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Posted: 15 years ago

Sur sweety.......

Finally finally u updated this fic......sirf is update ko padhke hi nahi is fic update hua ' is baat se hi hum dhanay hogaye 😆 😆 😆..... bhala ho priya ka aur uski wo beautiful note ka jis ki wajah se tum underground se bahar nikli aur jhat se update bhi ki.......thanxxxxxxxx priya 😃

Now about the update......its awesome as always 👏 👏 👏 👏.... superb.......fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is confused about rajs behaviour n raj is confused about his feelings aur main ye baat soch soch ke confused hun .....is fic ki writer kab is fic ki suspense clear karegi 😕 😕

naina ki chot raj pe kya asar dikhayee.....raj .....a ruthless don kya se kya bangaya ....i think he knows about his true feelings towards naina.....but he thinks pyaar word uske dictionary mein nahi hain....he is so confused.....wo jitna bhi confused ho last night .......but in the morning .... the dangerous raj is back .....aur usko dekhthe hi john is so scared 😆 😆

the thing i liked the most (ofcourse after raj nainas bandage scene) in this part.....wo hain naina ka expressions......pehli baar naina ka cold look ke alawa aur bhi emotions reveal hua hain is update mein... usne softly smile bhi ki..... lekin uska haal bhi kuch tikh nahi lag rahi hain.....there is a fighting going on between her heart n mind......shayad wo ye soch rahi hogi .......ki jo aadmi uski itna parwa kartha hain she is plotting against him.....u wrote that part so beautifully

The idea of phone tapping was amazing......after all idea kis ka hain........hamare raj ka .....to wo superb hogi na.... karan ko is baar bhi naina ke against koi clue nahi mila.......naina is too smart... Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki naina is some how involved in the attack........naina s nick name suits her perfectly

Its good raj went with his professional instincts n he decided to talk with naina........but naina ki bleeding arm dekh the hi wo sab bhulgaya n itna pooch taach nahi ki us incident ke bare mein..........the dressing scene was so nice n cute

Us driver ko maar diya raj ne...........aur jab karan ne naina se kaha thats what we do with traitors ...........to naina had a stange expression...............wonder what she is thinking?????

good job sur .....the whole ud is so nice
Sur is baar late update ke liye maaf kiya......... but remember next ud tum agar jaldi nahi ki to pata hain main tumhari saath kya karnewali hun............. haaaaaaa........... abhi main kuch tikh se socha nahi.......kuch accha se sochke bataungi......ohk.....
main tuje kaise samjaun yaar........i am dying to know this ....... I hate u for loving me.......ye kis ne kis ko kaha

Edited by Sanskruthi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi sur,
i just read ur fic now and it is 'fantabulous'👏
our RAJ seems to fit perfectly in whatever character created for him,be it DEVRAJ or RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT.he is simply marvolous as DEVRAJ here😛😛😛and obviously NAINA is always NAINA,wherever she is😉this is exactly the opp. shade of any other fic but nonethless not less than anyother fic.now i'll be looking eagerly 4 ur next UD.plz make it soooooon.



Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Both naina and devraj cannot understand the strong feelings that they have for each other. But they are certain about one thing and that is in their professions there is no room for emotions and feelings. Devraj is afraid that he is losing is self-control. Karan is trying to make sure that nothing harms devraj and is sure that naina is not what she appears...but despite of all his efforts and caution he cannot find any wrong doing on her part. Devraj does not show any mercy towards those who betray him. and this is why everyone is afraid of him...because not one knows what he will do.
Deraj is once again taken over by worry and concern when he sees naina's arm covered with blood and hery weakend condition. And seeing his concern and care even naina is shocked and gets emotional.
Waiting to know more of the suspense in your story so please do update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Finally finally u updated this fic......sirf is update ko padhke hi nahi is fic update hua ' is baat se hi hum dhanay hogaye 😆 😆 😆..... bhala ho priya ka aur uski wo beautiful note ka jis ki wajah se tum underground se bahar nikli aur jhat se update bhi ki.......thanxxxxxxxx priya 😃

