ff:-(mjht)lov beyond boundries(part17,)(pg75)pls c - Page 25

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

awesome!! nupur is back!
n im not that confused anymore!
i loved how samrat explained everything
so sweet of him to stay for gunjan!
anyways continue soon

Originally posted by: Sajan_Ekta

Seriously I read many FF's! But this is the best FF I ever read! Pls continue soon!👏

oh thank u so so much ,,i am going red seriously

Update 9 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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SCENE 2(continued)>>>>

(by mayank)==

(the lines written in grey bold letters are not by mayank but by me the narrator)

I caught hold of gunjan b4 she hit the floor. she was burning hot, it seemed that she was running a high temperature. I had no doubt that my last line ,the talk with benji had caught gunjan offgaurd ,due to which she fainted ,,was she suffering from some psychological disorder??? Thinking practically ,,she was ..

But who the hell wanted to think practically???

I picked her up n cradled her in my arms n then laid her on the bed.. I had made up my mind to think it over ,to believe in what gunjan said.

If she was mad then I was going mad too..but it was worth it

benji was going to be a problem a big problem, till now he would have told everyone within an area of about 2 mile radius ,that he had seen gunjan writing something in samrat's diary.. how I wished at that instant ,that instead of gunjan he should have fainted'

But alas things seldom happen as we want them to..

I came out of the room

(had he seen behind him once he would hav seen samrat kissing gunjan silently on her fore head ,but he just moved on)

n entered mine ,locking the door behind me I made my way to the window standing their feeling the hard wind on my face I reflected on whtever has happened in the last few days '

The harsh wind helped me to think'.

Someone knocked the door..must be benji ,uday or dia , I didn't care ..

I was feeling tired my mind felt as if it was about to burst ..

But the decision was made , I would believe gunjan ..give her a chance ..give myself a chance ..

I didn't care if it meant I was soon to be committed to an asylum…

The moment I thought this I felt completely relaxed n wanted to celebrate …

Someone tapped me on my shoulder.. may be I had left my door unbolted …may be it was benji .. I so wanted to snuff the life out of him ,,, I turned to do exactly that and

And I cried

I simply cried on seeing her….

She looked beautiful n heavenly n real ,,but she looked exasperated ,,actually she looked angry ,,I thought 4 one second that she was about to hit me..

N she did ,,with her sandle

This was strange ,, I was mad n I had no doubt about that ,, but I was getting beaten up by my own imagination .. now that was downright ridiculous and and hilarious…

She was about to say something but she stopped it was as if she was getting choked ,,, I got up to help her but my hands just passed through her body ,,I wasn't able too touch her or anything ,,,,

This was strange she was going light by every passing second …

It looked as if she was suffering ,,she looked battered ,my nupur looked battered not my hallucination ..

Precisely at that point she got her voice back n she shouted at me the next second

"STOP DOUBTING MAYANK"

And I stopped ,, 4 the first time did I completely let go of the notion that she was not 4 real ,,

she was n I'll believed that …

She was mine 4ever and I'll believed that…

She was more visible now n was saying something to me,, but I wasn't following her words..i thought her sudden arrival had surprised me pleasantly.. but no I always knew deep inside that she would come back to me somehow .n she did..

Her eyes looked beautiful all I wanted to do at that moment was too stare at her n too just stare at her..

She stopped speaking noticing my distraction..n looked at me squarely.

I didn't blink for what felt like an eternity ,neither did she..

But just in a matter of seconds my eyes were wet ,, so were her's .

Still we continued to stare at each other ,, I slowly started to concentrate on other features of her ,

Her cheeks were crimson as usual, it is a lovely colour I tell u the best colour of life..

Her nose was straight n preety, neither to small nor too big ,just the right size,,

Her lips ,they glistened in the dim light of the room ,inviting me..

But I moved on seeing her after so much time I wanted to make sure that she was same as I had remembered her…

I had been wrong though , I had failed to remember her correctly.. she was far more angelic n beautiful than what I had imagined..

She had left her hair open just as I used to like ,, the wind brushed them across her face.. I brushed them aside n pinned them at the back of her ear,, touching her had far more strong effect on me then I could have imagined ..my whole body started to tremble my hands started to shiver … I felt uneasy but still elated ,,it was like I had received every possible happiness in the world in those few seconds n I was not able to bear that burden ,, I looked down

looking at her just made the burden all the more heavy ,,but she caught hold of my hand strongly in order to prevent it from shaking ..i looked up again n her beauty stunned me for the second time ,,

it had started raining outside but it wasn't like a storm u can say it was drizzling heavily ,, we both looked out distracted by the sudden pitter patter of rain drops on the roof,, the sound was melodious ..

we both had always enjoyed the rain that to too much ,I realised my love for her in a rain I proposed to her in the rain ,infact it rained on our engagement n marriage night too..

the most strong bond still we parted in this rain …

she tugged me forward n we went out , climbing down my window..

once in rain we both went mad ,,playing n jumping around beneth trees n splashing the muddy water of the small ponds formed due to the rain on each other ,,she was laughing through but I wasn't..

