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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

Loved it

Thanxxxxxx a lot par more Mayur

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#252

well done dear
well bengi and othes guys will be able too see sammy and nups

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Rabi

@rose.mn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#253

OMG just a terrific part. just loved it

tears in mayank eyesn nupur's too. i was just imagining all this. n also dance sequence was mindblowing

do cont soon

i just cant wait to read further

n thanks 4 pm dear

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#254

awesome part!!
at last some mayur scenes!
they were awesome!
plz continue soon

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#255

hey it was such a nice update........ sorry yar due 2 my illness i was not able 2 comment on ur previous updates......... thanks 4 d pm dear..... do pm me next time also..... i m waiting 4 ur update.......

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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#256

Hey dear! 1st of all apology for late reply! Ur FF is really too gud! Luvd it! Nd very innovative! Mayank fillany believed Gunji! Do continue soon! Thanx for the pm!!!

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Sajan_Ekta

@Sajan_Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#257

Hey it was a awesome ,Splendid Part! Thanx for the PM

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#258

1st of all sorry tht i didnt reply 2 ur previous part. my xams were going on & they got completed today itself.

& 2nd...........BY GOD DOLLY!!! From the hell u got such a unique brain & from where the hell these ideas pop up in ur mind. I never imagined tht someone like u write sooooooooo much on such a topic. Insaan marke bhi hamesha zinda rahta hain - shayad isi ko kahte hai jo tumne apne ff mein baya kiya.

I mean dead ppl ko leke itni alag, sirf alag hi nahi but soooooooooo sooooooooooo sooooooooo beautiful!!
Hata off yaar!! 👍🏼& I m so glad tht the dev team has shifted ur ff to FF section. Now ur talent is accessable 2 more n more ppl.

Im so proud of u dolly. Both parts awsome. 👏
🤗

Vinu.

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simrit

@-AngelSimi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#259

classic doll classic !!!!!! heavenly !!!!!!!! just loved it !!!! Loved your every part !!!!! The way you explained the emotions of all four of them . And yes mayu deserves a sandal ! Was it on his head ???? The rain dance was just cute and i can very well imagine sammy ke vo kitna cute lag rha hoga aur mayur barish main kitne stunning lag rhe hone !!!!!

Very very very very romantic !!!!

Love u loads for this anh update soon !!!

Sim

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#260

first of all sorry being so late to comment dolly...wasn't at home so couldn't read your update.now coming to your update it is once again all engrossing...all touching and made me teary!!! it was the first mayur scene and i tell you how beautifully you wrote it.Just loved loved and loved it!!! how can you do this yaar...everytime the new update is better than the last one.Pls dolly do continue soon.and do come up with more sajan scenes as well. Wish you a very happy and safe diwali!!!