My pleasure yaar...!!!! ab tujh se jo galiyaan sunti hun...voh sare toh mujh se digest hote nahi hai...toh socha ki un me se kuch Sur ko bhi transfore kar deti hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!thanku sooo much

Naina handled them coolly without panicking and didn't oppose them!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊she knows d trick, u c

Then seeing her chance she slipped out of their reach and used her brains as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏she knew dey wer stronger dan her so no use fighting in vain

Naina ne kya pitayi ki unki!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏How dare they touch Naina??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡xactly!

I just loved the action scene!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanks

Naina is the right thing with Alex and Steve and taught them a good lesson!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼i agree

Ab toh dono yeh sabak zindagi bhar nahi bhoolenge!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆yeah im sure

Those bas***ds just deserved more than that!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡arre unke hath pair tudwa to diye!

Naina is right that she had warned them!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But they had not taken it seriously and now see the result!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆lol

Naina aram se unhe behosh aur zakhmi chhod ke apne room mein chali gayi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊ah well she wudnt take dem 2 a hospital wud she?

Karan, Devraj and the security guards arrived and at first thought someone had broken into their house!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕hmmm..lol

Devraj heard what had happened he hid his amused smile and ordered them to be taken to their rooms!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆he was enjoying!

When Devraj and Karan saw the action replay they were highly entertained!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆who wudnt be?

Devraj ne kaha ke Naina ne jo kiya sahi kiya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊jo sahi hai vo hai

Karan ne bhi sahi kaha ke Naina kab Devraj ko galat lagti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😉 😉 😉 😉hehe smart guy

So this was Karan's plan and he had asked them to drug interrogate Naina and find out the truth about her!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔it went wrong na....

Par Karan ne galat admiyon ko chuna ish kaam ke liye!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒he shud hav had more sense

Waise bhi Naina itni jaldi haath mein nahi aanewaali!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊bilkul

Karan's sixth sense says something is wrong about Naina and I agree with him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔arre yaar tum sab kyu meri heroine k peeche pade ho?

Naina is trying too much to impress Devraj and her cool, controlled and calm exterior give the signs of something very mysterious in her interior!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔hmmmm

Karan cares for Devraj and wants to save him and knows that even Devraj has his weaknesses!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊yeah, he is only human

He was glad Devraj is single as most of the gangsters owed their downfall to their mistresses!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊ladki hi ladai karvati hai in most cases...

But I doubt Devraj will be single for long!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊kaise reh sakta hai...lol

Devraj ne pehle Naina ko dekha aur jab uske haath pe bruises dekhe toh he just wanted to murder Steve for that!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊protective guy

Naina ki kitni parvah hai Devraj ko!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Yeh toh gaya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊bilkul gaya

Alex and Steve are looking very comical and they are quite scared of Naina!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣hehe dey shud be

Naina ne kaafi investigate kiya hai Ronald Black ke baare mein and it was very impressive!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏perfection usey pasand hai...

Devraj said the plan of action and he even said not to target civilians!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼he is not dat bad u know....

Devraj warned Steve and Alex and made them say sorry to Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...like small kids

Naina refused to forgive them but assured Devraj that he won't get any complaints in his work!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊some people dont forgive

Why is Karan so quiet??😕 😕 😕 😕Is he planning something??😔 😔 😔 😔kya pata bhai

I would like to know what is he upto!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔His slience is giving me a strange feeling!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔me 2

In such a short time Naina ne kitni khaas jagah bana li hai Devraj ke gang mein that he took her to the conference along with Karan and John!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊hmmmmm

Somebody has again attacked Devraj!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Karan and Naina sprang forward to protect Devraj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏jaha jata hai waha log marne ko bhagte hai!!!


