ff:-(mjht)lov beyond boundries(part17,)(pg75)pls c - Page 28

Dolly its so good to see you back dear...and thanks so much for the PM this time as well.now as far as your update is concerned i can just say that i am floored!!! yaar how do u manage to express each and every feeling so magically...i mean gunjan's desperation...her pain...her longing to rejoice every moment of samrat's proximity....i can feel everything deep inside me!!!

it was nice dear vey touching
do cont soon with mayur yaar
u have written on them very small
bt this time it should be a great mayur part plz its a request
btw thanks 4 pm

it waz cool,,,,luvd to see da change in gunjan after all every1 has dis feellin once no matter how angelic or DOODH KE DHULE HUE they may b..........luvd how u described it,,it didnt seem vulgar bt loads sweet n natural KEEP IT UP

it rocks dolly di u r great writer u a soooo sweet

that was awesone and superb dear !!!!!!!!!!! Each description gave a picture of the scene !!!!!!!! Loved it !!!!!!!!! Update soon

Originally posted by: zoya_me

awesome update...i was waiting for it for soooooooooo long .....loved each and every part of it....plzzzzzzz this time plzzzzzz continue soon

thanku zoya so much 4 liking it....

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

loved it plz pm me too

thanks sanjana dear soo much 4 liking it n sure i'll pm u to....

Originally posted by: princessyashika

Dolly its so good to see you back dear...and thanks so much for the PM this time as well.now as far as your update is concerned i can just say that i am floored!!! yaar how do u manage to express each and every feeling so magically...i mean gunjan's desperation...her pain...her longing to rejoice every moment of samrat's proximity....i can feel everything deep inside me!!!

U r a rockstar honey...just love you!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

and time for the lines of the day:
It was difficult to find a few but still these three peirced me................

" I looked up to see his scowling face and smiled ,, u have to say this,, when boys scowl they look extra cute, samrat looked ultra cute,, with his fringes falling over his eyes n he brushing them in irritation when angry,,"

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

the picture this line forms in my mind is just beyond description...sammy looking angelic!!!

"I compiled ,,,I had already suffered enough pain ,

staying away from the place that had u in every part of it ,would just mean tearing me up further"...oh god yaar this line actually made my eyes wet!!! gunjan not willing to leave those non-living things whose sight and touch gives her an eccense of samrat being

present.....aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

"not only the pain of ur sepration jabbed at me from all ends but also I cursed myself again and again for stopping u every time u made a move to kiss me or".........

I must say dolly no one can beat u in your writing skills...u truely are an unrivalled

queen out here!!!

So pls pls pls come back asap...with a much longer update!!!

and ya dolly i read your one of the incomplete ffs...i really loved that one.Its abt the time when sheena and RV were there and samrat had a fight with RV and is in hospital...after that there i s no next update!!! u know what dolly i am dieing to see a very nice nursing scene between sajan...it will be so nice to have it from such a great writer...it will be great if u can just write one next part completely abt sajan for that ff...pls pls pls doll;y try if u can!!!

till then have fun!!

loads of love!!!

awww mallika thanku sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 4 liking it n 4 ur kind words....