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Posted: 16 years ago

Update 9(part=1)==

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SCENE 1(CONTINUED)

(by gunjan)>>

I could take it no longer'I snuggled myself up to him n kissed him on his cheek..(just cheek though I wanted to reach him a little farther on his face but something stopped me)

He looked at m n smiled n kissed me back ,this time at the place I so wanted him too'''.

We continued with the beautiful experience 4 about half an hour or so n then we broke apart again , this time the action being my initiation'

I wanted to breathe , he seemed to be free of all these stupid mortal necessities , but unfortunately I wasn't .. I wanted to start again but he stopped me this time, keeping his index finger on my lips.

"mayank is coming n he is livid, dia had just come to her senses a few moments back n benji had a talk with him ,, u'll have to make him believe gunjan in all this, that's the only way we can return ,remember don't stutter or blink, he won't believe u then"

Saying so he vanished just some white smoke in his place which vanished too within the next few seconds,,

I was shivering all over again, my heart threatening me ,saying it was going to crash. Sweat was there all over my face. My head whirled,, my body wasn't reacting greatly to samrat's departure, neither was i.. but still the tears in my eyes got mixed with the sweat , a good sign'

Mayank banged against my door n entered .he really looked livid..

Seeing his face ,I 4got what had just happened with me for a second.

He caught hold of me, tightly, n it hurted ,but he took no notice of me when I winced.

"why ? why the hell did u lie to me? Dia can speak alright but she is still covered with scratches all over"

"how do u know??"

"she herself told me idiot , I believed u .why the hell did u get my hopes so high 4 nothing.. 4 few moments I thought I was going to see her again"

I had no difficulty in comprehending that he meant di .

"tell him that he was going to see her , but that can only happen if he believed in her coming back"

Samrat's voice ringed in my ears. I looked all around me to find him n so did mayank.. could he hear him??

"why r u seeing all around?"

"I I thought that I heard someone whispering , leave it, don't distract me just answer me b4 I break apart whole of this apartment"

I just reapeated what samrat has just said

"you will see her , but that can only happen if u believd in her coming back"

he let go of me.

"wht?"

"yes samrat visited me just now, I know u won't believe me but that's what he said , we have to believe in their cmg back ,we have to believe our hearts. He said that was the only way possible.. infact the whispering u just heard was done by samrat"

I could see his features projecting so many emotions in that one minute. Doubt , worry about my sanity , anger at my rubbish n n hope at what I said , I continued this time looking at him straight in his eyes ..

"mayank, believe me, see I know all of u think that I am going mad , but I am not , samrat can never be my imagination,, pls believe me this once, it can't hurt much if this all turned out to be a dream n I turned out to be a girl mad after the death of her love, we have already seen so much hurt b4 we'll cope up with it,, just believe me n just believe them"

I stopped n gapped for breadth .. mayank was looking down n I can bet his eyes were wet .. he was believing me, his features mellowed down completely, he completely relaxed ..

I felt ecstatic n so did samrat . he was standing just behind mayank , smiling at me like never b4. the strange glint in his eyes was something I had never seen b4 , he felt so elated n so did i. I was about to tell mayank to look back n meet samrat when he gestured me to remain silent by keeping his finger on his lips'

I closed my open mouth, seconds later I remembered what samrat has said b4 mayank came crashing in my room'

Samrat has said that benji had talked to mayank.

"what did benji say to u??"

I could see doubt creeping in mayank's features again as he looked up n remembered his conversation with benji..

I wanted to hit myself hard 4 bringing it up, even samrat was fuming standing behind .. I said sorry to him through my eyes n hoped he would understand, he did..

"benji has read the diary , n doesn't believe in even a word that was written on it .. he said he saw u working late last night , writing something , he wasn't sure but he suspected that u were writing in samrat's diary"

I was stunned at this, not only at benji accusing me of filling up samrat's diary , but also because I couldn't remember working late last night , all I remembered about the previous day was that I had cried the night out as had been my routine for the past one year.. I looked at samrat 4 some help ,but he was gone ,I turned around n searched the whole room to get a glimpse of him, but in vain,

Doubt begin to creep through me to. Was I going mad suddenly everything around me whirled , I seemed to sway on my spot..