thanku sooo much shaina fr commenting! waiting eagerly fr rest of d comments!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur,
Beautiful update. It was nice to see Devraj struggling with his emotions. His subconcious mind registered the fact what his concious mind was trying to deny. He knew he was being caught up in a maze- the maze of Love. Naina too was confused. Her realisation is also in progress. She too is fighting a battle with herself just like Devraj. You described it very well.
I found Karan's frustration highly amusing. Dangerous Beauty is an apt title for Naina. But he is no match for her. 😆 😆 😆
Devraj had gone to ask her about the attack and ended up dressing her wound. Naina had some emotions in her eyes as he dressed her wound.
Devraj killed Barry and for the first time he is perhaps a little frightened instead of amused. The picture of the bleeding arm kept appearing in front of his eyes. He is fighting a losing battle. Actually I should say both Naina and Devraj are fighting a losing battle.
Great update. Keep updating soon. And please bear with me if I'm a little late with my comments.
Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

My pleasure yaar...!!!! ab tujh se jo galiyaan sunti hun...voh sare toh mujh se digest hote nahi hai...toh socha ki un me se kuch Sur ko bhi transfore kar deti hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Wah ye sahi hai....ek se galiya khao aur dusre ko transfer kar do! Ab mai bhi koi bakra dhundhti hu jispe Priya ki dhamkiya transfer kar saku...😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

My pleasure yaar...!!!! ab tujh se jo galiyaan sunti hun...voh sare toh mujh se digest hote nahi hai...toh socha ki un me se kuch Sur ko bhi transfore kar deti hun...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Main kaha tujhe galiyaan dethi hun ..........wo to mera pyar jatane ka tarika hain yaar 😆 😆 😆 😆......tum ho ki mujhe samajthi nahi ho
Waise r u sure tumne sur ko sirf galiyaan hi transfer kardi....wo kya haina mujhe to lagtha ki tum galiyon ke saath saath late updating ki bhimari bhi transfer kardi 😆 😆 😆
Edited by Sanskruthi - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

LOL😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 I AM NOT D ONLY ONE !!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina and Karan did a good job of protecting Devraj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The action scene was described very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Karan told Naina to get the car but Devraj wanted that they go to the car together!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina got the car and the three managed to escape!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj noticed that she was shot and offered to drive the car but she didn't agree!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke paas in logo se picha chudane ka plan hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Devraj smiled at her brilliance so much like his own while Karan had to grudgingly accept that she indeed was smart!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's idea was superb and the tunnel scene was too good!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Devraj is worried about Naina and he is shocked as he was never worried for anyone except his best friend!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Devraj is very sharp and recognised that the ones who attacked him were not the police but local hitmen!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan is putting two and two together but realised that Naina would never risk her own life to kill Dev!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko goli lagne ke baad bhi she drove fast aur Devraj ko safely ghar pahucha diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

They reached the mansion and Naina fainted!!!!!

Devraj carried her in his arms and placed her on the bed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Devraj got her operated not leaving her side much to Karan's displeasure!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He was completely lost staring at Naina as she lay in her bed!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

From when did Devraj start to have emotions and that too for Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan finally had to drag him away when it was dinnertime!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Before going Devraj turned to look at her again and told the nurse to tell him when she wakes up!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj rightly suspected ke unke koi admi traitor hai and he suspects his driver!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj rushed to her when he was informed that Naina has regained consciousness!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Naina ankhon mein kya adjust kar rahi thi??😕 😕 😕 😕Is it some sort of clue??😛 😛 😛 😛

Ankhon mein toh koi contact lenses adjust karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya iska matlab Naina is wearing lenses??😲 😲 😲 😲But why??😕 😕 😕 😕

Only after talking to Naina did Devraj feel relieved and they had a nice convo!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj said he doesn't want to lose her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He looked at her with a strange expression which was reflected in her face as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Is Naina feeling something for him too??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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