I was too lost in the melody of her tinkling laughter then too react to any other thing tht happened..

my hair were falling in front of my eyes making me uncomfortable but I didn't brushed them side ,my hands were busy in something else ..i was plucking some garden roses for her ,, I pierced my fingers thrice .

not soo good still it felt great ,,

she was standing just behind me ..

I bent down on my knees ..n presented her the roses ,the rain still falling on my face and on hers too and on poor roses too..

She smiled n she blushed n she took the bunch of roses from me ,,,

They were devoid of any thorns now, I had made sure of that ,I didn't wanted my nupur to get pricked…

I offered her my hand n asked in full sharukh style,

"dance"

"no music", she said playing along …

I moved my fingers in air as if on a piano,, she smiled,

This was her favourite scene from kuch kuch hota hai..

And we danced in the rain that had united us once again…

The rain grew more fiercer with the time though,, it was making difficult for us to even stand …we took shelter under the palm tree in our garden ,, I looked at her again as she pushed across my hair falling in my eyes..

"by god mayank ,aaj to kamaal hi ho gayi, maine tumhar baalon ko haath lagaya aur tum cheekhe bhi nahin"

"kya karun tumse dur hokar mein un cheezon ko bhi miss karne lag gay tha jo mujhe irritate karti thi"

she stopped smiling n so did i

she looked down n so did I

that few moments of silence defined the utmost pain of separation that still resided in our hearts ,,

we both sat down together she took support of the tree trunk ,

and I took support of her

lieing in the muddy field with my head in her lap ,I closed my eyes

but opened them in the next moment ,, I was afraid

afraid that closing of my eyes would make her disappear..

but she was there all right ,, she bent down n kissed me on my cheek then on my lips

"I missed u"

"me too"

"me more"

"me no less"

"shut up"

"as u say "

We both kept staring at each other for the next few seconds.then she spoke first as usual

"how's anshu"

the question startled me,, no it didn't suddenly reminded me of my son but the longing voice of her shocked me .. it was as if she was a four year old kid who was promised n ice cream a long time back if the kid behaved in a good way n the kid finally after so much time asking for the reward of his good behaviour..

I have no idea why I made this analogy but that's what her expressions reminded me off,, I think she wanted to ask me about all those things of the past year that she missed about her son , in those two words question …

"he is fine n n he is just like u … nupur can u see him I mean ofcourse u can can he see u touch u like me???"

"I don't know ,, samrat said he can but I am terrified of believing him .. what if he can't I won't be able to live through that!!!"

"samrat???"

"yes he has returned too much b4 me thanx to gunjan n u"

"huh??"

"thanks to gunjan because she provided him the path,, thanks to u because u didn't give mine to me"

"huh??"

"u doubted much more then gunjan did ,, it was blocking me now and then , choking me some times"

"huh??"

"I'll tell u about it all afterwards

lets go inside first,, the wind is too harsh and u r still going to get effected by it ,, and if u catch cold it'll make it difficult 4 anshu to sleep beside a sneezing daddy at night"

"ok but … but u aren't going na??"

"I am here as long as u want me too stay"

"thats means forever"

"I know"

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i am the first one to comment . loved your update . great work dear . love you😊😊😊

Originally posted by: surbhi123

i am the first one to comment . loved your update . great work dear . love you😊😊😊

thanx surbhi so much 4 liking it

YEAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!at last mayur,,,,,,,,i lovd da startin part in which nupur shout at him to stop doubtin him n beats him wid da sandal....hehehe n adored da rain dance da signature of mayur......

awesome part dolly

Originally posted by: hiba.aijaz

YEAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!at last mayur,,,,,,,,i lovd da startin part in which nupur shout at him to stop doubtin him n beats him wid da sandal....hehehe n adored da rain dance da signature of mayur......

thanks 4 liking it yaar sooo much

gr88 prt yaar

u r so sweet. Dear enjoyed te part so much. I want them to stay on forever together. Plz. Loved their part so much. Gosh atlast mayu able to see nupz. Thanks for pm. Update soon.