The last two things that happened b4 I lost consiousness was

I saying to mayank the following line>

"believe me ,pleas , just this once"

N then I saw myself falling in samrat's arms , but from a distance , like a third person ..

I was going crazy there was no doubt in it..

SCENE 2>>>>

(by mayank)==

(the lines written in black bold letters are not by mayank but by me the narrator)

I caught hold of gunjan b4 she hit the floor. He was burning hot, it seemed that she was running a high temperature. I had no doubt that my last line ,the talk with benji had caught gunjan offgaurd ,due to which she fainted ,,was she suffering from som psychological disorder??? Thinking practically she was ..

But who the hell wanted to think practically???

I picked her up n cradled her in my arms n then laid her on the bed.. I had made up my mind to think it over ,to believe in gunjan .

If she was mad then I was going mad too.. but benji was going to be a problem a big problem, till now he would have told everyone within an area of about 2 mile radius ,that he had seen gunjan writing something in samrat's diary.. how I wished at that instant ,that instead of gunjan he should have fainted'

But alas things seldom happen as we want them to..

I came out of the room

(had he seen behind him once he would hav seen samrat kissing gunjan silently on her fore head ,but he just moved on)
n entered mine ,locking the door behind me I made my way to the window standing their feeling the hard wind on my face I reflected on whtever has happened in the last few days '

The harsh wind helped me to think'.

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Sorry guys 4 the short update , but I have these two exams tomarrow ,so had to goto go,

Its has not been revised ,just like the last one so it might contain loads of mistakes

I'll update the next part soon, n a mayur scene is on the cards next time promise ..

Lov u guys loads loads n loads

Dolly

Edited by dolly18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiba.aijaz

just a word KOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!.......make it two,AWESUM!!!!!!brilliant it was

thanks sooooooooo much 4 liking it
i hope u like this update too
love dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: little_dragon

this was wonderful. So samy could b seen by gunjan only! Y so. Bring them to reality plz. Want nupz also back. Cant see such sadness. Bring happiness yar. Thanks for pm

i have not decided whether they both will com to reality or not, afterall they r dead
n me being n engineer think about this crappy word logic a lot..
still i think 40% they'll come back
thanks sooooooooooooo much 4 liking it sweets ,, n i think happiness is on the way (atleast 4 sajjan)
do read the present update n reply
lov
dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Hey dear i just have no words to say how much good writer u r.
i've just read all parts. really tears came into my eyes by reading this.
anyways plz do cont soon. n plz clear this suspense of diary.
plz do pm me when u post ur next. its a request.
i'll wait 4 ur ur pm.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks soo so much rose 4 this wonderfull
reply i am so glad to get one more reader ..
the suspense of this diary is going to increase many folds in the cmg updates
pls keep reading n replying
lov
dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti123

its amazing loved reading it ..... so emotional and so beautifuuly written ....... plz update soon and if possible then plz bring samrat and nupur back ........ plz ............... its a request ........

thankx soooooooooooooooooo much stuti 4 liking it.. about cmg back of of sam n nupur its still undecided..
sorry 4 that
but do read the cmg updates
thanx once agin
lov
dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update dolly
loved it completely yaar
can totally understand mayanks state....torn between mind and heart...poor guy
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Janna i read but somwat im getting confused
Matlab Sam can be only seen by Gunjan and he says all the thgs wat will happen in future
And Sam wants Mayu to believe all this so that he can also c Nups
Is this thg
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow dolly gr8 update as always...and kudos to you dear for updating it for us despite of your exams.thnx so much for this.and i want to tell you that i am really loving the way you are potraying samrat's heavenly image...i can imagine it all...especially the scene where mayank leaves the room and you quoted that samrat is kissing gunjan's forehead who is actually down with fever...its a really touching scene.and hurray for even nupur returning back.gr8!!!do continue soon and Best Of Luck for your exams.
Posted: 16 years ago
great part!!
i feel so bad for mayank!
poor him, n gunjan!
she is suffering too
anyways continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

great part!!
i feel so bad for mayank!
poor him, n gunjan!
she is suffering too
anyways continue soon

thnx mishu so much 4 liking it
i
ll update within the next two days
got to go now bye
lov
dolly

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