai.....uff...😆😆....mujhe apne aap par hi haasi aa rahi hai ki main kitna uchhal rahi hu yaar!!😆😆lol i can understand kyuki i feel d same way abt ur fic...jise tumne aise point pe end kar dia! dekho is baar mera ud jaldi ho raha hai

Anyways, continue veryyyyyyyyyy soon. Waise xams ended na? ya ya i'll ud soon...cuz my weekly tests are over, so im free on weekends..exams khatam ho gaye, result bhi a gaya aur mai dekh k mar gai🤢 thanku soooo much sumi dear fr commenting!

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanku sooo much!

Naina and Karan did a good job of protecting Devraj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏well, dats dere job

The action scene was described very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏glad u liked it

Karan told Naina to get the car but Devraj wanted that they go to the car together!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina got the car and the three managed to escape!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yeah

Devraj noticed that she was shot and offered to drive the car but she didn't agree!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊she doesnt like symapthy much

Naina ke paas in logo se picha chudane ka plan hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Devraj smiled at her brilliance so much like his own while Karan had to grudgingly accept that she indeed was smart!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊somewhere Karan already knew she is smart dats why he kept distance from her

Naina's idea was superb and the tunnel scene was too good!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanku

Devraj is worried about Naina and he is shocked as he was never worried for anyone except his best friend!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hes like dat...

Devraj is very sharp and recognised that the ones who attacked him were not the police but local hitmen!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊hehe its not dat easy 2 fool him

Karan is putting two and two together but realised that Naina would never risk her own life to kill Dev!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊well he knows dat much abt her

Naina ko goli lagne ke baad bhi she drove fast aur Devraj ko safely ghar pahucha diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

They reached the mansion and Naina fainted!!!!! after all she is only human

Devraj carried her in his arms and placed her on the bed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️lol i knew people wud like dat

Devraj got her operated not leaving her side much to Karan's displeasure!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊poor guy

He was completely lost staring at Naina as she lay in her bed!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

From when did Devraj start to have emotions and that too for Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊asman se...aur kaha se

Karan finally had to drag him away when it was dinnertime!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊hehe lovestruck idiot

Before going Devraj turned to look at her again and told the nurse to tell him when she wakes up!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊just confirming u know :)

Devraj rightly suspected ke unke koi admi traitor hai and he suspects his driver!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊hmmm..usey sab pata hai

Devraj rushed to her when he was informed that Naina has regained consciousness!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊he was waiting fr it soo long...

Yeh Naina ankhon mein kya adjust kar rahi thi??😕 😕 😕 😕Is it some sort of clue??😛 😛 😛 😛wat do u think???

Ankhon mein toh koi contact lenses adjust karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya iska matlab Naina is wearing lenses??😲 😲 😲 😲But why??😕 😕 😕 😕lagao lagao dimag lagao

Only after talking to Naina did Devraj feel relieved and they had a nice convo!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊finally

Devraj said he doesn't want to lose her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳dialogue ache marta hai...

He looked at her with a strange expression which was reflected in her face as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hmmmm

Is Naina feeling something for him too??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊next part me...

thanku so much shaina fr commenting....take care of ur health!!!

Originally posted by: nisha1984

please continue soon